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Posted: 17 years ago
"aur phir....."

"aur phir??..."

"meine rajveer ko phone kiya...i cudnt stand it naina...my guilt was killing me...mujhe use batana hi tha...i had to..."
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"hello rajveer?.."

"priya??..where the hell are you...kahan ho??..naveen ko yahan laate hi honge..aur tum..."


"mein......mein nahi aa sakti rajveer..."

"WHAT??...PRIYA..."

he looked around to see many eyes on him..and moved away to whisper into the mobile..despite the fact that he was waiting to burst out angrily...

"tum pagal ho gayi ho..wats wrong wid u....nahi aa sakti ka kya matlab hai..tum....ek minute...."

a realisation dawned..

"priya are u safe???..."


"huh!!!..uh....huh!!..rajveer...huh!!"

""priya??tum ro rahi ho...?..wats the matter..."


"i ...woh...mera..bh.....i cant come..."


beep beep beep beep


[PRESENT]


"aapne unhe batya kyun nahi....????"
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Posted: 17 years ago
aapne unhe bataya kyun nhai.."

"mujhe dhamki di gayi thi....woh rahul ko maar dalte naina...par aaj sochti hun kashi keh diya hota...to...."

"phir??...."

"meine saara din intezar kiya...koi phone nahi ayaa..mere ghar ke bahar bhi unhone admi bitha rakhe the...i knew i was being watched....mein ja bhi nahi sakti thi...

us ek din ke liye...i had failed as a soldier....ek behen ban gayi...ek sipahi nahi..."


"aur bhaiyya ka trial hua..aur woh...guilty paye gaye..."


"han..agle din..mujhe pata chala ki..."

[FLASHBACK]

priya suddenly wakes up to find herself on the sofa...she had slept off wen..she dint know....

and her cell phone blinks wid a message..from rajveer..



we lost! naveen found guilty!check the news!

[PRESENT]

"i switched on the tv...i was expecting ki naveen ke case ke baare mein kuch hoga...shayad rajveer bhi message mein yehi kehna chahta tha...lekin..."

"lekin news mili..ki bhaiyya faraar ho gaye the..aur captin rajveer singh sekhawat ne unhe maar giraya..."


"han naina...i was shocked...lekin shayad mere liye kuch aur bhi plan kiya hua tha..."




[FLASHBCK]

TTTRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIINGGGGG~!

"hello..."

"tumhara bhai..tumhe lautana chahte hain..."

"RAHUL??..KAHAN HAI WOH??"

[present]

"kya hua??..."

"mujhe ek jagah bulaya gaya...ambala se kareeb 70 km door ..jungle ke paas..mein gayi..soche..aakhir mera bhai to mila...aur ...
meine bhi decide kar liya tha...ki ek baar unhone mujhe rok liya lekin phir nahi..."

"matlab??.."

"naveen par jo deshdroh ka ilzam tha...woh mein mita kar rahungi..than liya tha meine..bas ek baar rahul mujhe mil jaye..."

"aur aapka bhai apko mil gaya lekin..mere bhaiyya ke badle..hai na??and ur sorry..."

"nahi naina..."

naina looked up...

mein gayi...apne bhai ke talaash mein...waha pahuchi..to phir ek phone call..
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Posted: 17 years ago

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"junglo ki taraf jao..towards east...50 kadam.."


priya moved through the woods...hoping.waiting to catch a glimpse of that inoocent round face...


"mein pahuch gayi hun..."

"good..."

"ab kya??.."

"wahi ek ghani jhadihai..uske peeche...ek trunk hai...use kholo....tumhe apna bhai mil jayega..."

[PRESENT]

"tab mujhe kuch nahi samajh aa raha tha naina..i ran to the bushes..dekha to woh trunk andar tha....it was shut...
bahut darr gayi...pehle laga ki shayad woh andar bandha hua hai..lekin agle hi second...laga ki agar....i opened the box..."

even naina's heartbeats were racing up now....wat wud be in the box..

"socha ki phir se use dekhungi..i will cudlle him in my arms...lekin.."

"lekin..."

