Painful Rapture~thread2~ chp.59 ~ pg 144~3.8.12 - Page 10

Originally posted by: brvr

waiting for you hammie

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

hellooo..tamanna! judging by your moving,talking, dancing remark...shows the lady i know has returned with her distinctive style of commenting .which not only knocks me out with glee .but manages to rock other readers as well!

Dutta romance with dupatta and nakku with kurta . nakku meeting nandi nandi commented on her millitant style dutta ka asar nakku explainig about surprise nandi want more and nakku told him everything about surprise to gift nandi praising dutta and nakku nandi therapy session nandi recovering dutta eating nakku made sandwitches but he want the way she serves them, simple ,straightforward ,sandwiches put before him in a platter and want to eat nakku fingers fir who sandwitch kaise banayegi like dutta kapoor conversation the way he said he believe there words dutta teaching nakku drinking tea and admiring ring and missing her saab and khaan called nakku and khaan confessed in there teasing session and giving her news of selection ats nakku is sad because khhan had feeling for dutta and she can't tell dutta about her insecurities dutta teaching khaan is absent dutta asking and kapoor informing about khaan leaving and dutta angry because of attendence khaan reached her hometown khaan didn't return back dutta enquiring khhan calling nakku and told about her parents fixed her marriage and make her locked in room naKKU CALM HER AND TELL HER THAT SHE WILL INFORM EVERYONE . NAKKU CALLED DUTTA AND INFORM ABOUT KHAAN AND AND CONFESSED KHAAN FEELINGS FOR DUTTA and our dutta insulting nakku ye dutta uff nakku is sad and cut call and dutta understand it and dutta informed parekh and parekh suggest dutta to do this work and take nakku also do next soon

yesss looks like Major ko duty carry out kerne hai whether he wants to or not...hummmh Naku with him...kam ho giya bechaare ka!...i doubt it very much if any work willl be done! ... find out in the next UD.ju khatam nehi hoya abhi...but buttt! me killing my self with joyyy doing it...better give positive remarks ...you never know who might be reading this...the chief ma'am her self...brvr .herself!😆...tammy thanks a lot for your great kahani emoticon ke zabani! comment...bahut pyar...xxhammie

Originally posted by: tahera57

good ud nakku happy with nandi 's progress ,making do with his kurta, and than hanging phone, aur major caught in family feud. i wonder if nakku will accompany him. Well another chance for them to... dekho roothi hui fiance ko manata hai yaa apna fauji hukm chalai gaa. keep up the good work. tc

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

hi baaaby..." beware the 'ides of March"...Julius Ceaser...Shakespeare ...soothsayer predicting his assaination... its the 1st day of March..offically marks the beginning of spring here...the daffodils ,the twittering of the larks ..hammie can hear it as we speak!

listen breakfast tu karne de...cominggg.hang on before i choke on my cereal!

xhammie rok!

Originally posted by: daya0628

Hiya Hammie! I have to start by saying I absolutely enjoyed this UD ...I dunno if that is weird because this UD was almost about Khan...but you know I like the existence of her character in the lives of two certain lovers 😛 ab chal let me comment in an orderly manner at least this time...
hiya pappsi!! thats my girl! always stands by me! stand by me!.nooo not the Raone gana... just the words ..thanks for supporting me on this one..khani!
So for a change Naku making most of her gift...kurta haaye...now its her turn to romance with the substitute while the real one is off raging at certain OUTS 😉 I am glad to see Nandi making good progress...with every step forward by Nandi two people gain heartfelt satisfication...one whose life is returning...forming...starting once again and the other whose life becomes complete with a sense of accomplishment...all that hardwork ...it's always a treat to see the magic is creates after...contentment!
I can hear your sense of deep rooted professionalism here Daya...myself in particular enjoy writing about Nandi and Naku...pleased you read between the lines..
What a coincidence ...i too had delicious triangular shaped sandwiches...

sooo pappy tera sndwiches mein kiya hota hai?maple syrup!😆.haaa

made by my own two lovely hands haaa... you mean your chubby hands 😆 haaa

...hmmm oh boy did I enjoy that HUGE smile that formed on his face seeing omg not his lover but those sandwiches...i don't think he smiles that much seeing Naku in front of him 😕 you re soo right.salle grouch hai

... he is often looking for reasons to be a moody cow you mean bull in a china shop...actually ranting bull on rampage!

around her...and look he thinks of missing out on ...not the presence of his girl...but rather the absence of her hands touch to make his sandwiches more tasty...and what does he want to do to those fingers on top of that ? eat them...janwar kahin ka ...oye this animalistic trait is that makes him him he man!

