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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sania_58

awsome,too good 👏

tarif k liye shukriya!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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update plzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap now only asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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JUST WAIT 4 A FEW MORE MINUTES YAAR
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#94

LAST PART IS ON PREVIOUS PAG
I HOPE U LIKE THIS PART

Ff izharre ishq part22==

RAJVEER DEAD

___________________________________

It has been 15 days since the time when raj made all of them realize that there was a traitor amongst them, bt they weren't happy abt raj's decision to not trace the traitor,,bt no one questioned or held an objection against him,it was immence power of raj;s authority over them that stopped them from going against him

Raj hd been more quiet then usual in these 15 days,,he was almost pushing himself by shear will power to have his wounds healed ,he took his medicienes on time,ate the req diet ,performed the necessary exercise to restore functioning of his leg ligaments,he was improving at great speed no doubt abt that!!!!

Naina ,ud ,huda, jai have not come to visit him overas it were raj's orders not to arrange a meeting until he asked them too

Raj was waiting 4 his full recovery ,bt his heart wished that his leg wound became worser and worser as a recovery will mean his going away from all of them,

He knew that was nessary to keep the traitor in check and not give him any more chances of hurting others on his pretext..

Jai ,ud and huda had been quiet busy in completing there files on the attacks ,,everyone in the military intelligence have been pulled from there usual jobs into the investigation of the attacks that threatened to rock the country at any second,this was one reason due to which naina wasn't able to get 4 raj's case reopening from the military judiciory.

Raj wasn't particularly borthhered abt this,raj has arranged everything 4 himself ,abt where would he go after he leaves the ashram,how will he keep his contact with the ishq people and and his people ,his team,he has purchased few simcards which he had decided to keep changing regularly……..

He dreaded the moment when he would go from there,bt he had no choise ……

These 15 days were also witness to a very interesting and complicated incident……..

Abt 7 days back ali had rung up when raj was sitting with allekh …

FLASHBACK=======================

Trin trin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Raj==who know ?? oh ali bhaijaan hai

Allekh==usul bhai ko humari yaad aa hi gayi finally,,,,,,

Raj==hello ali kya haal hai tumhara??

Ali==sir aap theek hain !! maine aap par huye attacks k barre mein suna aur mein bahut pareshan tha..sir mein aur puja dono aap se milna chahate hain. Kab aayien?? Aur naina kaisi hai?? Aur ud bhai huda bhai, jai sir kaise hain?? Allekh kaise hain?? Amin se to humne ab tak baat nahin ki ,humari baat to karvayiye!!!

Raj==oh my god ali take sum breath ,and I'll answere ur questions one by one,hum sab theek hain,mein bhi theek hun,filhaal tum mujhse nahin mil sakte but I promise mein tumko jaldi milunga,and amin is vakat mere liye gujrs nahin gijsi nahin vo kya kehte hain gajiia nahin vo

Allekh==(interrupting)sir gujia bana rahin hain amin,seriously sir naina ne aapko teen ghante phone par gujia kehna sikhya hai aap phir bhi.

Ali==teen ghante!!

Allekh==haan lekin koi fayeda nahin huya sir to uski awaaz sunnne mein itne buzy the k na to unko unke mobile bill ki parwa thi nahin is baat ki k aakhir naina inse keh kya rahi hain

Raj flushed..

Ali laughs then continues,,"sir mujhe aap ko kuch baatana hai,peechle kuch dino se mujhe aur pooja ko har jagha ek bache ki tasveerein mil rahi hai,,and there is sumthing strange abt this child ,I don't know what ,I think I knew him ,tasveerein kafi purani hain sir

Allekh says blankly==tumko ek bache ki photographs mil rahi hain,sir apun ko lagta hai iske peeche ali ki amin ka haath hai,are usul bhai vo chahati hain k tumdono ab family planning shuru kar do ok!

Raj sniggers in his coffee

Ali blushes

Ali==aap to chup hi rahiye

Hum abhi bache ko nahi mera matlab photographs ko fax karte hain

Ali could still hear ther guffowing sounds

He said just to change the topic

==abu kahan hain aapke??

Raj=haan haan topic badal lo,kher abu amin k saath gajia bana rahe hain

Allekh==gujia gujia sir gu—ji—a

Abu to apni meher k sang gujia ka maza le rahe hain

Ali==aapka kuch nahin ho sakta !!

