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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi daya , awesome update dutta annoyed with is feeling and naku annoyed with dutta for avoiding .everybody know about dutta and naku feeling but this two do not know they are still confused and avoiding each other .omg what happened naku saw morey .morey saw naku in her true colour and arjun got shot .i hope he will be fine naku and dutta in jungle hope he can consul naku take her fear out of her and teach morey a good lesson it going to be interesting will be waiting thanks for pm lots of love take care
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

I,Me& Myself...hammie woz here and will be back..

Ok me back now ,just finshed reading it...kaise hai tu? bunged up lardki, hope you are better than ,yesterday... listen,I did not read your promo..me not watch trailer..me go straight into the real thing...so have to say good UD, parts of it very appealing,sort of a fresh feeling, sweet smelling ...so
NTL,eyes that dupe!...chapter 19.
~ have to say pappy, Varun's auto-biography made an impact on me, more so his current vocation,clearly to me the guy accepts a challenge, and certainly makes a difference to people! Roops arrival,and to top it all, previous brief acquaitance with Varun,surely spells out a possible pairing?..
~ haa haa, Dutta's cold war brings about the clatter! bang of pots! from Naku ..well quite a normal reaction from her end..may be he needs a smack !he's certainly calling out for it!..fun to read Daya.
~ So the family and close friends interest in Dutta's undefined relationship ,con tinues to be a hot potato! it's interesting how well wishers consider it their business toget involvedin people's private affairs,even though they play it by ear!...😆 .You brought out this truth in an amusing way ...enjoyed it..
~ now pappy , for me, one of the elevation points has to be the vividly described picnic spot...so imaginative it was, very well written ,my senses stirred!
~ the rock climb scene is yet another reader's delight ...with his subtle emotional snippets which tell us the man softens, and reckons certain unmentionables even to himself...and her on the other hand gives him the blank ,cut out snubs!😆 loved it! I was quite fascinated by spin the rock activity,the complete bit kept my attention going,well described Daya ! however the highlight is when Dutta attempts to instruct her,complete with actions supported by reasons to achieve a desired out come! which they both achieve, together! very LTL1 ,feel to it..
~ the little boy looking for his lost puppy,the arrival of a certain police man was a ,fine idea of honing readers into the dramatic turn of events,so well done Daya👏.Also how interesting in the volley ball game scene ,who would look out for Naku,the beau! and her brother! awwhh.
~ now the exciting text ,every word strung together Morey, the immoral! ..high drama for me ..just one question ,comes to my mind oh the lie about her true idenity will it be washed revealing ,the pure truth?..pause ..well my speculation or it it every one else's as well?...and so I read on ,Arjun launches a third degree attack on this policeman,and bang! gets shot himself! Dutta finally understands ,the penny drops, Naku!, goes after her ,finds her..surely he can sense her body reactions in his embrace! and much to my relief he responds in a manner we all want him to reciprocate in... TLC! now he can feel that this embrace goes beyond "we are just good friends"!😉..for here in this moment he is Adam and she is his Eve, even though Adam as expected, is likely to act dense, later on... but Eve as always will emerge stronger both in her heart and mind! in comparison...
Thank you ,my dearest sharmilee,papsi, phisti and the rest...for a lovely update ,enjoyed it immensely..please continue...look after your self too...much love xxhammie
Edited by Hamlet53 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

HI Daya

wonderful UD ...loved it dutta & naku avoiding eachother ...each scared to acknowledge the love they feel ...morey entery suberb he got right & left from arjun ...dutta can only help naku through this ...jungle scene reminded me of ...Ltl jungle mein mangal 😊...Think abt it if you can corporate .UD soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
hi daya
liked everything the ud was awesome regards uvi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi daya,😉

What's happening wth the two, is it some kinda game, the two staring n glaring at each other n the bet would be who blinks first, right? haha !!! I can understand dutta is confused with his feelings n fighting against the tide but why isnt naku taking some initiative if she finds it all annoying. I guess she is blank too. Its that she is torn between her genuine concern for his well being n the irritation of not knowin his odd behaviour towards her. With varun around n his closeness to naku is adding fuel to fire for dutta. He is quiet an interestin character. He is already familiar with roops, that's something.

Naku is lucky that both ganpat n jagtap r cool with her interst in dutta, actually me surprised too, but its not helping her as she has more people after her life pulling her leg at every opportunity. Yedi hain she refused to take their help, as if she was making any headway herself. Now i guess only dutta's parents n the new entrants r left out of this.

The day long break has helped all to cool their heels n relax, dutta too slightly less agitated n ever ready to help naku n not leaving her out of his sight but without expressg much, silly pig! 😡 He is already showing signs of possessiveness when he extended his hand to her at the rock b4 varun could n teachg her the jumping stones with one stroke ha? perfect!!! Ok, now naku showin some attitude, wandering off only to come face to face with Morey, gosh! she is in the water. Liked how arjun was all raged to see him n took him on. Dutta's sensibly went after naku who was on the run like she had to escape frm the whole thing, getting hysterical. Luckily for her dutta catches up with her. OMG! arjun's shot, now this is got out of hand, hope the poor guy is well. So dutta is aware of naku's tormentor frm the past, it would be interesting how he would handle this.

So daya continue soon n sorry for the delay, hammie is to be blamed partly for it, haha! 😃

Edited by brvr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
updated my comments champ😛...on my way to dazzle 😆😆😆
Edited by chithoo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chithoo

updated my comments champ😛...on my way to dazzle 😆😆😆

and you are almost there 🤗 only like 3 posts
Edited by daya0628 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: daya0628

and you are almost there 🤗 only like 3 posts

daya i have come back to become a dazzler on your thread😳 oops i almost missed it😕😆😆 par here i amTongue love u 24x7
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chithoo

daya i have come back to become a dazzler on your thread😳 oops i almost missed it😕😆😆 par here i am😛 love u 24x7



haaaye my dazzling star ...aaja 🤗
love you 24/7 😳
yeah this color suit u better LOL
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: daya0628



haaaye my dazzling star ...aaja 🤗 runs into daya's hug knocking papaya's hammie over😆😆😆
love you 24/7 😳 me too champ par this hammie is calling u all sorts of names i don't approve of😆😆
yeah this color suit u better LOL u like itEmbarrassed so i have even colored my font😃 anything for u champ😛

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