Fettered Affection~thread 2~chp 36 p.107 30.5.14 - Page 79

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -daya-


@red: you think you got the copyright on that?😆 puh-leez! That's only in your imagination!
oyeee baji chup kar! doon ulta haat ka ghum ke kan ke neeche..where did you come from?
quit laughing!😡
So, uhmm ...looks like you've ended the FF without warning. I guess your zing to write' has gone through the window?
haan my zing, bling, ting have exhausted.. happens but then you have no such issues.. ruddy you write on the bus home from work...🤣 haaa hooo caribou! moose!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hammie
hain only hammie, no chooha, kala bundar, sheru?? humm tu bhi naraz.. ja rose ka message par..😆 i did
The title says it all... the numbing feeling of not reading FA again is yet to sink in. But Thank you hammie for a befitting ending to the ff, just the way as in LTL 1. I dont mind tragic endings really, afterall thats closest to reality n life is full of nasty twists n turns.
oyeee bart! my loyal supporter.. so you liked the ending..ummm i mean tolerated it.. kitne wonderful hai tu bart.. i am happy now

Coming to the finale update nothing prepares one to the surprise element awaiting us not even the icy cool demeanour of Dutta, looking perfectly composed n confident of handling the family including the in laws. The three sis without a murmur welcome naku with open arms, lucky naku.
well tried to be different.. glad you liked it.
Yeh kya dutta ne toh shaadi isliye kiya taki naku ko dushman ki buri nazar se bachane, ghar mein kaun dushman hai jo naku ko abhi se apni paas apne kamre mein baand ke rakhna chahta hai 😃 Uske neeyat mein khot hai. Aur kuch ho na ho AS ko toh bahana milgaya behosh hone ke liye. well have to keep the comic relief going😆
wow, sone pe suhaga, the sisters give a romantic touch up to the sher,s den, for him to devour his prey. The mai baap of dutta doin the dirty job n what a makeover he has had to do, the first biggest surprise has to be baji,s sexy bar girl avatar, aur morey ko issi pe nazar, lattoo over the solid siren well done hammie, full marks. 😉
i know it was a bit naff , but thought to add it as a tribute to baji's love of nautanki..
Hmm what a nasty surprise dutta has in store for naku, he,s romantisising his dreadful past showcasing the pistol instead of admiring the dreamy pic perfect present right in front, it has an errie feeling to it already, the excitement evaporating soon
rosie didnt much like the scene.. but it was inspired from LTL1 when he talks to naku about his bloody past ,weapons that were kept in his.. just before their suhag raat ..yaad hai?
Morey encounter was so swift that one is left wondering as to what hit them. Dutta,s cold demeanour to the happenings thereafter is baffling. Its as if he is desperate to get away. But Naku deserved a better life, Her pure luv, unwavering loyalty to the man goes unrewarded. What a shame, its as if she failed as a rehab, the man her husband had other plans
i know bart,. but supriya did warn her hemay shuttle back and forth in his mind..
Even thou he has a good chance of being acquitted for he was forced to finish morey to save shivangi n baji, he needs to find peace within himself foremost. But he never fails to win hearts with his brite honest words, beautiful words hammie in the end.
Gosh the pic of a stone faced dutta is chilling
thanks so much for your appreciation.. i cried when i saw the picture bart.. then when i posted it i had a dead feeling..
The epilogue gives a ray of hope to naku n to the readers that their fav jodi still have a chance. well thanks for seeing that it can be open ended..
Hammie amazzing effort keeping in mind the abrupt n a most shocking twist. I do understand the immense pulls n pressures that you had to go thro.. im sure you will come up with something even more exciting soon. But until such time you truly deserve a long break from the daily grind n mostly from us demanding greedy readers 😳
look bart .. cannot thank you enough for your unwavering support ,come what may.. you know as we talk in pms.. yes bart already getting restless.. just tarry a bit and we'll have fun on the forum again.. much love , as ever yours hammie.

Also i would like to assure Rose n others who feel that some of us have been unfair to you that its the last thing on our minds, to hurt you. We know you thro your brilliant writing and we respect n hold you in the highest regards for everything that you do. Can never imagine disregarding or disrespecting your efforts. But still do forgive if any of my words or actions hurt your feelings. You deserve nothing but high accolades.
Hammie, Thank you for keeping the forum alive, appreciate your humungous efforts 👏
will miss FA for sure, your roars, update pms ..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammiee naku .. no sorry.. no thankyou.. just love you...

thanks for giving us a story which we all got too attach...its ur fault u r a spider who weave a web ...😊we never wanted it to end...start a new story...talent like u deserve to be showcased
as always ur amazinggg hammiee...sorry if been unreasonable😭 oyeee roona band! roarrr bola tu hai will start something soon.. and you better be there with your hammazing remarks to make hammie happy.. much love and 😃 love the image.. my pleasure to keep you happy..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi hamlet hi sonaaa good to see you mate.

