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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Warda.

Hi hammie :)hi wardini.. uni gaye the na hope bunk nehi mara..😡

hayyee bura haal hai dutta ka and nore than him we are cringing. ..supriya ke liya fanaa ho gaya hai .. kotha!
cant believe he was so much into supriya how I wish it was kept an ordinary arrange marriage..warrie it is an arranged marriage..

. ..sad bit is when ever with naku the track was occupied with other things like damodars entry or even worse a bling dutta i know warrie.. may be their love was based on two birds kissing, to flowers held in a single vase, or hikle hilke hawa and curtains blowing..

its stupid to see baaji and dutta so chilled when they know the biggest threat in their business is a small negligence. good thinking ..very well said hammie that they were alert for the enemy from outside but they never know it was inside the house. .thats where the tragedy lies, no one suspects their own family..

Naku gosh is dhe existing in this show from last three episodes she is either their to hand over juice to supriya pr walking with a gloomy face ...not even a single line let alone we expect a tasha scene 🤔 oyeee thand rekh kurriye wait till you check the next WU..

kala is far more alert and smart right now I feel the only person with brains in patil niwas...if she dreams big I guess she deserves it too..
kala has reasons for her dreams inteqam revenge!
And dutta and his tutti frutti towel and supriyas flashbacks I better not say anything on this...bahi tu isski mene band baja deni hai 😛... chilll ..ja coca cola pe diet wala!
thanku for yhe wu and your personsl viewz were a delight as usual...your write up saved this episode otherwise as a tasha lover im ready with the gun jo futta ne chupai thi lol ...
p.s...nakusha your remarks were hilarious it cheered me up😃 haan naku ka one liner was too good i posted a song ju supriya gata dutta ke liye .. the one i sent you... now dont you learn dirty swear words from the song! thanks much love..hammie.

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Posted: 11 years ago

LTL Written Update

Episode ~76

12th April 2010

The episode picks up from the point when Dutta hands over the meher~ gift to the last dancer. Kala watches nervously from far , and hopes that her worst fear of Supriya being spotted by Dutta does not come true.

Dutta gives the dancer a quizzical look, her face is completely concealed by her sari pallu.

Patil Nivas grounds

In the car park, shielded by cars, a bit of Ravi's head peeps out cautiously from behind a parked car. Once he sees the coast is clear, he pushes himself behind another vehicle.. bodyguard .. I suspect who are dysfunctional at this point.

Lounge

Kala waits apprehensively to see if she can successfully hood wink Dutta..her mind is engaged in forward planning.. but for now she waits for Supriya too pass through security .Once she is confident that things are chugging along according to plan, she quick marches out of the corridor.. while in the lounge Roops , and Leela , too look nervously at the disguised Supriya.

Patil Nivas grounds

Ravi catches, Kala looking around.. in the lawns of Patil Nivas, he shows himself and she approaches him. She ensures no one is around. He is keen to know , Tai , hope everything is okay ?. she replies curtly, no problems. Then he asks the inevitable question Supriya isn't here? Kala gives him a confident smile, with me around how can anything go wrong? from under her folded hands she pulls out a bundle of crisp notes, here take this .. he looks at the money and she yells, take it!.. Supriya will be here shortly.. look today the security is down, they are virtually drunk.. but even so, if you come across any one, just say you are doing a job for Bhau.. Ravi says, yes.. Kala continues, tomorrow morning you should reach Khollapur, but don't stop there, that city is within Bhau's reach.. then she glares at him and sneers, to the think that I have been lying to Bhau for the likes of you! if you have any shame left in you! then don't you ever look to this house again! she grates at him in mock loyalty towards her family, and then Kala neatly takes herself back to the house.. so smoothly Kala has executed her deed , that the unsuspecting Ravi can never in his wildest dreams fathom that he and his girlfriend have both been used by the cunning Kala. Mind you, it is a situation where Ravi is least interested in Dutta and Kala 's politics. To him Kala is a saviour.

Lounge

Supriya sneaks out from under Dutta and his mother's eyes .. as Kala makes her way back to the house.. Supriya walks out as a free woman, from the corridor of the lounge... past the two body guards at the entrance..

Patil Nivas grounds

Ravi waits impatiently for Supriya as he holds the bundle of notes in his hand.

She emerges walking up the boundary ramp, with her face hidden away... suddenly one of the BG'S yells, hey wait !. where you going? he asks sternly. She hides her face and mutters I am in the dance troupe, my three month old baby is ill, so I have to go..they look at her covered head and take pity , and say , ok you can go.. smart Supriya gives a sob story which evokes sympathy .. and saves her from being challenged further, and she hurriedly escapes onwards to her lover.

Outhouse

Naku sits lifeless on the chair. Babi enters, and on seeing her daughter idle , a word of warning she gives her, hey! outside there are so many guests and here you are just sitting! Naku changes her gloomy expression to a smiling one..to keep up the act that nothing between Supriya and her Saab matters to her..

Sethji enters , and looks agitated , Aye! look! listen! he yells. Naku shows interest as Sethji continues, you know that fatty ! he's teasing me! he says shall I get you married to one of them dancers? ,Sethji moans to Naku. .. who supresses a giggle , while Babi laughs out aloud. Naku stands up before her baby brother and goes along with the situation, so what?.. he stares at her face..and she carries on, we need someone to give Aye a hand, the sooner! the better! He looks gobsmacked. ..as Naku continues teasing him tongue in cheek ,she adds by the way I have seen a girl for you .. you know that tailor masters fat one and cross eyed daughter.. you both will make a great couple! Sethji runs to his mother, Aye! Aye !did you hear her? she wants to get me hitched with a buffalo! Babi agrees , isn't that good? and he moans ,Aye you too? . Sethji runs to his sister, while his mother cackles.. I won't spare you! he yells at Naku , and Naku runs and hides behind her mother as both her and Sethji play chase around a yelling Babi , what are you doing? I'll fall down! both of then shake and pull her in their game.. finally Naku runs out of the room playfully ,yelling, as her brother runs after her ready to pounce on her...

