Painful Rapture~thread2~ chp.59 ~ pg 144~3.8.12 - Page 7

Originally posted by: mnx12

Nice update👏 This like button is not working😡 Waiting for the next part.. How are you feeling? must have recovered mostly by now, tc😊

Originally posted by: brvr

Hammie i told you so! the 'like' button's playing pranks😆, now u have proof frm mnx as well.

@ thanks meenakhshi..good to her from you.. iam ok.usual ups and downs...mantally ! yous see there had to be a reason.. why I fancied dutta... his loopyness!

@ brvv...yes got your thursday good well message .you must be jokin'...nope me not saying any thing beyond this ..erhh the like button seems to be working for every one else...hummmh. have not finshed UD.looks like its going to be another gruelling day... you take care ...regards hamlet 53

Originally posted by: brvr

What better way to start the update with major naked in front of the mirror

hellooo brvv..chaal good to note your comment has started with a laugh and a smile...yes had to make his hair grow back super fast on his face... not only to plse his woman but he countless other unsung women in his life...

hahaha! 😉 gradually looking more like his old self, eager to please his woman, supercute.
N what hullabaloo with khan's allegd luv story, fail to understand the obsession with her to be in ATS, et tu parekh !!! Agree that a cadet who's trained n excell is an asset but what about her mental aptitude isnt that a defining element as well especially when she is a serial offender regards rules n discipline. here we go the ra ta ta !of the machine gun .target Khan!
Hammie hats off to ur knowledge in military training, unrivalled really. The write up of the nitty gritty of EW is superb.look thanks very much brvv, wars today is not only age old weapons ,times have moved on...tried to cover that ,and do it via Dutta 's he's the oracle on war staregems and ammo! so thanks for commenting on this element covered in my FF..
The khan interrogation was indeed a much needed act as the girl was gettin too smart by half, dutta lived upto his no nonsense repute, what attitude n authority he spoke, made mincemeat of the lady with steely glares n icy words, cld well imagine him.. she does crawl under his skin, but its his ability to only focus on her pros rather than her cons ,that makes him in charge!
Omg! this girl is no dhood ki dhuli, yeh to bunty ki babli nikali, lies on the face without blinking as much, cooked up cock n bull story. By now words like warning n disciplinary actions r sweet nothings to her ears.. wohooo! taped transcripts to nail her if she revisited or recooked her story, fantastic. but wait? the two Ks given a 50mt jolly cross country ride so that they further strategize, grt! haaa haa ,me larfing,haan smart puss hai! dushman ko tu ghoomei gi...tell them every which way ..but the truth, theekh hai she'll not squeal as a POW!
'Roopa toofan mail' how aptly put😆, oh god! absolute stunner baji's proposal was banda surprised roops on valentine celeberation, major kuch seekho, baji the underdog has gone ahead. 😆 haaa ha love it, naa man koi paida nehi hoya ju Dutts ko sekhai, hummh may be Naku? The duji convo is never dull, its fully loaded with local lingo, bum pe laat dega🤣, hohoho, tickled my funny bones.thanks local lingo is not really my forte ,tell you what Raju ,and Daya and may be other FFwriters are brilliant!
So in between the outdoor excercise major's cooking something with the details beeped for us. Him fondly thinking of his outs n their hard work, bonding well as a group. The outs r like kids to their tutors as they r nurtured n groomed as they stay under their guidance long enuf, likes of an extended family. there's a saying I came acrosschildren are born with wings ,teachers help them fly"..ais a he hai koch teacher /student bond!
The suspense building, naku's muses abt her saab ignorance n indifference of the day, exactly! how can he even think of doin something for this day, but with baji calling n after all the excitement of getting ready naku finds saab ke badle driver bhaiya aye, hain? kya hai surprise? Aur yeh kaha jungle janwar ke beech valentine day manayenge, naku completely tensed n almost reached breaking point.. bechari kabhi nahi bloolegi aur yeh dialogue maar raha hain, 'mera maal nahi khayega jaanwar'[LTL MR opening dialogue] hello? janwar batake khayega tumhari maal ko haan? haha, this must be the most funniest dialogue ever said by him. 😉good you liked it ,me wanted a bit of drama ,so sneaked back into LTLmemory lane very ,very, briefly! usually try to steer clear of it .. I cannot meddle with JP's fantastic tale of two fantastic eternal lovers..a Dutta and his Naku!
Hain? yeh kya, gadha sogaya aur lover ko halwa banane mein lagadiya? gosh!😲 is this some kinda joke for him, any other lady would have teared the tent down with the pots smashed to ground if this was what he called a surprise valentine day Man! liten he's come straight from excercise ,she should be glad he's turned up to mark the much publisized day! kitni boli hain tu naku, lal sadi pehnke lal gajar ka halwa bana rahi hain aur aur sandwich bhiii, hey ram! this cant be happening, i thought about his event ,every serial from ,star plus to colours was covering it in their programmes in the contemporary way ,put me right off ,and i thought . mera Dutta will do it his way! so did it his way! but it is n the two actually such down to earth souls makg the most of their precious time in the most unique way one can imagine, totally romantic. Jungle ke raaho mein, jahil aurat[Major's word] janwar[naku calld him beast] ke saat jannat pahunchgaye. Their devotion n luv to one another, best thing abt the two surely. now what does he give her as a gift, his used kurta, not diamonds not even chocos nor heart shaped balloons, according to him only buffoons do all this. No complaints jab miya biwi raazi kya karega qazi! 😍

