'A strange feeling '.THE END!(Note-Pg 84) - Page 36

@yyy
long tymm!!.......thnxx!!....raj is obviously more more more dan happy to hv naina bck!....i wld try nd brng in more of shona scenes...thnx for dat!!

@rituka
thnx!

@rani
nahi sudhrengey!!....thnxx!!....areey nisha ki entry bhi nahi huyi nd u r already wondering whose playn nisha!..lol!!....i think that last scene was one o my personal favs too!!...

@shaina
thnx!.....ofcourse raj kaam par bhi dhyan dega!...not to owrry!!.......yakeen toh hain!!....theres loads of more romance!!.....lol!..i lykd dat school wala line!!...
yupp naina's imagination brought in the comedy element!
you would noe soon...ki how come naina doest noe bout nisha!...
raj toh naughty hain....but only wid naina!!....

season break is over!!!!

@mahak
thnxx!!.....i tried my est to bring in comedy drama romance evrythin....glad u lykd it!!....pura ka pura nautanki!!...lol......
lol!,...woh "ruk jao shadi nahi ho sakti" was all d comedyy element!!.....

tooo good......maza aa gaya.......it was fabulous....

PART-31

Raj-R-N is back!!..

Naina and Raj exchanged hi-fi's...

15 mins later!..

Naina purposely made some noises in her room!...

Aakash and Aky came in..

Aakash-Naina kya huaa??

Naina-Samjhta kya hain woh apney aap ko....koi handsome dude..or some bladi moneyed man!....bladi stud!...Aakash hes ...hes two-timing me!.. 😡 😡

Aakash looked at Aky..

Kyun boss phas gaya na!... 😉

Aakash-Umm naina....dekho aisa kuch

Naina-Just shut up Aaksh...tumne khud kaha tha...ki wo college mein uski girlfriend thi....toh phir abb usse baat karke I love you bolne ka main kya matlab nikaloo....Aur aya tha mujhse engagement karney...I hatee him!!..

Bangg!... Naina ne kanch todd diya!..

Mann mein--Oops kuch zyada hi nuksaan ho raha hain!.. 😆 😆

Aky-Naina kool down...meri baat sunoo 😕

Naina-Right now please mujhe akela chod do...jus leave me alone damn it!!.... 😡

Aky-MEri baat sunooo

Naina--Please aapse toh baat hi nahi karni...appp toh apne bhai ke side lengi na.....please aap yahan se chaley jaoo....please goooooooo

Aakash ne Aky ko ishara kiya...she left..

Naina-Ab tumhe speciallly bolna padega

Aakashh-Dekho naina..

Naina--AReey yeh pura pariwaar pagal hain....ek baar kehne se nahi samjhte hoon kya!!.. 😡

Aakash left !

Aakash went to Raj..

Aakash--Yaar yeh sab..

Raj-Ab aaoo uski wakalat karne aao!..

Aakash-Raj

Raj-Chod aakash main janta hoon tume hi uske sath yeh mazak kiya na....bahut khush hoga na tu... 😡

Aakash-Lekin yaar mein to mazak kar raha tha...usne seriously le liya!...uss samjha na..

Raj-Bandh karo yeh natak Aakash....bandh karo!....kya zarrorat thi aisa khatiya mazak karne ki.....tum sab ko aapna badla lena hain...akkhir humne tumhara kya begada tha aakash...kyun humarey rishtey ke zariye aap sab badla lena chahthe hain...khush toh bahut hongey aap....abb hogaya sab khatam.... 😡

Raj turned away fearing he might start laughing....

Aakash--Yaar I am really sorry!...Mera bilkul bhi irada nahi tha ki main ..

Raj-Thanku....ab please mujhe akela chod do.. 😡

Aakash leaves from there!!...

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Raj aur Naina sara din ukhde ukhde rehte hain...Navin aur Rosy kuch der baad ghar laut te hain.....aur yeh sab dekh kar choonk jatey hain..

Navin--Thats bad!...I mean Naina pagal hain kya...nisha ko raj ki girlfriend samjah rahi hain....arrrey main usse battata hoon ki nisha raj ke behen hain...yeh problem yahin solve ho jayegi!..

Aakash--Sab meri wajah se ho raha hain...na mujhe mazak sujhtha na yeh sab hota!!

Navin-Its ok Aakash!!...Its really ok!..Main hoon na!..

Navin ne Rosy ko ishara kia...Rosy gayi Raj ke pass aur Navin gayaa Naina ke passs

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Navin-Naina...

Naina-Mujhe koi baat nahi karni please mujhe akela chod do!!... 😡

Navin-Shut up! 😡 ...Meri baat sun....are you crazyy tum Raj pe chak kar rahi hoonn...bas itna hi pyar karti hoon tum Raj se... 😡

Naina-Bhai please mujhe akela chod do....mujhe kuch nahi sunn na... 😡

Navin--Naina... 😡

Naina uth ke chali jati hain...

Navin-Crazy!!!

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At the Dinner table!!...

Naina and Raj are sitting opposite to each other....

RAj ke chehre par ekdumm chida hua look hain...

