Fettered Affection~thread 2~chp 36 p.107 30.5.14 - Page 78

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Posted: 11 years ago



Twinky baby in a shaking mood...This my last update comment in this sweetest FA home...This thread has sooo many lovely memories...loved each& every updates sooo much dear...such a greatest job Hammie lion...This is my most favourite thread ever...Thanks sooo much for giving us this lovely FA FF Hammie lion...we all are always thankful to you...you are such a sweetest lion dear...love you sooo much...Thanks a ton Hammie lion..



Aweee Such a heart touching update dear...Enjoyed it sooo much...perfect ending for this lovely story...This temporary separation will increase Tasha's love more & more...I loved the update to the core dear..It has everything...family boding,love,fight,desperation& all wonderful feelings...Such a treat to read Hammie lion..This story will remain in our hearts forever...Take a bow Hammie lion...



aweee such a lovely start dear...Kala,leela& Roops are befitting with Naku Soo much...Naku is soo lucky...the only reason behind Ayesaab's disapproval is Babi...But baaji has sorted out Babi's matter also...Ayessab relieved by Babi & Ganpat's timely arrival..aweee Ayesaab & babi joined together & wished their children for their happy married life...awee Dutta's sisters wanted to decorate the SR room...I always loved Dutta's sisters in this story hammie lion..they totally different from LTL1's eviltrio...Such a sweet part & loved the family bonding..








Dutta & Baaji seriously discussed about Shivangi's matter..Dutta wanted to hunt that animal Morey & save shivangi...he even didn't bother about his married day also...But kala & lovely trio warned baaji...aweee loved this innocent baaji...he is soo adorable...Loved the part dear..Baaji's innocent nautanki is sooo cute.

Oh God..poor shivangi...feel pity for this innocent girl..Morey tried to showcase her as an exhibition...suddenly young woman came in a knee lengthened Anarkali,thick black long plait& red roses...wah kya descriptions dear...Twinky baby thought Its a dance group leader or member from Morey's side..innocent eyes,cute nose ..oh god..its non other than our Baaji...twinky baby fallen off from her sofa...can't control my laugh...baby imagined baaji with your descriptions & oh god he is soo cute in this makeup...Baaji shyly admitted himself ,,,,shivangi sighed in relief..Oh god...morey lusted over this baaji girlie...oh god baaji girlie performed an item number & Morey's lustful reactions are sooo funny...specially when he touched Baaji girlie's shoulder & thought him as a village lassie...awee such a hilarious treat to read dear...such a sense of humour...Oh god Hammie lion..Twinky baby can't control her laugh...my most favourite part ..Morey's customer feels pity for Shivangi & wanted his money back..Shivangi recorded all the stuff...But poor girl she unable to escape from Morey's hold...





awee loved your sweeet descriptions about Tasha's decorated room...Dutta's sisters did a great job...such a loving sisters..Dutta dressed in black pathani& naku in simple sari..such a lovely couple... ..loved this cool & calm Dutta..Oh god Dutta's wedding night gift was Pistol...such a heart breaking moment for naku..But I loved this brave naku...She had accepted Dutta with all the past baggage..Loves is always beyond the limits...awee loved the way dutta moved naku's stray of hair away...Its like LTL1 SR style.





















..Dutta got an emergency phone call from baaji& immediately went to save his friend& shivangi...




Dutta correctly judged Morey's destination.Police station...he reached there..awee he gave hot punches on morey's abdomen...Oh God Morey held the knife against baaji's neck ...Dutta didn't have any options..For him,His friend's life is more important than his life ...such a selfless soul...Dutta killed the evil morey just for his friend& Shivangi..Baaji shouted...Yeah Dutta was right...he just killed a cockroach...His intention was good...Morey well deserved this punishment...well written update dear









Dutta handed over naku to Ayesaab& whole heartedly giving himself into the hands of law..such a heart wrenching part dear..making me cry...Dutta's dialogues were heart touching dear...you penned it down very well...his words are so powerful & piercing my heart...Hats off to you hammie lion...





All stories don't have happy ending...Naku will Eternally have Dutta's Fettered Affection...Forever...