Chemical ...radiological...biological...and nuclear defense...oh fun stuff ...taking measures for self protection always important and knowing what, how when...err ALL about it...quite essential in their line of work for it is used to kill ...sicken and disrupt society...quite an interesting lesson definnitely had my full attention...even pushed aside the fact that Khan's story seemed to have a certain build up leading somwhere...but figured it will come later...well written passages on the CRBN...me very impressed!
listen baaby the CRBN...did my head in well and proper but thought to include it ..fairly prime in contemporary war fare!
so here we have Naku and Khan talking...and right about here I take out my little box and start spinning the handle...
😆😆😆 hammie was rolling on the floor with his complete Daya ,haaa ,hilarious I think the readers needed it, as eyes were being at he convo between the two!

they are talking so casually btwn the two girls...fun chit chat...a little teasing..nice little convo...and me still spinning that handle ...and ...and ...and wait here we go..."like me ! Naku killed by him from the day I set eyes on him", she said and then gave a nervous laugh when she realized what she had inadvertently confessed... and now a nursery rhyme comes to ...ready: all around the mulberry bush ...The monkey chased the weasel...The monkey thought 'twas all in fun and Pop! goes the weasel.

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😲oh my bagawan! kya hua...it was going so well :P haha talk about awkward...oh well a good looking man some harmless eyeing ...Naku should get used to it no? haha well I like the fact that Naku kinda just let it slide and carried on with the conversation...altho a sense of insecurity even though she has the trust...naturally happens...feeling of posessiveness...oh well we all know in the end its always Naku and Dutta... yesss daya no matter how angelic our little Naku is...when it comes to her man...weeell! can we blame her..

So now our Rajoo dearest has disappeared into thin air...oh no wait she hasn't though psht i know of a few (cough *brvr* cough *Nakusha* cough cough cough *Warda)

oi! hoi! you are a girl after hammie's own heart...nice one pappy nikal apna bat! and swing it baaaby! 😆😆😆...but not too hard plzz .for hammie has a few arteries of the heart named after ...Naku, brvv,and warda!...but aorta tu you are daya!😆

who would love for the girl to disappear like that haa but my luck she is only gone to her home ground...and of course her extended absence seems to have spiked quite a nerve in Major Duttta...and while he informs that his bestest pupil is awol and would like information on her asap ...who else is going to get him that information then his own lover dearest...so Khan calls up Naku and fills her in on her sudden wedding preps and house arrest to...says SOS and HELP and hangs up ...so of course Naku calls up her man and fills him in ...of course I did figure the question of Why does she not want the marriage?.. may be psand nehi kerti Wasim ko?

and to note here...it was D who made the assumption first that Khan maybe declining for she likes a certain someone, his mind thought Kapur but Naku says its him..no his judgement was based on circumstantial evidence..but hers is based on both.what she has noticed..and what Khan slipped... but this scenario has to be when people read too much into given situations ..in moments like thses ..people need to sit back and think rationally ..but ..can love be rational? daya ye sawaal hai...or does it make one blind?

...after that conversation with Khan and confirming what she did think previously about Khan feelings for her saab...she mentions to him that she does know khan has feelings for him ...haaa something we all can not deny as we too know that...however...its can be debated whether she truly declined this marriage on such a pretense...for she may have chosen her career as well ...and considering that D and N have themselves put their life together on hold for their jobs than its funny the both of them should first think that she is declining marriage for a love interst ...anyway...whatever the case be...point is ...Khan has no interest in getting married... yep me to think that!

Naku does not want her friend to go through this regardless the reason ..and I too trust Dutta will be stepping into the matter himself...he will have to duty calls! no choice ...Majja! none what so ever .now get on with it!

anyway mate looking forward to what comes next! truly enjoyed the UD...thank you ...loved it as always ...very well written! no thank you my sweet phisti, papaayaa,sharmilee and the rest...now me being syrupy with you because you stood by me .so zayeeda kush na ho ..inherently still the nasty, rude ,shirty , hammie for you...ja ab mera kamre se .aur apne kam pe concentrate ker! hammie!

ps...love your new siggy Daya..they look hai !! especially his looks! and she looks bahut khobsurrat!

Take Care Hammie! Love you lots...phir milenge chalte chalte...

Originally posted by: mnx12

Nice update👏 ...thanks that you enjoyed it meenakshi...yes the UD had issues in it..

It's a pity a girl has to agree to age old traditions how much ever ridiculous they are.

correct! but hey do exist in many cultures..its true that Khan's marriage was set up when she was young...but it didn't stop her from pursuing and qalifying for the profession .she wanted..

I am surprised how they allowed her to reach her upto this stage. Being an Army personal too she is in house arrest.this indeed is awkward but this what it boils down to ..i dont hink mama realizes that...however its not going to be esy for dutta either...awkward too I would say ! working on the UD..as we speak...aiming for tmmorrow .will let you know...many thanks .with much love xx hammie!

Looking foreward to see how Datta & Naku solves this problem.

Thanks for the PM😊

Originally posted by: brvr

helooo jee. kadhi sadhe galli we ahya karo jee!...yeah me trying to keep you sugary..not bumble beey!😆...your sting is hemlock! kills me...haaa.

