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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#701

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#702

awsem jungle me dutta consoling her coat wala scene nakku angry on dutta because he stopped her playing in rain but dutta wet form doesn't comfirt you nakku tasha out of jungle
nakku come to know about arjun she think its because of her bad fate thats why she didn't want anyone to come close to her nakku said sachin not to mess with morey dutta want to beat him but nakku stopped him make him remember of his leaving and finally dutta ki tubelight jal gayi love the confession lines but nakku said sorry hope she soon come out this guilt and dutta doesn't misunderstand her do next soon

Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#703

Hi daya,Thanx for the timely update, as u said now i can leave hammie in peace.🤗

So the sprinting queen heads towards the woods n what is it with DN tht at every given opportunity they seem to hit the jungles just like we hop into the malls, hehehe! Some connection indeed with the wilderness😃.

So the two after battling with their emotions now r battling nature. Dutta disappointed with naku's poor self defence even when he had taken pains to get her prepared, all efforts gone in the drain err.. the lake here😉. naku all wet n soggy n the two as per tradition light up some fire to keep themselves warm, hey! i thought the two were so close to each other, me thinking their close moment was sufficient to cause wildfires, hohoho🤣...sorry daya couldnt control, N our sherni as if the bonfire was not sufficient wants to do some raindance, but dutta will have none of it. He is had enuf for the day. Now how far has this lady sprinted that they took so long to get out of it, ha?

So dutta finds out about arjun n sensibly takes naku to the hospital without disclosing the news as he knew it would be devastating for naku. It was heartening to see AS n SP being sympathetic to naku, hmm..raasta saaf ho raha hain naku. Lucky bloke Arjun is recovering but naku is fallin apart n blaming herself for the mess. Naku's insecurities comg to the fore again n blockg all help. God, finally dutta jolted by her reaction blurts out his deep feelings for her n actually proposes indirectly...haaye...kya jagah chuna hai DSP mahashay! but naku in reverse gear backing out, damn! 🤢 yuhi nahi kehte hain ki, "bahoot papad belne padte hain pyar mein" Gosh! how will dutta put sense into this girl?

So daya, do continue as soon as u find in the pink of your health, cant fathom one after another writer falling sick in the forum, is it some new virus or 'writers allergy' 😆 Take care girl!!!

Edited by brvr - 13 years ago

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chithoo

@chithoo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#704

res 😛 once again my bharti ki peeche peeche😳

edited: hey champ🤗 your dazzling star😆 is back in record time😃

wow what an update❤️ full on tasha special😳

tasha at their most comfortable best😳 because i guess they were "far from the madding crowd" so were letting out each others feelings naturally...and yep u got their interaction perrrfect (Madhuri Dixit style 😳) for the JMM scene😛 much like LTL, until ground reality struck nakku in the end and she developed her withdrawal symptom again

Dutta was perfect in his warmth towards her😳, his seething rage over Morey for what he had done to nakku👍🏼, his care for her while folding the sleeves of his coat to fit her😆, his natural instinct to pull her strand of wet hair and tuck it behind her hair😳 and protecting her from the cold by starting a fire...haa LTL😳 and this time too nakku lit the fire😆😆 then his disapproval of her getting wet in the rain, his concern for her health and wiping her hair dry with her dupatta (champ when she fell into the water😉 i guess she flung her dupatta on the shore🤣 how else can dutta dry her hair with a wet dupatta😕😕 now don't get started on dupatta being light it dried with the speed of the wind when she ran into the jungle... Spark knows yr thoughts only too well😆😆😆)

Love the way he reprimanded her for not learning anything from his training😃 ...saab😊 humse poochiye nah 😳 hum nahi bhule😛

oh then the typical D who assumes she would not have secured her dupatta too and the surprise on his face when he notices it is pinned😆😆 nice touches throughout champ👏 the ease with which both were responding to each other was a welcome relief😃 for once they both had no inhibitions, he showed his concern and she allowed him to care of her😳😳. D's naughty side came up when it started raining and she wanted to get wet😉 😆😆😆 Spark doing a Britney😳...my gadha 😛... You're not that innocent😳

Nakku's feelings of wanting to enjoy the rain were genuine for it would have been impossible for her to have done such a thing ever since her black avtar...champ i love yr reasoning for each feeling 👏 making it sound right rather than filmy😳. he should have allowed her to enjoy the rain anyways she had caught a cold 😆 no wonder madam was mighty annoyed and would not talk much to the amusement of D who had gotten so used to her bashans😆😆😆 but he did manage to reason his decision making nakku blush😆.

Back in the hospital poor nakku is devastated at arjun being shot and rightly blames herself for the mess and fears for sachin and D's safety. D is in for another shocker when he knows the "missus to be"😳 is also half a doc😆. the conversation between D and N outside the ICU was beautiful⭐️

*nakku wanting to fight her own battle bringing out the strong person she actually is within 😛

* realisation dawning on D in a moment towards all that he felt for Nakku 😳

* his clarity of thought and his promise to her to always be there for her...wow beautiful proposal😳

* Nakku's joy welling up as tears in her eyes but then the stark reality hitting her...that of his safety if he got involved with her and her walking away with a "Sorry"😭 leaving both of them shattered simply superb daya⭐️👏 bowing😃

great update and enjoyed every bit of it 😛

i guess u r wondering how spark enjoyed full on tasha 😕 😆😆😆 u forced me to with your writing😳

love u 24x7☺️ take care champ😛

Edited by chithoo - 13 years ago

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#705

awesome update

why did naku react like that?

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mnx12

@mnx12

Channel Moderator

+ 15

Posted: 13 years ago

#706

Very nice update👏 They both wee very comfortable with each other, finally Datta realised she is the one for him. After her colour, she has to loose her insecurity too. Now he has to wait for her to say yes. waiting for the next part, Thanks for the pm😊

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tahera57

@tahera57

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#707

beautiful ud, i think nakku will go back to fiinishing her studies now. about her runnig away from dutta maybe she's going to bump into chulbul p. to give her some gyan. looking forward to next ud.

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chithoo

@chithoo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#708

champ😛 i have updated my comments😲...lol yeah pinch yourself 😆😆😆

Edited by chithoo - 13 years ago

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chithoo

@chithoo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#709

Quote "It was damp but it will have to do he thought and brought it up to her head and began using it to dry her hair. "If your hair stays wet in this cold then you'll catch a cold" he said in a matter of fact tone as he stepped a little closer "unquote

champ😛i can't believe u edited this portion after my comment😳...ha ha nothing escapes the eagle eyes of your spark😛...so now the dupatta is damp😆

Edited by chithoo - 13 years ago

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#710

Originally posted by: chithoo
Quote "It was damp but it will have to do he thought and brought it up to her head and began using it to dry her hair. "If your hair stays wet in this cold then you'll catch a cold" he said in a matter of fact tone as he stepped a little closer "unquote

champ😛i can't believe u edited this portion after my comment😳...ha ha nothing escapes the eagle eyes of your spark😛...so now the dupatta is damp😆