Raj moves his hand to take a chappati...naina sees and she also puts her hand there....both trying to take the roti...raj hits her hand....she hits him back..

Raj-Ayiiee what the hell. 😡

Naina-Just shut up ok. 😡 ..yeh mera ghar hain....mujhe roti chahiye toh main longi!..

Raj-Ohh badi ayyie mera ghar meri roti.. 😡

Naina--Atleas tumhare tarah kisi aur ke ghar mein sara din padi toh nahi rehti hoon!!.. 😡 .

Raj ko ayya gussaa!!.. 😡

Raj-Thekhe yeh hain tumahra ghar aur tumhari sadii roti!...rakhoo main chala.. 😡

Naina-Woow!! 👏 👏 ....nikal jao!!.. 😡

Navin-SHut up!!..tum duno pagal ho gaya hoon kya?? 😡

Raj-Tu toh chup hi rah...apni behne ki side lega!..

Navin-SHut up....chup chap duno khana khao!.. 😡

Rosy-Raj tumhe kya ho gaya hain... 😕

Raj ka dil nahi kiya rosy se rudely baat karney ko 😊 ....usne toh iss sab mein kuch nahi kiyaa!

Raj-Rosyy tum naina ko bhi toh kuch kaho..(he said polietly)

Rosy-Ummm tum duno subah toh thekh the...ab kya huaa??

Raj and Naina look away!!...

Aakash-Dekho naina...i am sorry...yeh sab maine hi

Raj intreuptss

Raj-Sab tumhare hi wajah se ho raha hain.... 😡

Raj uthke chala jata hain...naina bhi chali jati hain!!..

Aakash aur Navin ek dusre ko dekhte hain....

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Next day morning Raj bina nashta kiya office chala jata hain!!...

At C&G

Navin jata hain Raj ke cabin mein..

Navin-Raj bata kyun nahi deta naina ko ke nisha teri behen hain...

Raj-Dekh navin main naina ko zarror batata yar.....lekin usne mujhe baat kanrey ka mauka hi nahi diya....bas itna hi hain usko mujh par barosa...itna hi pyar.....main ab naina se pyar nahi karta navin....jo ladki apney pyar par vishwas na rakh sake....woh toh pyar ke kabil hi nahi....i am sorry navin..... 😕

Navin ki saari duniya ghum jaati hain!!...he leaves

Raj sochta hain

Not bad acche acche dialouges bolein tune raj...gud job!!... drama acha kar leta hoon...akhir naina the great ki training hain



Raj ko bahut bechaine hoti hain...naina se nahi mila...kal jab mila toh itna ukhda ukhda baat kiya....ahhh usse kuch ho raha tha.....he couldnt sit...

Usne naina ko phone kiya!!..

Raj-Aas pass koi hain..?? 😕

Naina-Nahii 😛

Raj-Acha phir bhi mera naam mat lena!. 😉

Naina--HMm 😊

Raj-Jaan I am missin you so much!!.. 😳

Naina-Me tooo.. 😳

Raj-Kya tum yahan aa sakti hoonn??

Naina--Raj!!....humara drama...bhul gaye kya

Raj-Aggar bhul gaya hota is waqt tumhari bahoon mein hota!!..shayad tumhare gaal par hota...tumhare hoonth par hota... 😳

Naina blushed!

Raj-Bahut hi ghaitya plan tha....mein tumse durr nahi reh sakta!...

Naina-Ek do din ki baat hain jaan!!..

Raj-I lovee you!! 😛

Naina-Me too!! 😛

Raj--Kya hum akele mein kahin mil sakte hain... 😕

Naina--Raj bahut hi risky hoga....areey kamal ho 2 saal dur rahe phir do din kya hain...reh lo na jaan....tumne khud kaha wohi thrill wohi mazaa uss sab se tumhe accha lag raha hain!!.. 😆 😆

Raj-Mmmm...(raj said sensously)

Naina--ITs ok na..

Raj--Mmmm(again same sensously)

Naina--Rajj

Raj-Mmmmm(he went on sayin the same word with the same tone)

Naina--Sorryy..

Raj--Mmmm

Naina-Rajj dunt behave like devdas

Raj--Jaan tumharey bina baut hi suna suna lag raha hain... 😉

Naina--Uff devdas nahi toh Mr.FLirt ban jaogey! 😆

Raj-Acha main rakhta hoon...office mein kaam karta hoon papad nahi belta hoonn......... 😆

Naina-Mmmmmmmmm 😉

Raj laughed..

Raj-Bye!

Naina-Bye!

Raj-Ek baar kaho I love you

Naina-I love you Raj.. 😳

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That night Raj ne bahar se hi khana kha liya!..

He returned home aur khud par has raha tha..

Raj-Ek sample hain tu...ladki wapas aayi toh baat nahi ki...baat ki toh ab durr rahna padd raha hain...hain bhagwan!!...

Raj ko aise mein idea sujha!...nikal gaya apne ghar se!..
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Naina was a little disturbed in her room...raj ke bareyy mein sochte sochte she drfted to sleep...

Achanakk she felt something...a knock on the wiindow...yea it was a knock on the window!..

