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Posted: 17 years ago
nice.but next time plz bada wala.
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Posted: 17 years ago
pls pls pls.......longer update 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
okh..so longer upd8 on the way!
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Posted: 17 years ago
[SZIE=2]so{she looked up at them..but then dropped her gaze soon..}..lets begin…"


"naina.."

"yas ma'am.."

"agar aapko kisi target pe khada kar diya jaye..aur kaha jaye ki major rajveer will shoot at the board so that ur figure is carved out..
wud u agree??…"



"I would ma'am..{was the immediate response...}
aisa hum pehle bhi kar chuke hain…I trusted him then..
and I trust him and his capability now…and will keep on doing so...."


{do i need to say abt rajveers expression??...}

"rajveer.."

"yes.."

"wat if positions are changed..and..??.."

raj dint let priya finish...

"I will not mind attempting it…"

"and knowing that naina is barely in her second year.."

"I would have attempted this had she been in her first year too…because I know...
.she will fire only if she trusts herself..warna nahi….

and as for me…I belive her because she believes in herself.."



naina cudnt explain the immense pride she felt that moment…

she was looking across at rajveer…her eyes shone…

rajveer gave her one momentary look..and she cud read the same shine in his eyes..too..

nishant smirked…there after all did exist that virtually unexistant bond…

"major rajveer.."

"agar kisi bhi tarah ka training test hai..say a test of ur capabilities as a soldier..and aap aur cadet naina competitors ho…kya aap chahenge ki who jeete…??"

rajveer thought for a moment before he answered....
about a few seconds later he said...


"I will give my best…to prove myself..aur agar uske baad bhi yeh jeeti to hats off to her…"

naina's smile widened..

"to iska matlab han..ya na..major?"

rajveer grinned…his eyes lowered and he added..



"yes.."


naina was taken by surprise.....


she dint know rajveer to be someone who wud want a competetor to win…

but he was ready to lose …to her…



"and naina??"

"huh??…umm..yes..and no ma'am.."

"cud you plz be more clear.."

"ma'am..yeh sach hai ki I wud like sir to win…lekin on second thoughts…mein khud jeetna chahungi..

{rajvver was now eyeing her closely..}


I wud want to win to make my mentor proud…
and win to him…to prove..that in me..

{she looked at him..}

there exists a part of him…"



rajveer's chest seemd to be swelling..and his look softened…

this time seeing their faces..even priya cudnt stop the momentary smile that adorned her face before..past memories engulfed it again..


"ok..for the next round..aap dono kuch der ke liye separate rooms mein jaaenge plz…"

rather puzzled they shifted….
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Posted: 17 years ago
It had been about half an hour before rajveer and naina met..

Naina was in the mess..

"eh naina..kaisa tha tera who..test..??"

"accha to tha..lekin phir hume do separate rooms mein shift kar diya.."

"han apun ko bhi kiya tha..BC ke saath..lekin apun dono to pehle se hi alag kamron mein the…"

"pata nahi who..SIR??!!"

rajveer had just passed the mess..and he stopped…but dint enter..

he looked a little serious…and indicated naina to meet him!!..

naina nodded…

"aalekh mein chalti hun…"

"thik hai..ja…"



the room was dark and the tapes were being developed...

nishant and priya sat on a bench a little far away...

"ma'am tapes nearly ready hain...u can see them in about 15 mins.."

"fine..nishant.."

"yes ma'am??.."

"well, i thnk i need a break...i will meet u in 20 mins..in room 803.."

"yes ma'am..waise wat do u thnk...results positive honge??..."

"wat does ur gut feeling say nishant??...."


nishant smiled as priya left....



she was sitting alone in her room...wen a knock on the door made her groan..she was tired..fatigued...


and for the first time in three years...spent of her emotions...she opened the dorr to find..
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Posted: 17 years ago
"yes major???...."

"well ma'am ..if u dont mind...mein aapse kuch baat karna chahta hun..."

"yes plz say major..."

woh...

major nair...looked around at where he was standing..it was an open corridorr and cadets cud pass by any moment..

"woh..actually corridoor mein...."

"huh!!!...well i must say u select very bad times major....very bad..."

major nair turned scarlet..it was the first time ..a women was bossing him around...

