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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

I.me &Myself...woz here.. will return...baji.



lost your return ticket ? 😆 Oh wait you must've forgotten...D'OH! Well I know i am supposed to send for you because of your ghajini wala issues ...but uhmm unfortunately my private jet is uhm well ur uhmm well uhmm..my vahini ji has sort of kinda of taken it for a jolly*hides face* I swear I have nothing to do with that😆...but psst wait ur not supposed to know that and in any case you will forget I told right? 😉 it was just in case you were wondering where your ride is to get you back in here...so now you know...but koi baat nehi ... do join me in the adda...we can say cheers glass in hand while she is out!
I need to run and hide somewhere I have a feeling imma be chased with my own bat...which i dearly missed bringing over to Painful Rapture but OHHH i just realized there is a Jane over there now...it might come in handy *rubs hands devilishly* 😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi daya

awesome ud 😊



Hi Mirag123...thank you for reading and commenting on my SS...
always greatly appreciated
I am glad your liking it 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: meriyaar

Ho was your exam? Hope it went well.

A very interesting chapter was great to read duttaa POV.. So its been 3 weeks and he still doesnt believe hea married her.. Hope he gets his memory back or he falls in love with her again.
Keep up the great work, eager to read the next chapter.
Take care
Xoxo



Hi meriyaar, my exam was good, so I hope the results reflect that too..
How are you...still busy I suspect ?

Glad you liked the chapter...yeah Dutta's POV is something that's not tackled so much lol I always wonder what goes on in that head of his...i suspect that carefree Dutta is still in him somewhere...and also the calculative careful one is too so i totally want to crossover with the two 😆 but let's see where it takes me...memory will eventually return and i have and idea of what will trigger that and u'll get the falling in love part too 😉 Thank you for the lovely comments and for reading...you know I appreciate it greatly...take care mate...hope to catch u in pms ...lots of love ...see you :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: tahera57

hi daya,
hope all studies came through well for u at the crucial time😃.

great ud. loved dutta's pov. he's in a dilema a person in his words familiar yet not, and he wants to be away from hr yet the hurtful look in her eyes is also not going well for him. he never wants to see that ever again. just reminds me of all the beautiful ways u pen the stories. aww he's missing roops...
the short image f the dark girl he sees is a little flashback in his mind of dark nakusha , nice but i wished he could just fall in love with this nakusha first and remember the b4 FR after. but whatever u have in mind will b nice tto read, as a writer u always give a good story, don't really want my wishful thinking come true if the story is planned otherwise.



Hi Tahera ! @bold: thanks I hope so too 😳

Glad to hear you liked the UD and D's POV. It's kinda hard to write his because we weren't really exposed to his train of thought 😆 so I kind of just go off ...but anyway this chapter was written not knowing what the future looked like for them but now i know so i hope future UD's will be better...yup he is in a dilemma doesn't believe with reason but at the same time can't believe the good in the girl before him too its like a game of tug of war...now we just have to see which way he falls 😉
as for the dark girl image..its just flashes...that he will have in bits and pieces but I can definitely tell you want you want might just be what I want too for them...i have planned it now..and have an idea what will happen when..of course knowing myself things will change along the way..but general idea defo there...and defo more leaning the same way you are :) Thank you for the comments and reading tahera...love reading your thoughts...esp when its on the same track as mee 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: FASSBEN


HI Daya

I hope your exam went well. loved the first chp. Dutta back home and still does not remember or believe that he would marry a women like nakku. I hope he get his memory back soon and also fall in love with this nakku

can't wait for the next ud take care now



Hiya Fassbender! Hope you are well. My exams was good I hope the results show the same :) Glad you liked my first chapter...both of which you have said will eventually happen ...just what order and when is the wait for you guys ... anyway thank you ever so much for the wonderful comments and for taking the time to read. I really appreciate the support and encouragement. Take care..see you :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: uwith

hi daya dutta with no memories ...& he isn't accepting naku ...interesting story ...waiting for the ud ,regards uvi



Hi Uvi, thanks for reading and commenting. Greatly appreciate it :) Yup D's lost his memory of a part of his life which included Naku and now he is certain that he would never have married so i guess how he comes to terms with all that and deals the situation is kind of the story...

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi daya i hope exam went well ...i had mine & waiting ...read the ss its awesome ...ud soon 😊



Hi Sona. I hope my exam went well too 😆 I will let you know...and I hope you get the results your waiting for...gosh aren't exams just a pain! Anyway glad you liked the UD, thank you for commenting and readinf...will UD soon..take care


Originally posted by: dilse14

hi daya superb ud 😊



Hi Dilse...glad you liked the UD. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Much appreciated😃


Originally posted by: priyaraghav

superb daya... I luved it n i m really sorry for replying so late.. Actually i m busy in preparation of youth fest in our college... So plzz forgive me... N thnxx for such a beautiful update n plzzz update soon i'll be waiting !!!