Babi watches both her children run out joyously , full of laughter ..this then was their small world , with small snatches of simple moments of fun and merriment..

Patil Nivas grounds

Ravi walks narrowly between two parked cars.. looking out for Supriya the money cluthched in his palm.

Naku runs into the garden area, chased by her brother.. Sethji calls after her, stop Tai! I'll not spare you today, stop! you'll get me married to that tailors daughter! he calls out as Naku lifts her skirts and runs around the side of the house in the vast lit up gardens. Naku ducks down and dives

Sneaky Supriya ..head covered, bops up from behind a palm shrubbery she raises her head but regresses back against the wall as she sees Naku running ahead! Naku runs and yells, Sethji! and she runs past the crouched figure of Supriya!

Relieved Supriya pulls her pallu on her head and slowly stands up and cautiously look around,then she creeps forward and collides with Sethji! who loses his balances in a flower bed. She quickly fixes her pallu , as Sethji gets up and shouts at his figure are you blind! and Sethji runs off looking for Naku , yelling stop now!

An extremely lucky Supriya covers her face and runs forward towards the parked cars where Ravi wait..

Then his love approaches, her head partly covered. She looks behind her as she moves to him between two parked cars and lets go of her sari pallu uncovering her head ,back and shoulders. He grabs her shoulders and complains,Supriya you took so long..she looks up into his face and replies, it's a big thing that I am here at all!

She looks behind at the lit up boundary of Patil Nivas , behind the glittering sculpted flower beds... Ravi I am free from that Dutta's jail! she says joyously...that's it! now quickly take me far away from here! Ravi says , yes..he says with a yearning and clasps her to his heart in a lovers embrace.

Naku... who hides from her brother behind a car.. sees the embrace, her face profiled across the tail light of a car.. a very significant feature of a car.. when lit up it keeps the person driving ahead safe from other drivers colliding into the driven vehicle.. Naku is the safety mechanism in Dutta's journey of life..

Her eyes pop out, her eye brows crinkle and she thinks.. as she sees Supriya resting in Ravi's arms against his chest. Naku looks again to confirm , her lips quiver as she confirms the sight yet again.. then she moves partly from behind the white car, and bops her shoulders up! her face in scowl... repulsed! Her mouth droops and opens and her big doe eyes look in complete disbelief! and she gradually stands up behind the white parked car...and yells in great authority , Tai!!

The lovers part heads and look her way. .they part from their embrace, as Naku with flashing eyes confronts them! Ravi looks in shock at Supriya by his side. Naku walks towards them like a fierce lioness, eyes flashing , brow creased, her jaws ready to crunch them! she strides militantly towards them and faces Supriya .. giving her a fearless wide eyed look seething with authority!.. which she then turns to become tearful accusing looks. Supriya coldly turns her face to the other side, refusing to meet Naku's eyes

Naku looks at the pair of them in disdain and points her finger at Supriya ,you!!are with him.. what is all this?

Ravi realizes that this chit of a girl is a servant !and tells Supriya , forget her! let's go! and he grabs hold of Supriya's wrist!

Ohhh wow! Naku does what her Saab once did to Morey for her![ she raises her arm and clamps her palm on his grip and wrenches Supriya free from his grasp![ me clapping for my dusky lioness! yahooo! Babi's daughter! go get him the jackal!]

Naku then moves Supriya away from Ravi! snarling at Ravi menancingly ready to kill him. Supriya tries to set herself free from Naku 's grip ,but Naku maintains her steely grip on her! . Naku questions him, where will you take Tai ? Ravi yells down at Naku ,eyeee!get aside!! She defies him as he refuses to let go! and he barks at her, what's it do with you anyway? he turns and pulls out the money from his trouser pocket , and waves the money at Naku, here! take this! and shut your mouth!! and get lost!! and he throws the money in her face..

Naku pushes back her hair from her face and, retaliates , what did you say? you will throw money at me and shut me up!!where will you take her? she yells her eyes flashing, as Supriya struggles to set herself free from Naku! telll meee! Naku shouts in Ravi's face! and he yells back at her, eyeee! you get lost from here!

Naku is ready to strike him , Supriya begs her and pushes her, Naku you go from here! look I love Ravi!!and I'll go with him!. Naku 's eyes pop out at Supriya's words! Naku angrily yanks her around and shouts in her face what did you say??? repeat what you just said!!and she jostles and tugs at Supriya's wrist! say that again what you said! screams Naku .. with blood on her mind.. Supriya struggles, Naku let go of me!! but Naku shouts repeat what you said!! Ravi pushes Naku's back and yells eyeee!go from here! Naku reels around to face him.. and in a trance she confirms with Supriya do you love him?.. she points to Ravi.. and then stutters, and!and!... what about Saab??? Ravi with great contempt says . eyeee! who would love that goon? get one thing straight in your brain! Supriya and myself we love each other!.. and Supriya gives a hoarse.. yes! Ravi grinds on at a stupefied Naku , have you got that? and so we are going away from here!

