DREAMS...DO COME TRUE.. NEW UP-pg 42 - Page 23

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Posted: 17 years ago
he the motioned her to tak it wth the most beautiful smile she had evr seen in her life.......... but ............... she was ... she was
jus tooooooooooooo stunned at sight of dat face..... it seemed as if she was in a dream..... coz... it
jus seemed like the face ...the face she had alwais dreamt of .... jus tooo perfect for ani earthling.... too handsome.... tooo sweet.... jus too........ wel.... she dint have ani more words to describe that face... n if dat wasnt enuf... dat last...dat last smile..... jus made her feel... dat she realli was dreaming..... 4 she wanted to realli tak dat towel... but she thought it wud b foolish to tak it coz... it was ...it was jus a dream...n so... she continues staring at him...without even battling her eye lids......wth a beautiful dreamy luk on her face....

n then suddenli.... seeing the "wats wrong wth this gal "kinda expression in his sparkling eies.... she was brought to realiti... 😆 😆
he then told her once again abt the towel which was next to her....
nw...well dat she was brout back to her senses... she felt ridiculous.... becoz... well.... she was dat kinda gal who alwais tout she was a tomboy .... s... tomboy.... she thought she wud never fall 4 ani gu
y...she alwais tout how cud gals fall head over heels in luv wth those guys who alwais r keen on showing off, cheating , etc..etc......n dint knw whi evri gal used to jus drool over those over smart film heroes... who jus did evrithing according to directors like their puppets....n dat nobdi cud evr b so ideal in real life.... she was never dat type of gal who wud do ani of the above mentioned things in her life... never... never....atleast well, dat was she tout............... she thought
........ until ........Now....! u jus never knw wat the life has in store 4 u at evri turning .... coz...at evri corner...there mai b surprise...
a surprise...jus 4 u !!!

she then swiftli picks up the towel n starts to wipe herself.... not wanting to make a greater fool of herself........ n then slightli glanced s at him...wth jus the corner of her e
yes... 4 som unknwn reason her heart was wishing ...dat... mai b ..jus mai b... he might also b lukn at her..... but .....welll...... dats wat was differing in the real life 4m the so called reel life...... here... he had alreadi started driving wth immense concentration on the road...as the visibiliti level was veri poor due to the heavi rain... he dint even seem to mind dat the gal who was sitting in the back seat was...indeed veri gorgeous....

n wen she saw dat he hadnt even minded her presence, well...instead of sadness... she indeed felt a strange sense of hapiness....pride... knwing dat he wasnt one of those tipical guys , who were keen on running behind her ...unknowingli a smile broke into her face.... not to sai... one of the most sweetest smiles...

n as if a perfect coincidence... he had slowed the car n turned towards her suddenli.... shockn her wth his sudden action... afraid dat he had noticed her gazing at him n smiling at him... but no... he was sureli not a kinda of guy , she cud predict.... for after turning he asked her in a serious tone.." mam.. im realli sorri... i actualli 4got to ask u , were u wanna go ... i mean wers ur destination...??"
.. n the moment she heard the word "destination".... she is again falling into dat trance.... for ..some part of her heart hasnt still completeli recovered... n is sa
yin... u hv alreadi found ur destination... 4 this is ur destini.... n... so on... well her funni heart cud have had it going on n on ... but thanks to his expression... n...this time..it was a" there is something realli wrong wth this gal " kinda expression... she sureli was brout back to her full senses n decided dat she sureli was getting mad..... coz... how can she... i mean SHE... fall for an utter strangr whom she met jus few mins ago ?????????!! then she murmuring to herself to control her stupid mind...
she sez in a sweet but serious tone.." o... dat ... i m sorri i was thnkn abt something else... but the problem is dat mi car is repair... so i got stranded in this road... so if u cud plzz drop me 2 a nearbi workshop, dat wud b of gr8 help.. thank u..." Now the man sez.." but mam... i dont think dats feasible... [ n then seeing the confused luk on her face , he smiles n continues..] ...i mean mam...[ she cuts in wth.." Naina...plzz call me dat.."]... he smiles even more....n continues.." k...naina... is dat ....dat since its raining so heavili i dont think ani workshop wud b open nw... n moreover there is jus 2 of them on this road... the first is wai back..n dat was also closed ... n so dont think the other 1 too wud b open ... so if u sai me ur destination... i will tri to drop u there itself... or to the nearest point wer u can get transportation to reach there..."..
she then sez..." i wanna go to ambala.... but i hv to go to an interior place, so i t wud b kind of u to drop me to the nearest taxi stand then..."... he then smiles n nods in approval...
N he speeds the car swiftli.... seeming as if the black merc was jus cutting thru dat ruthless rain...n heading
forward.... 4 a journei...