Achacha ab hum phon rakhte hain

Allekh ==haan vo puja tera intezzaar kar rahi hogi

Ali disconnects the line going a shade of magenta..

Raj receives ali's fax in abt 15 minutes.

He himself is amazed on seeing the photo

There was sumfink abt the photo that he knew ,they were a good many years old ,they were scratched, balack and white

Raj kept the photos over his bag he would worry abt them later……………………………..

PRESENT==========================

Raj had called the others he wanted to meet them, 4 the last time b4 leaving .yes he would be departing tonight,

They arrived at abt 1 .

Raj hugged ud ,huda ,jai.

And they all were pretty amazed by his behaviour

Jai==raj tum theek ho

Raj==yup i am fine,I was just missing u

Jai==naina ko to hug nahin kiya

Raj looks down naina looks towards him,,

Ud==sir naina k liye to special hug honi chaiye naaa

Raj(hastily changing the topic)+==

Mujhe tum logon ko kuch dikhana hai and he shows them the photographs jo ali ne usko send ki thi and tells them all abt them.

Even jai and otheres feel awkard with them the child looked sumwhat familiar,

While all were buzy with photos raj gestured naina to follow him,,

They reached the kitchen,

Raj drew the curtains.then looked towards her with his passionate eyes,

He wanted her to understand the reason and pain behind them,he wanted nothing more then to tell her what he was planning to do ,to be scolded even slaped by naina,to be kept there,bt he resisted,

Then he thought he coul'dn't control himself

He hugged her like he had never hugged her b4.

He thought he was relieving all his tensions into her

And he silentily sobbed over her shoulder

Naina knew raj was distressed.she patted him and then took his face into her handa and slowly kissed his forehead,

Raj looked into her hazel eyes which were if same colour as his ,then he took a grip of himself

He held her hand tightly and started towards the room where others were sitting..

When they reached the room it was all dark inside

Raj==hey naina sab kahan gaye!!

And where?? Jai , huda

Hello

Bt at the same time both of them tripped over sumthing and fell over a bed ,naina fell over raj

Raj could see her face even in the dimlight ,

And then the light came back and there were hootings ,shouts of laughter and everything

Allekh==to chori pakadi gayi

Raj and naina immediately got up from the bed

Huda==heer ranja

Jai==sohni mahiwal

Raj and naina didn't even notice that they were still holding hands bcause they were too buzy blushing furiously

Raj saw sona sitting over a chair with ali's childs photos and drawing sumthing

He moved to her just to change the atmosphere

He looked at the painting in her hands

And was so astonished that he shouted

"naina" come here!!

He took the photos and drawing from sona and showed it to naina

He could see his surprise reflected in her eyes..

Then jai came 4ward and saw the painting

Jai==abhimanyu ka portrait

Sona tumne yeh kaisa kiya

Sona==meine kya a kiya jab yeh bachacha bada hoga to aisa dikhega

Raj==u could draw future paintings

That's how u recoganized me on my first day back

U made my portraits didn't u??

Sona==aur nahin to kya??

Raj looked again at abhimanyu's portrait and saw sumthing that nearly made him collapse

Raj==locket ,naina ,jai abhimanyu k haath mein vahi locket hai jo us din mere haath mein tha

Everyone was shocked at this new development..

They sat there quietly

Raj took the photos and drawing to his cupboard and put them in his already packed bag ,,

Then raj insisted on there going to sleep it already was three in the morning>>>>>>>>>>>

THE NEXT DAY+++++++++

Naina was the first one to get up,she looked over raj's bed which was empty.

To sir mujhse pehle uht gaye,,

She was happy that they were getting few minutes alone

She came out of the room to find him

He wasn't in the kitchen

Not in the bathroom ,not in the balcony

Where was raj??

She saw the morning newspaper and picked it up

And what she read made her insides freeze

Her heart ache at the very thought

The headline read>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>

CAPT RAJVEER SINGH DEAD IN AN ENCOUNTER LAST NIGHT!!!!!

love:

dolly😉

Edited by dolly18 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
jaldi jaldi reply karo
actually kya hai naa
simu keh rahi thi k maine raju k saath excessive kar diya
kabhi bechare ko kuch ho jata hai kabhi kuch
to meine socha us masum jaan ka ekbaar mein hi kaam tamam karun
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome too good very nice plzzzzzzzzzzz update da next part soon plzzzzzzzzzzz asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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What ............ not again
How many time Raj is going to die
awsome & superb
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ur update is going 2 dhamakedar gradually......

mindblowing...superb!!!!!!!!!!

update soon
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sorry for the late reply.the update was aweeeeeesum and toooo romantic.love the whole part.last part was shocking and the way u have linked the whole part was outstanding.thankuuu sooo much for this splendid update andHAPPY HOLY
Edited by quietrajpri1623 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
lov u all

Ff :izharre ishq part22==

LONG LIVE CAPT

___________________________________NAINA too shocked ,too tensed ,turned around without even reading the full article,she ran hither and tither at the ashram,up and down the stairs,searching and calling 4 raj frantically..

