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@Iridescence1

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Posted: 12 years ago

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Daya!! As always, you proved again that you're the best :)

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Rose

@stranger2rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

hope your exam went off well ..will read n comment soon
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Lovely update ..the POV of him was painful whereas her helplessness was heart wrenching ..indeed its difficult for him to accept that a person like him who had vowed not to allow any woman to enter his life now gets to know that he is married ..hard for him to digest ..his dilem..ma and confusion has come out really well ..enjoyed reading it

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Hi Daya. 😊

As ever me notorious in coming to d party late, lol...

So, Dutta continues to be in d dark of his recent past. AS unlike in LTL decides to give him a piece of her mind whether he likes it or not 😃 But naku,s doin the right thing by maintaining the distance with her forgetful n moody husband, 😆 wow! dutta,s sisters staying in their respective houses, lol hold their bro,s welfare in their hearts too.. thank goodness! cant have too much negativity around a man who finds himself drowned in doubts n has a history of troubled past to add to it 😉

Gosh! he bangs his head on the hard ground...what does he think, like some bollywood movie, wil gain his memory by doin so? lol..😆 Koyal naku rules his heart, but gori naku troubling his conscience.

Bechara baji, no respite from work nor chance for dostana with the raging dutta, lol...

Thank you for a prompt n quick UD post exams. Wishing you clear the exams with flying colours. Plzz continue at the earliest.

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

I.me &Myself...woz here.. will return...baji.
sorryyy mate... ummhhh finally made it... didn't wish to re post and be the last one.. besides you have already annotated my reserved spot...many thanks for being so gracious and good humored about. thanksfor Chapter 1 ... papsi
Its an interesting topic of amnesia you are tackling,and very well too.Frankly it's so well written that,I find it hard to grasp, be it not for the familiar ,names and setting of PN.
Despite normalcy ,it seems he only seems forgettable of being married to this person.
Some fantastic, write up of this girls jobs ,his reaction to her presence.Also great description of his turmoil of emotions.
All and all an interesting plot..waiting for more to be unfolded.
please forgive me daya /baji... for reading it so very late .it seems to me that it's best I abstain from reserving in future...and comment when I can,but I assure you read your UDs I will mate
with much love ,as ever yours xx hammie

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mirage123

@mirage123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

hi daya

awesome ud 😊

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

hi daya

loved the ud ,will be back soon 😊

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meriyaar

@meriyaar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Ho was your exam? Hope it went well.

A very interesting chapter was great to read duttaa POV.. So its been 3 weeks and he still doesnt believe hea married her.. Hope he gets his memory back or he falls in love with her again.
Keep up the great work, eager to read the next chapter.
Take care
Xoxo

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tahera57

@tahera57

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

hi daya, hope all studies came through well for u at the crucial time😃.

great ud. loved dutta's pov. he's in a dilema a person in his words familiar yet not, and he wants to be away from hr yet the hurtful look in her eyes is also not going well for him. he never wants to see that ever again. just reminds me of all the beautiful ways u pen the stories. aww he's missing roops...

the short image f the dark girl he sees is a little flashback in his mind of dark nakusha , nice but i wished he could just fall in love with this nakusha first and remember the b4 FR after. but whatever u have in mind will b nice tto read, as a writer u always give a good story, don't really want my wishful thinking come true if the story is planned otherwise.

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FASSBEN

@FASSBEN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

HI Daya

I hope your exam went well. loved the first chp. Dutta back home and still does not remember or believe that he would marry a women like nakku. I hope he get his memory back soon and also fall in love with this nakku

can't wait for the next ud take care now

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