"meri taraf dekhne wala chehra..bejaan tha naina...lifeless...his eyes still had that sparkle..they were wide open...but dark...."

naina was shivering...

"un logo ne rahul ko..."

"maar dala....."

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"Huh?", Naina was breathing fast.....

Colonel Priya Gill, stood in front of her......stony faced.....

"Mera Rahul....mera bachha......main...main...."

Naina maintained her silence. She felt, for the first time.....that someone, shared......bore the same pain.....the same ordeal.....as she did.....

"Rajveer Sir ko yeh....."

"Nahin....."

"Aapne....."

"Nahin bataya.....", she said, her eyes moistening, but face still expressionless.

"Huh?"

"Na usne kabhi fon kiya....", she said, ".....na hi kabhi maaf kar paya!"

"Aapne....."

"Main kya batati? Kayee mahino tak chutti bina ek kamre main baithee rahi.....kya kehti.....rona bhi shayad bhool gayee thi!"

Naina stared at her......standing in front of her.....was another sister.....like her......dying everyday...........every second.....for her innocent brother.....

"Fir ismain se bahar aane ke liye, kaam pe lag gayee.....mission pe mission leti gayee.....pata hi nahin chala.....kab din saalon main badal gaye.....", she closed her eyes, as if saying something very painful..."....apne bhai ko....."




"Cadet Naina Sigh, aapko.....test ke liye bula rahe hain!", orderly yelled.

This bought Naina back to life....she didnt know, when her cheek went pale, when her eyes reddened....when her face stained in tears......she quietly walked out.....




"........aur shayyad......Naveen ko.......", Priya finished her sentence, as Naina closed the door behind her.

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She entered the room. The test was to begin. Rajveer stared at her tear stained face....red eyes....he read them!

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AND PRIYA HAD REMEMBRANCES...



"Ek baar Priya....."

"Main koshish...."

"Koshish nahin! Damn it! Koshish nahin!"

"Naveen......"

He sat on that stone in his cell with a thud!

"Main...."

She put her hand on his shoulder.

"Himmat....."

"Ek baar....sirf....."

"Maine Raj ko bataya.....woh Lalaji se baat karega....."

"Lalajee?", he yelled.

"Kyun?"

He looked around, to find the guard sitting outside.

"Nahin......kuch....."

"Ab hearing postpone karwadi hai. Humare paas aur hafta haii....Naveen....hum ab bhi haare nahin hain....."

"Priya, ek baar Ma-Baba se milna hai...", he pleaded, "....hearing se pehle...."
"Aasan nahin hai...."

"Tum kuch nahin janti....."

He smiled. There was something immensely painful in that. Priya couldnt see that. She stood up to go.....but he held her hand in his feeble grip....after his fingers werent spared from the torture....

"Priya...."

She didnt reply. Priya Gill, in that cell, was very different from the dignified, strict woman today. She was immensely pretty. He black hair tied up, a simple army uniform, and big, honest eyes.............would win anyone....but Naveen could see his loosening life line in them.....he knew....she was weak!

"....Suno...."

She looked at him. He eyes, looking at him.....tearfilled.

"....tum bohot khubsoorat ho....agar kabhi yahan se chut gaya, to pehle tumse shaadi karunga.....fir yeh sab tute phute parts repair karwane hospital....."

She stared at him for a while. He was the first one she had met. Sitting in a cell, accused of selling of National secrets, and smuggling Nuclear Triggers.....his death sentence to be announced any moment...........trying to cheer his defence lawyer!




"Naveen!!", and her eyes jerked open....satring at the ceiling fan....going round......fast.....as the time passed......but he had remained in her.....still.....alive!

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Posted: 17 years ago
[COLOR=GREEN]she came and sat down next to rajveer...her breath was still unsteady...

the invigilator looked up..

"so we start.."

"one minute!!.."..rajveer had spoken up...he then looked at naina..

