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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
good ud nakku happy with nandi 's progress ,making do with his kurta, and than hanging phone, aur major caught in family feud. i wonder if nakku will accompany him. Well another chance for them to... dekho roothi hui fiance ko manata hai yaa apna fauji hukm chalai gaa. keep up the good work. tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Hiya Hammie! I have to start by saying I absolutely enjoyed this UD ...I dunno if that is weird because this UD was almost about Khan...but you know I like the existence of her character in the lives of two certain lovers 😛 ab chal let me comment in an orderly manner at least this time...

So for a change Naku making most of her gift...kurta haaye...now its her turn to romance with the substitute while the real one is off raging at certain OUTS 😉 I am glad to see Nandi making good progress...with every step forward by Nandi two people gain heartfelt satisfication...one whose life is returning...forming...starting once again and the other whose life becomes complete with a sense of accomplishment...all that hardwork ...it's always a treat to see the magic is creates after...contentment!

What a coincidence ...i too had delicious triangular shaped sandwiches...made by my own two lovely hands haaa ...hmmm oh boy did I enjoy that HUGE smile that formed on his face seeing omg not his lover but those sandwiches...i don't think he smiles that much seeing Naku in front of him 😕 ... he is often looking for reasons to be a moody cow around her...and look he thinks of missing out on ...not the presence of his girl...but rather the absence of her hands touch to make his sandwiches more tasty...and what does he want to do to those fingers on top of that ? eat them...janwar kahin ka ...

Chemical ...radiological...biological...and nuclear defense...oh fun stuff ...taking measures for self protection always important and knowing what, how when...err ALL about it...quite essential in their line of work for it is used to kill ...sicken and disrupt society...quite an interesting lesson definnitely had my full attention...even pushed aside the fact that Khan's story seemed to have a certain build up leading somwhere...but figured it will come later...well written passages on the CRBN...me very impressed!

so here we have Naku and Khan talking...and right about here I take out my little box and start spinning the handle...



they are talking so casually btwn the two girls...fun chit chat...a little teasing..nice little convo...and me still spinning that handle ...and ...and ...and wait here we go..."like me ! Naku killed by him from the day I set eyes on him", she said and then gave a nervous laugh when she realized what she had inadvertently confessed... and now a nursery rhyme comes to ...ready: all around the mulberry bush ...The monkey chased the weasel...The monkey thought 'twas all in fun and Pop! goes the weasel.
...

😲oh my bagawan! kya hua...it was going so well :P haha talk about awkward...oh well a good looking man some harmless eyeing ...Naku should get used to it no? haha well I like the fact that Naku kinda just let it slide and carried on with the conversation...altho a sense of insecurity even though she has the trust...naturally happens...feeling of posessiveness...oh well we all know in the end its always Naku and Dutta...

So now our Rajoo dearest has disappeared into thin air...oh no wait she hasn't though psht i know of a few (cough *brvr* cough *Nakusha* cough cough cough *Warda) who would love for the girl to disappear like that haa but my luck she is only gone to her home ground...and of course her extended absence seems to have spiked quite a nerve in Major Duttta...and while he informs that his bestest pupil is awol and would like information on her asap ...who else is going to get him that information then his own lover dearest...so Khan calls up Naku and fills her in on her sudden wedding preps and house arrest to...says SOS and HELP and hangs up ...so of course Naku calls up her man and fills him in ...of course I did figure the question of Why does she not want the marriage?..and to note here...it was D who made the assumption first that Khan maybe declining for she likes a certain someone, his mind thought Kapur but Naku says its him ...after that conversation with Khan and confirming what she did think previously about Khan feelings for her saab...she mentions to him that she does know khan has feelings for him ...haaa something we all can not deny as we too know that...however...its can be debated whether she truly declined this marriage on such a pretense...for she may have chosen her career as well ...and considering that D and N have themselves put their life together on hold for their jobs than its funny the both of them should first think that she is declining marriage for a love interst ...anyway...whatever the case be...point is ...Khan has no interest in getting married...Naku does not want her friend to go through this regardless the reason ..and I too trust Dutta will be stepping into the matter himself...

anyway mate looking forward to what comes next! truly enjoyed the UD...thank you ...loved it as always ...very well written!

