DREAMS...DO COME TRUE.. NEW UP-pg 42

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hei evribdi thanks a lot 4 ur sweet replies....😳 ..im realli grateful 4 each n evri1 of u all 4 the support..!!😳
i will repli individualli later...

i jus read thru yesaterdais update... n to sai frankli... its std wasnt up to the mark... atleast dats wat i felt... I think mai b its bcoz... yesterdai... i wasnt quite in a mood to write... IM SO SORRI 4 DAT... WELL... SO I HV EDITED IT.... STORI IS STILL THE SAME... BUT FEW SENTENCES R ADDED N FEW CHANGED... I WUD REQUEST EVRI1 TO READ IT ONCE MORE... 😳 😳 😳
SO PLZZZZZZ.... EVRI 1 WHO READ IT CHK IT OUT ...N DO SAI IF U FOUND ANI DIFFERENCE AT ALL IN THE 1ST PLACE..!! 😆 😆 ... N IF SS... DO U THINK IT MADE A DIFFERENCE TO THE STORI...?? 😳

WAITING 4 UR REPLIES....
LUV
NIKI !! 😊

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Arushi.

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Posted: 17 years ago

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arre yaar sach bolu toh mujhe kuch difference nahi laga............did u actually edit ti .....maybe i couldnt cathch it or something but..........was not able to diffrentiate 😆

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Arushi.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#233

where r u????????????
r v such bad repliers that u dont update only????????????

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 17 years ago

#234

@arss..
hei no dear... im realli sorri ... felt veri badli sleepi...got up jus a while ago... so cudnt write it up... will tri mi best to update 2mrw...!! thanks 4 waiting !!😳😳

luv u all !!
niki !! 😳 😳

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nainarocks

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Posted: 17 years ago

#235

👏 beautiful fic sweetheart.plz update soon.

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friend forever

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Posted: 17 years ago

#236

It is not fair!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ho kya gaya tumhe???
yaar plz....................
update

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friend forever

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Posted: 17 years ago

#237

yaar kahan kho gaye??
kuch paata hi nehi tumhari
re kavi to hame yaad karo.
ham to bina update se kafi bore ho gaye...........

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Anuradha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#238

hey niki u r ok na?..where r u?? 😕

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 17 years ago

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sorry dears...i knw i keep repeating this word veri often... but plzz trust me..i realli mean it... im bit too busi dat mi imagination isnt workn !!!!!!! .... i wasnt able to write anthing up 4 the update...n on top of dat... i keep gettin jagged in koll... so realli was not in veri gud mood to write up a beautiful romantic update... 😕 😕 😕 ..4 which as u knw we need to b in a equalli gud mud to write it... otherwise..it jus wont turn up gud... so... i solemnli promise dat no matter wat i will put up an update bi 2mrw eveng or bi 2mrw nite... tri mi best to make it loonger n romantic...!! 😕

hope u all understand... n again sorri 4 the delay..

luv niki !! 😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 17 years ago

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b4 reading this... i want to sai a sorri in advance..!! well its 4 the delai... but more importantli... 4 the language used...i dunno punjabi... 😕😕... so i hv jus written wat i hv heard in tv... so...i appologise in advance if it is abusive language...or ani other funni thing dat i hv written... plzz..do sai me if its anidng like dat..!!

" k...naina... is dat .dat since its raining so heavili i dont think ani workshop wud b open nw... n moreover there is jus 2 of them on this road... the first is wai back..n dat was also closed ... n so dont think the other 1 too wud b open ... so if u sai me ur destination... i will tri to drop u there itself... or to the nearest point wer u can get transportation to reach there..."..
she then sez..." i wanna go to ambala.... but i hv to go to an interior place, so i t wud b kind of u to drop me to the nearest taxi stand then..."... he then smiles n nods in approval... N he speeds the car swiftli.... seeming as if the black merc was jus cutting thru dat ruthless rain...n heading

forward.... 4 a journei...

4 their journei.... a loooong journei...which has... well........ jus...........STARTED !!!!

next scene:

the rains fury still continues...n the merc seemd as if it was fling thru it.... swift..n
elegant... the rain lashing its windows.... there was silence inside the cabin.... neither spoke.... but a
faint melodious music was playing... he was driving wth full concentration... n in the back seat...
naina was lost in thoughts... thoughts ...blank thoughts.... n was jus staring out of the window...
thru whch she c**t see anidng due to the rain lashing on the windows.... wen suddenli... she heard a
voice... well..it was him... he was lukn at the rearview mirror n saing to her... " well... do u mind if i
stop 4 few mins... its like ... actualli...[embarassed].. im a it hungri u c...i hadnt had anidng since
morning ..."