"naina?.."...she dint move...he cud see her eyes were out of focus..


naina's mind was in a daze...she dint know wat her eyes ..her mind sought...
wat had this system done???..

priya...hell!!!!

somehow...little body came to her mind...it was faceless ..but somehow..naina cud see two lifeless eyes looking up from their sunken sockets..at her..

a voice was trying to call her..

it was far...
louder...louder.....and then...

she felt a jerk...!!

"Naina???!!!"

"huh??.uh??..yes..yes..sir??.."

"hmm.....{rajveer looked at the invigilator..}..we need some time plzz..."


though a bit annoyed...the officer left...
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priya gilll....

col.priya gill....the strong dignified senior lady officer of the indian army...


she sat huddled on the dark floor..cold...shivering...and pale...
today she had finally let go...

col.priya gill cried...her tears seemed like crystals of ice sliding down her cheek...
it had been three long..long..years..

of being captain priya gill...defence lawyer of naveen singh ahluwalia..to col .priya gill..
but not a single tear had escaped..until today...
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Posted: 17 years ago
naina??are u fine??..."

"sir...uh...sir...rahul..."

"rahul??..."

"priya.....rahul..ko...naveen bhaiyya..."

"naina???!..."

rajveer hadnt understood the graveness of the situation until he heard these names....priya??naveeen??...and who was rahul...???

why had priya gill called naina after all....
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey no reponse at all???...

well i will shorten the updates then!!!

"naina??…kya kaha priya ne tumse??.."

"sab kuch…"

unknown to raj and naina..a silent footstep fell outside the dorr which was noiseleesly opened a little and an anxious pair of eyes peeped in…

"kya kaha priya na ??..yehi ki who naveen ki defence lawyer thi..
ki who case mein nahi aa payi..kyn..kab kaise..
kuch nahi bataya..aaj tak nahi…"

naina looked up at raj…who now stood a little away..

"wat do u thnk sir??..kya wajah thi??.."

raj was silent..and the anxous eyes outside widened..but there was more than one reason for that…


major nair was walking down the corridor…

the officer outside straightened up…

"oh hello…aap yahan??…"

"yes major..mein bas yeh nahi chahti ki yeh test disturb ho.."

"to isliye aap yahan hai..??"

"aap yahan hai…MA'AM….
i am ur senior major..aur army mein seniors ko respect di jati hai..unhe sir ya ma;am kaha jata hai…"

"sorry …sorry ma'am.."

"better…"

the major left…


in the room........................


"sir??....meine kuch poocha….kya lagta hai apko?"

"I don't know naina…yeh sach hai ki..priya ek weak soldier thi.."

the figure outside shut her eyes tight…yes!..she thought…

"lekin…"

"lekin kya sir.."

"priya ka naveen ke case me na ana…it needed a very strong reason..after all..who naveen se.."



so he knew…the heartbeats outside the door..were fast..wat if naina…

"yes..it needed a strong reason..aur wajah thi…."

"I am sorry…we cannot give you any more time…"

"priya??…"

"yes rajveer..meine suna ki..tim dono ne thoda waqt maanga hai??.."

rajveer looked at priya….eyebrows arched…

"wat did u tell her??….."

priya dint answer the question…
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Posted: 17 years ago
"naina…r u ok..tum test de paoge…"

"yes ma'am!"

"good!…lets begin…aap dono ki invigilation..mein khud karungi…and lt.nishant ..saath rahenge.."




naina and rajveer sat at one end of the table facing..priya and nishant..who was a little behind..

"ok!..compatibility test..!
compatibility..kai cheezon ki bonding se banta hai..

trust…comes first..

then..ek doosre ke bare mein theek tarah se janna..ya phi at least..thoda sa idea hona ki opposite person ka reaction kya hoga..

and finally..both of u shud be able to encourage each other…

well, mein yeh kehna zaroor chahungi..ki abhi tak sirf ek hi group hai..jo bahut promising hai..in all these aspects..

and that is..umm..ya..captain dr.shalini sehgal and cadet yadhuvansh sahani..


so{she looked up at them..but then dropped her gaze soon..}..lets begin…"
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Posted: 17 years ago
rocking.
pls update soon. 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
rocking.
pls update soon. 😳 😳

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