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Originally posted by: chithoo

haaaye my dazzling star ...aaja 🤗 runs into daya's hug knocking papaya's hammie over😆😆😆 aur hammie will be giving u a bum pe laat 😆
love you 24/7 😳 me too champ par this hammie is calling u all sorts of names i don't approve of😆😆 lol which ones don't you approve of ?
yeah this color suit u better LOL u like it😳 so i have even colored my font😃 anything for u champ😛 haaan and voh bhi blue ...because see with pink we are cotton candy colors 😆😳

Originally posted by: daya0628

which ones i don't approve 😕 "my dearest sharmilee,papsi, phisti and the rest..."🤢 ...yeh kya ta😡😆😆😆

wow i love candy floss yup we look good together in pink and blue☺️

Originally posted by: chithoo

bum pe laat😲😲 and u will stand there and watch
No i will give her a bum pe laat haa and then she will leave u and come to strangle me to death
which ones i don't approve 😕 "my dearest sharmilee,papsi, phisti and the rest..."🤢 ...yeh kya ta😆
LOL even i dunno

wow i love candy floss😳😳😳 yup we look good together in pink and blue☺️ yeah we do...but i know one person...mera LIR partner who will discourage me even talking to u 😆

Okay hello there!😉 Back after your crash course I'm giving your ff a go I guess this is kind of test to see how I did on your crash course partner!So nakusha seems to be that little annoyed at dutta for behaving the way he is after his drunk state. They do say ignorance is bliss yaha toe kuch aur hein hai. I feel awkwardness as well as lots of irritation from nakushas behalf. Sounds like the patience ran out and she now too is angry 🤔at him.

I can just imagine nakusha storming up to dutta and asking what the issue is, would have loved to seen that but no..Control nakusha ..control !😆

Aw jagtap and ganpat teasing her bitchari the whole world seems to know and at the end of the day that is bound to happen ankhon😍 akhon mein joe batien hoti hai in dono ke beech loved the rock climbing potion. Baaji is so sweet bless him, I want my own baaji! lol:) and that adorable little boy krish, trying to put a face to him but there is so many adorable little kids out there. Got to admit this moment of yours daya is very natural you see a child and your heart just melts be it a child who is smiling, making fun of you or just upset they have this amazing hold on you from the second you put eyes to them! 😳

Okay so them mysterious man turns up and poor nakusha is angry but how is her make up coming off? Aw atcha paani mein ghir gayi sorry! I guess morey is getting what he deserves but I kind of wanted it to be dutta who does the honors here. Anyways I'm sure that too will come as dutta seemed worked up about it however nakusha is the priority here. In the process Arjun gets hurt im sure this is enough reason for dutta to build on his anger.

Im kind of glad nakusha ran away into the jungle of course its not very safe but at least they get share a moment together without the family watching over them. more importantly nakusha seems very vulnerable after confrontation with Morey. This has to be my highlight the update, dutta and nakushas interaction. You've totally aced it here with nakushas sensitivity , her upset, bless her she just wants to hold on to him. totally feel my self getting emotional. Yaar aaj kal I'm becoming such a big softy..more than usual just get teary all the time and this last potion to the update..aw'! you cant leave it like that..

Looking forward to a bit of an emotional phase in the next chapter.

Thank you very much daya, ive not done to badly at all everything made sense thanks to your crash- course.

Loved the update

Jag

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

awww poor naku

all her efforts went downhill

loved Ds jealousy

n every1 'stares' loool

thnx 4 pm

pls cont soon...loved tasha momnt at the end...wnaaa see moreee <3

Originally posted by: tahera57

what a brilliant chapter,dutta bhag chuka jitna bhagna tha pyar se ab kya hoga agey. soch k bhi soch nahin pa rahi, well i suppose i have to wait . i hope not too serious injury to Arjun. thanks for ud. long may u continue.

Originally posted by: meriyaar

res :)

edited:

Daya Daya Daya...

what an ending ... seriously I was gobsmacked! how you welded it in so perfectly! Uffo!

I love how you portray Naku's character, her and Dutta are so stubborn lol.

I'm guessing Roops and Varun will get romantically involved...

I love how they were so oblivious to TaSha's little love story.

I am still just so shocked with how you ended the chapter, I mean I wasn't expecting Morey for another couple of chapters. and how Arjun and Dutta ran after her! Loved that Arjun was beating him black and blue but he got shot!!!!! another shocker, this morey better be hunted down.

and wow Tasha hug!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃 Although not in the best situation, it's still a hug!

thank u daya for such an awesome update i cannot wait for the next part, you've left me on the edge!

luv u

tc

xoxo

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

awsem update nakku annoyed for dutta and now her father and jagtap know about dutta and everyone teases her nakku secret out infront of morey nakku ran in jungle and dutta following her and arjun weas shot tasha in jungle dutta consoling her please update soon can't wait and want morey pitayi from dutta

Originally posted by: mnx12

Nice update👏 Catching up after a long time😊

Naku is annoyed at not being able to understand Datta's mind. The day off was a good decision. Morey, Naku meeting was quite unexpected. liked the way Arjun beat him. It'stime for Naku to get over her fear. Waiting for the next part. Thanks fro the PM😊