It was the typical Raj style!!...usne window ko unscrew kia aur andar jump mara!!..

Naina-Rajjjjjjj tum yahan....what on earth do you think you are doing??? 😆 😆

Raj-Romancing with my girlfriend!.. 😉 😉

In a fraction of a second...naina's lips were sealeddd......it was not soft it wass not small...it was wild....it was long...raj kissed her with so much passion!!!!....he couldnt sta away from her!!......he kept getting wilder d wilder!!.....

Hamesha ki tarah is barr bhi naina had a cut on her lip!!...

Naina--Rajjj 😡 (naina ran her finger on her lippp)

Raj pushed that finger asied...aur phir dherrey se kiss karney laga..

Raj-Better??

Naina--Mmmm...

Raj smiled...

Naina--Main to thak chuki hoon creams istmal kar kar ke....har barkoi na koi cut chupana padta hain..

Raj-Jaan kitni baar bollon...dunt complain...har woh dard jo tumhe mera bana ta hain woh to tumhe sehna hi hogaaaa 😉

Before she knew it he was kissing her again!!

Raj--Naina I cant do this!...Baby I love you so much!..

Naina ke ankh mein asson!..

Raj dint let that drop.....wahin par usse pi liya..

Raj-What was that tear doing in your eyes...you knoe I hate it..... 😡

Naina-Puraney din yaad aa gaye....ditto wohi same situation....mein puchongi what on earth are you doing?...tum kahogeyy romancing with my girlfriend!!..

Naina abb hasne lagi.. 😆

Raj-Hey cry or laugh...yeh toh tum duno ko mix kar rahi hoon!!... 😉

Naina-Ufffooo Aalekh se class lena shuru kiya hain kya??

Raj-Mmmmmmm tumhare liye woh bhi kar longa!!.... 😉

Naina--Uff mere romeo..ab jao koi dekh lega toh hum phas jayengey!..

Raj was looking at Naina dreamily!..

Naina-Raj stop it...you knoe mujhe pasand nahi jab tum mujhe aise ghurte hoon!..

Raj-Naina...tum ho hi itni khubsurat!.

Naina--Kya dekh rahe hoon??

Raj-Tumhare dil pe apna naam..

Naina--oh toh tumhe mera dil nazar aata hain..... 😉

Raj-Thoda thoda...aggar tum apne kapde utar dogi toh saaf saff nazar aayega!.. 😆

Naina blushed... 😳

Naina--Maine woh sawal pucha hee kyun?? 😳

Raj-Acha ab mujhe tumhara dil dekhna hain.. 😉

Naina-Sapney main dekhna...abb jao!!. 😊

Raj-Pleaseee sapney mein rozz dekhta hoon..

Naina-Shut uuppp!!hang on roz matlab...ok so tum humare bareey mein aise ghatiya sapney dekhte hoon Raj....soo bad!!! 😉

Raj-Mmmmmmm

Naina smiled..

Naina-Rajjj

Raj-Mmmm (this word is always said sensously by Raj)(nd naina) 😉

Naina--Uff... 😆

And she pushed Raj towards her door....bahar out of the house!..

Naina--Gdd nyt!!

Raj-Mmmmmmm

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thnx lipi....sweta nd rituka...i was jus typin wen u guys posted!!

awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.

superb 👏 .plz cont soon.......

hey realy super dear,

n the drama of RN awesum loved it a lot, 👏 ,

dialogues r simply super,brilliant,

👏



All the best 4 the next update, 😃


Aarthi

too good
update soon long asap

hahahahahahahahahahahaha...my eyes have welled up by soo much laughing...dono kitne bade nautanki hai yaar...dialogue to chun chun ke bole hai...aur kisi ko sachai baatein ka mauka bhi nahi diya...o god and that dinning table scene...hahahahahahaha...they were fighting like dogs...aur sabhi unke prank mein faste hi ja rahe hai...hihihihihihi...ekdum miiiiiiindblowing comedy tha...brilliant...last toh uuuuummmmmmmmm tha...Raj to bada mmmmmmm wale sapne dekhta hai...love it not the dream but the update...thanku soo much for this mmmmmmmm update and daily date update too...aur nisha ka character play tum last mein hi batana...mujhe tumhari ye speciality pasand hai...
aaj kuch jyada hi hindi likh diye...hehehehe

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Kitne bade nautnaki hai dono!!!! 😆 Sabko chakkar mein daal diya!!!! 😆

Kya dialogues maare dono ne!!!Raj ka acting ki!!! 👏

Table waale scene mein kya ladh rahe thhe...like cats and dogs!!!! 😆 Sab kitne pareshan thhe!!!! 😆 😆 😆

Par unse toh dur bhi nahi raha jata!!! 😳

Their romance was so hot and passionate!!!! 😳

Ab sabko pata hai par phir bhi dono chupke chupke romance kar rahe hai!!!Waise kehte hai romance ka mazza chupke chupke aur bhi aata hai!!! 😆

Bas sabke aise hi hosh udate rahe Raj aur Naina!!!! 😆 😆 😆