DREAMS...DO COME TRUE.. NEW UP-pg 42 - Page 21

varun_sujjal
diya
sonarajasingh
yoginisahakari
thanks a lot dears....... im realli happi u liked the change...


but............... where is evri1 else????????????????? jus a few replies..... others dint like this track ??????? ......... Even the usual readers havent replied excet 4 few..... nobdi liked it i guess.... 😭 .......... i dunno wter i shud proceed or not nw.....😔


-luv
niki....🤔

hello friend r u angry ????????????
I am very sorry,actually I am too busy now-a-days.
I was out of station 4 10 days 4 a small project
ye project suddenly decide hui thi...............
to coll ke sir ke saath hum 6 friends went.
I've returned 2 day.
now I am because ki kuch dino baad mari vaiya ka saadi hone hala hai.to 4 decorating house,marketing.....etc...
par tum kab update kar rahi ho??
update soon

@friend forever..
thank u so much yar!!! 😳 😳 ...i had realli missed ur comment.....😳 😳 Aur tumhari bhaiya ko meri good wishes de dena....!!


@ evribdi !!

nw ... well even though the numbr of replies hv decreased.... 😕 😕 ... i believe...its becoz all r busi.... 😳 😳 ... believing dats the nli reason.... hopefulli ...!! 😆 😆 ... i will update 2mrw.... well nw on its full n full of romance.... well until the plot changes dat is....!!😃 ... then again...i will remind u ... it wont b like the real lrl.... it will b different !! 😉 😉

luv niki !!☺️☺️

hey niki mein waapis aaa gayi and belv me i prefer this writing style of urs do continue and goood updates
sorry for not replying all these days actually had gone out of town uske baad got injured aur phir net down so i c 😕 😕

friend main meri bhaiya ko tumhari updates dikhaye thi.bhayiane to lrl nehi dekhte hain par jab woh meri pass ate hai tab tumhari update zarror dekhte hai.
and I'll obviously pass ur good wishes 2 bhaiya.
waiting 4 ur update

nw plzzzzzzz... help me...!!! n as if god was jus waiting to all those "plzzzz" 4m her.... there in the far horizon... or so it seemed due to the heavi rain... a flashing light was moving swiftli towards her.....or to sai...her car !! those lights...realli seemed like rays of hope for our.... well...as u all knw bi nw.... our naina...!!

next scene..

nw she was in a fix.... well it was all abt getting drenchd in the torrential rain fall or getting a lift...well at dat moment she jus had to choose the latter... simpli bcoz she dnt hv ani another choice... if she still remains indoors , the car might jus ignore her n pass bi her...n it seemed like the nli hope... the nli car dat she was gng to see dat eventful dai... she better nt waste this oppurtuniti... she tuk her purse, her cellfone, which obviousli dnt catch ani signal, but still at the corner of her heart she did prai, 4 once dat their adds mite come true n it wud catch a signal.... aniwais , after takn these things....she got out of the car not 4getting to lock it.... she was wearn a black jeans n light pink sleeveless top...all of which added to her plight..... jeans which wud never dri n a top which dint help a bit to get rid of the cold......" god !! what a dai".... she shouted in furi to ...whoelse..??... but herself.....

the car which was swiftli approachn was stopped suddenli bi a small figure completeli drenched in rain waving hands franticalli....nearbi stood a car.... whose lights seemed as if thei were seacrching the oblivion... the car then jus stopped in4nt of the drenched figure...

next scene...

the car was a black merc...n in dat rain...it was jus glistening... the back door of the car then opened....as if indicating her to move in....not waiting 4 ani further invitation... she sat in...as she sat.... it was then she realised.... she was alone in the back seat.... she then lukd up into the drivers seat ...to find a person in in blue jacket.... his face still turned the other side..... she then managed 2 murmur a word of thanks...b4 she started her sneezing bouts..... the person in the 4nt seat....was now lukn into the rear view mirror ,s till not turning... n then spoke 4 the first time ..." o gosh ! u r completeli drenched.... jus a sec lemme c... there was a towel in here..... nw god knws were sweeto had kept it nw... she nevr keeps the things in proper place...." n was searching the front seat n the lockers.... then 4 the 1st time he turned..... jus to chk wetr the towel was back there... n to his happiness he found it behind the back seat on the raised platform... he the motioned her to tak it wth the most beautiful smile she had evr seen in her life.......... but ............... she was ... she was jus tooooooooooooo stunned at sight of dat face..... it seemed as if she was in a dream..... coz... it jus seemed like the face ...the face she had alwais dreamt of .... jus tooo perfect for ani earthling.... too handsome.... tooo sweet.... jus too........ wel.... she dint have ani more words to describe that face... n if dat wasnt enuf... dat last...dat last smile..... jus made her feel... dat she realli was dreaming..... 4 she wanted to realli tak dat towel... but she thought it wud b foolish to tak it coz... it was ...it was jus a dream...n so... she continues staring at him...without even battling her eye lids......wth a beautiful dreamy luk on her face....

hai evribdi...!!

sorri 4 the delai... actualli i had written it yesterdai itself... but but mi stupid net wasnt workn.... n thank god, atlest its back 2dai.....

well...so here is the update....n sss i knw it isnt much n not too gud too....im feeling somthing is missing ... well i dunno wat....myself.... if u all find it the same wai, i:e u also feel somthing is missing do sai me... i will tri writing it again... 😕 😕 😕 ...

well 4 nw... plzzzz post ur comments...sai me wat u liked n wat u dint....it will help me to make it better... 😳 ....

so eagerli expecting ur replies....

luv niki !! 😳 😳

@arss..

welcome back dear !! glad to hear 4m u after a looooooooong time !!! 😃 ... i hope u r alrite nw.... i mean abt the injuries u mentioned.... 😳 😳 😳 ...n abt net... well dear...its the same here... god nli knws wat keeps happening to it...!! one min it will b as gud as butter... i mean working so pperfffectli n the veri nxt min... it goes phusssss[sound effect u c !!]!!! 😆 ....

well aniwais thanx 4 ur loveli comments...n do sai me hoew was 2dais update...if u find somthng missing do sai me... 😳 😳

@friend forever...

hei yar... i hope bhaiyya likes the stori...coz i m feeling embarassed dat even big ppl read mi stori...[dat is... i mean dat if he has evr read it ... 😕 😕 ]... coz i alwais tout nli school or koll kids r reading the stori...!! 😳 😳 😳 ... coz mi writing is terrible n god ..knws wat big ppl mai think of me 4 writing all this !!! 😆

hi, cutipie.niki 👏👏
i m back with my comment........ i m so sorry i couldnt comment on ur story well ur storry is going fully awwwwwwesssssssssssoooooooomeeeeeeeeee👏👏👏...................... ........kaash tum lrl ke writer hote........ well, dont worry ur didnt missed anything......... m sorry again....... i couldnt comment😭....... and do u know i told my frends tht in india forumns there r the best stories written by many people and do u realise they liked ur story very much👏....... well, i have also started a new ff on lrl--------ff --mission BOYS V/S GIRLS prt 5th updtd😆...... i hope everyone likes it. 😆😆

well ur one of the best and keep upto ur level........👏 👏

as usual m waiting 4 the next update post soon........
m waiting........ 😳😊😆