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uwith

@uwith

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

hi daya dutta with no memories ...& he isn't accepting naku ...interesting story ...waiting for the ud ,regards uvi

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sona89

@sona89

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Hi daya i hope exam went well ...i had mine & waiting ...read the ss its awesome ...ud soon 😊

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Warda.

@Warda.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Glad to see you daya with an update😊
enjoyed it a lot. .
Can imagine the pain dutta must be going through. .the struggle to accept the reality of his life.

What i liked the most was naku is not at all trying to remind him. .or show him that she too existed. .it is going to be an amazing phase that dutta will yet again fall for her selfless love. .and i can see he had already started nticing her good sides.

AS and baaji im glad are there to support naku. .yet i can see dutta's perceptin towards beautiful women would be the barrier.

Ohh his dream the blured vision he had. .gosh will he remember that he loved the koel naku. .me biting nails already. .another test for poor naku.

Update next part soon. .its turning really interesting.
See you in pms😊

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

hi daya

i wish u do exceptionally well in ur exam 😊,u always have my prayers & good wishes ,at last u have to succumb to ur demanding fan & i must say a awesome ud😊

dutta still confused & stuck in a period when naku didn't existed for him ,he just couldn't belive he proposed & married a beautiful woman like naku

i just wish naku does make a effort like she always did to get dutta accept her ,she need not have to hide & real challenge would be to make him realize his luv for her before he remembers koel naku , the story of LTL too i wished to know if dutta would have fallen for fair naku .i 'm intigued same ques reading the ss

loved the way story has shaped up .plz ud soon ,have a great weekend & tc😊

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emilymine32

@emilymine32

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

hi daya thanks for the ud n loved it dutta back home but its not easy for him naku trying to distance from him so painful for her
AS n baji supports naku n try to make him accept his marriage with naku

he gets flash back of kali naku

waiting for next

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dilse14

@dilse14

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

hi daya superb ud 😊

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priya

@priyaraghav

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

superb daya... I luved it n i m really sorry for replying so late.. Actually i m busy in preparation of youth fest in our college... So plzz forgive me... N thnxx for such a beautiful update n plzzz update soon i'll be waiting !!!

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Varshu_Karthik
Daya!! As always, you proved again that you're the best :)

Hi Varsh 🤗
I owe you songs ...long overdue huh..will start sending em again on FB 😉
and thank you ever so much for reading and commenting...glad you liked the UD..
most definitely happy to hear you think I've done justice 😃

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: tamanna1391
update

Hello Emo Bee ..I like this name tahera has given you ...
Anyway dear rani thank you for reading commenting and pressing like..
means a lot...glad you liked the update :)

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: stranger2rose
hope your exam went off well ..will read n comment soon
Edited
Lovely update ..the POV of him was painful whereas her helplessness was heart wrenching ..indeed its difficult for him to accept that a person like him who had vowed not to allow any woman to enter his life now gets to know that he is married ..hard for him to digest ..his dilem..ma and confusion has come out really well ..enjoyed reading it

Rose! Uhmm I feel like the exam went well and I hope the results reflect that feeling...am hopeful and praying...thanks for asking 😃

Glad you liked the UD...Yup he is in a state of mind that wants him to believe he wouldn't have done such a thing like marrying someone but he will eventually have to come terms with and he will soon enough...her on the other hand I think you'll get to see more of her feelings with the next one...theres both her light hearted thoughts and the pain both intertwined..i have to say i quite enjoyed writing the next UD...anyway thanks for reading and commenting Rose much appreciated and good to hear that it came out well...i hadn't a clue about the future plot writing Chapter 1 and now i have it down to the end...so i hope the future chapters are better :)

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