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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Daya late latif edited comments in the res, spot, pg 8 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hi Daya. 😊
Hi Bharathi :)


As ever me notorious in coming to d party late, lol...
you know the last in the party stands out the most 😉 no one can say you never showed up everyone will know you did 😛😆😆

So, Dutta continues to be in d dark of his recent past. AS unlike in LTL decides to give him a piece of her mind whether he likes it or not 😃 Oh trust me writing AS's part I was thinking at least make yourself useful now lol But naku,s doin the right thing by maintaining the distance with her forgetful n moody husband, 😆 I am glad you think so because I think the same and right now I am not surprised with that either wow! dutta,s sisters staying in their respective houses, lol hold their bro,s welfare in their hearts too.. thank goodness! cant have too much negativity around a man who finds himself drowned in doubts n has a history of troubled past to add to it 😉 I have to be honest although ur right I didn't want all that negativity I don't think it was particularly that to keep them good ...i think it had more to do with the drama of keeping them bad 😆
Gosh! he bangs his head on the hard ground...what does he think, like some bollywood movie, wil gain his memory by doin so? lol..😆 Haa maybe he hoped for it...but I don't go the usual way ... I like it to be a more natural way of remembering rather than another blow to the head...seriously i think another blow wouldn't bring his memory back but rather put him with more health problems... Koyal naku rules his heart, but gori naku troubling his conscience. Dilemma's ! He has one in his heart deeep deep down that he very faintly remembers and another in his face and wishes to forget...haha ..gosh I think I am torturing him in this ...
Bechara baji, no respite from work nor chance for dostana with the raging dutta, lol...
Oh baaji will have his moments 😆 later ...maybe serious ..and probably no time for bromance but certainly will have his time with his friend


Thank you for a prompt n quick UD post exams. Wishing you clear the exams with flying colours. Plzz continue at the earliest.
Thank you for you lovely comments. Appreciate them and love reading them. Thanks for the wishes I hope so to ...looking for the flying colors ... will UD ...I am done the UD so soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hamlet53

I.me &Myself...woz here.. will return...baji.
sorryyy mate... ummhhh finally made it... didn't wish to re post and be the last one.. besides you have already annotated my reserved spot...many thanks for being so gracious and good humored about. thanksfor Chapter 1 ... papsi
Hiya Hammie ! 😃 Good that jet found its way...with a note to remind you 😆
Its an interesting topic of amnesia you are tackling,and very well too.Frankly it's so well written that,I find it hard to grasp, be it not for the familiar ,names and setting of PN.
To be honest writing this one I am having too much fun with the first person thing that I think I am losing base with the character in each person ... I don't really see our usual pair of them in this FF but another version of em
Despite normalcy ,it seems he only seems forgettable of being married to this person.
Some fantastic, write up of this girls jobs ,his reaction to her presence.Also great description of his turmoil of emotions.
Thanks glad you thought so :)
All and all an interesting plot..waiting for more to be unfolded.
please forgive me daya /baji... for reading it so very late .it seems to me that it's best I abstain from reserving in future...and comment when I can,but I assure you read your UDs I will mate
with much love ,as ever yours xx hammie
Uhhmm are you forgetting I had to do a marathon catch up with urs ...but that didn't stop me from res...LOL I'd rather have a RES post from u than no sign of you at all 😛
Thank you for you comments despite being busy bee...lots of love...catch u whenever I do...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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FF Removed by Writer.


Edited by .iridescence. - 6 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Daya, you must be surprised to see me so soon?
Coming to the UD, sad to see naku despair, wanting to leave PN atleast for sometime till dutta recovers. Its natural for her to think so as her being there is only hurting both immensely. But what intrigues me is why doesnt he ask her to leave if he is so disturbed by her? Naku should take comfort in that there is a small window of hope
Naku,s natural instincts to hold him, her concern n love wil melt even a rock.. but not dutta. The whole exercise of trying to nurse him, feed him was somewhat comical, like a cat n mouse game each trying to read the other,s mind...him staring n stiffening at times, but mostly silent. i wonder why? lol.. Maybe her unflinching lov n care has cut some ice deep inside him for sure😛
The next morning it was a huge relief n naku mighty pleased that her khadoos pati yielding somewhat. 😆 one battle won, many more to come ahead.
But for naku the biggest comfort right now is ofcourse the support she receives from baji and AS as well. Baji,s words wil give her the strength to fight. Ooh, it was such heartening to see saas comforting bahu lol...
Yes! i made it daya, wanted to break my track record of almost always one of the last to comment. Thanx for the UD, you are indeed a multitasking superwoman daya, lol. more names coming ur way girl. Waiting for the next lady. Take care.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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update nakku love for dutta hope soon his memory will be back



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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi daya
the ud was great & read the comment ab mein kya bolo i better speak in english 😊2 great minds think same i know u have a creative brain can't say same for myself 😆
the ud turned out as a reader i wished for great ,naku finally making intiative ,it won't be easy & her presense hasn't warm up but atleast he noticed her
our caring naku thats makes are special the food & pill scene brought out all the feeling naku has restricted herself from expressing out of concern for her saab
baji & naku scene was awesome .the fan scene in the flashback brought the memory of ltl ,i just hope u renact it again with a difference 😊
looking frwd to the next ud ,the story is going great & fans are enjoying ,big hug tc
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Daya

Loved the ud poor Nakku really wants to hold him and still make sure he eat and takes his pills. Baji words and support was sweet. Look forward to the next ud I hope it not to long to wait.

Take care now
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very well written daya ..the pain and agony of both of them have been penned down perfectly especially in the absence of any dialogues ..words were not exchanged between them still their feelings were beautifully expressed ..it's good to see him not yelling at her or manhandling her ..hope he stops ignoring her soon ..i know wishful thinking like nakku ..lol..but slowly things will improve for the better
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb daya... I really luv the way u write... The way u xpress the emotions of all the characters n especially here the way u described Naku's emotion was mind blowing... I was feeling her pain n i think it is itself a great thing that readers recieve wat u want to convey in the best way !!!!
Lovely n plzzz update sooon sweetheart its really enjoyable n our pleasure to read ur updates !!!

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