Thanks soo much for your heart wrenching update dear...really mind blowing...Dutta-Naku's separation is just temporary..This separation will increase their love more & more...your epilogue was awesome dear...Hope Dutta will release from jail soon & thereafter he will live a fresh happy life with Naku...Tasha Forever..Thanks soo much for giving this lovely FF Hammie lion...Sooo sweeet of you...I loved all the updates sooo much...Thanks soo much for your great efforts..sooo sweeet of you...We all love you sooo much Hammie lion...










PS:-
Thanks soo much for your Lovely thread hammie lion...such a heart wrenching ending & loved it...But Now its time to say good bye to this sweeetest home...I'm totally numb...feeling like homeless...I don't know what to say Hammie lion...Will miss your lovely creative updates & pms...I'm totally sad...crying...hard time for your fans..Please come back sooon with a new thread Hammie lion...Please...I know you don't listen to me or your fans...But baby cant control her cry...we all are greedy fans...I don't have more words...leaving from here with a heavy heart...Bye bye my sweeetest FA home...will miss this sweetest home,your lovely updates & family friends...baby crying...bye bye...😭🤗

Edited by twinkle-star - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi hamlet
FA is over.😭...thank you for giving another memorable story...dutta killed morey & left the crime...naku is waiting for him touching...do start a new story request from all of us...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi hamletsorry for been ungrateful...the journey was good...sometime u want to see happiness when you don't see it around you...somewhere fantasy world reduce your unhappy statethanxs for FA...wishing you to continue writing ...i 'm missing it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
@twinks
Luvd your tribute to FA n hammie, its as heart wrenching as the ending itself, keep it up twinks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

@twinks

Luvd your tribute to FA n hammie, its as heart wrenching as the ending itself, keep it up twinks


awee Bharti🤗
thanks soo much for your encouraging words dear🤗...sooo sweeet of you..🤗...Twinky baby missing this sweeet FA Home , sweeetest Hammie lion's creative updates & you all sweeet family friends..😭.🤗🤗...I think Hammie lion will close this thread sooon.😭🤗..ummm...baby crying 😭...Big teddy hugs from twinky baby🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: afi7861


look balli i start my last F.Aannot.. with you.. hamra sab ke universal
brother.. very precious.. munda.

HAMMIE im not your FRIEND anymore this is my favorite FA update

aur tum ne kya kiye itni jaldi finished kar di no no that,s not right😡
ye mera last visit tha es forum pe tumhare UD ke saath mera bhi yahaan
aana AND ok bye bye ltl forum bye bye friends 😭
hammie dont talk to me and im not talking to you 😡
good bye hammie hamesha khush raho
this is tera purna gussa.. ye dialogue old hai.. now its yesss hammie afzal is at IF.. OYEEE garme ke mausam mein chill thande rekh.. i will be back soon.. soochne tu de.. thank so much for your pyar and saath.. stay by me yet again... bhaut pyar ALI ko kissey de.. and bhabi ko helloo... hammie..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet uvi , uvi, my sad uvi..

you didn't cared for the feeling of your reader hain? oyee I love you guys.. cant live without you all..

just got rid of us ending it ..oyeee larki, har beginning ka end bhi tu hota hai.. no I can never get rid of you all.. I am returning to throw my weight on you guys.. phir you can carry me..😆thek hai? happy..

nice story never its due ...coz u didn't wanted to continue

haan I ended so I can move on to something new.. AB CHEER up and gimme a smile.. sweet wali.. forced wali nehi...😛 much love for your loyalty as a reader.. nothing without it.. as ever yours hammie.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: FASSBEN


HI Hamlet hi fassben, good to see you my mate

I don't know what to say but how can you end like this when late week they just got married. How you had to separate Dutta and Nakku that was sad just like LTL1. This was a emotional ending.
I regret that you found it sudden.. the LTL 1 ending hurt never left me too.. but i was not going to further rip dutta's character like colors did..
Thank as always take have a great weekend
plse cheer up fassben.. will be back.. meanwhile thank you for supporting all my threads much love hammie.as ever yours hammie





