WAQT....updated (360 degree Review) pg14 - Page 12

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Posted: 18 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzz update it quickly its just MINDBLOWING 😉
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[COLOR=BLUE]she turned to face him..though not missing pooja's wink...

"hi karan!"

"ur looking awesome!!"

that was something to say...coz naian was dressed in a simple pink salwar kurta...and the only magic she did...was

let her hair open and put kajal in her eyes..which as always made her looke gorgeous..

"waise cadet ghai..kya mein jaan sakta hun..yeh..aakh kyun maari gayi??..."

"woh..woh..sir...karan..."

"jo cadet naian ke saath hai?"

"han..actually woh subah se naina ke saath flirt kar raha hai..."

rajveer smiled himself....hmmmm........


over the other side...

"naina..want a drink..."

"umm..ok..i dont mind..."

"gr8..chalo..kya logi....wine?"

"i m not alcoholic karan..."

"ahhhh...right!!..one sopft drink plz"

"thnx.."

"waise naina..tum mere saath kyun nahi aayi..shrma gayi thi??"

"nahi woh...."

then her mind suddenly went back an hour...

"hahaahah!!!..ohh..hoho..naina...yeh ladka na...hahaha!!"

"hahah..i agree..ufff!!!!"


they flomped down on the beds...

chal taiyyar ho ja..."

"mujhe nahi jana pooja.."

"NAINA SAB AA RAHE HAIN...TU KYUN APNA CONNCTION KAAT RAHI HAI..."

"pooja..."

"NAINA..!!..dekh ali..huda..aalekh..yudi..rajveer sir...aur phir saaa....."

"rajveer sir??.."..she whispered to herself..and suddenly..

"chal pooja!!..."

"huh???han???....gr8!!..chal...."


presently...


"i can understnd naina..tumne shayad socha hoga log sochenge we may be seeing each toher...but anyways mein itna bhi bura nahi hun.."


""hahahaahahah!!"


"huh??"....karan was pretty shocked at the reply/.....little did he know that naina hadnt heard him at all..she had just got out of her thoughts..and it brought a giggle...

he cudnt do anythng but...//..."hehehe....hehe..."

naian looked at him..still smiling and then..

"tum kyun hans rahe ho???"

"kya?.."

"kyun hans rahe ho??..kuch hua??'

"nahi..woh...actually.....woh tum...has rahi thi to..."

"huh???"

"no nothng..."

"karan..pagal1!!"


well lets give it another tyr....
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Posted: 17 years ago
[COLOR=BLUE]naian..i m relly serious..."

"kya??..."


but then nainas eyes darted to the host...and...wat foloowed was....



"naina..u have a magic around you...i mean tumhari aankhen ..they speak volumes..."

"35 minimum...."


"naina??..yeh tum....hey.."

"hai na..karan...35 to hoga hi..."

"35??...tum..volume ko is matlab mein kyu le rahi ho.."

"kya volume....areh age!!!...."

"kya??"

"A...G....E...age....nishant ka age..must be 35 na??"

"age???....."...he felt a little weak now...oh god..kya ladki...hai..itni koshish kar raha hun...


"han hogi...around 35..."


"waise tum kuch keh rahe the karan???..."


he thought...chalo one last time......

"kuch keh to raha tha...lekin tumhari aankhon ne rok liya..."

"huh?..."

"naina...ur eyes...i feel i cud drown..."


and then wat happened close to naina's ears was...welll..lets c..

aalekh and huda had just come there and wat they said was audible only to naina..


"KMA mein baad ayi hai...sala doob hi jaega..."

naina's situation was pretty much like standing at the end of a cliff...
karan continued..

"naina...mein aaj program me cocentrate hi nahi kar paya..i kept looking at you..."

"karan mein??"

"mein tumhe hi dekhta raha naina...u were my only focus.."

"abe...khote...ab saare dushman soldiers ko bolenge..naina ki tasveer helmet par chipkane...agar isse tera focus badle...."

naian was a light pink....no!..she had to control laughing...


"naina...naina..."..he held her hand...and aalekh...

"abeh saale hath chod...haath chod..."


somehow at that precise moment..naina's hand slipped out of karans...it seemed as if they were reacting on aalekhs unheard words...

"karan tum..mujhe kuch zyada hi..."

""like karta hun naina...."

"karan..."

"naina...lagta hai..the cupid has chosen us...the arrow pierced me..aur ab..i m sure woh tumhari tarf bad raha hai..."


