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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Bushy_92

Promo

A girl was fighting with Viraj...
The girl: Galti Tumhari hai toh sorry bhi tumhi bologe....samjhe?
Viraj: Maine zindagi mein aaj tak kisi ko sorry nahi bola hai...and stop accusing me...
The girl: Maine aaj tak tum jitna battameez insaan nahi dekha...
Viraj: Oh hello madam...galti tumhari hai...lekin phir bhi main chup hoon..yeh meri sharafat hai....
The girl glares at him....

To know more keep reading Yeh Mohabbat only on LTL Forum.....😆

hmm nice promo..thts no doubt madhu
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Bushy_92

Promo

A girl was fighting with Viraj...
The girl: Galti Tumhari hai toh sorry bhi tumhi bologe....samjhe?
Viraj: Maine zindagi mein aaj tak kisi ko sorry nahi bola hai...and stop accusing me...
The girl: Maine aaj tak tum jitna battameez insaan nahi dekha...
Viraj: Oh hello madam...galti tumhari hai...lekin phir bhi main chup hoon..yeh meri sharafat hai....
The girl glares at him....

To know more keep reading Yeh Mohabbat only on LTL Forum.....😆

Looks like a new girl fr Viraj..... well this will be a nice LS afterall they met and ended in a fight.....
Nice promo........... looking frwrd fr tne nxt updt........Thanx fr PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
HA!!!that girl is Madhubala😆 I mean Madhu... Thanks for the promo.. Now don't take a month to update😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
but he is going to propose a girl as he learnt from nakku

there is new entry might sister of duji.

thanks for promo
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Posted: 14 years ago
promo soundz reli interestng..hus dat gurl tho?? madhu?? enwy 4 us to be able 2 continue readin ur ff...u first need update na soo jaldi jaldi karo update



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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow shukar hai abh mujhe PM mili hai...lol...
thanks for the PM didi *hugs*
The promo souns intresting cant wait anymore...upload aap
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved both the update and promo...Hai kya mohabat and Viraj is being very rude to the girl..
thanks for PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello everyone....am giving u this update very early...na...😆..ok jokes apart....i have my exams..and i HAVE to study seriously......i have a tough competition......wish me luck guys...😃...so plz bear with me as i can't update other parts regularly until my exams get finished........Sorry guys in advance..hope u understand......😊

This update is exclusively dedicated to our Baji deewani..SOPHIA 😳

Yeh Mohabbat
Part 17

At Pearl Boutique:

Riya was busy with her work.... Baji comes in...Riya was surprised to see him at this hour...

Riya: Baji? Tum yahan? Iss waqt?

Baji: Kyun mujhe yahan aane ke liye appointment leni padegi kya?

Riya: Nahi....but

Baji: No if's nor but's.....meri baat suno...

Riya: Ok....kaho..

Baji: Kya aaj tum apna saara kaam chodkar mere saath date par chalogi?

Riya couldn't believe what she just heard: Kya...? Date par? I mean tum mujhe date par le jaarahe ho? Is that right?

Baji: Haan haan theek hai...itna shock bhi mat ho....main jaanta hoon ki bohat dino se main tumhe kahin bahar nahi legaya isliye toh abhi le jaa raha hoon....batao chalo gi ya nahin?

Riya: Agar maine inkaar kar diya toh?

Baji: Toh uthakar le jaunga...

Riya: Arey wah koi zabardasti hai kya?

Baji: Haan hai toh....?

Riya: Mujhe zabardasti karne wale log pasand nahi hai...

Baji: Lekin tumhare mummy-papa ko toh main pasand hoon...agar tumhe pasand nahi hoon toh theek hai....koi aur ladki dhoond loonga...

Riya: Maar dungi......uss ladki ko....

Baji: Haha....abhi bohat hua...shaam ko 8 baje main tumhe pick karunga tumhare ghar se....taiyyar rehna...ok...*he starts going but stops in the midway and tunrs to blow a kiss at Riya* (Every girl in the boutique look at him.....Baji looks at all of them....he raises his eyes brow)

Baji to all the girls: What? Yeh tum logon ke liye nahi tha.....yeh sirf*pointing at Riya* Uske liy tha....*everyone starts gets busy with their work after smiling at JiYa(Baji+Riya)

Baji: accha janeman taiyyar rehna.....bye...I Love You..

Riya smiles at his childish behaviour.... and says: I Love You Too....

At Mehra Mansion:

Nakku was getting bored as she was free...and didn;t had any work to do....she was walking lazily in her room when she gets a call..it was Dutta..he was getting bored too....He had a plan...

Nakku: Hello?

Dutta: Hello..Nakku..kya kar rahi ho...?

Nakku: Kuch khaas nahi..kyun tumhe kuch kaam hai?

Dutta: Nahi....main bhi ghar mein baithe baithe bore ho raha tha.....toh socha tumhare saath kahin bahar ghoom aaun....kya khayal hai...kahin bahar chalein?

Nakku: Wow....great idea....am ready....

