FF:Benaam Ek Rishta||discontinued|| - Page 50

Originally posted by: daya0628

I am with missy u update...my update was triple urs maybe more so we get extra time to write...hai na missy...lol ...now u update before me and missy hijack ur thread...😛😆

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

woohoo me got daya on my side..so no worries!! *hugs 2 my darling* MWAHHh

so prncz wa do u say..update karti ho ya phir ham tumhari threat hijack kar le lol

oh hun i am totally with u here...only cutting some slack to raj ...because she doing important paperwork...but until u update no demands from us right missy 😛

Oh boy ,, i dint knw

Originally posted by: prncz

Oh boy ,, i dint knw

the looong update u gave was for the loss of weeks u update late BEFROE and not gained TIMe for AFTER ok .?

. so the loong update u gave was for the time u lost before u updated .

and thnks for giving me time to do my wrk ,,but hey i need to remind missy and u ,, dnt forget BER ok ?

alreight i thnk me will not demand for an update but can remind na 😉

haha yes u can remind...missy has starting trouble 😆
and i have two other FF to worry about
BTW missy u need to comment on those...ur purple/pink fun comments are missing 😭

as for the time buying ...ok welll that was VERY VERY long so it made up for delay and bought time 😛

Originally posted by: daya0628

haha yes u can remind...missy has starting trouble 😆
and i have two other FF to worry about
BTW missy u need to comment on those...ur purple/pink fun comments are missing 😭

as for the time buying ...ok welll that was VERY VERY long so it made up for delay and bought time 😛

^ i know u have many to comment on still lol...and i know u read them...haha ur excited about AKK ...i think this part has gotten all excited...as no one knows whats coming next ...and the story is all out in the open...i have to write next for that too ..but atm working on ahem ahem BAAD ❤️😆

Originally posted by: daya0628

^ i know u have many to comment on still lol...and i know u read them...haha ur excited about AKK ...i think this part has gotten all excited...as no one knows whats coming next ...and the story is all out in the open...i have to write next for that too ..but atm working on ahem ahem BAAD ❤️😆

Omg dat was fantastic !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! As iI was reading the party bit I cudn't bring myself to believe dat the update ended'.. L Mish u bes update fast or I will haath do ke peeche par u lool

Daya dat was awesome girlll I'm sooo like not outta of ur ff world dat I cant really tell y in exact words how I'm feeling lol''but seriously the mahol u created was superb n the song'.haye haye haye''aaawww I'm gonna go crazy dat was just such a fantastic choice'but heres a truth I actually played the song off of utube'..n it was sooo sooo soo sooo much better'..everyone shud do dat'.wicked wicked song choice I cudn't hav picked a better song ! 😃

So now I've calmed down a bit'.I'm takin a few breaths to get myself to calm down lol'.but yeh lemme start 4rm the beginning now'.the tings dat were on top on my head is wot I wrote first'I dnt even fink I was finkin while typin all dat 'hehehee..😳😳

So 1^st we have saru Dutta being all macho n angry'.n den we get Naku tending to his wounds'.woohooo'.n kya style hai, ek raat mein hi dosti dil pyar vyar sab kuch hogaya'.well sorta lol'..they had all the fantasies ova nyt lol'well minus one'.hehehe'..😆

Luv how Naku, force feeds him lol, n he accepts'I dunno wich one is a bigger miracle'..😲

'.and u used my line in a comment I left in ur ff'me finks'.heheee'..yeh but I feel kinda special now'.I feel like I'm starring in ur ff lol'.I no, I no, no tin the true sense'.but still my presence has still made it's mark'.n ofc I hav Superwoman n young Sherlock Holmes 4 dat loool'. But really I feel overwhelmed dat u thught of using those lines for u ff'n believe it or not ryt I was on the bus wen I was readin the beginning part'.n started laughing to myself'.n I started get glances 4rm bear ppl lol'.n I was sooo like Dayaaa I'm gonna kill u'..well not really ofc'but u no wot I mean (well I hope u do lol) but seriously fanks 4 bringing dat smile on my face babez😉

U no wen I was reading ur ff do u no wot u reminded me of'now dis is a gud ting k'so dnt b finkin I'm dissin u, yeh'.but it felt like I was watching a movie wid the commentating on lol'seriously the way u write it's one its kind'.n it kinda gives the ff a different feel, dunno if u following me here lol, but yeh its gud coz Mish stands apart wen she writes her chapters n u in ur own style'.😊