"kash naina ki aatma us mucchad mein hoti..to fir mucchad ki...ram naam stya..."


naian was red....

"karan...ur making me uncomfortable..."

{and we know the reasons for that}

"nain jab se tumhe dekha hai...mein tumhare hi khayalon mein dooba hun..."

"le aaj to yeh...baad{flood} laakar rahega KMA mein..."


naina was scarlet...
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naina's eyes moved away again..rajveer was approaching the podium ..was he going to say something???...


"naina...its like tum angel ho aur mein..."

"rajveer sir?"

"wat???"

"huh???no..woh mein..."


"WAT YAR..KAB SE KOSHISH KAR RAHA HUN...."


the hall went silent...finally karans patience was over...

"koshish?kara..."

"KAB SE KOSHISH KAR RAHA HUN..TUMSE FLIRT KARNE KI....BHAO HI NAHI DETI YAAR MUJHE....NISHANT KA AGE...RAJVEER SIR...AB KYA MAJOR NAIR KAHOGI???.."



SMACK!!



so as for karan...history repeated itself......

after har date mein maar khaya..to is baar to ..yeh to hona hi tha!!!!


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She stormed out of the room.....

"Naina....", Nishant ran behind her.

She had reached the exit, when he caught up to her.

"Naina!!"

"Nahin sir, I cant come back!"

"Suno...."

"Woh.....usse to main....."

".....kachha chaba jaungi!", someone said from behind Nishant and they tuned to face Captain Rajveer.

Naina glared at him.

He simply walked up to her.....he eyes once again emitting radioactive chemicals......fire lit up face.....he came near her.....as Nishant watched him with awe.....he was perfectly calm.....

"Chalo", he said slowly as he held Naina's wrist and started walking towards the party......Naina hesitated for a second, and then walked away with him!

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"Oye Langoor!"

"Zyaade shanpatti karega na....."

"Main....."

"Shut up!", Yudi yelled at him.

When they saw Nishant and Captain Rajveer walking in with her. The red faces of her five friends lit up!

"Nai....", Karan attempted to walk to her, when Aalekh held his shirt from the back.

"Aye Saale, ab idharich baith......ek baar padi, to dil nahin bhara kya?"

Pooja had had enough, she yelled at him, "Yeh to Shahrukh ne sambhal liya..........warna......"

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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome update yaar
liked it 2222222222222222 much
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow but please update ur other fic also
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey buddy update soon naaa. please
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Posted: 17 years ago
PLZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE FAST 😭
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The pasrty had ended. And Naina was escorted to her room by Nishant.

She was still fuming. Captain Rajveer had stayed on with his date, all evening. He did talk to her a bit......par.........a bit??!! How can he? Her mind was racing! Why was she feeling awkward.....why did she feel terrible......what was wrong..........

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It was about 30mins after the party was over. He was walking towards the girls hostel.

"Oye Langoor!"

"Huh?"

"Ithhe kithe?"

"Wha?"

"Oye Nautanki, jaa kidhar raha hai?"

"Kaun?"

"Abe tere pichhu hi hai apun!"

The boys stood behind him.

"Main Naina ko sorry bolne jaa raha hoon....."

"Abhi!?", Yudi glanced at his watch.

Woh...maine....woh.....badtameezi....."

"Haan!"

*****

15mins after this encounter, Karan left the place, muttering, 'Naina ke bodyguards'.....unaware of a pair of eyes looking at them, from behind a nearby pillar, with a glint of pride!

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It was early morning, Yudi was up, brushing his teeth.....Huda bumped into him, as he sleepily tried to snatch his toothpaste!

"Oye!"

"Kya yaar Yudiye", he said, his eyes still half closed, "..ek tooth paste ke liye jhaad bikher raha hai....."

"Cadet Sahani!!"

"Huh?"

"Oye, yeh to tera naam hai!"

Yudi gave his sleepy friend a look, and turned towards the Orderly, wiping his face with his towel.

"Aapke liye....", he handed him an envelope and walked away.

All the boys crowded around Yudi, who too, was clueless about this.

It read:




Cadet Yaduvansh Sahani,

You have been held back for supporting Captain Dr.Shalini Singhal in the 360 degree Review Programme, by order.

Kindly report at room no. 12 at 0930hrs, for the compatibility test.

All the best,
Lt.Nishant Goenka.

Undersigning,
Colonel Priya Gill.




A slight grin covered Yudi's face, as he folded the letter.

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