Fettered Affection~thread 2~chp 36 p.107 30.5.14

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#761

nice ending sad about tasha separation but they are together even they are living separated

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emilymine32

@emilymine32

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Posted: 11 years ago

#762

hi Hammie

ye kya the end aise kaise the end ho gaya

dil todna toh koi tumse sikhe pehle hum sabka dil khush kiya with tasha proposal phir roka and then shaadi phir hum sabka dil tod diya

aise dil toda hai hammie ab to shayad jud bhi na paye

But anyway thanks for FA

and I'm with afzal don't talk to me too

okay bye now i have to fix my broken heart

Acha sila diya tune humare pyaar ka

hammie tune hi dil tod diya hum nahane parindo ka

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#763

Originally posted by: -bharti-
WORD afzal ! feel the same, acha sila diya hammie ne

hi bharti& afzal

no exception i feel the same

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#764

Hi hammiee

U started a beautiful ff...like previous one...had expectation & u didn't felt short...I don't know wht got into u just ended it...if u were exhausted could have taken break or ended in better way...this is exactly how LTL1 time I felt...dutta lost somewhere paying for crime for killing an animal morey...pic broke heart like anything...thankfully only deegu entry was missing

In ur anno u said there will be celebration wht a celebration need I say...u didn't cared for ur fans...who stuck by u...sadly without warning u just ended I won't forgive u for this...

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Rose

@stranger2rose

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#765

hi hammie , look as a writer i can understand what you must be going through , ff writing is not easy sometimes one loses interest maybe because the story fails to shape up as planned or one is unable to put her thoughts across the right way or it may be due to writer's block or just boredom ..the reasons can be many . i have myself faced this situation several times when i am tempted to leave the ff half way so i shall not blame you at all ..it happens and its quite normal

however as a reader one gets attached to the story and when it ends abruptly then it is very shocking and hard to accept. in the last chapter we were jumping and celebrating tasha marriage and now its not there..its gone its over when we were least expecting it.

but still coming to this final chapter i shall say what i liked firstly the sisters decorating the room had my mind running wild with not so innocent thoughts😉( after all we never got a proper SR in the show) then nakku getting ready for that special night but this dutta he shattered all my romantic dreams , what is he gifting on his wedding night ..pistols ? but seriously hammie that was quite touchy 😳, he handing her his past n the present , wish he had given her his future as well ..sigh ..but hammie after that emotional scene at least then you could have given us a proper SR ..why did you have to go the LTL way ?😭 and then shivangi getting kidnapped ..kya yaar 🥺the whole dutta gunning down morey scene was superb 👏seeing dutta doing action is always a pleasure but after that dutta surrendering himself to law 😒..although morally it was the right decision but emotionally , god it must have been really tough ..i appreciate the thought behind his act..so in the end we get an epilogue where dutta is still in the jail ..well it would have been even better had you also shown him getting released after his term and nakku waiting for him with a young dutta or nakku 😊..perfect family..thanks hammie for this wonderful story and i must say your descriptive skills are amazing , visually the scene comes to life with your writing ..i hope you won't take long to come up with yet another beautiful ff

now i don't know whether i have any right to appeal to your readers/ friends or not but it really hurts me seeing them react like this. i am sorry to say this guys but please try to understand the circumstances under which hammie must have taken this decision..i am sure she must not have overnight made up her mind to end this ff ..she must have thought about it for days n weeks before doing this. she has given this ff her time , effort and love and in return she has got the same from us so definitely it must have been difficult for as well. it is not that she doesn't care about us , she does that and we know it well. instead of filling pages when she is not convinced herself she chose to end the ff. until yesterday she has given us some amazing ff , os etc we shouldn't forget that so if today just for once she wishes to put her pen down then we should respect her decision and continue to love her..at least this much we owe to her ..don't we ?

i hope i have not hurt anybody's sentiments because all i want is that the members of this forum keep smiling.🤗

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#766

Originally posted by: Hamlet53
oyeee roarrr.. balli,. twinks, and now bart?hainnn?
look chill...paleeezzz. you know how much i love you all.. aaand is thread pe i do the drama not you guys!
chooha hammie..
roarrr

@red: you think you got the copyright on that?😆 puh-leez! That's only in your imagination!