naina: she was too startled bi the sudden voice n started blushn realisng his frankness n the fact dat
he is asking 4 her permission to stop his car, wen it is she who is a intruding his privaci... n sez.." of
coz... im realli sorri to b bothering u like this... i hope the rain stops soon n i get a cab , so dat i
dont bother u animore.... n to sai the truth.... im a bit hungri too...but wer can we find a restaurant
in this road... n even if its there it wud b closed , na??"

he:"o !! i dunno abt restaurants... but im sure watevr happens... how muchever it rains... pammi
aunties dabha will alwais b open..!! "
naina: dabha ?? wow it wud b interesting... u wont believe it..i have nevr gone to ani roadside dabha...
i alwais wanted to , but papa never allowed me to one...this trip is turning more n more interesting...!!

[ jus then she realised... she was jumping wth excitement...dat too in 4nt of a stranger... but
somehow....nli god knws.... she felt "at home" in this car... wth some1 whom she is willing to travel 4
endless time...n starts o blush... n seeing his amused smile in the mirror... the blush jus deepens...]

he then continue in a kidding tone : well then atleast u wud remember me long after this journei... for
evritime u c a dhaba , u will remember me..[ n smiles]

n veri soon .. well not b4 taking few bends... thei reach a wide clearing in the almost forest like
surrounding... it had a wooden picket fence surrounding he whole area... n in the entrance a simple
wooden board read.." PAMMI DA DABHA".. n there r few wooden desks outside...which were getting
drenched in the torrent...n under a tatched roof sidebi stood mani vehicles... n then further inside
one cud see a plastic roofed building... it was a bit elevated from the ground , wth a single open room
wth a kitchen in the side... there were mani wooden round tables n chairs... n most of them were
occupied bi ever hungri customers ....

next scene..

he stopped in4nt of the building 4 her to get in 1st n then he went n parked his car n joined her...
getiing a bit wet in the process... then thei go to a table nearbi the kitchen 4m were appetising
gastronomic smells were arising .... n as soon thei settle in.... thei r attended bi a boy....who
suddenli... shouts.. "RAJ bhaiya....!! aap ??!! kaise ho aap ?!! kitne dinnon baad aae ho ?!! ek
minute...abhi mumiji ko bulatha hoon n runs in...b4 RAJ cud respond..

naina... she felt a shiver thru her body... hearing...hearing his name... it is as if.. this was the name she was waiting to hear all her life... not that she nevr had heard this name b4... but it was becoz..
the person in4nt of her.. the person..who 4 somunkown reason was having such a magnetic effect on her was having this name.... she jus murmured his name again under her breath...it jus felt sweet saing his name... felt like music to her hears...

wen suddenli ... she was starteled yet again... bi a voice... this time a loud , noisi noise.... but
nevrtheless filled wth luv....well It was a woman... in her mid 50s... cherubic n wth an air of
motherli luv...in a tipical punjabi suit... n wth a large laddle in her hand was standing in4nt of their
table...

the ladi was speakin in mock angri tone...which wud seem like shouting to evri 1 around..:" oye kotte
de puttar !! abb kyun aaya hai ??!! inne dinon me ik var bhi nahi aaya... iss mumiji ko dekne ki man hi
nahi aaya kya ??[ she was making a puffed face n was luking indeed veri cute !!] .. chal... main tujse
baat nahi karti ... [all the while Raj was tring to open his mouth n sai somthing to justifi his stand..
but nevr got a chance...!! his face was watchable 4 it had myriad expressions..feelings......
wth a luk of sorri...sorri 4 not being able to meet up wth this foster mother of his... who has fed his hungri stomach mani a times wth food specialli made 4 him ...
wth a luk of fear...the fear , wen ur mom scolds u for coming home late....
the luk of happiness to hear somebdi saing that thei missed u ... expected to see u....
the luk of remembering fond memories of the place.. the ladi..who was jus like his mother...
n not to forget the embarassment of
getting scolded upon in4nt of all those strangers n one in particular... sitting besides him...

the ladi jus then notices tat he wasnt alone... there was some one sitting besides him... a young.. pretti
gal...wth a bewildered luk on her face... she was jus ..jus perfect... JUS PERFECT TO BE HIS
.......WIFE !!!!!!!! n so she decided dat she was his wife....n then continued even more fierceli .." oye
raj !! khothiya...tennu shaadi kar li ??!!..." [well this time she realli was a bit annoyed]..... so she
started another round of her blastings... asusual ... not allowing ani one else to even tri to open their
mouth....!!
😆

Edited by cutipie.niki - 17 years ago

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