Naku, looks at Supriya angrily and asks, so! for many days ,you were fooling Saab ?you betrayed Saab! answer me! cries Naku extremely disturbed.. pulling and twisting Supriya's wrist. answer me! before I do something! tell me! I am warning you I'll do something! she cries hysterically. Supriya full of herself mocks, you want to know the truth? I don't love your Dutta Sahib !!! Naku is electrified to hear this revelation! Supriya seizes her moment and tries to wrench her arm free! But Naku maintains her hold and lashes out at her , you deceived Saab!!and she lands a resounding slap across Supriya's cheek!! and then kills her with her piercing lioness like gazes! Supriya rubs her cheek, and Naku , accuses her, everything was a drama.. and pulls her arm and shouts in her face , everything was a play acting! everything!! She pushes Ravi out of the way and pulls Supriya with her from the cars towards the house.. Ravi watches Supriya being tugged on by Naku who shouts come on! and Supriya resists , let me go Naku! ..but Naku just drags her ,and she turns back helplessly to look at Ravi who bends for a split second pulls out a gun tucked in his sock!

Slowly he moves from behind the car and faces Supriya being dragged away by Naku toward the house, points his gun upwards and yells, Naku!.. who stops and faces him as she drags Supriya to her side with a jolt!.. Ravi moves towards her menacingly, his gun pointing upwards .. Naku glares at him eyes wide open..face firm and bold! He nears her and points the gun in Naku's face!

Naku grabs the nozzle! fearlessly as the pimp looks stunned at her action. She chivvies and dares him , her hand on the nozzle of his gun, you want to shoot me! go ahead... have you got that much mettle in you? she scorns him...may be you fear death! but not me! ..she dares him! I've cheated death many times before! you want to kill me? go ahead! shoot me! Naku says, like a true warrior!

Supriya cries at this hopeless situation... Naku holds on to the gun pointed at her and shouts, let me see what happens then! kill me! she yells and then full of hatred she barks at Ravi, you ungrateful wretch! you are standing on Saab's land! It will swallow you! if you run away from here! they'll find you! Naku threatens loudly! and Ravi the pumped up BG looks round in panic! beaten by a tiny tot of a girlie!...Wowww! wahaaat a sherni ! only she can be the lion's lioness.. not some peacock!!

She glares at him, where will you hide then? tell me?you think Saab's people will spare you? go ahead! kill me! she shouts hysterically. .. I'll see what happens then, in reply to your single bullet ! there will be a thousand bullets fired in return! you don't have any idea of Saab 's power! she spews venom as she eggs him on to shoot her!.. in full war cry!

Ravi backs off like a coward! look Naku ,try to understand what I am saying! don't stop us.. Supriya and myself we love each other.. we have nothing against Dutta Bhau .. he tries to calm her down. Naku flashes her eyes .. and nods her head in a oh really! manner.. Ravi pleads, Naku I am begging you keep this gun as well , but let us go .. please I am begging you let us go.. Naku digs her heels in and shouts, Saab will decide who has to go and where!! I'll take her to Saab and only he'll decide!! Supriya looks terrified! and Ravi cries nooo! .. Supriya begs, Naku! her with joined palms Naku please forgive us! if you take us to Dutta ..he'll kill us!! she sobs.. Ravi begsss frightened to death , Naku he'll take our lives... Naku spits back, whether he spares you or kills you only Saab will decide! she commands... and turns to Supriya you want to deceive Saab! you want to deceive him!!.. she scolds, shakes Supriya and shouts come with me ! you watch!

so Naku is obsessed with Dutta being deceived, she knows him well , yet this issue of Dutta falling prey to deception.. sadly makes Naku stumble...too in times to come.

..and Naku drags Supriya from under Ravi' s nose and he stands alone in the car park helpless and alone, with a cry, no! Naku no! nakuuu! and he's petrified!

Dutta's den

Baji enters Dutta 's room doing a caper! waving his arms and pulsating his back! Bhau! we had an awesome party just like they do in the movies! Dutta walks past his mate, and stands with a smile before his mirror!..is he in love with himself, he's checking himself too much these days.. gone mantal bouy he has..

With a cheeky smile he pulls off his brilliant blue kurta and stands in his white vest. Baji watches him and remarks, Bhau after ages we had such a great time!.While pulling off his shirt, his sacred protection thread comes un done. Baji goes up to him and says, here let me tie it for you Bhau .. but Dutta says , no! I'll do it myself.. Baji pulls a face , but Bhau why are you going all shy if I tie the thread for you?.. Dutta turns his head and replies to Baji , it's not a thread , it's a protection band... Baji rolls his Rss and repeats prrrtection ... and Dutta ties it around his wrist and shyly admits, your vahini has tied it..

In the outdoor area near the ramp, Naku drags Supriya threateningly, come on! I'll tell Saab everything! that you're fooling him! .. Ravi too comes galloping behind them like a hulker! shoves his gun behind his back

Dutta's den

Baji after hearing Dutta says, now ,I've understood everything. Dutta turns his head toward his intoxicated friend, aren't you tired yet?..go to sleep .. Baji all tipsy says, Bhau I 'eve to do a lot of work today ..and he sinks on Dutta's sette, as Dutta pulls on his white kurta over his white vest.

Naku drags Supriya by the wrist and Ravi follows her. Supriya begs and cries , Naku please forgive us..

