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Posted: 14 years ago
@Tink !
heyyy you are here and i am smiling big cuz i know where u gonna post next hehe...now imma get down to ur comments so excited 😃

oh tink u couldn't believe it ended lol ...i was like wen will this update end haha ...i posted and realized it became sooo long..i was on a role sitting in my uni class writing this as the prof read off her powerpoint slides lol ...made my three hrs go by fast ...as for missy and updating...lol i wish i knew how long she will take ...she told me last weekend or maybe before that ...but still no sign of anything ...

aww tinks thank you thank you ...am glad you enjoyed it...I spent alot of time and brain energy on this one...u noe the very first scene i re-wrote like 10 times no joke...oh i love that song ...and omg u listened to it while u read aww it brings it together na...am glad u did that...lol yeah i thought about that after but by then i think most read it anyway so left it as is...am glad u enjoyed that dance sequence that was another scene where i had such a hard time just starting the whole lead to the dance and then the passing the parcel game came to mind lol...so used I used it! lol

itz good that u wrote off top of head lol ...this way i get exactly what ur thinking...

yeah i needed to make this dosti pakka na...give their relationship something to start on...yup she force feeds and he to everyones surprise gives in...*SHOCK* haha and yup i used that one grain of rice line that u left for missy i believe lol i was like that line needs to go in next update and voila i fit it in perfectly ! ...shine hun that part was really liked by all lol ...yup ur presence defo made its mark!

ahhhahaha omg u were on a bus reading this ...not a wise move ...i did that so many times...trust i think some ppl have labelled me crazy lol...aww i brought a smile to ur face ...that makes me feel great :D

watching a movie with commentating on...lol...aww thanks everyone has own style ...and am glad u think mine is one of its kind...yeah me and missy have really diff styles ...but the FF still follows through well together which is a good thing..i think :P

tasha making good progess with their relationship...haha AS asking who cooks better...lol even i dunno ...acutally I do know...but i'm not gonna say who he would've said LOL...Naku and her nautunki glad u liked the idea...i thought it would be a good little gesture to show how she gets her way but she truly cares...and there is a side of her that is like Baaji LOL ...lmao ..haha good u caught that i think u are only one to catch that dizziness and stomach pain ...her faking...good job...but u r tink hai na...so not surprised one bit... OMG Tink ...ROFL fling fromt he past ...paap ki nishani haye bagawan ...LMAO!!

haha omg that Baaji-Naku teasing scene...even i was laughing writing it...and button scene tink not btwn TaSha? hmm toh phir kaun... Baaji-Roops...or Baaji -Dutta LOL ...or even Dutta-Guarav...since they are always hold each others shirts maybe they break the buttons..and then force the other to do it ROFL ...sorry...that was random or what...oh haayye who wouldnt want to see his six pack!

haha i am drowning u in Dutta's gesutures...yup he winked and so damn cutely too ...*daya daydreams*

oh tink i understand why only Dutta looks are highlighted more over Nakus...dont worry even I was watching him only ...but he was watching her na :P

omg yes I wanted Baaji to be the one to cause the dance I thought about how to do this scene for a week before it hit me ! Baaji is such a smarty na :P haha omg tink that bug crawling around is irritating LOL
I am ready to hit it!

omg that dancing filmy comments tink LOL ...i love ur filmy side!!!

oh i love ishq hua as well :D use it for Baaji-Roops it would be great :D

aww tink am really glad u liked it...am glad that dance sequence was vivid ...was aiming for that...oh love that comments...compliments...all of it...especially the filmy things ...thanks tinks *hugs*

lots of love
Daya
Edited by daya0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome coment..loved it..not gona comented lol sinc daya alredy has lol ^
but gt 2 tel ya...dat bug emotican nerly gav me a heart atak [not literally lol] ... i was lyk wt*..am i seiing thngz...dd realise it l8r dat it was ur shaitani :P LOL
btw am so glad u lyk d song choices...aakhir maine choose kiye the ;-) wa dd u fote bout d poem at d strt...
love u lotshh
xoxo
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Posted: 14 years ago
Dil Pe Kisi Ne Dastak Di,
Tum Ho Ya Tanhayi Hai,