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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

nice ending sad about tasha separation but they are together even they are living separated
tammy tammy .. my partner.. thanks for your support mate.. ohh so positive your comment.. and I love your image.. so so lovely.. SEE you on our usual threads.. as ever yours hammie..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: stranger2rose


roseee! phew thank heavens you showed up.. 😆 now me ducking for cover.. from readers power.. gosh the heat was on.. and me was turning my heat on too.. which is worse.. but you leader .. in the true sense.. talked sense into me.. at least..

hi hammie , look as a writer i can understand what you must be going through , ff writing is not easy sometimes one loses interest maybe because the story fails to shape up as planned or one is unable to put her thoughts across the right way or it may be due to writer's block or just boredom ..the reasons can be many . i have myself faced this situation several times when i am tempted to leave the ff half way so i shall not blame you at all ..it happens and its quite normal

however as a reader one gets attached to the story and when it ends abruptly then it is very shocking and hard to accept. in the last chapter we were jumping and celebrating tasha marriage and now its not there..its gone its over when we were least expecting it.
thanks for being so understanding.. i think as some readers have put it i was in a hurry to wind up... had i talked about their wedded life.. it would be in my mind same as a SS I DID..
but still coming to this final chapter i shall say what i liked firstly the sisters decorating the room had my mind running wild with not so innocent thoughts😉( after all we never got a proper SR in the show) then nakku getting ready for that special night but this dutta he shattered all my romantic dreams , what is he gifting on his wedding night ..pistols ? but seriously hammie that was quite touchy 😳, he handing her his past n the present , wish he had given her his future as well ..sigh ..but hammie after that emotional scene at least then you could have given us a proper SR ..why did you have to go the LTL way ?😭
Rosie the future was also gun related yet another killing.. pressing the trigger.. its a big thing.. to do that still.. he knew it could mean he would end up killing again.. and the only thing left was retribution.. this time a cleansing..
and then shivangi getting kidnapped ..kya yaar 🥺the whole dutta gunning down morey scene was superb 👏seeing dutta doing action is always a pleasure but after that dutta surrendering himself to law 😒..although morally it was the right decision but emotionally , god it must have been really tough ..i appreciate the thought behind his act..so in the end we get an epilogue where dutta is still in the jail ..well it would have been even better had you also shown him getting released after his term and nakku waiting for him with a young dutta or nakku 😊
..perfect family..
iam not sure if there was a suhag raat rose.. colors just showed us those flipping sun flowers..😡.. i tried to do that to show my frustration..😡
thanks hammie for this wonderful story and i must say your descriptive skills are amazing , visually the scene comes to life with your writing ..i hope you won't take long to come up with yet another beautiful ff thanks for reading it ,feeling it and commenting on it.. yes rosie.. iam getting restless already.. FF tu pata nehin but something... will let you know.
rosie i dont think I NEED to add anything to your golden words.. but I think both me as a reader and writer, salute you for the calming words.. very supportive indeed. ,for people like me who tend to lose it.. thanks for your good ,kind words.. the thing is that as writers our readers are key to us.. I needed to be reminded that.. thats all I can say.. iithink we all agree that we at Laagi are indeed blessed to have you on the forum.. to maintain, goodwill and positive criticism on the forum.. once again many many thanks and much love.. as ever your hammie
now i don't know whether i have any right to appeal to your readers/ friends or not but it really hurts me seeing them react like this. i am sorry to say this guys but please try to understand the circumstances under which hammie must have taken this decision..i am sure she must not have overnight made up her mind to end this ff ..she must have thought about it for days n weeks before doing this. she has given this ff her time , effort and love and in return she has got the same from us so definitely it must have been difficult for as well. it is not that she doesn't care about us , she does that and we know it well. instead of filling pages when she is not convinced herself she chose to end the ff. until yesterday she has given us some amazing ff , os etc we shouldn't forget that so if today just for once she wishes to put her pen down then we should respect her decision and continue to love her..at least this much we owe to her ..don't we ?
i hope i have not hurt anybody's sentiments because all i want is that the members of this forum keep smiling.🤗

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