Dutta pulls apart his curtains and stands now in a powder blue kurta which in the his reflection of his back in the mirror looks white.. his eyes have a dreamy retrospective look, and his mouth hangs loosely in a hint of a smile.. he says, since the last ten years all we've done is work.. work.. only work. Baji lowers his eyes, and then raise them to look at his Bhau who fidgets with his engagement ring.. now I am thinking, Baji , to stop for a while.. and in a most theatrical and unlike Dutta manner he folds his elbows and spreads his arms.. takes a deep breath and declares, I want to breathe easy.. I want to see my future coming towards me...

Supriya bare foot steps approach.. as Naku drags her and turns her head and cusses her ,you were lying to Saab! ..

Dutta continues before Baji feeling his ring, after so many years I am experiencing this happiness, in my life.. let me just feel this happiness..

Naku drags Supriya , come onnn! you lying to Saab! Supriya begs, Naku ! Naku! but Naku carries on dragging her..

Baji comes and stands before his Bhau.. his eyes full of happiness.. he observes, Bhau you have changed, Dutta looks into his friend's eyes...and gives a dreamy narrow sided smile.. Baji a bit dewy eyed says, you have changed Bhau and I like it.. Bhau I tried a lot to convince you, to pull you out of those memories.. I always used to think, how will I pull out my Dutta Bhau from that incident in which.. in which that... forget it! Baji cracks down . Dutta looks and listens to his friend..

Naku drags Supriya to the foot of Dutta's wooden stairs,glares at her and repeats you lied! ..Naku... begs Supriya... BUT Naku drags Supriya by her wrist to Dutta 's room!

Inside his room, Dutta moves toward an emontional Baji, and puts his hand on his shoulder, and completes Baji's unfinished sentence .. Seema...

Naku with Supriya and Ravi in tow ..freezess just outside his room!

Dutta says to Baji Seema .. hummm? Baji nods yes. Dutta looks at him and with a brush of his palm says casually, forget about that incident...

Naku moves Supriya and Ravi to the side where they can hear and see him but he cannot see them..

Dutta continues, Baji , I don't want to spend my life looking behind..but looking ahead..Naku and Supriya watch him through the shutters... Dutta paces and confesses, the restlessness in my heart has subsided.. looks like my ship has found an anchor... Naku looks at Supriya 's face , who flares her nostrils in disdain at Dutta and his words... Dutta says that this anchor is Supriya ... all these years , I've been searching for a destination.. Baji finally I've found my destination, sometimes I feel , is this all a dream? then a voice inside me tells me, don't doubt Supriya 's love... she's the girl who understands your pain..who feels your pain.. this girl gradually understood how I became Bhau from Dutta ...this is what I wanted.. he says with a smile.. Naku eyes weep , but Supriya is only worried about how she will escape from this mess..

So ? he asks Baji , who smiles with a nod and says, you're right Bhau .Naku grabs Supriya 's wrist and says, did you hear that ? Saab trusts you so much, he believed your drama to be the truth.. episode ends. Hamlet53~10.12.13

Precap :ok that's enough! says Ravi as he grabs Supriya's hand and announces , let's go right away! and tell Bhau the truth...

Actually this mess has been created by Ravi, his plans and pimp type briefs to Supriya about enticing Dutta leads Dutta to believe that she fancies him.. so to me Ravi has to own up that he was a lousy director ..

The episode was a delight to watch. Naku all the way! The small, simple, silly, little servant girl changes into a snarling, lioness, ready to fight, any puny animals who come in her way of defending what is right for her right is her Saab. Babi's daughter is infused with fire. She wields out the shield of what is right and fights transgressors with the sword of her love for her Saab.

Naku's love for her Saab is truly loyal. She stops Supriya from leaving, for her Saab's happiness is at stake. If her love was untrue she would have let Supriya flee in this episode, but she bravely faced death for his sake.

Naku plays an innocent game with her brother.. that leads her by providence to the dirty game that Supriya is playing with her Saab.

Money shows up many times in this episode, money that shows appreciation and value, as Dutta gives to the dancers. and Ravi for his service ..

Money that buys tactics to serve revenge , that Kala gives to Ravi.. and money that buys one a lid over their misdeeds, as Kala gives to Ravi and Ravi gives to Naku to maintain her silence..

But for our Naku , money cannot buy love, integrity and loyalty.. neither can the fear of death.. her love for Dutta transcends death itself..

Whereas Supriya and Ravi fear their death at the hands of Dutta Bhau, there love is based on living and then enjoying their love.. not dying for it!

N.B ~thanks for reading the previous WU:elenna, fassben, uwith, Naku,twinky , bart, fiz, warrie, tammy.


Edited by Hamlet53 - 11 years ago
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Hi Hammiee🤗
woww..Superb update dear...Enjoyed it sooo much.....That evil Supriya bravely escaped from Dutta but poorly caught by Naku...Yes naku played an innocent game with Sethji & found Supriya's dirty game...Loved naku's sherni avatar...Your descriptions are giving more beauty to that scene...mind blowing job dear...Enjoyed reading soo much...Hats off to you sweetest lion...Awee Naku...She slapped that Supriya...She didn't fear about her death also...loved her loyalty & true love...Yesss Sup & Ravi's love is based on just body attraction & enjoyment..🤢..but naku's love is unlimited..She can do anything for her love...Money is not a matter for her...She is the perfect lioness for our lion Dutta.👍🏼..Ravi & sups begged for their life..she didn't bother about it..She was in her extreme angry mood...naku dragged Supriya to Dutta's room...Errr Dutta..He became totally mad..😲..supriya supriya supriya...Hate his Supriya bhajan.😡...Anyway loved Dutta-baaji's emotional moment...Naku & love birds watched Dutta's heart talk...Yes that stupid Ravi is the director of this unforgivable mess.😡...what a dirty idea...Is Ravi a true lover??😡..they only worry about their enjoyment & life...stupid lovers..😡...Poor Naku..She is going to change her mind.😭..Enjoyed the update fullest..🤗...Thanks sooo much for your detailed update dear...Your analysis was mind blowing...Its such a treat for us to read...Thanks sooo much sweetest Hammieee🤗..Eagerly waiting for the next update dear...take care...Baby has done her homework..😳...Sweet lion..🤗.Hugs from Twinky baby.🤗.








