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Posted: 17 years ago
am i supposed to smash my monitor as response? 😕 😕
just kidding 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
its just amazing!!!!!!!.... 👏 👏 👏 keep it up!!..and update fast!!
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well..xms are done finally..so i guess there will be regualr updates...


thnx to evryone!!
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[COLOR=GREEN]It was Rajveer sir's session this day.....but it was only Riya, Pooja, Karan and Naina......Nishant as usual was gonna join them......

Huda sat with them in the canteen sulking.....

"Oye.....yeh kya ho gaya!", he was making a super-annoyed face.

Nishant couldnt suppress his laughter.....

"Abe, ek baar jaa ke dekh to...."

"Ja ke dekh!!!!!?? Aap jaona....us mue Muchhad ke paas.....saari frustration nikal nikal ke maar hi dalega!!!! Haye.....main to Simran ma'm ke baare main....."

"Par wahan to koi aur....."

".......arre....isse to Mother India hi chalti.....kitni achhi thi....maine unka blanket kaat diya....fir bhi kuch nahin boli......"

"Mother India....?"

"Dr.Shalini", Naina translated him.

Nishant burst out laughing.....

"Haso....haso.....mujhe to Phoolan ki fikra ho rahi hai......mujhe uski hifazat jo karni hai....."

"Huda!", Naina was irritated!

"Huda, tum bhool rahe ho! Aaj hum Captain Rajveer ke session main jaa rahe hain...to Naina ki fiker to tum na karo.....",Nishant casually stated, but Naina felt a colour raising in her cheeks!

"Haan sadda Sheru sambhaal lega!"

"CADET HUDA..........", a voice rang from somewhere outside the mess.

"....kya yaar....", he went away sulking!

Everyone burst out laughing!

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He was just out for the shower....and a weird never before confusion overtook him....what to wear?.....he fumbled in his wardrobe.....

'What to wear?....huh? Captain Shekhawat!!!!! Ho kya raha hai aapko?', he thought, grinned and got dressed.....somehow taking 15 more mins, in getting ready!

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It was still 15mins to reach Captain's room. However, Naina and Pooja's faces showed that they might as well reach there before time.....no problem.....

"Err...Lt.Nishant?"

Nishant turned to face Colonel Gill. She stood there in her crisply-ironed sky blue shirt and a full length deep blue skirt.....giving an inpression of a strict no-nonsense woman.

"Yes Ma'm"

"I'd like to join you and your group to Capt.Shekhawat's session!"

"Err....But, your group?"

"I shall handle that!"

"Yes Ma'm", disappointment was evident from Nishant's face, as he too, was anticipating some fun in the session.

"Hay Rabba!", was a little whisper Naina could hear escaping Pooja's lips!

They got up and walked up to Capt.Rajveer's class.

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"Ahh....Captain....shall we come in?"

"Definitely, Ma'm!", a clear note of disappointment in his voice. It was evident that he knew of her accompanying her favorite group of cadets!

"Thank you!", she replied, with a smile.

"Ma'm, may I escort the group to my room? I think I'd like a rather informal encounter with the Cadets....."

"Its your choice Captain!"

And they walked towards the room. Naina could feel that Captain Sir was clearly not looking at her in the eye!

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"Well, thats my room. Aap main se kaafi Cadets yahan kai baar aa chuke hain", he looked at Pooja and Naina, they smiled, and he nodded, "....be comfortable!"

They all settled down. Naina was offered a seat right opposite Captain's.

They talked about various things........drills, studies......and then Raj's experiences....his career in intelligence.....Nishant came up with his own stories.....but the group was somehow not opening up!!

Colonel Priya Gill was quietly sitting in a corner.....and her eyes darting from one face to another.....taking in every word!

10mins passed....she stood up....

"I take your leave Captain....."

"Huh?"

"I was here, just for a short inspection", she smiled, "...its just that Major Nair had been so kind to tell me about your closeness with the entire of this batch, including the other Cadets currently assisting their teachers. A certain hearing and some unpleasent incident in the presence of Major Bhargav, were brought under my notice yesterday, and he insisted on my personally attending this session."

Rajveer raised his brows. Naina's eyes were instantly at fire, as she recalled those difficult days.....

"....however I think otherwise....I do not think, I need to evade your time with your Cadets....."

"Thank you Ma'm"

"Priya!"

"Sure!"

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The mood in the room relaxed considerably after her exit.....

Suddenly Bunty Chaubey entered with a try full of cups of ice-creams....with hot chocolate sauce dripping from it.....

They enjoyed the day......

Nishant did not miss the special bond that remained unnamed and unspoken.....between the Captain and Cadet Naina Singh! He grinned....and the session went on.....

Raj took a permission from Breg.Chandok, and took all of them to Marios that evening for dinner.

They had separated for dressing up......

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They returned. Nishant and Rajveer both in jeans and white shirts.....he he!....but girls wore colors.....

Riya wore a spart tee on her denim three fourth. Pooja adorned a wrap around skirt and a top, and Naina came in a Salwaar Kameez.....

They left for the restaurant...........

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"Naina"

"Hmm"

"Tum salwaar kameez pahenti ho.....mujhe pata nahin tha....."

"Haan!"

"Bohot sundar lag rahi ho!"

"KARAN! Please!", Naina was annoyed.

"Karan", Nishant was laughing on the front seat of the car, "....tum kabhi nahin sudhroge....ab iske doston se to mujhe bhi darr lata hai! Tumhari himmat ki daad deni padegi! Waise ek baat sach kahi......Naina tum sach main bohot khubsoorat lag rahi ho!"

"Thanks!"

"....nai Captain?"