Dutta: Ok then.....15 mins mein main tumhe pick karne aajaunga....bye

Nakku: Ok cya...

Nakku was happy to go out with Dutta...she quickly changes into a white top and black skirt with a pony pushed at the front..she just applied a transparent gloss and she was ready....she avoided too much make up...she comes down and waits for Dutta.....and in no time Dutta was in front of her house....She goes and sits beside him....

Nakku: Chalo....waise hum jaa kahan rahe hain?

Dutta: Jahan tum kaho

Nakku: Ok..ek kaam karte hain...hum beech par chalte hain...haan?

Dutta: Hmm.....ok....*they reach the beach...*

Here Baji comes to Riya's house at 8 pm to pick her up...he was wearing a black jeans a white shirt and a black waist coat with the shirt's sleeves rolled up..he applied some gel on his hair...looking as dashing as ever..Riya comes out....wearing a white knee lenthg dress looking ravishing....Baji cudn't stop himself from loosing in her eyes...he then comes to his senses and opens the door for Riya...after some time Baji stops the car and removes a red ribbon from his pocket....and asks Riya to close her eyes as he wants to tie the ribbon on her eyes....after intial reluctance she agrees and Baji ties the ribbon....he then reaches the place...

Tasha:

Nakku gets out like a small kid and runs to take the fresh air....while Dutta just look at her....until Nakku comes and drags him... They have a lot of fun.....Nakku asks for a gola....she runs and stands in front of the gola wala asking to make multi flavored gola....she takes the gola excitedly and starts sipping it.....she offers it to Dutta...and he sips it too..they sip it together......after the gola Dutta brings ice cream....they have it together....but they start fighting and Nakku spats her whole ice creams on Dutta's face... while Dutta looks on shocked...Nakku laughs holding her stomach....and Dutta wanted to take revenge and he rubs his face with hers rubign all teh cream on her face too.....and eh starts laughing...Nakku looks at Dutta and she laughs with him.....she takes a tissue and rubs the cream from Dutta's face and then she rubes it from her face....but a pinch of cream remains on her nose and Dutta comes forward and licks it....while Nakku closes her eyes....

They then walk hand in hand on the beach leaving their footprints for the waves to wash them....Nakku hits Dutta on his head and runs away from him...Dutta runs to catch her and he holds her by her waist and twirls her around......after some time they have coconut water....only one coconut and two straws.....both lost into each others eyes....soon it was dark....and they were tired now....they decide to go home....

On the way Nakku puts her head on his shoulder and sleeps....Dutta palms her face with his hand and kisses her on her forehead....he remembers all the moments they spent together that day....a sweet smile plays on his lips.....

He stops the car in front of Mehra Mansion....he gets out of the car....and slowly picks up Nakku in his arms...as she was asleep....he takes her to her room and puts her on the ebd....he removes her shoes.....and covers her with duvet till her neck..carasses her face..switches off the lights.... and goes away....

JiYa:

The place was beautifully decorated. He made sure that about the place, it was the beach...as Riya loved beaches and she always talked about her dream date...Baji put his best effort to fulfill Riya's wish....of a dream date....he slowly opens the ribbonw and asks Riya to have a look...She was spell bound....it was decorated so beautifully..and the place looked comfortable...no one was around except them....she looks at Baji....and hugs him tightly....

Riya: Yeh sab kuch tumne kiya....?

Baji hugging her back: Haan....pasand aaya?

Riya: Bohat... I love this place..*lokign at the place*

Baji turns his head to look at her: and I Love You...

Riya blushes and looks down....soon they both sit down....opposite each other....tehy don't talk for a while....but Baji decides to break the silence...

Baji: Err...hum aise behave kyun kar rahe hain jaise hum pehli baar date par aaye ho?

Riya: Actually...tumhe kabhi itna romantic nahi dekha na..isliye abhi tak sadme mein hoon..

Baji: Haha.....Ok issey pehle ki main aur nervous hojaun lemme do this.....

He gets up....and makes Riya gets up as well....Riya was all confused...Suddenly Baji goes on his knees....

Baji: Err....mujhe bhao ki tarah badi badi speeches dena nahi aata....actually......waise toh main bohat bolta hoon lekin jab bhi tum mere saamne aati ho bolti band hojati hai....Riya main jaanta hoon ki kuch dino se main tumhe time nahi de paaraha hoon....bhool gaya tha ki apni zindagi ki sabse important insaan ko neglect kar raha hoon...Main pagal hoon...Riya tum meri zindagi mein sabse upar ho....tum mere saath ho toh mujhe har mushkil aasaan lagti hai...Tumhari ek muskurahat ke saamne duniya ki saari khushiyan chooti pad jaati hai.....Aur main iss muskurahat ko apni aankhon mein hamesha ke liye kaid(lock) karna chahta hoon...