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Hi hammie🤗
wow superb song...Supriya sings for Dutta...??.😲.So this song contains harsh words??😳😳...scolding words????😳😳😳...Baby badly wants the meaning...baby is going to search for English translations...😳😳

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Hammie
First time supriya does a "stitch in time" with the eternally useless BGs who tried to stop her, "jaise malik waise naukar" 😃
It was a Cute moment, naku n babi teasing sethji, brought a smile, but that was a prelude for naku to stumble on the dirty secret of supriya.
Naku the tail light 😆.. Interesting analogy hammie, i know you can go to great lengths with naku lol.. You are equally obsessed with her
Hammie what are you saying? "go get the scoundrel"? but i thought one should rejoice as supriya would finally get lost from dutta,s life hook or crook 😉
But here is a stellar proof of naku,s clean heart. Her sole concern is the welfare of her saab, forgetting how dearly she loves him she forces supriya n ravi to face dutta bhao.
Im speechless at her daring act, braving a gun weilding ravi n a shameless supriya. Her feiry words n actions make her a true perfect partner of dutta bhao, so unlike the slimy supriya or seema. I liked her one sentence, "saab will decide" n thats final for her 👏
Yes, hammie she hates to see her saab being decieved, that is what people with integrity do. This is true love to me. Any lesser soul wouldve clearly taken advantage of this situation to clear their way to saab,s heart.
Brilliant narrative n fantastic thoughts from you hammie, as always you seldom fail to impress me. Luved how even the exchange of cash caught your imagination 👍🏼 nothing goes past your super receptive grey cells. Excuse me for my lengthy banter..😳
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Hi hammie :)
amazing ud and beautifully penned side remarks...
episode seems so thrilling specially after watching last two episodes with a love strucked dutta and a silent naku in her guest appearance this episode must have been a treat for you.

Great to see naku in this lioness avtar now it pacified me why was the same emotions missing between tasha which wrte shown between dutta and supriya. ..tashas love has been beyond that enjoyment of life together. ..more so both love to roar.

I might sound evil but whatever is happening with dutta right now is giving me immense pleasure ..zayada hi latto ho raha tha buhat acha hua iske sath 😆

supriya has been lucky to escape dutta but the little girl gave them tuff time...ravi eas taking baabis daughter very lightly 😆

I wish dutta could ever know how naku stopped supriya for him despite of being in love with him ...it was his happiness that mattered the most to her...sigh what a lover!!!
Cant wait to read next episode abhi tu kala tai have to deal eith those teo dumbs 😆 kalas face will be a sight too her genuis plan gone down the drain no wonders she hates naku haha

Thanku so much for this great read enjoyed it to the core. ..post next part soon.
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Originally posted by: twinkle-star

Hi Hammiee🤗 hi twinks and thanks for the salman siggy's brilliant you are a clever baby..
woww..Superb update dear...Enjoyed it sooo much.....That evil Supriya bravely escaped from Dutta but poorly caught by Naku...Yes naku played an innocent game with Sethji & found Supriya's dirty game...Loved naku's sherni avatar...Your descriptions are giving more beauty to that scene...mind blowing job dear...Enjoyed reading soo much...Hats off to you sweetest lion...Awee Naku...She slapped that Supriya...She didn't fear about her death also...loved her loyalty & true love...Yesss Sup & Ravi's love is based on just body attraction & enjoyment..🤢..but naku's love is unlimited..this is a great remark twinks..😛
She can do anything for her love...Money is not a matter for her...She is the perfect lioness for our lion Dutta.👍🏼..Ravi & sups begged for their life..she didn't bother about it..She was in her extreme angry mood...naku dragged Supriya to Dutta's room...Errr Dutta..He became totally mad..😲..supriya supriya supriya...Hate his Supriya bhajan. haaa hooo so true dutta is a goner.. inviting his doom
😡...Anyway loved Dutta-baaji's emotional moment i too loved it..
...Naku & love birds watched Dutta's heart talk...Yes that stupid Ravi is the director of this unforgivable mess.😡...what a dirty idea...Is Ravi a true lover??😡..they only worry about their enjoyment & life...stupid lovers..😡...Poor Naku..She is going to change her mind.😭..Enjoyed the update fullest..🤗...Thanks sooo much for your detailed update dear...Your analysis was mind blowing...Its such a treat for us to read...Thanks sooo much sweetest Hammieee🤗..Eagerly waiting for the next update dear...take care...Baby has done her homework..😳...Sweet lion..🤗.Hugs from Twinky baby.🤗.
baby always does her homework.. favorite pupil..
loved all these screen shots of dutta and baji.. baji's laughing😆 wot a nautanki he is..😛 thanks so much for your great comment , thanks with much love ,hammie








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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hammie hi bart