So, uhmm ...looks like you've ended the FF without warning. I guess your zing to write' has gone through the window?

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#767

Hammie

The title says it all... the numbing feeling of not reading FA again is yet to sink in. But Thank you hammie for a befitting ending to the ff, just the way as in LTL 1. I dont mind tragic endings really, afterall thats closest to reality n life is full of nasty twists n turns.

Coming to the finale update nothing prepares one to the surprise element awaiting us not even the icy cool demeanour of Dutta, looking perfectly composed n confident of handling the family including the in laws. The three sis without a murmur welcome naku with open arms, lucky naku.

Yeh kya dutta ne toh shaadi isliye kiya taki naku ko dushman ki buri nazar se bachane, ghar mein kaun dushman hai jo naku ko abhi se apni paas apne kamre mein baand ke rakhna chahta hai 😃 Uske neeyat mein khot hai. Aur kuch ho na ho AS ko toh bahana milgaya behosh hone ke liye.

wow, sone pe suhaga, the sisters give a romantic touch up to the sher,s den, for him to devour his prey. The mai baap of dutta doin the dirty job n what a makeover he has had to do, the first biggest surprise has to be baji,s sexy bar girl avatar, aur morey ko issi pe nazar, lattoo over the solid siren well done hammie, full marks. 😉

Hmm what a nasty surprise dutta has in store for naku, he,s romantisising his dreadful past showcasing the pistol instead of admiring the dreamy pic perfect present right in front, it has an errie feeling to it already, the excitement evaporating soon

Morey encounter was so swift that one is left wondering as to what hit them. Dutta,s cold demeanour to the happenings thereafter is baffling. Its as if he is desperate to get away. But Naku deserved a better life, Her pure luv, unwavering loyalty to the man goes unrewarded. What a shame, its as if she failed as a rehab, the man her husband had other plans

Even thou he has a good chance of being acquitted for he was forced to finish morey to save shivangi n baji, he needs to find peace within himself foremost. But he never fails to win hearts with his brite honest words, beautiful words hammie in the end.

Gosh the pic of a stone faced dutta is chilling

The epilogue gives a ray of hope to naku n to the readers that their fav jodi still have a chance.

Hammie amazzing effort keeping in mind the abrupt n a most shocking twist. I do understand the immense pulls n pressures that you had to go thro.. im sure you will come up with something even more exciting soon. But until such time you truly deserve a long break from the daily grind n mostly from us demanding greedy readers 😳

Also i would like to assure Rose n others who feel that some of us have been unfair to you that its the last thing on our minds, to hurt you. We know you thro your brilliant writing and we respect n hold you in the highest regards for everything that you do. Can never imagine disregarding or disrespecting your efforts. But still do forgive if any of my words or actions hurt your feelings. You deserve nothing but high accolades.

Hammie, Thank you for keeping the forum alive, appreciate your humungous efforts 👏

will miss FA for sure, your roars, update pms ..

Edited by -bharti- - 11 years ago

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dilse14

@dilse14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#768

hi hamletthanxs for ffdidn't went as i wantedthe last pic of dutta from ltl1 was disheartinganyway its your story ..won't be right to complain

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#769

hi hammiee

thanks for giving us a story which we all got too attach...its ur fault u r a spider who weave a web ...😊we never wanted it to end...start a new story...talent like u deserve to be showcased

as always ur amazinggg hammiee...sorry if been unreasonable😭

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sona89

@sona89

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#770

Hi hamlet

The story ended with dutta & naku united eternally...I & my gangs are thankful for FA...we followed it regularly...the ending like rose i feel every story is writer's perspective...some might find it tragic...all stories don't have happy ending...

Like nakusha I plead...with you to pls start a new story...we are waiting eagerly...thanks from all of us...list is long & time short...with power cuts I feel my comment posted fast...😆

Edited by sona89 - 11 years ago

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