This valentine celebration will remain in my memory for ever. the most unique couple on this planet n boy dont they look divine, in the end major experiencing what naku does everytime they seperate, bowled me with this act. Me all teary eyed along with major. Hammie this must be the most special updates for me, absolutely. really brvv, going mushy... why thanks ma'am, very motivated to continue writing..hummmh So here it goes take a bow lady, u win hands down with regards to most romantic writin ever n u mostly crib writing romantic part🤗. Oh god! me all mushy n weepy, damn u hammie, chal luv u girl truly me dumbfounded with this unexpected twist of things. So m'am will wait for ur reaction n the next instalment, till then me recovering frm the sickness err love sick!!

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hamlet

hello naku..kaise hai re?

kya baat hai 150pgs ke baad hamlet is giving us attitude ,guys hammiee ko seedha karne ke liye apne comment lekho .mein hein bure kyo bano .hammiee i actually want you to break the record of forum ff😊 .by the way record kaya hai you are very gracious naku ,you really are

you know ur story is different & it has a potential to accomodate lot more .major dutta & his naku journey should go on .the good thing is its interesting i feel like reading a novel .i must have told you before the detail with which you write i feel u should comply it in a book .aur lekh sakti ho tarek mein par darte ho kai hammiee ko diabetes na ho jai 😊 thanks again for your kind thoughts...book? I dont think so...this forum is blessed with many other fantastic writers who have their own distinct style ..cheers to them...no i haven't got diabetes ,at least not yet ,but have mantal problems!

the ud was amazing how could you forget valentine .baji & roops so cute na 😊

major did it in style never seen heard before .their 1st valentine was memorable .gajar ka halwa was better than any candle light dinner .full of luv for each other .you always surprise us .kaise karte ho hammiee .Iam gld you eem to think so, i was hell bent on doing it as an anti climax to all all the hype towards the day..dutta and his naku ,just helped me a little that's all!

my amazinggg hammiee keep on writing & mesmerising us .enjoy weekend & us ke baad kaam pe lagna .ud soon 😊lots of luv thanks naku for all your heaps of good will ,and encouragment.. you take care ..regards hammie

Originally posted by: ivy_11

Hey Hammie 🤗

I am back 😳 great on have you back on my thread,lady!

"love is a smoke raised with the fume of sighs" interestingly Shakespeare. Does it mean that love has too many heartaches? well major can't have his wway can he now? and as for Khan woh tu dor door se he Sir ke nazare lei ge!

The opening sentence of the episode requires no strain on imagination'oh Dutta where art thou'😳❤️😍 he is close by in our imaginations..yes memories...

I am so glad that Major Dutta is reconsidering growing back his stubble'the clean, mean , lean and cold calculated look My Dearest Dutta Saab / Mr Raheja can be described in one word chickna..so please think a 100 times before you decide to go for it again and the effect it has on all the Diwanees on IF.😭 oh yes stubble poking out ...not o hs complete satisfation ,but nature to take its fdue course in time... and me thinks Mr.M.Raheja has gown his stubble back as welll ..thank heavens!

Dutta entry into the classroom reminds me of a sleek dangerous Panther's entry and nothing escapes his eyes, no matter how subtle.😈 true ,he always reminded me of a the big cats! dangerous and distant, he hunts with his eyes!

Major Dutta's he almost quirking at the word desired in response to Khan's "Sir! you desired to see me ?" was so amusing and typically Dutta. He should be used to the effect he has on people, specially the fairer half.😆 but wiith her ,I hope that his palms itch and lands his wiide palm on her cheek !one of these days..

Naku looking femme fatale in red should hopefully make Dutta feel less exhausted after his long and difficult day..hope she does not go crying and spoil it',Pushpa aka Naku babes, even I hate those tears. you are sooo very right!i laughed when i read this!😆, jab dekho strts the waterworks!

Quite a Romantic getaway planned for valentine's day. Making gajjar ka Halwa for Dutta inside a tent ..in reality I wonder what would it be like. Well it seems that the way to this man's heart is through his stomach'halwa, sandwiches..next is what?😆 read on mate ,woh nehi ju hum chate hain!ase kaise yaar!

Strongly approve of Tasha scene. It's wonderfully different, Hammie my friend''pure, raw and replete with wild passionate moments. Drool, sigh, weak in the knees'.Dutta gift is worth more than all the gold in this world.😳 well iam satisfied you had all the effect I wanted you to experience...yes quite liked his pressie to her myself...

Wonder, Awesome, amazing update, Pal.👍🏼 thank you my derest ivy always search for your lovely comments ,you always make the time ,and make me happy as a writer ...much regards...pal .hammie

Originally posted by: Pushpa95

Hi hammie , wow awesome update . Parekh spotted khan and kapur ask dutta to interrogated them .dutta interrogated khan she is so smart made another story but major dutta is so smart did not buy the story he will keep eye on khan and kapur .the best part was valentine's day dutta and naku first valentine's day was so simple and sweet they dint want star ,moon,diamond .dutta want gajjar ka halwa and naku got dutta kurta so much in love that little things make them happy so down to earth now dutta know what naku feel when he go away so sweet loved it thanks for pm lots of love take care