{much to our delight of course!!}


"well wat can i say....come in.."

"thank you ma'am..."


"yes major..wat do u want to say??..."

priya took a seat..but major nair remained standing...courtesy and mannerism prohibited him from taking a seat!!


"well..its about the current programme in the academy..."

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naina walked towards rajveers room...

she had inhibitions about tellin him wat priya had told her...


shud she tell him evrythng...after all even priya had sacrificed a lot...and...

but wat if priya dint want rajveer to know...

wat if...

"naina??..."

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"wat about the programme major??..."

"well actually woh meine suna ki aaj apne major rajveer aur cadet NAINA SINGH AHLUWALIA ka test liya.."

priya dint like the stress on the name at all..she looked up...stern..she was..

"yes..so?"

"well madam i dont think u shud let them be together.."

"and why do u think so major...?"

"well..woh dono jab hhi pehle kisi programme ke liye ek saath the toh academy mein problem hui hai and..."

"one minute...let me complete my question..."

major nair was puzzled..

"i wanted to ask...WHY do U think...ki MEIN... apse SUGGSTION lungi???..ya lena pasand karungi??..."

"ma'am...woh mein yaha ka vice principal..woh.."

"aap vp ho sakte hain..lekin filhaal highest authority hum hain...and we will make our decisions...u dont need to worry..good night major!!..."


she gave a sweet..sarcastic smile..
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Posted: 17 years ago
naina was not very far from the room...

"Kithhe chali?"

"Mujhe...."

"....Rajveer Sir ko milne jana hai....pata hai...."

"To?", Naina saw Huda's expressions change a bit.....but ignored it....she had enough on her plate now.

".....toh nahin jaa sakti!"

"Kyun?"

"Humse baat kar...sab kuch bata.....fir tussi jao!", Pooja said.

"Kya mazzak hai Pooja!"

"Mazzak? Phoolan hum teri test ke baare main....."

"Huda....please....jane de!", she pleaded!

"Itni der main mar nahin jayenge Rajveer sir, tere bagair!"

"Huh? Stop it! Aaleeeekh!", she sort help from him....

He turned to the other friends, "Maine kaha tha na....raaja ki jaan tote main....yeh nahin rukegi....."

"Aise kaise nahin.....waise hi iska connection mere room se toot jayega..........bata na......."

"Theek hai...........poocho!", she saw that she didnt have much choice.

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'Knock-knock'

He was expecting Naina.....opened the door....and stared at the feminine figure outside.......


His expressions....unreadable....but far from pleasant.....


....and hers.....were different.....her face stony.....and features and grace....intact!


"May I come in Major?"


"Hmmm....."


"Rajveer....", he gave her a look, that made her stop abruptly and readdress him, "Major....."


"Yes?"


"Woh...."


"Hmmm....."


"Naina....."


".....Naveen ki bahen hai....Naveen ki.....ek gaddar ki......"


"Tum mujhe galat......"


"Galat??", he was bellowing, "....fir se? Galat? Aapko sahi samajhne ki galati ek baar kar li......aur apna dost.....kho chuka..........."


"Tum....."


"......Main Naina ke saath KUCH BHI nahin hone doonga......kuch bhi.....aur na hi aapko............", he cut her, not letting her talk.


"Major.....us waqt....tumhe kuch....."


"Mujhe kuch pata nahin....aur na hi janana hai......ek baar fir Naveen ko khone ka gam nahin sahen hota mujhse....aaj subeh hi Naina ke chehre par dekha hai..."


"Rajvee....maine uss.....samajhne ki koshish...."


"Aap.....Aap nahin samjhengi.....PAL PAL marta hoon......PAL PAL....Colonel Gill.....har baar....jab is academy main aata hoon....apne classrooms...mess....dekhata hoon....nahin samjhengi aap.......Naina ko jab bhi dekhta hoon....nahin samjhengi.....main ghut ghut ke jeeya hoon..........pichle chaar saalon se.....khud ko har pal hara hua......kamzoor banata aaya hoon.....nahin samjhengi app................AAP....", he was yelling, his eyes at fire, ".....na hi tabhi samjhee thi....aur na ab!"