But y no I do wonder y Dutta dnt like eating food 4rm outside lol'..yeh aadmi kabhi ghar ki daal khaate khaate takhta nahin'???😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

So they're making friends god dat sounds so sissified lmao'.but yeh u can really feel the comfortable atmosphere between them now as a reader wich is gud progress'. (who am I kiddin dis is gr8 progress !) '..u no wen AS asked the ? about who's cooking was better the truth is I really wanted to c how Dutta wudda answered dat man'😳.n den bam Naku ko bhi abhi yaad aayi apni nautanki lol'😡😕.btw really gud idea u no'I thought she was fakin it'.warna sar chakrayin n pedh mein dard hoying to ek hi isharan karta hai na'..yep''pregnancy !!!!!! n I thought now they cant hav moved tings dat fast lol'or or orrr maybeee Naku had a fling 4rm b4 marriage lol😲😆'.n uski paap ki nishani uske peeche peeche chali aayi to bigar her shaadi shuda zindagi lool'ok now I'm exaggerating but I cudnt help it wen these kinda tings jus pop in my head 'n dat is UR fault btw coz u decided to make her hav stomach cramps n feel all dizzy lol'..to reader bechara kya kare'??!!?? Heheee😆🤣😆

N omg Naku's little actin wid Baji was hilarious man, dat is so wot I'm like I luv teasing ppl spesh Bollywood/Hollywood style lol'..so I'm a fan ! 😃

Hey u no I was spose to hav a button scene to but u no I totally forgot about it'..not b/n tasha though'.but neva mind, I jus membered wen I read ur part'.if I was Dutta's wife (haaaye dat sounds so gud) I wud break every single one of his buttons lol''.who cares if I'm not in luv wid him, at least I get to take a look at his six pack lol 😳😳😳

n omg Dutta winks at Naku'.I wud pause dat moment n rewind it time n time agen lol'.in fact put it on a roll and frame it in a digital photo frame lol'.seriously Dutta n winking'I myt jus cut out Naku jus 4 da sake of her spoilin the pic'..get wot I mean'😉😉😉😉

n party partaaayyy whoop whoop !!! raaazziii lallalaaallaaa la laaalaalal raaaziii sorry cudnt help myself'

so Dutta luks sooo tikkk man guys in black make me go gaga lol''yeh Naku luks ok 2'.heeehheee

but seriously luv the way Dutta gets lost in her beauty, eat ur heart out Dutta coz she's all urs !

u no even I thought wot is Baji gonna do wid pass on the parcel lol'but yeh does dis guy surprise me'.I fink yeeaahhh totally lool, but his efforts r gr8 to help his friend innit'.but he shud cut sum slack now coz now dat they're friends he shud give demt ym to develop dat friendship further, b4 he tries to shoot the luv arrows in their asses loool...u no wot Baji's like, he's like those irritating bugs dat just won't leave u alone lool...dw i can demonsrtate lol...😆...I'm gonna leave a bug 4u 2 u no how it feels...😆

hey u no the part where they say 'dance for us bhau' I was like nahiiin basantiii in kutho ke saamne matt naachna loool, I cud so imagine a buzzin Dutta sayin dat to her lol'n den Naku will b like nahin veeru main naachungi''haaan jab tak hai jaaa main nachungi'.😆😆😆

Sorry u no me n filmy acts n songs just go hand in hand given the scene n a song dat cums to mind almost immediately lol😳😳

Oh just hav to say luved the song man big big tym nice choice''n ishq hua haye I lurve dat song even more'.dat was the song I was gonna use first 4 Baji n Roops 'luv is on the air' u no'.u just reminded me of dat'.

But overall I luved the update sooo much I cnt say it enufff''but the way u described the dancing was really spot on'.so vivid in wot ur trying to portray in words'.one word to sum it all up

AWSOME !!!

Btw I actually really enjoyed writing dis comment lol'.I dnt even no wot I wrote half of the time lol'coz I was so excited writing it all'.dat I just typed out my thoughts literally'.if I've forgotten suttin den I'll be bak lool'.bilkul terminator style'

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

RESERVED 😉

As promised Mish n Daya, I've left a comment literally, so Mish dnt b mad, n Daya I'm leaving my glittering self here to remind u 'I will be bak'...😉

( I sound like the Terminator lol )

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