4 their journei.... a loooong journei...which has... well........ jus...........STARTED !!!! ...n ...... wud jus .........................never.............................. ..END..
😳 😳 😳
Edited by cutipie.niki - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

hai evribdi... sorri dint get enuf time to write it up... n to sai frankli...was a feeln a bit lazi too !!!!! 😆 ...... 😉 😉 .... aniwais sorri dears... will update again soon... well im not mentioning ani date...!! 😉 😉 ... but real soon !! coz im gonna hv a gruelling time at koll... n the worse part..... i hv nli a dai hol 4 diwali.......... can u believe it ??????????!!!!! 😡 😡 😡 .... mi studid koll ! 😡 😡 😡 ... on top of dat im gonna hv so mani tests !! 😭 😭 ..n one is der 2mrw... 😕 😕 😕 ... n u al can c the wai im studing !!! 😆 ...

n nw enuf of mi "dukh bhari kahani .." !! 😊 😊 ... nw... coming to the update... i think it wasnt romantic enuf as i had told b4... coz...its jus dat i had tout up something n wrote somthing else... coz thought its too earli 4 the stori to take that turn... it wud seem abrupt, atleast dats wat i tout... so i will gradualli put some twists n turns in the stori... n this time... as i mentioned b4... it wud b a filmi kinda stori !! 😉 😉


do plzzzz sai me how n wat u felt abt 2dais update...

waiting..................
urs.... niki !! 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ friend forevr...
im so glad ki bhaiya ko eh padke accha laga... hope unke life ...isse zyada romantic ho !! wishing him a veri happi married life...!! 😳 ..
n nw.. do sai abt 2dais update too... 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
@sonarajasingh..
thanks a lot yar... hope u like 2dais update too...i hope 2dais update was big enuf... so waiting 4 ur looong repli nw !! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
@varun..
yar..thanks a lot 4 likn the fic... abb..iss baar toh i hope mujhe koi complaints nahi milega...cozzzzzz its realii a looooooooong update !! 😃 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
@arss..

thanks a lot dear !!!!!!! 😳 .... sorri 4 the wait..... 😳 ... i hope i hv compensated it wth a looooong update !! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
@yoginisahalari..
thanks a lot dear... thanks 4 supporting me alwais.... 😳


@ komal_lrl..
i dint knw u r reading it too ,dear... its nice to knw.. more ppl r reading it... thank u sooo much 4 repling... !! 😳


@love_ishni..

hei welcum... guess u r new to the forum....😃😃 n thanks a lot 4 reading n repling... n not to sai...WAITING !!!!😳 😳 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
beautiful update i loved it mindblasting but specially the way she looks at him thats the best partbut next time a longer one
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Posted: 17 years ago
yaaarrr i feel like killing u itne din kaha thi aap??????and then ur koll and den diwali whoa sooooooo we arent getting updates for a week maybe............
aneways on a more serious note mera saara gussa went away wd dat merc ...........u were realllllllllyyyyy good 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
will be waiting...................
and plzzzzzzzzzz is baar thoda lamba update karna 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
the update was very nice. well the car scene just rocks. pls continueee soon

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