Miss Riya Singh...i would like to have the pleasure of giving u all the happiness of this world....I would like to have the honor of making u my legally wedded wife....Will You*pauses clears his throat* Will u Marry Me? *he asks her with a ring in his hand*

Riya was touched....she coudln't believe what she just heard....she had tears of joy in her eyes and a smile on her face....she quickly nods her head and says a soft "yes" to him....and Baji slides the ring in her finger...he gets up and hugs her tightly.....Ahh Riya...I Love you...

Riya: I love you too....*she looks at the finger*

After having their dinner they both sit down together looking at the stars...Riya puts her head on his shoulder holding his hand and Baji wraps her arm around her and rests his head on her's...she snuggels close to him....

Riya: Baji....mujhe abhi tak yakeen nahi ho raha hai ki tumne mujhe propose kiya....

Baji: Mujhe bhi....i mean...mujhe bhi yakeen nahi horaha hai ki maine tumhe itni romantic way mein propose kiya...

Riya looks at him: Tumse kisne kaha ki tum romantic nahi ho....

Baji: Hmm....kisine nahi..*he chuckles* *after some time*..Riya hum shaadi bhao aur Nakku ki shaadi ke baad karenge..

Riya: Lekin tumhara career....?

Baji: Tumse badhkar toh nahi hai...

Riya: Sach?

Baji kisses her nose: Mucch..

The next day Riya comes to Nakku's house and tells her that Baji proposed her....Nakku was surprised and happy for her friend...and here Baji tells Dutta everything....all four of them are happy and Nakku hugs Riya while Dutta hugs Baji.....

AT the airport someone was busy talkign on phone when she gets hit by a guy..and the coffee in his hand spills on that girl...she looks at herself..drenched in coffee....her jacket was spoiled....she hung the phone and turned to the guy...he was Viraj...without feeling guilty he just looks at her..

Viraj: Oops....saari coffe waste hogayi....phirse laani padegi (he turns to get some coffee when he gets pulled by his collar..)

The girl: Ajeeb aadmi ho....mujh par saari coffee gira di aur mujhe sorry bolne ke bajaye tum wapas coffee laane jaa rahe ho?

Viraj: Toh...tumhe kya problem hai....?

The girl: You are such a shameless fellow...ek ladki par coffee giradi aur sorry bhi nahi bol rahe ho

Viraj: Oh hello madam....meri koi galti nahi hai...tum uss taraf dekh rahi thi....aur dhakka lag gaya...toh sorry tumhe bolna chahiye lekin meri sharafat hai ki main chup hoon...samjhi..


I have not rechecked it so plz forgive me if u find any mistakes....😳

I have a short story..na na...dont sleep...its a short one only...😆

the Baji - Riya part...everything....has taken from a real life Love Story...

My cousin Tanz....was in love with Zia...she is still in love.😆

She was taken aback when her then boyfrnd and now fiance came to her office and asked her for date in front of everyone....then he decorated the whole place just as she liked it...and he proposed her going on his knees....she always dreamed of this thing and when it came into reality she was speechless she only shed tears.....and when i wanted to write something special for Baji and Riya i simply slipped into her room and asked her abt her date...and still she blushes and first thing she does is look at her ring...and gets excited and narrates the story....

I never ever believed in Zia's love..but when she narrated this story i felt guilty and apologized to him...for my rude behavior...😳


Ok the story is over......i know its a very boring one but still i wanted to take it out so tuk it out..😆

And btw..plz press the LIKE button..they r decreasing day by day...

and leave ur comments as they encourage me to write....😳

Nakku's Dress...


Love

Bushra

Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yeepppppiiiiiiiii me first
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Edite :-
so ur exams r near........................ achhe se padna aur mera naam roshan karna 😆
All the Best my shona 🤗 ................................
wonderfull update dear .................................
Now Bajji nows what he has to do............................ finally he is showing his love..................
vaise Bushy this is for u too........................u always say na u wont believe in show off.............. and i always say in love u need to express ur love ....................
see m always right 😆 ......................
JiYa r tooooooooooooo cute.................................
oh ho TaSha r getting bore............................ and they too going for outing................................
Yeh kya khud ka gola kha ke jee nahi bhara jo inne bhi khilana shuru kar diya 😆 ..................
yaar mehra mention mein koi aur nahi rehta kya????? kabhi dutta nakku ke room mein ruk jata hai to kabhi usse uthatkar pure mehra mention mein ghoomta rehta hai 😆..........................
wow Bajji planned a date for her just as she wished her dream date would be......................
Loved the way he proposed her..............................
it was soooooooo romantic..............................loved it
ye to bata de whos that girl for Viraj???????
thanx for the pm dear.................................... and update whenever u got time.....................
concentrait on ur studies........................... gud luck 😊

yeah I remember u told me abt that story.............................
GOD bless ur cousine & her fiance.................................
May they have all the happiness in their lyf........................... Ameen
Edited by --khushi-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
My place ..... Me second......a very nice updt...........
Tasha and Jiya are really njoying themselves.............. both pairs damn romantic....... Baaji proposes Riya....... wow!!!! luved it to core.....
good luck glitter roses
Edited by ushankitvc - 14 years ago

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