First time supriya does a "stitch in time" with the eternally useless BGs who tried to stop her, "jaise malik waise naukar" 😃..
It was a Cute moment, naku n babi teasing sethji, brought a smile, but that was a prelude for naku to stumble on the dirty secret of supriya.yes the scene smoothly fell into place
Naku the tail light 😆.. Interesting analogy hammie, i know you can go to great lengths with naku lol.. You are equally obsessed with her ..i got the thought when her face was shown against it.. tail lights are indicators.. brake lights also.. here fog light, there is fog here so crucial when driving..
Hammie what are you saying? "go get the scoundrel"? but i thought one should rejoice as supriya would finally get lost from dutta,s life hook or crook 😉..yes if you put it that way..
But here is a stellar proof of naku,s clean heart. Her sole concern is the welfare of her saab, forgetting how dearly she loves him she forces supriya n ravi to face dutta bhao.
bart do read the next wu... very interesting..
Im speechless at her daring act, braving a gun weilding ravi n a shameless supriya. Her feiry words n actions make her a true perfect partner of dutta bhao, so unlike the slimy supriya or seema. I liked her one sentence, "saab will decide" n thats final for her 👏 yes me too loved it.. dutta will pass judgement
Yes, hammie she hates to see her saab being decieved, that is what people with integrity do. This is true love to me. Any lesser soul wouldve clearly taken advantage of this situation to clear their way to saab,s heart. ..does she go over the top?..
Brilliant narrative n fantastic thoughts from you hammie, as always you seldom fail to impress me. Luved how even the exchange of cash caught your imagination 👍🏼 nothing goes past your super receptive grey cells. Excuse me for my lengthy banter..😳
why cheers bart.. love to hear from you.. i eat sleep and...LTL..😆 with much love hammie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Warda.

Hi hammie :) hi warrie, aaj kal tu you are shining..😛 chamko!

amazing ud and beautifully penned side remarks...thanks warrie
episode seems so thrilling specially after watching last two episodes with a love strucked dutta and a silent naku in her guest appearance this episode must have been a treat for you.
humm i too was clapping and cheering for naku.. dutta ke acting kar rehe the😆
Great to see naku in this lioness avtar now it pacified me why was the same emotions missing between tasha which wrte shown between dutta and supriya. ..tashas love has been beyond that enjoyment of life together. ..more so both love to roar. haaa haa.. i like to hear her roaring once a while..

I might sound evil but whatever is happening with dutta right now is giving me immense pleasure ..zayada hi latto ho raha tha buhat acha hua iske sath 😆
you evil woman.. insan hai.. slip and trip ho gaye but .. naku ne sambhal liye.
supriya has been lucky to escape dutta but the little girl gave them tuff time...ravi eas taking baabis daughter very lightly 😆
yesh ju dutta ko kerna chaiye .. naku did on his behalf
I wish dutta could ever know how naku stopped supriya for him despite of being in love with him ...it was his happiness that mattered the most to her...sigh what a lover!!! she meant well.. alas ! dutta will not understand
Cant wait to read next episode abhi tu kala tai have to deal eith those teo dumbs 😆 kalas face will be a sight too her genuis plan gone down the drain no wonders she hates naku haha
yes warrie the next episode is interesting..
Thanku so much for this great read enjoyed it to the core. ..post next part soon.
warrie thank for commenting.. i know you were busy today, you get a 😛 from me for your improving attendance, keep it up .. much love , yours hammie

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LTL Written Update

Episode ~77

13th April 2010

Kala's balcony

Patil Nivas still dressed like a bride.. lights, flowers.. and Kala evaluating on her balcony.. now what do I say .. those who cannot discern good from evil, how can they comprehend Kalavati.. what I say is right.. she says casually, as she paces across her Bhau' gallery.. now see neither did my hands get tainted, nor were any clues left..and even then I achieved what I wanted.. and poor Bhau.. he doesn't even realize how much this sister of his loves him... poor chap.. his heart will break , but what to do ,someone was correct in saying, that in every war some is bound to suffer injury.. but don't you worry Bhau in this war,I'll be the one to attack you and also the one to soothe you..she says mockingly... and after that all the wealth will be mine!.. she dreams on with a smile.. and then gives a suppressed cackle like a witch , oh stop it Kalavati! don't get carried away by your success, curb your emotions.. that amongst all these people, you may not be suspected.. she warns herself..as she gulps down her champagne from a flute glass.. swallows and says that's it.. now change into a simple, innocent sister and turn to Bhau's room.. my Bhau .. and she turns from her balcony .

Dutta's den

Repetitive scene.. Dutta in conversation with Baji where he admits , that the chaos in his heart is now placid.. the ship of his life has at last found it's anchor which is Supriya.

Naku still in control of Supriya's wrist , twists it and threatens her, shall I take you inside then? are you ashamed now? Supriya turns to Naku tearfully , please forgive me Naku ,she implores... Naku looks at the two huddled outside Saab's shuttered window and , for the moment says, come on then.. and she lugs Supriya down by her wrist on Dutta's wooden stairs. .and finally pushes Supriya into the guest room.. swirls her around with a jolt and glares into her eyes.. did you hear that? for such a man you should give your life or cheat ? questions Naku angrily. Tell me that I am wrong? tell me?.. such a great man like him.. is dreaming about marrying you! and you! she turns and faces Ravi.. you love him..? yuck! She shuns as she gives Ravi a dirty look and then returns to confront Supriya, Saab went out of the way for you!and this is how you repay him! with deceit! .. why won't he raise his hands!she rages and then goes to Ravi and points her hand in his face , and you body guard! I will crush you down like spices!.. If I wasn't worried about hurting Saab's feelings! ..oh dear! Naku lays bare her weakness , now this surely will be picked up by Ravi and Supriya..

