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wow..so here i am unable to comment on the last update.but i loved that one too..and this one i have to say topped it for me. I really love the way you define both naku and dutta there characters are so well portrayed..and for me dutta shri ram patil is just too good in this ff of yours. I can totally imagine the mix of ego/feelings/attitude ..after all dutta has lived a rather ruthless lifestyle for all these years and all of a sudden this girl waking into his life..the impacts can be seen slowly but surely.
As for the update it self loved the phone call..there silences said a lot..and a gripping end the way i read it..dutta has not yet pulled a trigger? its just that nakusha got a little scared.. ? but i guess you wrote the end intentionally to keep us guessing.
i'm personally more interested in the type of conversation..and interaction naku and dutta will have after a week apart.
thank you very much
jagruti
As for the update it self loved the phone call..there silences said a lot..and a gripping end the way i read it..dutta has not yet pulled a trigger? its just that nakusha got a little scared.. ? but i guess you wrote the end intentionally to keep us guessing.
i'm personally more interested in the type of conversation..and interaction naku and dutta will have after a week apart.
thank you very much
jagruti
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