"rajveer,, rajveer sir, where r u??"

"rajveer "

Bt she couldn't find him..

Her panick was sky rocketing!!!!!

She ran upstairs,

And collided with allekh

"naina kya hua,apun ko bata !! naina"

Bt naina wasn't in any mood of talking to him ,so she brushed him aside, entered the kitchen,where only a few hrs ago she had kissed raj,

He was not there,,

She ran to the bathroom,

He wasn't there not even in the balcony,

Her search was complete ,she hasn't left aany place in the ashram unexplored!!!

Moreover she had known raj wasn't there even b4 half of her search was complete,bcoz it was not possible 4 raj not to respond when naina was shouting 4 him as if her life was dependent on his one single reappearance!!

This can't happen he can't go!!!

She won't believe it, she'll never believe it,

The crumpled newspaper was still in her hands……

Then came jai in front of her!!

He caught hold of her from her shoulders .

"naina tell me what's happening??

Where's raj??

He is not in the room. And he hasn't even cum when u r shouting so desperately 44 him"

Naina stared blenkly over to the floor….

"NAINA DAMM TELL ME WHAT'S HAPPENING?? ITS AN ORDER"

Naina couldn't muster up the courage to tell him to tell them anything.. saying what she was thinking will make her thought true ,and she won't let that happen..

And then other people came there ,all were looking preety tense

Ud=="sir rajveer sir building mein nahin hain"

Huda=="sir yeh yeh letters unke bed k paas pade the "

Allekh took the letters from huda's hand ,they were two in no ,one was addressed to them all and the other was addressed only to naina.

Allekh kept the second letter in naina's lap ,opened the other one and readed aloud

"hey ,I know is vaqt tum log mere upar bahut gussa ho !agar mein is vaqt tum logon k paas aa jaun to tum log mujhe kacha chaba jaoge. I know that. Isiliye meine tum logon ko kuch bataya nahin,listen mere liye yeh step important tha,zaruri tha ,meri vajha se already tum logon ki lives khatre mein pad gayi hain,I am absolutely fine,mera filhal tum logon se dur rehna hi theek hoga ok!! I have got everything planned out!!i know where I have to go now,,

I promise I will remain in contact with u all,and there is no need to call me I have already got another no and will continue to change them from time to time.

Listen now what u have got to do is search abhimanyu,that's the most important thing u have to do,,that locket resulted in my mishandelling ,I fear abhi is in danger !! I don't know where he is,find him find him at any cost!!!

And bye 44 now,I'll call u sooner,and naina,don't cry pls we''ll meet

u know that bhagwan ne mujhe tab bhi zinda rakha jab maut ko main khud galle lagana chahata tha,so ab bina mile to hum alag ho hi nahin sakte… hum zarur milenge have faith

Love:

Rajveer!!"

Jai==oh u prat u fool raj!!just cal me once I'll commit ur murder on the telephone line only

Naina(she didn't know what gave her courage to tell this to them)==u don't need to murder him,accordiong to todays newspaper he is already dead!!

Jai=="what ?? rubbish naina"

And he snatched the newspaper from her

He read it

The expression on jai's face confirmed it 4 naina that the rajveer singh talked abt in the headline was there rajveer only!!

She knew jai won't be able to tell others ,

Bt she could ,she wasn't really tensed,, the last lines of raj's letter had convinced her completely that they were not united to be seprated again,he wasn't dead ,she was sure of it,,,

She smootheted the newspaper and read aloud 4 others..

