The Second Chances upd Epilogue pg63 on 22thFeb

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Yuvika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: shilpita87
Arey tu predict kar na fir maaza ayega...😆

haha i do wna bt m sure knwin my predictions u'll change the story line jus 2 annoy me😆😉

lol bt one thing tht wud b funi 2 c is a cat fat between avanti n naku n dutta trying to pull them apart😆😆😆....wer avanti starts it off and is proper mean 2 naku..tht wud b so cool...

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#212

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Ahhh im actually speechless... i have used all words man.. need some new words for u...

Ermmm beautifully written man... 😳

Thank god he wnt sell it.. aww he's so cute... and I love naksh's reply to him dat she didnt forgive him for leaving her 5 yrs ago.. too good...

Ohh even doe Avantika is nice.. i dnt want her between TaSha.. lol he shouted at her for A.. i agree Nakku was rude.. but its cause out of the blue,, he came home and introduced a girl den suddenly saw them kissing.. 😲 I mean.. common i wud have acted the same but aww she apologised.. 😳Hmm Avantika understood that Nakku knows D better than anyone else... and she didnt need any1s help to understand D... 😳 that's cause they are soulmates😳...

Fabulous Update... Thanks for the PM... Continue soon😳

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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: kiran255
OH MY GOD Shilpi
This FF of urs will drive me crazy !

PAst part 1

This chap was i think more abt Naku understanding

YOUu xpressed Naku position so amazingly

how can u point out something bad in a girl who is very close to perfect

LOve Naku reply to Avanti

i so love it

i would have done same

and Dutta raection so harsh yet practical !

Past part 2

well i love the way DUTta tries understanding her

love his convo with his mommy !

and Tasha rejoicing their childhood !

love them

Past part 3

oh well best part

Naku is a sweetheart

she do everyting for Dutta

loved Avanti Naku convo

no one understands Dutta more than Naku

so love this

present part 1

love How Naku is stil angry at DUtta

and how he is trying to please her

present part 2

oh Dutta pleading her to wear green color dress :)

and Naku reply to him is so awesome

shilpi how can u write so amazingly

i swear its one of its kind

i love reading and believe me i have never come across amazing writing as urs xcept Umera Ahmed (she is my fav writer in the world )

and u are of her Caliber

u write so beautiful !

and u know i dont want this FF of urs to stop

even if u write 20 pages

its never enough for me !

LOve it

update fast !

hey kiran didn kno u wer a big fan of umera ahmed lol i acutaly herd alot bout hr n kno sum of hr bukz aswel...thnx 2 my mum who is lyk hr bigest fan!! wen ever she readz hr bookz she has 2 tel me da whol story n stf...shez olwaiz lyk i wish u cud read urdu i wud forc u 2 read hr bukz!! lool glad 2 find a fafn of hrz on IF!😆😳

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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hey shilp dont need 2 b sory hun..i lvud it toatli....wudn hav minded readn it evn if it wz longa!! (dat jus shwz hw much we ol luv readn ya ff!)😆

i feel so sory 4 N bles hr she hrself dsnt undrstnd y she behavd in such mannr poor thng...

rly liked dat AS is mkin D unststnd y naku behvd so irrationaly😳

awhh luvd d lil wlk dey had..dat momnt wz soo special 4 em bth😳

avanti bbe u seem lyk a rely sweet girl bt u r damn intelignt n im hoping d fact da u undestood at derz ffar mor 2 it b/n tasha even tho dey havnt realizd it...wel dear hope u act upon dat aswel😈

awhh naku understndz D so wel...no wonda avanti mustv felt hurt dat she ddn undrstnd D bt den agen shez nt Ds soul m8..ONLY naku is!!😳😆

so glad nakuz givn dutta cold shouldrz lol😆 dat idiot desrvz it!

awh he liked d green dres n she wudn evn try it😆

she 4gve hm bt nt 4 leavn..wel am sur D wil mke up 4 da 5yrz hez bin awy (wont he shilpi...?) he ebta do owa wise N wud nva 4giv hm..

btw dd D realiz d impact/affect he has on naku...ukno wa wiv dat whol leanin on hr shoulda n wisperin scne...😉😳

beautifuly writen bbe

thnx 4 pm..

continue soon

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Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

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Posted: 14 years ago

#215

shipi........awesome part..........Dutta shouted at Naku for Avanti.......i know Naku was little rude.......AS is right Dutta is not understanding her properly..........she apologised.........n Avanti thinks Naku understand him better than her..........good........she realised it fast..........update soon....................

