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Posted: 17 years ago
"so wat do u think lt??..."

"nishant ma'ma...u can call me nishant..."

she looked up wearily...

"right...wat do u think nishant....mujhe to lagta hi..if they r not put together then it is going to be totally illogical...i
mean the test was superb...except for a few nuances..they are totally compatible wid each other..."

"i agree ma'am...in fact..it was one of the best tests we took....aur iske samne ..except dr.shalini sehgals test....baaki saare fluke lag rahe hai.."


priya looked up and nishant became tense...had he said too much...


"actually....ur right!!"


phew!!



"well...then get their letter ready...."



on one hand..the letterf ro the compatibility test was being typed in favour of naina and rajveer....
and on the other hand..the scene in rajveer's room...was horrible...

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Posted: 17 years ago
a knock on the door...

rajveer went up to unbolt it...she stood there head hung low...

"come in..."

his tone was stern and curt..naina gulped and entered silently...

rajveer closed the door and bolted it...

"kahan thi aap cadet singh???"

"woh...woh..actually suriji ne kuch kaam de diya tha..."

"for one and a half hours???..abhi 8 baj rahe hain.."


"sir woh doston ne ...i m sorry rajveer sir..."


"SORRY??..RIGHT...THATS IT...EK SORRY BOL DO..AND EVRYTHNG S FINISHED..."

naina sudddenly jumped...she was taken unawares..

"rajveer sir...."

"SHUT UP!!...I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THE PAST ONE AND HALF HOURS..."


"i m sorry...."


rajveer finally controlled himself at the sight if her crestfaleen face and bowed head...


"priya kyun bula kar le gayi thi tumhe...."

"meine kaha na aapse...wahi bataane ke liye..."


she wudnt tell him anythng without letting priya know..not just now...


"baat utni si nahi thi...."

naian had never really lied to rajveer before...

"baat .....baat utni si thi..."

"i m asking you for the last time..."

"trust me..."

"TRUST YOU..YES I TRUST...YOU...LEKIN TUM JISE BACHAANE KI KOSHISH KAR RAHI HO..USKI ASLIYAT NAHI JAANTI TUM....

SHE DOESNT TRUST YOU NAINA..."

"sir..."

"aayi thi aaj woh mere paas....yeh kehte hue ki naina singh ahluwalia naveen sigh ahluwalia ki behen hai..ek gad.......she does not trust you naina...woh umhe barbad karna chahti hai..."


naian turned and stood away...

"aisa kuch nahi hai...."

rajveer...who was already in a foul mood..found his temper growing again...

"NAINA..FOR GODS SAKE...!!!!...TUM NAHI JAANTI USE...

SHE IS A GAMER...AAJ AGAR NAVEEN HUMARE PAAS NAHI TO USKI EK HI WAJAH HAI AND THAT IS 'THE MUCH RESPECTED'....COL.PRIYA GILL..."

"aap galat..."

"NAINA....COME TO UR SENSES....{he walked to her and held her shoulders tight...naina grimaced...he was shaking her hard}...SHE IS RESPONSIBLE FOR ALL THAT HAPPENED TO NAVEEN...

USKI WAJAH SE PAL PAL MEIN HAAARON MOUT MAR RAHA HUN...{he walekd away...}

TUMHE EK GADDAR KI BEHEN KAHA JATA HAI..ALL..BEACUSE OF HER..WAT THE HELL DIDI HSE TELL U BEHIND THE CLOSED DOORS...

USKE JAISE GADDAR MEINE NAHI DEKHA...SHE IS A BLOTCH ON FRIENDSHIP..ON THE ARMY...AND SHE HAS NOTHING TO LOSE....SHE IS..."



naina cudnt stand it anymore...no...not in front of her...may it be even rajveer sir..but she wudnt allow this...

"SHUT UP!!!....JUST SHUT UP...U KNOW NOTHING...U UNDERSTAND??..ABSOLUTELY NOTHING!!!"
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Posted: 17 years ago
bth ur fac-fics r juz too good....don't hav ne wordz 2 explain hw gud u rite...seriously u should hv been appointd by d djz yaar....den our raj wouldn't hav left LRL....awesum continue soon....waitng for ur next update....plzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
'Knock-knock'


"Yes!"


"Major!", Nishant burst in excitedly, "..I just came in.....", his voice trailed as he saw Naina standing in his room....


"Yes....Nishant?"


"Woh....Sir....sorry...zara excieted tha....to aapke kehne se pehle hi chala aaya...."


"Ohh...thats okay....its....its just Cadet Singh we have here...."


"Sure!"


"Kuch batane aaye the....."