"Raj..........", her eyes blood shot!


"If you may Colonel", he barked, ignoring her pleading eyes, "......I am expecting someone.....", he opened the door....

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Edited by colours_endless - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
well thats it for now!!!


hope it was long enuf!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nishaant was sitting in his room, ready to watch the CDs of the Test.


Major Nair walked in.


"Lt.Goenka"


"Sir!", Nishant didnt correct him.


".....compatibility test ke CDs.....", he looked at the cases of the CDs.


"Sir!", Nishant asked him in a 'kya-kaam-hai' manner.


"Aaj Captain Rajveer aur Cadet Singh ki test thi, nai?"


"Jee...."


"Aap Cadets se kaafi ghulmil gaye hain?", he asked and Nishant nodded, ".....kya jante hain aap Cadet Singh ke baare main?"


"Yahi sir, ki woh kaafi dedicated student hain, aur shayad uske saare batchmates se behtar soldier ban sakti hain!"


"Soldier!", he gave a hollow laugh, "Soldier woh kaisi banengi, yeh hum decide kaenge, Lt.Goenka....", unable to bear her praise.


"Sir!"


"Soldier ki niyaat bohot important hoti hain.....", he finally began his job.


"Yes sir!"


"Aur unki neeyat......"



"......This is the LIMIT!", she bellowed from the door, "Mujhse baat karne ke baad aap....I did not expect this Major!"


"Madam!"


"Will you please leave the room at once?"


He stared at her, murderously.


"Please......before I officialy ban you from all the activities of the programme?"

He quietly left....leaving what looked like a paper on Nishant's dest, in a way that only Nishant could see it.

"Carry on Nishant!"

"Yes mam!"

And she left.



Nishant glanced at the paper. It spoke about the alleged affair of Captain Shekhawat and Cadet Naina Singh.......the solitary confinements........the run away from the academy.......the gray areas in Ritu Mishra's case and her involvement in it.....and other rule breakings of her.....all the allegations on the cadet, before Breg.Chandok had dismissed them.......


..........his face changed expressions....he had never expected the petite Naina to be something like this....quite shocked at the details........


Nishant carefully went through them. He walked upto his window,

".....baaki to pata nahin....", he looked at the sky, ".....par, aapki ek baat to shayad sach hai...."


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Posted: 17 years ago
naina had been sitting there for the past one hour answering all their questions...
and her friends knowing of her impatience to go and meet rajveer had been insisiting on details....

"kam se kam paanch baar bata chuki hun yaar...ab to jaane do..plzzz....!!!!!!!!!1"

naina looked on pleading...and aalekh looked at pooja...who turned to ali..
who in turn looked at huda ..who looked back at aalekh..

then aalekh turned to yudi..who turned to ali ..ali turned to pooja and pooja truned to naina to find her red....

she was trying hard not to yell and keep the look of pleading on.....



"thik hai kudiye....ja!!"

"huffff!!..thank you..."


naina ran out but...


"oye naina puttar...."

she stopped..grimaced....

"ji suriji...."

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rajveer was pacing up and down...

she was supposed to be here an hour and a half back...

careless...insensitive...impunctual...useless...!!!

oh hell wat was wrong wid him..he was talking about naina. after all...but one and a half hours...where the hell was she???.....


he opened the door..and caught hold of and orderly...

"orderly.."

"yes sir...?"

"cadet naina singh jahan bhi hai..unse kaho..turant mere room me report karein..now...!!1"

"yes sir..."

"GO!!"

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"suriji...ab mein jaaun.."

"oye bas kuch aur bakse hai puttar..woh kya hai na...monthly ration hai to tally to karni padegi..aur ismein hai na thodi si help mil jaati hai to ...u understand na puttar...??"


"i know suriji ..lekin.."

"oye tu mera inna sa kaam nahi kar sakti???.."

"uhu...surij......huh!!!...thik hai hai suriji..."



"CADET NAINA SINGH???!!"


"MEIN YAHAN HUN..."....naina jumped up....

"aap ko major rajveer ne foren apne room mein report karne ko kaha hai..."


"yes...thank you...bye suriji..."

and naina ran awayu at top speed..not even glancing back.....


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