Take Care Hammie! Love you lots...phir milenge chalte chalte...
Edited by daya0628 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
hi hamlet
yeh kya hai story 360 turn . khan aur khan .fail to understand naku interpretation of khans word she isn't ready to marry coz she loves dutta .she never said that & she had the heart to discuss like a causual matter with her fiance .khan in her captivity had nakus no had she memorized it coz her phone was confiscated
chalo dutta will be knight in shining armour for khan .lets get them married it won't matter to naku .kyo ke dutta se zada wo us par fida hai . yash chopra style squence khan & dutta in snow clad mountain
koi bhi local help behje ga not send somebody from maharashtra to kashmir .the help will be quick i guess .does indian army employ female in combat ? sometime back i read in paper indian army isn't ready for it .i 'm sure you must have done research & there must have been change of rule.
aree hammieee me not so happy with khan saga i 'm ur biggest fan i hope you 'll consider my request
thanks for pm & enjoy weekend .tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hamlet

yeh kya hai story 360 turn . khan aur khan .fail to understand naku interpretation of khans word she isn't ready to marry coz she loves dutta .she never said that & she had the heart to discuss like a causual matter with her fiance .khan in her captivity had nakus no had she memorized it coz her phone was confiscated
chalo dutta will be knight in shining armour for khan .lets get them married it won't matter to naku .kyo ke dutta se zada wo us par fida hai . yash chopra style squence khan & dutta in snow clad mountain
koi bhi local help behje ga not send somebody from maharashtra to kashmir .the help will be quick i guess .does indian army employ female in combat ? sometime back i read in paper indian army isn't ready for it .i 'm sure you must have done research & there must have been change of rule.
aree hammieee me not so happy with khan saga i 'm ur biggest fan i hope you 'll consider my request
thanks for pm & enjoy weekend .tc

Word!!! n mind u this update is dedicated to u n me. enjoy!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
oye hoye hoye! mein hoon yes...read the UD hehe...now go to pg 11 and see the comments!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Another lovely update👍🏼 ,My dearest Hammie 🤗

I am glad Naku is making full use of Dutta's gift, now she will understand why he is so possessive of her chunni 😆

Dutta's taste in food is pretty simple..Gajar ka Halwa, Sandwiches..the only thing is that he wants them made by Naku. She should file for patent rights!

I am not liking this Khan stuff..specially if Naku is planning to send Dutta as her knight in shinning armour. 😲

Naku informing Dutta about Khan's feeling will definitely put him on guard and he will avoid any comment or action that can be misconstrued. Most of the times, men like Dutta are unaware of the impact on the fairer half. I guess that's what makes them even more desirable.

Thank you Hamlet ⭐️


Now that Mishal has a small pony tail...( watch tv9 at 5:30..read Nakusha's post)...will Major Dutta grow one too? I sincerely hope not 😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: daya0628

So now our Rajoo dearest has disappeared into thin air...oh no wait she hasn't though psht i know of a few (cough *brvr* cough *Nakusha* cough cough cough *Warda) who would love for the girl to disappear like that haa but my luck she is only gone to her home ground...and of course her extended absence seems to have spiked quite a nerve in Major Duttta...and while he informs that his bestest pupil is awol and would like information on her asap ...who else is going to get him that information then his own lover dearest...so Khan calls up Naku and fills her in on her sudden wedding preps and house arrest to...says SOS and HELP and hangs up ...so of course Naku calls up her man and fills him in ...of course I did figure the question of Why does she not want the marriage?..and to note here...it was D who made the assumption first that Khan maybe declining for she likes a certain someone, his mind thought Kapur but Naku says its him ...after that conversation with Khan and confirming what she did think previously about Khan feelings for her saab...she mentions to him that she does know khan has feelings for him ...haaa something we all can not deny as we too know that...however...its can be debated whether she truly declined this marriage on such a pretense...for she may have chosen her career as well ...and considering that D and N have themselves put their life together on hold for their jobs than its funny the both of them should first think that she is declining marriage for a love interst ...anyway...whatever the case be...point is ...Khan has no interest in getting married...Naku does not want her friend to go through this regardless the reason ..and I too trust Dutta will be stepping into the matter himself...