Jagte Hai Wo Aankhon Mein,
Jisne Neend Churayi Hai,

Hosh Ude Hai Aaj Hawaon Ke,
Jaane Kiski Khushbu Aayi Hai,

Tumse Milkar Bhi Tumse Doori Hai,
Pyaar Mein Fasla Zaroori Hai,

Chahe Milna Ho Ya Bichhadna Ho,
Ek Kahani Abhi Adhuri Hai...
ok dis one's for Mish lol...shall I tell u wot I really thought wen I read dis bit...sorry I was so excited about the rest of the ff dat I forgot to cum bak to d beginning lol...my bad...😳,
well... heres the deal...wen I first read dis... had dis kind of weird sensation running thru me...like I cud literally imagine the whole surroundings around me...like the sound of the wind blowing thru my ears...like the way u can hear the sea in the shells, all 4rm just readin the first line...believe it or not...u crate ur own ambience which is awesome...oh shame I spelt awesome wrong in my comment lol..n I spelt it in capitals...😆
n den on the 2nd line u imagine dis vague pair of feminine eyes...being revealed 4rm behind tangles locks...
n on the 3rd line u imagine Dutta gettin a whiff of a fragrance 4rm n unknown source...stranger but yet so wanting to the feeling to remain...
n den the 4th lines, its like they haven't realised wot they've just felt but they no it's each other, but want to give the title of separation to their relationship coz they're scared of acceptin wot maybe waiting round the corner fro them...
n d faasla bit is like the commentating part of tellin wot reality is..
n the last lines finish off for the reader to realise that ur on dis journey wid dem in the story...n makes u feel the depth of their relationship...😳
ok so dats wot I understand 4rm the poem, n need I say dat is just a heavvy talent to have man...to be able to write such in-depth lines with such ease it's fantastic man...hats off to u Mish...😉
n sorry for forgetting dat part...I didn't really forget it but it jus slipped my mind lol...😆😉
but neway spesh 4u...😊...sirf tere liye...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
lol yep next is my thread...but one more place to go after dis...but dat won't take long...😳
yeh I no the dancing can be tough to portray n u did it better den me lol...well I cnt help it had to comment wid the way I felt lol...wich is prob mixed up...😆
lol yeah u bought a smile to my face alryt...only to get ppl lukin at me like i'm a weirdo lol..I dnt usually read ff's n stuff on my cell but coz ur one was long I thought it'd be wise to catch up along the day lol...😆
yep it is gud lol...so no need to fink...😉
yeah ur gonna say Naku innit...😛, well ofc I'd luv Naku's nautanki lol...me n her a alike in dat sense...😆, u no dat wud be gud 2c Dutta get a mini little heart attack knowing Naku's bin around the block lool...😉, n how can I not spot dat bit...yep ur ryt...these r d tings Tink picks up on lol..😉
er actually it was spose to be Baji n Naku lol...bak in chapter 8 or 10 or suttin lol...but cnt be asked now...
hey I luv being filmy lool...dats a part of me seriously...😆
I already used tere naam for Baji n Roops lol...so I cnt use it ne more😊
hhaaahaaa I thought it wud 'bug' u lool...u can smack it all u want hun..but dat bug ain't goin nowhere...😆...oh dat was funny...well at least I no wot popular lol...I no wot to drop off everytime I want u 2 update lool..n it went down wid Mish pretty well 2...😆
well like I sed I luved commentin on dis one lol...but I wanna c wot happens next Mish...soon...jaldi...chop chop...😆
luv u girls...😉
xx
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