Naina's eyes sparkled with joy.....she wanted to know, what he had to say.....somehow.........she knew, ki Sir kabhi kuch bura nahin bolenge......par fir bhi.....

She saw him glancing at her from the front mirror, of the jeep....she looked there, and could merely see his eyes.....looking at her.....her hair blowing away by wind.....


"Waquai.......Naina, tum......warna mujhe laga....ki aap sirf Cadet Huda se shart haarne par hi....."

Her eyes dropped....that was their secret!

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"Cadet Naina Singh!"

"Yes?", she opened the door!

He placed a letter in her hand.....she smiled....she knew what that was.....

"Aap ko room no.12 main 0930hrs sharp report karna hai."

"Sure!"

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"May I come in?"

"Yes Cadet!"

She walked in. And saw Captain Rajveer seated in a corner, discussing something with an officer.

Nishant came to her.

"Hi Naina"

"Hi"

"Tum nervous kyun ho?"

"Main........nahin....."

"Ab....Captain Rajveer hi to hain....maine jo suna hai.....uske muquable, yeh test to kuch bhi nahin......aap dono kaafi comaptible hai!"

Naina looked at him and smiled.

"I have not made a wrong choice!", he said, and walked away.

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"Cadet Singh, aap taiyyar ho?"

"Yes!"

"Captain Rajveer, aap?"

"Sir!"

"Before we begin with a test, I'd like to brief you with the....."


"Excuse me"

"Colonel?"

"Sir, I need to speak to Cadet Naina Singh for a minute."

"Madam, she is about to take the Compatibility Test with Capatain Rajveer."

"Its rather important! May I?"

They nodded, and Naina followed her.

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"Well, Cadet Singh", she said, as they settled down in her room, and she carefully closed the doors, "....rather I should say, Cadet Ahluwalia!"

She smiled at her. Naina wouldnt understand that smile.

"What", Naina asked,"was so important, Ma'm?"

"Well, Cadet, I was told by your record in the academy by Major Nair, your expulsion, your stuggle with the terrorists, three times.....brave indeed.....the unfortunate happenings during the Mentoship programme.......your take on Captain Rajveer's innocence during Captain Salve's hearing.......everything................"

"Yes mam!"

"......all this reminded me......", she said, her expressions changing rapidly........from stony to unreadable, "..........of a friend!"


naina stood staring at the dignified officer...confused...what was the point of calling her here just to talk about a friend...and why only her??...


"ma'am....mein kuch samjhi nahi....aap ka dost....mein??"

"soch rahi ho shayad ki meine tumhe kyun bulaya..."


naina just hoped that there was nothing serious lurking in the depths of these words....

after all col.priya gill had been acquainted wid major nair...


"han..."

"kyunki is dost ka talluk shayad sabse zyada tumse hai...."


oh god naina thought...was this "friend"...captain rajveer....

they seemed the same age anyways...and...after....major bhargav...major nair...


"i really can tget u ma'am...kaunse friend ki baat kar rahi hain aap??"

"cadet singh...i m talking about...captain.."

naina shut her eyes..ready to hear raj's name..

"captain naveen singh ahluwalia...."


nainas eyes snapped open...
"bhaiyya..."...it was a whisper....
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow!!..too good!!....priya and naveen friends...hmm....great update!!... 👏 plz update quickly!!..cant wait!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
oyeeeeeee!!!!!! cant wait....update soon pleasee
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priya faced her and wat naina saw was shocking...

the dignified..cold col.priya gill....the look she had now was soft...her eyes....her eyes were moist...

"aap bhaiyya ko janti thi...??"

"yes cadet..mein jaanti thi..."

"kaise??...."

"mein...mein...i was his defence lawyer...."


all the little pity and pain that had come over naina was now turning into nothing but pure spite and rage....

and prya cud see this in her eyes...

naina wud burst out any moment...so here was the defence lawyer..who failed her brother...

"aap ki wajah se..."..naina was shaking...

"i m sorry naina.....i can explain.."

"mujhe koi explanation nahi chahiye..."

"naina i understand wat u r going thru..."

"understand??..koi nahi samjhta..aap kabhi nahi samjhengi...MEINE apne bhai ko khoya....aap nahi samjhengi..."


naina had started walking to the door...

"meine bhi apna bhai khoya hai naina..."


naina stopped....
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Posted: 17 years ago
...

she turned to face priya....
priya stood leaning against the wall....

"rahul meri jaan tha naina....mera bhi woh bhai hi tha...bas fark itna hai...na woh army officer tha..na uspar ilzam tha....in fact...woh to bas ek masoom sa baccha tha naina..."

naian stood aghast...

priya looked at her...

"yes naina....rahul gill...umar panch saal...sara din computer games khelna uski hobby thi...aur pyaar shayad woh sabse zyadaa mujhse karta tha..."

"ab woh...?"

but priya dint hear...

"papa ne use adopt kiya tha...aur mere liye..meri duniya..usse shuru hoti thi..usi pe khatam....aur phir..naveen ke trial ka din..."

naina was noe motion less...even her eyelids dint bat..


"i was about to leave home ki..achanak...mera phone baja..."


[flashback>

"hello..."

"didi!!"

"rahul??"

"didi..help me...help me plzz...."

"RAHUL????KYA HUA???"

"YE LOG BAHUT BAD HAIN..DIDIIII......AHHHHHHHHHHH"


""RAAAHUL?????"




[present]

"un logon ne use kidnap kar liya tha..."

"nooo....."..naina moaned...

"mere kadam apne aap ruk gaye naina..i cudnt move....mein...bejaan si ban gayi thi ...
ek taraf..mein usi waqt court me hona chahti thi...
aur doosri or...rahul ki cheekhein..mere kaano me goonj rahi thi...

aur phir..."

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