Hey daya, i know u r a grt fan of khan, K😉 But i would like to clarify a few misconceptions abt my dislike of khan since u took my name in that regard. I never once said that i wished this girl disappear. Jitna spicy hain utna hi acha hain tastebuds ke liye, that's me. But i do comment how strong or weak a character is or likeable or despicable. My comments are reactions to the happenings in the story n what i feel for each character but one cannot force their wish to the story, its the writers prerogative n i can only challenge or question or praise his/her style which is what a review is n i have taken this job a bit seriously😆. I would find the writer weak if he/she succumbed to negative remarks. Its like we hated kala in LTL1 n if she disappeared the 1st instance what was left in the story is anybody's guess. But i always questioned the obsession over kala in the show as it raised doubts over the IQ of a gangster of dutta's stature. See if i n others didnt disapprove khan's ways there wouldnt be a few defenders like u n the thread would be such a dead place.. This is my sole aim. If i didnt enjoy this Ff would i even look this way. Thoda drama acha hain yaar!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Hi hammie , awesome update loved it . we saw dutta with naku chunni now it naku trun with dutta kurta they are possessive with eachother things . dutta is so found of sandwiches that made by naku he forget everything when the sandwiches is in front of him now he want to eat her finger to if he eat her finger then who will make his sandwiches.so khan is missing in class dutta is worries for his best students .khan is in house arrest by her own mama feel sorry for her forceing her for marrying .she called naku to inform dutta but why didn't she called dutta is she scared of him or think naku can explain thing better then her . naku informed dutta about khan and her feeling for him. why is she refusing to marry .dutta must be shock about khan feeling or hear from his naku .it must be hard for both of them.dutta and naku going to help khan do know what will happen next hope dutta and naku will fine with each other.thanks for wonderful update and thanks for pm take care
Edited by Pushpa95 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Nice update👏 It's a pity a girl has to agree to age old traditions how much ever ridiculous they are. I am surprised how they allowed her to reach her upto this stage. Being an Army personal too she is in house arrest. Looking foreward to see how Datta & Naku solves this problem.

Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ye tu naku? Kurte ke saat ahem, ahem! but all shy n righteous with him😉.

Florence nightingale in battle mood n her regular pep talk to nandi makes me feel that afterall being incapacitated is not so bad, hehehe!😃 Especially these days when there's so much help. The two close to achieving their desired results, yes! yes!. I dont think major will be amused if he finds that naku has been filling on all the details of their meetings to her patient.

The pupil lot are engaged in the khan scheme of things. She is like a monkey out to spoil the whole jungle with her antics[sayin to that effect in local lingo]. I fail to understand her hesitation to appraise major of her issues as he is like a caretaker. Later she found it prudent to inform naku of her misery😕.

Wow! the topic CRBN raised my interest the modern warfare's most dangerous n destructive of all. It is also ironical that the nations building these are also grossly ill prepared to tackle the aftermath of such a catastrophe. The class was really interesting n i was like damn! why do we have these frequent breaks, hahaha! The post break lessons about BDS was equally engrossing, would luv to know more...

I dont understand the timing n purpose of khan's call, out of the blue to naku. Then she did the unthinkable, blurting n hurtin naku. With friends like these who needs enemies. Hammie, like how u bring the small details like naku's reaction to the phone ringing, n later major's similar anxious moments when he saw naku callg... it amazes me how tuned you r to such smal nuances of human behaviour, grt work girl! 👍🏼

Major finally is aware of khan disappearance n horrified that his entire class is guilty of withholding info n above all helping khan to leave unannounced. I told u major this girl's second name is trouble n just wait you will rue the day you had her as pupil. His finest pupil left the place on the sly n brigadier parekh washed his hands off his pet obsession giving major the discretion to handle the situation, further agitating him.

When naku fills in the details to major about khan, it was quiet expected the way major reacted. How can she be so unaffected to such amorous thoughts by another about her loved. Ofcourse naku doesnt have one crooked bone in her body but only suicidal tendencies in her brain. Major's concern for naku's feelings was so sweet n its a pity that his beloved is insensitive n indifferent except to khan😲. Once again parekh surprisingly finds it ok to send his best officer to get involved with a family issue of an OUT. Oh yes! ofcourse he wil take the sacrificial lamb alongwith. The knight in shining armour for the damsel in distress. The precap doesnt give away much, only to add to my distress.

Hammie me totally upset at naku's casual attitude to khan's disclosure n her insensitivity towards major, making assumptions. It was the same naku who made such a hue n cry when she witnessed major tutoring khan with the shooting, its hard to believe its the same person. Will wait for thursday for your take on the same. Till then me spamming your inbox hahaa! Take care!🤗

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