Naku carries on confessing.. I am doing this all for Saab..today I kept quiet only for his sake. ..after so many days I noticed a smile on his face.. I worry about him, she clarifies..today I lied to him for the sake of his happiness.. Ravi listens attentively and mulls over the best step forward in his mind. Tonight I won't be able to sleep she admits sadly. Ravi signals to Supriya , go for her... and Supriya starts with her dramatics again.. Naku please forgive me, I made a huge mistake, I wasn't aware that Dutta ji is such a good person.. I didn't know that he has a clean heart, I don't know how and when I fell in love with this Ravi !.. Naku listen and looks at a remorseful Supriya and walks towards her, love! do you know what it means? If you loved him so much! you wouldn't be here! or as soon as you came you would have have told Saab that you love Ravi .. you know, Saab has respect for people who speak the truth... he would have got you both married right here!.. Supriya tries to throw Naku off track by suggesting her loving Ravi's just happened , but Naku has an answer ready , by acknowledging Ravi and her love.. in fact she tells them what Supriya should have done!

However Naku , reminds them of the bleak side, but now whatever you say , the truth is that you have cheated Saab!

Ravi thinks and then plays it safe, yes that's true Naku, we both have made a big blunder! we shouldn't have concealed the truth from Bhau. They both can see Naku is beginning to soften up a bit, and Supriya plays on.. Naku we were swept by our emotions.. we didn't take any one into consideration, we didn't think about Dutta ji, neither about my family! please forgive us! begs Supriya with joined hands.. Naku keeps moving her eyes from one to the other. Naku gulps and mulls over in mind how to tackle them. Ravi too begs for her forgiveness with clasped hands. ..and then slowly edges to the door, where he further lies, Supriya in this house was Bhau's prized possession .. and I was here only to protect this possession ,and I tried to back stab Bhau!this is all my fault! I chose this plan of action in haste! Ravi feigns his words, says all the things Naku wants to hear.. just to entangle her in his web of words.. Naku the girl from the fishing village.. will she fall prey to their hideous game..?

ok that's enough! says Ravi as he grabs Supriya's hand and announces , let's go right away! and tell Bhau the truth... after that we will accept what ever punishment he decides to give us happily.Ravi squeezes Supriya's hand meaning, let's go for it!

..so Ravi is now manipulating Naku's threat that she gave them on her.. by confronting it.. he has seen she will put a clamp on Dutta discovering the truth.

Naku hears Ravi's words and has a FB of Dutta , saying to her by the lakeside, do you know about pain? what the pain inside me is like? I've forgotten everything , love, romance, that girl .. she recalls his words now ,the chaos in my heart is calm now.. I will share all my joys and sorrow with Supriya, I'll make Supriya my life partner .. Naku is alarmed.. with their decision.

Ravi seizes his opportunity and grabs Supriya's hand and says , let's go.. and they briskly move to the door..they obviously think they will hoodwink Naku .. and instead of going to Dutta like they said they would.. run away! Buttt...

Naku yells as they get to the door, STOP RIGHT THERE!.. they both stop and Ravi gives Supriya a sided wink.. Naku looks on to them.. hand in hand and Supriya looks back and gives her a glare.. as Ravi scowls. Angrily Naku goes towards them runs past them and shuts the door ! turns and blocks it with a smug look.. have you gone mad? you are not going anywhere! did you hear that! you're not going anywhere!.. Supriya looks at him and then starts her acting again, no Naku, Ravi is right.. look now we will have to go! she challenges Naku.. we have to tell Dutta ji the truth about everything this is in the best interest of me and my parents..

No! Naku flashes her eyes and tells then , you'll not do anything of the sort.. Saab will be hurt again, you don't know how much pain he has borne in the name of love.. but Supriya acts on. no Naku don't stop us, let us go.. and Ravi then joins in the play acting, yes Naku lets us go,we made a huge mistake , now we have to go to him and apologise to him.. I have already taken my leave from Bhau.. from here, I'll just go straight to my home, my mother is very ill.. she needs me, so we'll have to do this job right now, he insists ..Supriya looks at him craftily .. as he continues to deceive Naku.. but Naku watches him intently with her big bold black eyes... Supriya jumps in to pressurize her, yes Naku! we have to go whatever happens we'll deal with it.. and Ravi urges, come on Supriya ..

But Naku, thwarts their move again, and says to Supriya, do you want to rectify your mistake? She challenges her... Ravi's face clouds.. and Naku answers her own question, marry him... make a new beginning.. will you do it?. Supriya is gobsmacked as Naku has them both by the throat.. all the talk of repentance ,and apology.. well .. Supriya can show how sorry she is as she claim , by marrying Saab. Naku waits.. and Supriya looks at Ravi who directs her by a nod to say yes she would do as Naku suggests. Supriya nods a yes , and a relieved Naku walks past them and warns them , don't think that I am saving you .. I am quiet Saab so does not get hurt again..feel pain and be troubled.

She then looks at Ravi and in typical Dutta's hand style twists her palm and orders Ravi with great clout, you! go from here!. Ravi gives Supriya a sided look.. and Naku glares at him and yells, leave! I want to speak to her. Ravi and Supriya look at each other and Naku waits for him to leave..

With his head hung low he heads to the door to leave. Naku kicked him out !