The story ended with dutta & naku united eternally...I & my gangs are thankful for FA...we followed it regularly...the ending like rose i feel every story is writer's perspective...some might find it tragic...all stories don't have happy ending...

thank you to all your gang! loved sharing my work with them.. thanks for your loyalty..

Like nakusha I plead...with you to pls start a new story...we are waiting eagerly...thanks from all of us...list is long & time short...with power cuts I feel my comment posted fast...😆

thanks for your lovely comments all along F.A was in motion.. you will be pleased to know that i plan to share something with you all ..bas thura time please..not too long.. love the image..love you all as ever yours hammie..

thank-you-desi-glitters-34

Edited by Hamlet53 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting anxiously for your new piece of writing ...yipee I am all excited. Bring it on .
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi hammie

thanks for anno waiting for your come back is thread par saare dramabaaz zaroor hain
Edited by emilymine32 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Afzal where are you?

come back soon ab toh hammie ne come back ka wada kiya hai
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi hamlet

Thanxs for a superb ff & anno...can't thanxs u enough for starting a new one soon...waiting😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: twinkle-star

ohhh twinks you have made me ummhh dewy eyed.. thank you for adding atif's song... cheers...i guess it sums up tasha's love and my love for you all.. just there..


Twinky baby in a shaking mood...This my last update comment in this sweetest FA home...This thread has sooo many lovely memories...loved each& every updates sooo much dear...such a greatest job Hammie lion...This is my most favourite thread ever...Thanks sooo much for giving us this lovely FA FF Hammie lion...we all are always thankful to you...you are such a sweetest lion dear...love you sooo much...Thanks a ton Hammie lion..
thanks you know i love praise..not shy about it just bold and brazen



Aweee Such a heart touching update dear...Enjoyed it sooo much...perfect ending for this lovely story...This temporary separation will increase Tasha's love more & more...I loved the update to the core dear..It has everything...family boding,love,fight,desperation& all wonderful feelings...Such a treat to read Hammie lion..This story will remain in our hearts forever...Take a bow Hammie lion...
thanks for your observation. tried twinks.. i too had a sinking feeling ending it but then felt it had it due..


aweee such a lovely start dear...Kala,leela& Roops are befitting with Naku Soo much...Naku is soo lucky...the only reason behind Ayesaab's disapproval is Babi...But baaji has sorted out Babi's matter also...Ayessab relieved by Babi & Ganpat's timely arrival..aweee Ayesaab & babi joined together & wished their children for their happy married life...awee Dutta's sisters wanted to decorate the SR room...I always loved Dutta's sisters in this story hammie lion..they totally different from LTL1's eviltrio...Such a sweet part & loved the family bonding..
lovely shots of baji.. also a delightful collection of shots that compliment the chapter.yes he is the go getter side of dutta it was a challenge to finish the story.. no LTL 1 is incomplete without baji.. and some form of family bonding by dutta.
# loved babi and aye sahib smiles.








Dutta & Baaji seriously discussed about Shivangi's matter..Dutta wanted to hunt that animal Morey & save shivangi...he even didn't bother about his married day also...But kala & lovely trio warned baaji...aweee loved this innocent baaji...he is soo adorable...Loved the part dear..Baaji's innocent nautanki is sooo cute.
again great shots.. you know I can't remember the episodes..

Oh God..poor shivangi...feel pity for this innocent girl..Morey tried to showcase her as an exhibition...suddenly young woman came in a knee lengthened Anarkali,thick black long plait& red roses...wah kya descriptions dear...Twinky baby thought Its a dance group leader or member from Morey's side..innocent eyes,cute nose ..oh god..its non other than our Baaji...twinky baby fallen off from her sofa...can't control my laugh...baby imagined baaji with your descriptions & oh god he is soo cute in this makeup...Baaji shyly admitted himself ,,,,shivangi sighed in relief..Oh god...morey lusted over this baaji girlie...oh god baaji girlie performed an item number & Morey's lustful reactions are sooo funny...specially when he touched Baaji girlie's shoulder & thought him as a village lassie...awee such a hilarious treat to read dear...such a sense of humour...Oh god Hammie lion..Twinky baby can't control her laugh...my most favourite part ..Morey's customer feels pity for Shivangi & wanted his money back..Shivangi recorded all the stuff...But poor girl she unable to escape from Morey's hold...
this was a bit of a chore to write, but I barely managed to pull it off


oyeee this is the highlight of the comment, HOW? WHERE? did you get his cross dressed baji from?🤣 bravo!