"Yeh....", he handed him a letter.


Raj read it and passed it to Naina....Naina saw it.


"So....Cadet our team wins again", he grins at her.


"That to without any help from Major Bhargav!", she returned it.


**************************************

Naina was sitting in her room. Nishant had decieded to stay, and have a chat with Rajveer.....so she had to obviously move out. She hadnt cleared anything with him. She trusted him.....beyond anything.....


She sat by the window, looking at the splashing rain, on the green KMA lawns......


"Barosa hai sir.....shayad khus se bhi zyaada....jitna bharosa bhiyya ki begunahi par hai.....utna hi bada sach yeh hai....that I trust you sir.....aur is ladai main hum saath hai.....aur main......"


He thought was obstructed as a Orderly knocked at her ajar door.


"Cadet Singh"


She stood up.


"Aap ko Major Anshuman Rai ko room no.12 main milna hai.....in 10 mins."


"Theek hai."


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She was feeling weird.


What she heard.....what she was told.....wasnt new.......

"Cadet Singh, you have successfully passed the Compatibility test with Major Shekhawat. Congratulations. So we separate you from the group, and you now assist Major Shekhawat for the coming month. You will be shifted to the connecting room next to his, this evening. I shall arrange for the same....."


She had turned to go away.


"Cadet....", Major Anshuman said, "...I must tell you this....although its beyond my duties, that this was one of the best best Compatibility Tests we have undertaken. We look forward to have you equally confidant and skilled as Major Shekhawat as you graduate. And this test shall help the Army, to put the two of you on various missions together, as you graduate. I must say, well done, Cadet!", and he smiled at her, as she walked away.
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Posted: 17 years ago
There was no doubt that she and Major Rajveer made a great team....winning drills, fighting battles.....but she always wondered why......


.....maybe because, there was something common in them....or they were just naturally compatible.....because they shared....they bore the same pain....the same thread wound them together.....the same person linked them......same things brought smiles on both their faces....and same things made both cry...........


She was pushing her clothes, her army gear, her books, her other stuff in her bag, when someone Pooja came in....smiling.....and started doing her work....occasionally throwing teasing looks at Naina, which she completely ignored.


Some one knocked.


The door was already ajar....so he walked in.....


"Hey Pooja....."


"Haye Sir!", Pooja's 'Hi' became 'Haye'......and that somewhat irritated Naina as she saw the person she was addressing.


"Cadet Singh, you ready...."


"In a minute, Sir!", she smiled half heartedly.


"May I help you?"


"Ohh...no Sir, I will manage...."


She had almost finished her packing......and Rajveer had taken her bag, dispite the facet that she insisted on letting her pull it.....


"Ek minute.....", she ran back into her room.


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It had been more than 5mins, Naina had left.....


He had been standing outside the door of Room no.203.....


He decided that it was time he checked on her. Thinking so, he peeped into the room.


Naina had pulled out a rolled picture from below her pillow.....and was staring at it.....Naina's eyes spoke a language, he hadn't known..... what reflected in her pretty eyes, was love and fire beyond what Rajveer ever expected....he felt he didnt know this girl.....looking at her brother's picture with love beyond par, and passion.....


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Posted: 17 years ago
"bhaiyya...."

he had to make her let go now...

he cleared his trhoat looking away..and naina..rolled up the picture again...

she went out to meet him and finally landed int he adjoint room....


"well naina...is room mein waise to kuch special nahi hai..but i just thought...."

as the door opened ...naina smiled...so rajveer knew they wud make it..

on the table were a set of four coffee mugs..and a jug with a set of glasses...
she walked in...

he had put in these small things for her comfort..they were essential..but wat attracted her was one corner of the wall above the bed....


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"may i come in ma'am.."

"come in..." priya looked up..

"oh yes nishant..."

"ma'am meine unhe letter de diya hai..and cadet singh has shifted to the room adjoining the majors ..."

"right...anythng else?..."

"ma'am..woh..."

"yes lt???"

"yeh..woh.. nair ne...i mean major nair ne di thi...its useless but i thought ise aap hi destry kare to behtar hai..."

"kya hai??..."

she took the file...

"major rajveer singh sekhawat aur cadet naina singh ahluwalia ki case history..."

"huh??..case history??...."

"actually kuch useless past baatein hain....thats it...."

"kuch fayda isse??.."

"not really...."


"i see..."

she walked over to the fireplace and was about to toss the papers into fire..but stopped///

"you may leave naishnt..thank you and good nght.."

"good night ma'am..."
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Posted: 17 years ago
fantastic ........
😊 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzz continue its awesom 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
i am soo sorry for the delay...!!

heres is the update!

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