Dutta's den

Baji relaxes on Dutta's turquoise settee a lime green cushion clutched to his belly.. Dutta stands before him dressed in his white kurta pyjama. With a smile he says, come on, we have talked enough , now you go.. reluctantly Baji puts the cushion aside and stands up.. still tipsy and drawls, good night Bhau .. Kala walks in, as he is about to step out. She pats Baji's cheek affectionately and Dutta shows surprise in seeing her in his room, Tai have you not slept yet? Kala replies with a smile, I wasn't able to sleep, Baji wants to know, what's happened to your sleep now? and Kala says , hey! it's my Bhau's wedding how can I just go to sleep? after such difficulty my Bhau's dream of getting married is being fulfilled... Dutta smiles shyly.. this is exactly what Kala wants to see, Dutta pining for Supriya..

she tempts him , now new dreams are to be dreamt .. the jingle of my vahini's anklet will be heard in this house. Dutta smiles romantically ..kala mercilessly hypes him up ,encourages him to dream..dream about marriage..

and then she adds cunningly , we'll have to make way for a cradle..

Dutta turns his face, lowers his eyes and smiles shyly.. Baji chuckles pointing to his Bhau and says, Dutta Bhau feeling shy and Kala too gives a smile from the doorway... and says, do you see how vahini has changed my lion like brother into a lamb.

Dutta looks up and gives her a narrow lion like look, really Tai!.. now even you are making fun of me.. she walks up to him and teases him ,now that day is not far when my Bhau will be sitting in the mandap.. one side it'll be my Bhau and the other side would be my vahini .. then furtively you will give each other looks.. there's no stopping Kala..as she primes Dutta for his forthcoming marriage with the girl he likes.

Kala says, the whole village will shower you with flowers!..meaning that the whole village will see your disgraced face.. shame that your bride has run off.

she carries on like a viper waving her fang before his face.. then my Bhau will put the heavy garland around vahinis neck and Dutta clearly dreams about all and she says, then my Bhau will not just be my Bhau, he will become someone 's husband will as well. he gives her get over it look, she smiles and pats his stubble cheek ,but very soon that day is not to far.. she allures him to dream and then goes to the door and stops and gives him a mysterious smile.. Dutta waits for her to say some more but she looks at him with sided looks and says in her heart , yes Bhau .. no evil shall come close to you.. but what will you do about the fiend named Kala ..

Guest room

Naku warns Supriya, I won't say anything to Saab, but I'll keep a watch on you till you get married! and she turns to leave. Supriya calls out..Nakuska! I made a mistake, it won't happen again, she assures her.. and then adds how can I thank you...today you saved me! she says with an angry face...ready to cry as she was caught out by Naku!

Naku leaves in a huff! and Supriya angrily pushes her hair back from her face in a tizzy.

Bappa's statue

Naku then comes before Bappa .. her confidant, one who , assures her and lifts her up in the darkest of hours... so begins her communication with him.. did I do the right thing? by not telling Saab .. what would have happened if he had found out the truth?

It's true Naku withholds some vital news from him.. she is acting in his best interest , but later on she will bear the brunt of this good deed as it were.. does Naku not realize what a mistake she is making.. Supriya does not love Dutta , that she has made clear.. is Naku blinded by her love for Dutta ?

Saab on finding the truth would have gone back to square one...he would turn to stone from the outside ,yet again.. and inside would fester his fresh wound..

Someone else stands behind her.. but Naku presents her final supplication before Bappa .. lord please keep him happy... give me all his sorrows, I'll bear them, but keep my Saab happy Bappa ...

She dabs her eyes.. Dutta stands behind her dressed in white, his arms held behind his back. Prayer finished, she turns around and there he is in person .. her Saab .. keenly he stares down into her eyes.. reading what lies in them..

Naku taken aback asks , you.. here? he replies.. you were deep in thought so I remained silent.. he looks at her and moves his eyes to Bappa and asks , what did you ask for.. a good husband? lots of happiness ?hummm.. Naku giggles , Saab .. really.. and she lowers her eyes and he teases her with a smile.. walks away from her and shares, Naku , you know everything about me.. whatever was concealed in my heart for years, I shared with you.. what others couldn't do, you did .. when I was deceived by love, I befriended rage and carried it as my weapon.. rage.. rage.. rage.. then because of you love entered my life once again.. and the tranquillity of love is something else...

Naku listens to him just looking at him..she probably thinks she did the right thing by not telling him anything.. he seems so happy and peaceful.. episode ends Hamlet53 , 11.12 13.

Precap: he cheated me Baji! no sin is greater than to cheat someone!

The episode is all about trickery and hoodwinking Supriya and Ravi try their level best to pressurize, manipulate and dupe Naku.. I almost thought initially that she probably cannot see through there duplicity. ..

Kala in the opening scene lays her cards before the viewers , she has to been the queen of deception.. through her every word she weakens Dutta's character as some idiot in his lassez-faire idealistic world..

The first time in the plot, it's revealed that Kala is in actual fact after Dutta's wealth and all his assets.. no mention yet about her desire to rule.

It's odd, that not for once did Ravi Supriya clock on .. that this maid Naku may actually fancy the master of the manor. They possibly treat her reaction as extreme loyalty shown toward her master. Supriya may be aware too that Naku has saved his life.. for Naku touched on Saab's intervention in the Morey incident..

But Ravi is quick to catch Naku's weakness of shielding the truth of this current incident from Dutta Bhau.. and so Ravi assumes the role of directing Supriya to do further enacting to ward off Naku's tight security on them..

Dutta's yet again bonding session with Naku in the end , shows that she is a suitable match for him.. she grants him the freedom of speech..

With Supriya it seems to be her beauty that sweeps him away. with her, it appears that Dutta is in love with the idea of love.. with Naku it's her sincere persona that draws him to her..

N.B~ thanks for reading the previous WU, tammy, bart, twinky. warda, fassben,fiz..


Edited by Hamlet53 - 11 years ago

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