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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

er no actually u sed dat u sed the no sorry wala dialogue here, n I sed u didn't, u sed the hota hai hota hai one here...n u sed no...n I sed I'll prove it, n now u cum bak wid senorita lol...n btw i'm sure u sed the senorita dialogue wid dis one 2, a couple of pages bak...I'm knackered ryt now so cnt b bothered to luk...but will find out lol...n no u didn't confuse me lo...I've learnt to keep up...n akhir main marketing bhi tho promote karni hai lol...😆😉oh eff it all man...its so confusing..even i cba diggin up 4 it lol😆

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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#522

Almost done writing the next update

Definately will be up by tonight :)

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Hamlet53

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Posted: 14 years ago

#523

good to hear that missy looking forward to having a good read.

regards xhammie

Edited by Hamlet53 - 14 years ago

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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: Hamlet53
good to hear that missy looking forward to having a good read.
regards xhammie

thnx hun...i hope i dnt disappoint ny1 sinc its very diff from my last update wich was quite humourous😳

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Hamlet53

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Posted: 14 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

thnx hun...i hope i dnt disappoint ny1 sinc its very diff from my last update wich was quite humourous😳

koi nehi chalay gaa ! Iam sure it will be engaging like before..humour or morose!

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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

koi nehi chalay gaa ! Iam sure it will be engaging like before..humour or morose!

hammie..need ur help...chk ur pm.x

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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#527

NOTE: erm...er..OhMiGod guys okay ikno...ikno you all are redy2 kill me and i can totally underestand ...and thi s time i cannot even say sorry since ikno it wont be enough...so i giv up..u can do woteva u like *missy puts her hands up in defeat* ...but before u do anything please do read the long due update below and comment and then may you proceed with the rest...so for now ENJOY...

PREVIOUS CHAPTER..x

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/laagi-tujhse-lagan/1654447/ff-benaam-ek-rishta-discontinued?pn=56

CHAPTER 5...x

Thehre hue paani mein kankar na maar saanwre
mann mein hulchul si mach jaayegi baanwre
thehre hue paani mein kankar na maar

tere liye hu main anjaani
mere liye hai tu begana
begaane ne anjaani ka
dard bhala kaisa pehchana
jo iss duniya ne na jaana
thehre hue paani mein kankar na maar saanwre
mann mein hulchul si mach jaayegi baanwre
thehre hue paani mein

sab phoolon ke hai deewane
kaaton se dil kaun lagaye
bhole raahi main hu kaata
kyon apna daaman uljhaaye
rab tujhko kaaton se bachaye
thehre hue paani mein kankar na maar saanwre
mann mein hulchul si mach jaayegi baanwre
thehre hue paani mein

timhi bataao kaise basegi
dil ke armaanon ki basti
khwaab adhure reh jaayenge
mit jaayegi inki hasti
chalti nahi hai ret pe kashti
thehre hue paani mein kankar na maar saanwre
mann mein hulchul si mach jaayegi baanwre
thehre hue paani mein

Hearing the sound of the applause brought me out of my trance and into the real world. Quickly getting out of Dutta's embrace i tried to compose myself without any luck though. As i glanced up at our audience whom we have seemed to be entertaining for god knows how long, i felt myself go red all over... now why isn't this surprising me huh...God these are the times you just wish the earth would open and swallow you whole, anything to make myself disappear and save self from any more embarrassment.

Naku not taking a risk of glancing up again makes her self to plaster on a fake smile just so not to look rude while everyone praised their dance. Of course Baji did not and wouldn't ever dare miss a moment to pull their legs butted in. 'kya Bhau..Vehini..kya mast dance kiya..ek dum dil khol ke...wah mazah aagaya'. 'waise Bhau aapki nazar toh vehini ke chehre se toh hatatich nahi thi kyu...' 'aue vehin aap...aap toh Bhau ke khwaboon mein aise dhobi ke apne sab audience ko bhool gayi...ek dum hero, heroine mafik'. 'Bilkul barobar bola re Baji' Sana [guest] chirped in 'kya dono ne dance kiya..sach mein dono saath mein kitne pyare lag rahe the'. Next Arjun spoke up [guest] 'Haan haan bilkul!! Waise bhi woh kya kehte hain...Rab ne bana di Jodi!!' everyone looked at the two 'love birds' in awe whilst TaSha blushed profusely and rather wished for something else 😆. Soon after all the guests left but not without teasing the couple the whole time, TaSha had no choice but to go along it all...

After the party Naku and Dutta, both seemed to be lost in their own world. As Naku retired to bed early, she couldn't help going scarlet all over again. The thought of Dutta so close, his warm breath was causing havoc, sending weird sensations throughout her body. She felt like there was some kind of explosion inside her when she felt Dutta's grip tighten around her waist. Causing unknown emotions to surface, emotions she never felt before, emotions she never knew existed. 'Man did that feel good...like I'm meant to be here...with him...in his arms...so close. It just felt so...so perfect...mann ne toh chaha keh bas waqt yahan hi tham jaye' she thought dreamily. Uski ek chhuwan se jaaga yeh kaisa Ehsaas...pehle toh mehsus hui na mujhko aisi pyaas... Naku kept on having flashbacks of their dance, as if her mind was set on replay. 'yeh mujhe kya ho gaya hai..kyun itna soch rahi hoon un ke bare mein...Baji ke ishtyle mein lagta hain mera bhi koi chemical locha ho gaya hai...of oh...I better stop thinking about him man, he's already confusing enough so I don't even want to go there. Plus he's only my friend' Naku putting her hand on her temple thought irritatingly. 'And a sweet one too. Gosh that smile of his is infectious and his lips and oh those eyes that pull you towards him like a magnet in full force...there was some sort of gravitational pull towards him, which you simple cannot refuse nor avoid but to go towards it. Once you look into those deep eyes, you surely have no control over yourself...chah ke bhi nazar chura nahi sakte..na mumkin hai...pehle toh darr lagta tha nazar milane se. Abh toh aise lagta hai ke abh aur nahi...bas aaj toh un gehri lehron mein dhoobte hi jana hai..bina kisi darr ke..bina kisi jijak ke... yeh kaisa ehsaas hai...bhooj keh bhi nahi bhujhti..yeh kaisi pyaas hai...aaj ki raat mein aisa yeh kya nasha hai keh bin peeye dil behkne laga hai..' she sighed heavily, getting a dreamy look in her eyes once again

