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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chithoo

champ i have updated my comments and waiting for your response 😛 @tahera57...thank you dear for liking my post even before i finished😳😳



Oh spamming 😆 miss stuff like this haha ...

Viji me gettin to ur comment now 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chithoo

unreserving my post and commenting here instead of page 85

thanks spark u've made my life easier 😆


sorry champ i am really late😳 par as u say i always turn up😛
Yes you do! but i surely do miss you loads...our chats...those days we went at it like no tmmrw lol good old fun times 😉
edited: hmmm where was i 😕...haan.. yedi called out loud "saab" and got his attention but u had to justify her action and say it escaped her lips unconsciously no wonder poor dutta said "mera sar ghoom raha hai"😆😆 not from the hangover but from the fact that this girl can be so cool and act as if nothing happened😃 chal yedi ko maaf kar dethi hoon🤢 par uski nautanki udhar katham nahi hothi😡 D pooch raha hai "tum yahan kya kar rahi ho" ...phir usko yaad aa gayi kal raat ki baaton par and she wants to run from there pray did she have a drink too and suffer temporary memory loss 🤢🤢 she came there just to see him hoping he would repeat all that he said the night before when he was sober too🤢 but our D would have nothing of it so he has forgotten all that he blabbered 😆😆
haa so you're glad he forgot eh ...of course that gives you opportunity to spring into the picture...beside Dutta 😛
neeche AS and SP 😆yeah u have to remind us that they are part of the story so they come up now and then only to discuss about D's rishta😆😆😆 ha ha baaji my hero😛 the only sensible one among this pagal clan itna hint deta hai AS/SP ko about D and nakku that even a blind man would be able to see😆 par nah even if nakku were to hug dutta in front of their eyes they would say "oh how well she held him from falling over"🤣 now we know where dutta gets his gadhapan😳 from now and then...khandani bhimari hai
ROFL ...omg haas viji ...^ highlight of the comment... now i want to put that in for real just for the heck of it haha
hmm your sups atleast has an iota of decency in her and has cleared the air abou her not wanting to get married and has disappeared from his life...good cameo👏
thank you and used her well i guess ...and disposed of her once i was done haha ...
now nakku is relieved that one threat is gone outta the window and decides to celebrate with some ginger tea for D😆 cutie pie baaji follows her and seats himself on the kitchen counter snapping his finger to get her attention😍...beautifully written champ 😛 exactly how baaji would have behaved😳 but u forgot to finish that sentence with "that cute dimple deepening with the twinkle in his eyes"😛...champ😳 aage se mujhe script dena for proofreading😃
oh i just love baaji ...i will use him whenever and where ever i can...he is defo cutie pie...ur right i missed out on the mention of his dimples...love how u have worded it tho still ...maybe i should get you to proof read...but only problem is I know u will chug out the character of Naku :P am I right?
nakku brushes off baaji's questions for fear of letting her feelings known and takes the tea to D...haaye u brought LTL in front of my eyes "D in his vest and trouser with towel around the neck"😍 he has pleasant memories of nakku with scenes from their first meeting to the MAA training flashing before his eyes and he looks at the mirror smiling and wondering how she affected him and turns to get his shirt when he notices the mirror😲😲😲 aaagh stalker is standing there😆😆😆 he turns around and they have the "phamus eyelock"🤢 their eyelocks are quite famous actually esp in this FF haha ...its always locking and then he walks closer and crosses his hands over his chest😳...thud...*ouch spark had a brief fainting spell*😆... careful now...or were you thinking D will come and sweep you up into his arms?? he gulps the tea and asks her to say whatever she wanted to instead of annoying spark😛 and himself😳 oooh champ i loved the way he asked "ab meine kya kiya" another LTL classic dialogue😳😳😳 nakku begins her bashan🥱 and his thoughts linger on her coming to fetch him from the club and he remembers his confession😳 and then starts the confusion😕 leading to the "khandani bhimari" setting in once again🤣 gadha is shocked at the thought and decides she is just a friend...nothing more nothing less👍🏼 way to go👏 my gadhu😳
only you are excited with his confusion 😆 all else annoyed he is taking too long ...gee i wonder what ur comments will be like once they are together...shall i be expecting ur comments to be more censored 😆?
meanwhile yedi is going on and on with her bashan "koi mike pakdao usko aur election mein khada karo"🤢 and D shuts her mouth up by asking her whether she was disturbed by the date flopping or his drinking👏👏👏 but champ i don't approve of their proximity in this scene😒 totally uncalled for😳
Atlast someone had the good sense to drive home the point why nakku should still be covered with soot... sachin's parents ...she may have lived in oblivion all these years but that has changed now and if half the world comes to know her fair avtar then no point in hiding herself in soot for the PN vasis alone😆😆
lol yeah ...that needs to come off ...so i have decided to do that soon ...
sagaai day and all are dressed looking their best but none can beat a certain royal maroon colour sherwani clad person😳😳😳 ufff☺️ i know re...UFF! 😆
now we all know how to get D's attention😉 mention "spark" 😳...er i mean "nakku" 😆😆 and you have his full attention😛 he follows her every move with his eyes, admires her every gesture and finds happiness in all that she does, loved the way he looked with respect and approval at Jagtap dada 😛 the one who had given the courage and strenght to nakku during her trying times, his only disapproval coming when she is serenaded by Varun😆😆😆 someone is jealous Big Time🤣 and walks off to the garden to chill😆😆
Yup Varun will defo get to D's core...
champ loved the way u have described his predicament...totally of a person in love😳😳😳 that is how confused one is when in love❤️, first signs are sure of denial😲 and maintaining that such a thing can never happen to them, then ponder over all those irrational thoughts😆😆 and making out life to be complicated when u can make it simple by just allowing yourself to "Accept"😳 then again who are we talking about...a Mr.Stubborn head😆 he decides to go and sleep it off, like it was a nightmare🤣🤣 and names his love a headache🥳
Oh viji ...LOL nightmare...its almost like one haha since he has no clue what is going on but can sense the change...and of course it is getting to him fast...
lovely update champ👏👏👏 enjoyed every bit😳
thank you !
coming to your promo😛 like u needed one people are always seated here ready to pounce on your update even before u send a pm 😆😆😆 but u have to give everyone a heart attack by bringing Morey in😉 and sending nakku hurling into the water😲😲 don't we know what's next🤢...she would be saved by someone 😡 whose sole aim in life is to fix his eyes on her😆😆 promo's are always fun ...clearly this one is rising curiosity in everyone...anyway meri spark...viji! Thank you for the wonderful comments...always brings a smile on my face...no need to explain why haa u know that very well ...hopefully we meet soon...take care you ...love you 24/7 😳 phir milenge chalte chalte 🤗
bring it on😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