awee loved your sweeet descriptions about Tasha's decorated room...Dutta's sisters did a great job...such a loving sisters..Dutta dressed in black pathani& naku in simple sari..such a lovely couple... ..loved this cool & calm Dutta..Oh god Dutta's wedding night gift was Pistol...such a heart breaking moment for naku..But I loved this brave naku...She had accepted Dutta with all the past baggage..Loves is always beyond the limits...awee loved the way dutta moved naku's stray of hair away...Its like LTL1 SR style.
yes just like LTL1.. WITH NOTHING MUCH! MY bitterness raised its ugly head😡


thanks for uploading these twinky... dutta looks soo soo resigned, humble, and slow...



those beautiful slender hands.. gosh how does mishal do it?







what a beautiful couple naku looks ravishing wow...wish they come again.. both M&M Sighing..









..Dutta got an emergency phone call from baaji& immediately went to save his friend& shivangi...
yessshhh actions pics dutta at his best! the tough gun!




Dutta correctly judged Morey's destination.Police station...he reached there..awee he gave hot punches on morey's abdomen...Oh God Morey held the knife against baaji's neck ...Dutta didn't have any options..For him,His friend's life is more important than his life ...such a selfless soul...Dutta killed the evil morey just for his friend& Shivangi..Baaji shouted...Yeah Dutta was right...he just killed a cockroach...His intention was good...Morey well deserved this punishment...well written update dear
well if its baji...than morey is pushing is tooo far pow wow! your'e dead man morey!
super shots of dutta the rage in his eyes... thanks for these shots.









Dutta handed over naku to Ayesaab& whole heartedly giving himself into the hands of law..such a heart wrenching part dear..making me cry...Dutta's dialogues were heart touching dear...you penned it down very well...his words are so powerful & piercing my heart...Hats off to you hammie lion...

ohhh this is great such tender loving shots of tasha..I still remember thIs episode..bomblast!





All stories don't have happy ending...Naku will Eternally have Dutta's Fettered Affection...Forever...
thanks for this lovely message.. fits in well with F.A..👏




Twinky mind blowing comment.. every bit of it ,lovely comments, shots, messages musical addition.. listen little baby hope you are talking to me now..? do come with me to the new thread .. bas a teeny bit of breather please.. hummm.. no crying please.. much love and many thanks your .. as ever hammie... roarrr ... tere liye... like it?😛


Thanks soo much for your heart wrenching update dear...really mind blowing...Dutta-Naku's separation is just temporary..This separation will increase their love more & more...your epilogue was awesome dear...Hope Dutta will release from jail soon & thereafter he will live a fresh happy life with Naku...Tasha Forever..Thanks soo much for giving this lovely FF Hammie lion...Sooo sweeet of you...I loved all the updates sooo much...Thanks soo much for your great efforts..sooo sweeet of you...We all love you sooo much Hammie lion...
heyyy nice pic of mishal thanks for liking the FF TWINKS







LOVELY PICTURES WELL DONE TWINKS..




PS:-
Thanks soo much for your Lovely thread hammie lion...such a heart wrenching ending & loved it...But Now its time to say good bye to this sweeetest home...I'm totally numb...feeling like homeless...I don't know what to say Hammie lion...Will miss your lovely creative updates & pms...I'm totally sad...crying...hard time for your fans..Please come back sooon with a new thread Hammie lion...Please...I know you don't listen to me or your fans...But baby cant control her cry...we all are greedy fans...I don't have more words...leaving from here with a heavy heart...Bye bye my sweeetest FA home...will miss this sweetest home,your lovely updates & family friends...baby crying...bye bye...😭🤗
OYEEE CHEER UP wont leave all of you.. with rose in charge.. with a stick in hand and bart too and you with your bawling.. i give up give give up! here hereee!
hammmieee

Edited by Hamlet53 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi hamlet hi mirage was missing your comment
FA is over.😭...thank you for giving another memorable story...dutta killed morey & left the crime...naku is waiting for him touching...do start a new story request from all of us...😊
thank you my loyal readers for following the story.. loved your comments one to all thanks for the strawberries.. this strawberries weather in uk.. people go strawberry picking in strawberry fields.. cheers my sweet mate na rooh will start something new.. just need a bit of rest... much love hammie.

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