"CAPT RAJVEER SINGH DEAD IN AN ENCOUNTER LAST NIGHT

MARCH 24,

Army sources reveled to r journalists late last night that a certain capt rajveer singh shikhawat who was proven guility in the famous capt naveen singh's case was found last night forcing an entry in the army headquarters ,delhi,he was caught in the act,he had already taken certain very important documents from major nair's cabin, he wasn't surrendering ,owing to which the guards had to open fire at him and thus he was killed in the attempt to escape,his body has been send to lilawati hospital delhi 4 postmortem,,an investigation has been launched in the case,

Rajveer singh had escaped 5 yrs ago just after his court martial.

lala gehlot sahib prominent leader of the opposition party has registered deep regrets over such traitors"

And beneth this article was given a distant photo view of the newspaper's so called rajveer, naina couldn't help noticing ,that the dead body was wearing the same clothes as raj and was having same physique ,even it seemed to be having his face ,bt the photo wasn't clear.

She put down the newspaper and looked towards the others,all of them seemed to be petrified ,bt ther eyes were full of tears ,amin seemed to b loosing her grip,and she was taking help of the nearby pole to keep herself upright….

Naina==he is not dead ,,this is fake article,,lala's chal ,I am sure of it,raj sir apne promises ko kabhi bhulate nahin,and what we have to do his consult other officials to remove r last doubts abt this article,,

Naina was abt to pick up her phone when there came a call on jai's phone,,it was a missed call…

It flashed rajveer's name,jai almost jumpd a foot high in air with joy,bt naina was not happy

"raj ne kaha tha k vo apna no change kar lenge"

Jai==maybe he didn't get time 44 it

The phone rang again..

Naina==speaker on kijiye or recorder bhi pls

Jai did exactly what she told

Then heart hammering fast he said

Jai==hello hello raj.. rj r u there

Raj==u can kill me bt u won't have the locket,mein jaanta hun vo tumharre liye kitna important hai,meine aur abhi ne pura plan bana liya hai k tum tak vo locket kabhi pahunchne nahin denge,lala sahib

Ther were sounds of kicking and raj's groaning and slamming of something may be windows or sound of rain!!

Huda==sir aap yeh kya keh rahe hain

Naina==this is not raj sir,unki awaaz ko record kar liya gaya hai..

Raj==kill me kill me then.apne hi bete ko marna chahate hain aap??us bete ko jisne jisne,,how could u?? aap ek rakshas hain aur usse zyaada aur kuch nahin,,

His vioce was broken as if he was in great pain……

"Oh tuch tuch"

Then there was some sort of scrapping niose and then lala's viose came full of extreme anger

"give me tha……………."

And then It seemed that the recorder was switched of,,and the next voice that spok was quiet different and clear and and cold

Voice—kaisa laga apne pyaare saathi ki awaaz sun kar?? He' is dead.i killed him.uski basha mein kahu to meinne apne bete ko khud mar diya hai ,,

Lekin vo locket I want that,tumharra abhi mere paas hai usko bachana chahate ho to us locket ko mere havaale kar do!!!

Kya hua sab log chup ho,still believing it hasn't haapened.it has happened and I did it..

Jai==u u rascal I'll kill u mein tumko nahin chodunga,tum aisi maut maroge k tumhari ruh bhi kamp jayegi.

Lala==tuch tuch sentiments,,rajvveer ne

bhi mujh se yahi kaha tha bt what happened in the last,,he is dead he has gone!!!

Huda==he has not gone as u might think!!

Raj sir sirf tab is duniya se jayenge jab unke vafadaar yahan khatam ho jayeinge

He is alive in our hearts,

Long live capt rajveer!!!

Long live the revolution

Viose==woa, revolution,really!!if ur brains r as cracked as rajveer's was then better commit sucide and go to him and continue ur

re—vo—lu—ti—on there,now don't waste my time,I give u three days,hand over the locket ,otherwise not only will abhimanyu die bt u all will b framed in rajveer's death case.i have enough evidences to prove that u all helped him to escape and were hiding him..got that!!

This is ur last chance..

And the cal disconnected.every one was in complete ruins ,this morning has taken away there sun from them…..

Bt naina naina thought differently. She had seen sumthing that others didn't notice,sth lil away from any reasoning.

She picked up her and jai's phone and went out of the room. She needed these things to b sure in her theory as 4 others she won't tell them anything now ,she first needed to know who the bloody hell traitor was!!

Love

Dolly(I hope u like it)!!

I know u'll kill me 4 killing raj bt have faith. agar raj meri ff mein mar bhi gaya to bhi vo navi jannu

(naveen)ki tarhan bhoot banker hi sahi

Bt meri ff mein rahega zarrur

Ting tong!!!!!!!!!

Announcement samapat!!

Edited by dolly18 - 17 years ago

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