FF Removed by Writer.

Edited by .iridescence. - 6 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww poor naku




all her efforts went downhill





loved Ds jealousy





n every1 'stares' loool




thnx 4 pm








pls cont soon...loved tasha momnt at the end...wnaaa see moreee <3




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Posted: 13 years ago
what a brilliant chapter,dutta bhag chuka jitna bhagna tha pyar se ab kya hoga agey. soch k bhi soch nahin pa rahi, well i suppose i have to wait . i hope not too serious injury to Arjun. thanks for ud. long may u continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
res :)

edited:
Daya Daya Daya...
what an ending ... seriously I was gobsmacked! how you welded it in so perfectly! Uffo!
I love how you portray Naku's character, her and Dutta are so stubborn lol.
I'm guessing Roops and Varun will get romantically involved...
I love how they were so oblivious to TaSha's little love story.
I am still just so shocked with how you ended the chapter, I mean I wasn't expecting Morey for another couple of chapters. and how Arjun and Dutta ran after her! Loved that Arjun was beating him black and blue but he got shot!!!!! another shocker, this morey better be hunted down.
and wow Tasha hug!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃 Although not in the best situation, it's still a hug!
thank u daya for such an awesome update i cannot wait for the next part, you've left me on the edge!
luv u
tc
xoxo
Edited by meriyaar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update nakku annoyed for dutta and now her father and jagtap know about dutta and everyone teases her nakku secret out infront of morey nakku ran in jungle and dutta following her and arjun weas shot tasha in jungle dutta consoling her please update soon can't wait and want morey pitayi from dutta
Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update👏 Catching up after a long time😊
Naku is annoyed at not being able to understand Datta's mind. The day off was a good decision. Morey, Naku meeting was quite unexpected. liked the way Arjun beat him. It'stime for Naku to get over her fear. Waiting for the next part. Thanks fro the PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
I,Me& Myself...hammie woz here and will be back..
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Posted: 13 years ago
okie the nightmare continues😆😆😆 D wanted to fight his feelings for Nakku by sleeping off😃 but has been pulled back by Shalu😡 to continue with it
champ i am not letting u off the hook 😡 just because u wrote "nakku's eyes lock with D for a 'brief moment'" i have had enough of their eyelock ...do u hear me...hello😆😆😆
hmm i seem to like varun, seems spunky, nice intro😃... so, he has a degree in psychology, i am sure u have something in store for him😉 anyways i am not commenting on the two love birds🤢 lost in each others gaze🤢🤢 at this moment 😡 u fixed that yourself by sending Roops in😈😆😆
nakku is banging pots and talking to herself 😈 yedi pagal ho gayi😃 OMG ganpat and jagtap dada think her to be their "innocent sweet little one"😕😕😕 and i thought Jagtap dada was smart😔 he is talking about dutta being like 'ice' and nakku being the one to melt him with her warmth...u too dada😒
hmmm SP thinks everyone needs a break and they go on a picnic😃 but no one cares about giving me a break from "DN gazing " torture😭😭😭😆😆😆
jokes apart, champ loved yr desciption of the picnic site...yup will sure be great for camping😛. ahaa D has to offer his hand to haul up nakku 😳 he is mighty scared of varun😆😆 but after all the ignoring he did of nakku the whole week he is highly offended when she does the same😆 the boys teach the girls to skip rocks on water and it is nakku's turn...ofcourse she cannot and D is there to teach her 🤢🤢🤢 yeah he loves teaching stuff when it requires stance, form, angle (remember the MAA training) 😡😡 saab 😒 next time u teach it should be done only with a board and marker nothing physical😭
Finally baaji😳 comes to my rescue😛 as usual😆 loved his 'trouble releasing hand' remark🤣 i told u he is the smart one😃. The group decides to play volleyball and nakku leaves to impress the oldies🤢 dava deni hain 🤢... ek bhi mauka nahi chodti..she has all the tricks up her sleeve😡😆😆😆
oh i loved the cute puppy 😛 my favourite😳 hmm at least nakku and i have something in common😆 so she picks up the puppy and bumps into Morey😲😲😲 thank God she was spotted by the watchful eyes of Arjun and D, oh the fear of re-living the darkest day of your life her desire to run away from it blindly is totally justified, but poor Arjun is shot in the process only after beating Morey to pulp though😈 and that is not the end of it for D swears to hunt him down too later😃 can't wait for that day😛
nakku is trembling and D pacifies her and calms her down😳 but gadha😕 tries to pull her off when she is finally in his arms hugging him for dear life😆😆
lovely update champ😛 but u sure know when to scoot😡 bring your bottoms back here and continue😆😆😆
love u 24x7
spark 😛
Edited by chithoo - 13 years ago

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