Dil Pe Kisi Ne Dastak Di,
Tum Ho Ya Tanhayi Hai,

Jagte Hai Wo Aankhon Mein,
Jisne Neend Churayi Hai,

Hosh Ude Hai Aaj Hawaon Ke,
Jaane Kiski Khushbu Aayi Hai,

Tumse Milkar Bhi Tumse Doori Hai,
Pyaar Mein Fasla Zaroori Hai,

Chahe Milna Ho Ya Bichhadna Ho,
Ek Kahani Abhi Adhuri Hai...
ok dis one's for Mish lol...shall I tell u wot I really thought wen I read dis bit...sorry I was so excited about the rest of the ff dat I forgot to cum bak to d beginning lol...my bad...😳,
well... heres the deal...wen I first read dis... had dis kind of weird sensation running thru me...like I cud literally imagine the whole surroundings around me...like the sound of the wind blowing thru my ears...like the way u can hear the sea in the shells, all 4rm just readin the first line...believe it or not...u crate ur own ambience which is awesome...oh shame I spelt awesome wrong in my comment lol..n I spelt it in capitals...😆
n den on the 2nd line u imagine dis vague pair of feminine eyes...being revealed 4rm behind tangles locks...
n on the 3rd line u imagine Dutta gettin a whiff of a fragrance 4rm n unknown source...stranger but yet so wanting to the feeling to remain...
n den the 4th lines, its like they haven't realised wot they've just felt but they no it's each other, but want to give the title of separation to their relationship coz they're scared of acceptin wot maybe waiting round the corner fro them...
n d faasla bit is like the commentating part of tellin wot reality is..
n the last lines finish off for the reader to realise that ur on dis journey wid dem in the story...n makes u feel the depth of their relationship...😳
ok so dats wot I understand 4rm the poem, n need I say dat is just a heavvy talent to have man...to be able to write such in-depth lines with such ease it's fantastic man...hats off to u Mish...😉
n sorry for forgetting dat part...I didn't really forget it but it jus slipped my mind lol...😆😉
but neway spesh 4u...😊...sirf tere liye...😆

omg normaly its u who says it but i rely cudnt hav analysed it beter myseld...spesh d way u described d 1st line...its so true..evn i felt d same ... the whole thng at d end mkes u feel lyk somethngs missing...incomplete [[[omg i wil b churying des lines wen me n daya end dis ff>>Adhoori Saans Thi Dhadkan Adhoori Thi Adhooren Ham Magar Ab Chaand Poora Hain Falak Pe Aur Ab Pooren Hain Ham ]]]]😉😳
i ddn write it all honey ...cuz as u kno i can b such a lazy cow ... i tink of cupl of lines n den search it n find a poem dat best describes wa im feelin/lookin 4...tkes agez i tel u..
haha even i noticed ur aw'e'some' lol but i cnt complain sinc i do d sme😆😆😆
nd nor worries bout u 'missin' dat out lol hota hai hota hai *salman ishtyle mein* or is it bare bare deshoun mein aise choti choti baatein hoti rehti hai *SRK ishtyle*😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

omg normaly its u who says it but i rely cudnt hav analysed it beter myseld...spesh d way u described d 1st line...its so true..evn i felt d same ... the whole thng at d end mkes u feel lyk somethngs missing...incomplete [[[omg i wil b churying des lines wen me n daya end dis ff>>Adhoori Saans Thi Dhadkan Adhoori Thi Adhooren Ham Magar Ab Chaand Poora Hain Falak Pe Aur Ab Pooren Hain Ham ]]]]😉😳
I know innit...but wen I came to breakdown I just wrote how I imagined it right, coz dat is wot I want lol...so I know dats wot u want...😆
i ddn write it all honey ...cuz as u kno i can b such a lazy cow ... i tink of cupl of lines n den search it n find a poem dat best describes wa im feelin/lookin 4...tkes agez i tel u..
well it dnt really matter coz it went wid the whole chapter n actually described it 4rm beginning to end in those few paragraphs...so hun it still takes brains to put suttin dats already der to suttin ur creatin 4rm scratch...n dats wot u did...wich takes talent...😉
haha even i noticed ur aw'e'some' lol but i cnt complain sinc i do d sme😆😆😆
d fact dat I wrote it in capitals makes it pretty obvious innit...😆
nd nor worries bout u 'missin' dat out lol hota hai hota hai *salman ishtyle mein* or is it bare bare deshoun mein aise choti choti baatein hoti rehti hai *SRK ishtyle*😉😆
well u no me I won't refuse a gud bollywood line lol...so I'll happily accept both...😳😉, but between u n me, I prefer the Salman Khan's lines lol...r u surprised...😲😆

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