Gaalo ki laali dekh aaine mein

soch mein par gari main

aankhon me bhi yeh chamak kaisi

uljhan me par gayi main

mann se poochi tujhe hua hai kya...

tan ko jala rahi baat hai kya...

yeh mujhe aaj hua hai kya..

soch mein par gayi main...

ek raat mein mujhe hua hai kya..

saanson mein meetha ehsaas hai kya..

yeh kahan kho gayi tujhe pata hai kya..

dil se puchi main...

kyun lag raha hai sab naya..

yeh mujhe aaj hua hai kya..

sawaalon mein uljha reh gayi main...

On the other hand, Dutta feeling a little suffocated in that room so sitting outside in the swing in deep thoughts. Like Naku even his thoughts were out of control today, contradicting his persona very much, he couldn't seem to take his mind of the events of the evening. Trying hard to fight against his wild thoughts. 'Yeh kaise jazbaat hain jo phir se meri zindagi mein chupke se laut rahe hain, jinhe mein kabhi uss ke liye mehsoos karta hai. Aaj woh Naku...nahi yeh mein kya soch raha hoon...in ankahee jazbaatun par kabu pana utna hi mushkil hota hai jitna...jitna keh tab mushkil tha jab...jab woh mere paas thi...aise hi jaise supriya...' Dutta stops his thought right there, clenching his fist tighter. Closing his eyes he moves his head up as if trying to take all his frustration out some how. This only leads his mind to wonder around freely...the flashbacks of Naku in her simple yet elegant salwar kameez...the way her hair fell on her face acting as an obstruction to his view...damn one can easily feel themselves loosing their senses in her long beautiful locks. Dil ki dhadkan ko phir se kisi ne cher khani ki ho jaise...un dabe hue jazbaaton ko phir se kisine jagah diya ho jaise...un anderi aur sunsaan galliyun mein phir se roshini ki ek kiran dikhayi ho jaise...un bikhre huwe hue tukrun ko phir se zinda kar diya ho jaise...[[tried to write a full poem all by myself lol]].

Rather surprised and angry at his thoughts, he suddenly jolts up. 'Yeh kya ho raha hai!!!!' [[full on dutta ishtyle]] he roared while looking up, his face suddenly gone from slender with a sense ease to stiff..his face muscles contracting...veins slightly more visible as the blood passed through them at a much quicker pace...his eyes had a hint of roughness in them. Suddenly, moments of his past flash before his eyes...with every memory his anger shot up...every thought...every moment...everything coming back. Dutta gets off the swing and hits a pole. What the hell was he thinking...how could he let it go this far...

Dil ka dard ruk na payega,
Jo hui hulchul itefaak se bhi,
To ghamon ka paimana chhalak jayega

Mat de hawa dabi hui un chingaariyon ko,
Warna tera bhi daaman is aag se jal jayega

Kaid hai jo dariya in aankhon mein,
Mat de usko aur ashko ke moti,
Nahi to woh bhi bewajah beh jayega

Kaise bhool pauga woh beete hue pal,
Kaise mita pauga uski yaadein is dil se,
Jab usi ka hi ehsaas meri har saans se ayega

Yeh woh zakhm hai jo mile hai wafa ke badle,
Yeh woh tohfe hai jo uski nishaniyan hai,
Agar kahu usko bewafa to daag mohabbat pe lag jayega

Chala jauga mehfilon se tanhai mein
Aur phir dhoondhuga mehfilon ko hi tanhai mein,
Shayad yehi ek aakhri mukaam zindagi mein ayega

Kyun bichha ke baithu main nigaahe uski raahon mein,
Kyun karoo aaj bhi intezaar uske aane ka "JASSI"
Waqt woh bhi na raha to waqt yeh bhi chala jayega

Waqt woh bhi na raha to waqt yeh bhi chala jayega

To Be Continued...

Thank you for much for reading it guys...hope i ddnt bore u all with such a long update...x

Do press 'LIKE' if u liked it and leave your precious comments...good or bad...all will be much appreciated.x 😉😳😆

ps. Sincere apologies for any grammatical errors.x😳

Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago

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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#528

^^ ALL: Will pm asap...

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jagrutid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#529

wow! ok first ever to do this..never had first place on an ff i think but chalo..review time!! and OMG i loved it ..kya shayrana andaaz hai!!!😆..seriously your very good with words and that totally made the update short but so sweet. Do i have to say that the two scenes were amazing!!🤗 Nakusha all dreamy eyed for dutta and dutta well bless him hes begining to feel him self get lost in the world of love once again..he so loves her and omg! nakusha's feelings for him..pyaar ho raha hai..to be honest i would want nakusha to realize her love for husband and then make him fall in love. In my eyes he's like 10 percent already there so baaki ki 90 percent mein help chahida which nakusha will provide.
Would really love to see nakusha slowly realising that she loves her husband..o!!! ok ..too much thinking..😍
thank you so much for this love it!
jagruti

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naina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#530

good one missy,let see how they will realize their love for each other.please add me to your pm list and pm me when you update next.thanks for a lovely update. 😊

Edited by krishaa - 14 years ago

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