Hiya Pri, stop apologizing lol I am aware of your commitments to your youth festival and I hope that it all goes well...Glad you liked the UD and thank you for commenting despite being busy 😳 Will UD soon..take care ...ciao
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Warda.

Glad to see you daya with an update😊
enjoyed it a lot. .
Hiya Warda! 🤗 yo where's my private jet huh, you thief I have to put Warda's Jet over it don't I? I am asking permission to use my own jet *shakes head* do I have to make official request stating time and date that I need it? 😆😆😆 chal am just pulling ur leg and I know you know that. Anyway glad you enjoyed the UD mate 😃
Can imagine the pain dutta must be going through. .the struggle to accept the reality of his life. Yup, after all he's re-entered a point in time when the notion of marriage, the thought of love was all repulsing and he learns he has a pretty WIFE 😲😆 can you see the shock on his oh so gorgeous face? I think you can 😉 its much like hammies usual face! (do you think i have to run screaming bachao for that comment?😆 you know hammie best afterall :P)

What i liked the most was naku is not at all trying to remind him. .or show him that she too existed. .it is going to be an amazing phase that dutta will yet again fall for her selfless love. .and i can see he had already started nticing her good sides.
She's isn't and i think your the only one to point that out but you will see her pov about that in the next UD ...and perhaps even see her usual flavor as well 😉 he has noticed and I think that part screws with his mind most 😆 poor thing ..i feel for him and his situation

AS and baaji im glad are there to support naku. .yet i can see dutta's perceptin towards beautiful women would be the barrier.
Yes they are very important people and their support is also very crucial for the only people he trust blindly at the moment is those two which kind of also is a mind buster when they support Naku and yes its his thoughts and stern beliefs that have him dismissing the good of Naku and trying to find the bad

Ohh his dream the blured vision he had. .gosh will he remember that he loved the koel naku. .me biting nails already. .another test for poor naku.
Lol can you imagine how that would take the story? 😆 sounds like fun to me still

Update next part soon. .its turning really interesting.
See you in pms😊
I will UD soon I promise...thank you for your lovely comments and finding your way here ...u tend to fall somewhere and sleep on the way most of the time and waking up all disoriented that you forget where you were going ms Wardini 😆 glad to be graced with your presence heehee i think i am having too much fun with yours and hammies comments 😆 yaar see you in pms

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi daya

i wish u do exceptionally well in ur exam 😊,u always have my prayers & good wishes ,at last u have to succumb to ur demanding fan & i must say a awesome ud😊
dutta still confused & stuck in a period when naku didn't existed for him ,he just couldn't belive he proposed & married a beautiful woman like naku
i just wish naku does make a effort like she always did to get dutta accept her ,she need not have to hide & real challenge would be to make him realize his luv for her before he remembers koel naku , the story of LTL too i wished to know if dutta would have fallen for fair naku .i 'm intigued same ques reading the ss
loved the way story has shaped up .plz ud soon ,have a great weekend & tc😊



Hi Nakusha ! Thank you for the exam wishes😃
Yes, looks raising both palms up and stepping back.
I accept the defeat 😆😆

Yup dutta is in a dilemma and Naku well her behaviour and reasons will be more clear with next UD and you will see her slowly going back to routine...writing this comment to you made me realize I forgot a detail in my next UD 😆 yikes have added it so thank you lol for helping me indirectly...I think regarding the way it will happen ...you are on the same track mind as me...but we'll see ...glad you loving the story so far...thank you for reading and leaving your wonderful comments. I love reading them and getting such great support and encouragement ..you too take care...lots of love..see you

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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: emilymine32

hi daya thanks for the ud n loved it dutta back home but its not easy for him naku trying to distance from him so painful for her

AS n baji supports naku n try to make him accept his marriage with naku
he gets flash back of kali naku
waiting for next



Hi Emily!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting
It's always appreciated. Yup this whole memory issue and his stern beliefs has everything a little messed up so lets just see how it turns out...
will UD soon..thanks again :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@daya. .kaunsa jet . .kiska jet😛 haha. .i was planning to give it back but its all hammie's fault who has extended major's trip in london. .so kept it in case of emergency*jane cough* i will rush to bring him back to naku
and yaar whenever you need ahm your jet tu bol diya kar dont feel shy😆



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