Ye tu naku? Kurte ke saat ahem, ahem! but all shy n righteous with him😉.

yesss she's got the right responses now...thank heaven's for that .well done Dutta good war stratagem! fire some more nishaane par..lardki tu aise he dhar hogaye hai.your a winner Dutta all the way!

Florence nightingale in battle mood n her regular pep talk to nandi makes me feel that afterall being incapacitated is not so bad, hehehe!😃 Especially these days when there's so much help. The two close to achieving their desired results, yes! yes!. I dont think major will be amused if he finds that naku has been filling on all the details of their meetings to her patient.

you are so right he will go ballstic if he finds outshe's giving Nandi the gab about her jollies with him! haaa haa but its a typical girl thing.especially if asked about her man ..mind you Naku wouldn't with any body ,here she sees it more of as a therapy...😆for her and her patient!😉

The pupil lot are engaged in the khan scheme of things. She is like a monkey out to spoil the whole jungle with her antics[sayin to that effect in local lingo]. oye you mean bundariyee!or do you mean kala bundar .bol? and mera dp dekha hai na .its looking at you!so watch it baaaby.and this time the dp person is not drunk but sober!😆

I fail to understand her hesitation to appraise major of her issues as he is like a caretaker. Later she found it prudent to inform naku of her misery😕. now why the hell would shetell him .come on woh shrrou he ckera gi tu use bole de ga talk to the boss sorry but why are you telling me all this...so acha kiya naku ko bataya waise bhi khan ko bahut telling off parne the dutta se...for her disappering act...etc etc!

Wow! the topic CRBN raised my interest the modern warfare's most dangerous n destructive of all. It is also ironical that the nations building these are also grossly ill prepared to tackle the aftermath of such a catastrophe. The class was really interesting n i was like damn! why do we have these frequent breaks, hahaha! The post break lessons about BDS was equally engrossing, would luv to know more... why thank you brvv, i found it did my head in ,but its a modern day reality of he modrn day war tactics! so wantd to raise awareness amonst the class

I dont understand the timing n purpose of khan's call, out of the blue to naku. Then she did the unthinkable, blurting n hurtin naku. With friends like these who needs enemies. Hammie, like how u bring the small details like naku's reaction to the phone ringing, n later major's similar anxious moments when he saw naku callg... it amazes me how tuned you r to such smal nuances of human behaviour, grt work girl! 👍🏼 thanks baaby,me shifting on my bum...kuch zayeeda he ap ka karam aur inayat hai hum pe..whats's up pssy cat ..what do want?😆...batoa?

Major finally is aware of khan disappearance n horrified that his entire class is guilty of withholding info n above all helping khan to leave unannounced. I told u major this girl's second name is trouble n just wait you will rue the day you had her as pupil. His finest pupil left the place on the sly n brigadier parekh washed his hands off his pet obsession 😆 haaa me going down on the floor brvv..stop it! still hurts my gut! giving major the discretion to handle the situation, further agitating him. naaa man Major cool as a cucumber...he'll take it in a stride .ye khan kis khat ke mooli hai?.he'll sprikle kali mirch over her and cruch er down and burp!...weeell no not really, officer /pupil hai use ke...and major was born in wardi use ka bas challe tu shower bhi wardi mein he kera!.haaa forward march!

When naku fills in the details to major about khan, it was quiet expected the way major reacted. How can she be so unaffected to such amorous thoughts by another about her loved. Ofcourse naku doesnt have one crooked bone in her body but only suicidal tendencies in her brain. kya hai ap ko.naku is a goody twoshoes! every one knows that..no sada haq!its always dossera de haq athe rakh!..others first...😆

Major's concern for naku's feelings was so sweet n its a pity that his beloved is insensitive n indifferent except to khan😲. Once again parekh surprisingly finds it ok to send his best officer to get involved with a family issue of an OUT. Oh yes! ofcourse he wil take the sacrificial lamb alongwith.😆😆 oye bola hai maat ker! mere stiches khol jayen ka ...haaa

The knight in shining armour for the damsel in distress. The precap doesnt give away much, only to add to my distress. oyeee baaby chilll man...john or akshay ka gana sun ..sung by mika! ya amir ka disco number in delhi belly! haaa haa me rollng polling on the floor...youwant me dead for sure!

Hammie me totally upset at naku's casual attitude to khan's disclosure n her insensitivity towards major, making assumptions. It was the same naku who made such a hue n cry when she witnessed major tutoring khan with the shooting, its hard to believe its the same person. Will wait for thursday for your take on the same. Till then me spamming your inbox hahaa! Take care!🤗...no here its a call for help from a friend or close aquaintence..naku has to help...its like helping her Saab...besides...naku remembers when he gave her a firing concerning Khan..or insinuating the presence of any other woman in his life except her...so smart cat hai Naku itni bhi edheri nehi... listen ma'am.thanks for your muchhh awaited comments...aand you take ages to comment...I guess you like to keep me hanging onnn .but worth the wait!!..xxx much love hammie..,

Originally posted by: Hamlet53