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kiran255

@kiran255

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Posted: 14 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: shilpita87

OMG....you humble me kiran....i don't know if i really deserve it..but it gives me lot of encouragement...i hope i never disappoint you guyz...when you and prettywoman vandu write such things i feel ten feet high...my dad will be so proud reading this...i just maied him your comment....he loves reading and he has read umera's stories..i have not but i have heard of her..

thanks a lot yaar..

Well u deserve all the praises !

You know even i tell abt this story my sister and she is head over heels for it

and she is like what happens next

i told her its to be continued

she gets so mad at me

and make me promise to tell me the whole

actually she is married and will be leaving for Dubai in a week

so she hated k she didnt know the ending

everytime i log in she is like

has the FF update :PP

Btw ur daddy should be proud of u

and as i said before u should take it seriously !

YOU are gonna be as big as Shakespere !

BELIeve Me

Btw girl do read Umera Ahmed

urs and her style is so alike

k sometimes i has doubt

k u are Umera Ahmed :)

The way u grap the story without a flaw

its what makes a difference !

Im so proud to be ur reader :D

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kiran255

@kiran255

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Posted: 14 years ago

#217

@Mishelz Girl try to read Umera Ahmed Novels

she is superb

her writing has power to shake the groud u are standing !

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Kavita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#218

My dear Shilpi,

Its been a long time that I have been promising myself to read through the chapters again and today, I went right through "The Second Chances" from the beginning and loved it to the core.

As I told you before I like the way you weave the sensation of a "time web" where the feelings of the different protagonists seem to grow, becoming more entangled, hence making it more difficult for the two friends to perceive the fact that love has grown beyond the bond of childhood bond, teen friendhip/tempatation that both have shared for years. Whilst I appreciate Nakusha's resentment for all forms of foreign intrusion in Dutta's world, it is important that he moves away and samples love/lust with a different person to be able to come to Nakusha wholeheartedly, having given up on all misconstrued sense of filial bonds that would have spelt disaster for them.

I just hope that he does realise and quickly now that Nakusha is the one for him and asking the latter to keep his Ma's mementos is, already , an unconscious way of telling himself that this woman is meant for him and only him. So hurry up with your next update and give us some wonderful Tasha moments. Waisy bhi, hamarey "pyare"😡CVs to apni brand kanjoosi se kabhi bhi baaz nahin honge. You better do the honours.😆

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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: kiran255
@Mishelz Girl try to read Umera Ahmed Novels
she is superb

her writing has power to shake the groud u are standing !

lol how i wish i cud bt da thng is i cnt read urdu bt ukno sum of hr novlz r mde in 2 serial aswele n dey r suprb evn tho am sur it cnt b as gud as da novelz..hav u seen meri zaat zara e beynishaan?? its rli gud n emotionl

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: kiran255

Well u deserve all the praises !

You know even i tell abt this story my sister and she is head over heels for it

and she is like what happens next

i told her its to be continued

she gets so mad at me

and make me promise to tell me the whole

actually she is married and will be leaving for Dubai in a week

so she hated k she didnt know the ending

everytime i log in she is like

has the FF update :PP

Btw ur daddy should be proud of u

and as i said before u should take it seriously !

YOU are gonna be as big as Shakespere !

BELIeve Me

Btw girl do read Umera Ahmed

urs and her style is so alike

k sometimes i has doubt

k u are Umera Ahmed :)

The way u grap the story without a flaw

its what makes a difference !

Im so proud to be ur reader :D

i totali agree wit kiran..shilpi u got a hiden talnt der hun..u shud rely thinkabout dis..am damn sur evri1 wil luv u n ur writin as much as wel ol do!😉😳 x

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