New FF..Yeh Mohabbat..updated..LAST part-pg 57!! - Page 42

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Bushy🤗

All d Best for Exam's sweety👍🏼 do well...i knw u will😉 ...coming to d update ...ws really nice n cute... both couples r soo nice romantic😳 really nice too see Jiya after soo long tym😳... wow...u wrt ur cousins real lyf luv story.. wow god bless dem...😊...take care....see yaa soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sophia21

My Spot!! ~Edited~

I would have posted a loong comment.. But ryt now i gotta get ready quickly and rush out... I promise by tomorrow i will post my comment... Im soo soo soo soo soo soo sorry.. *holds ears and does sit ups* 😆 I will do it as soon as possible... 😃
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Ahhh finally Finally finally😆... *Sophie ducks from flying chappals*😭 I know im 5 days late😲 But kya karoon.. So busy😭 I was going to comment yesterday but i had to go out and then came at 4 in the morning🥱 But since i cnt sleep now😆 I thought i wud comment before you literally cut my head off😆
Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaji!! One of the sweetest dude on earth! wether he expresses his love or not😉. But i love how he gave Riya a flying kiss and told others it was only for her😳.. My sweetu😳.. Awww taking her on a date and all.. arreee vaaaah lovely date.. TaSha as well... how romantic😳..
😭They are engaged... That was khushi ki aanso (🥺 Chan se jo toote koi sapna😆)... His proposal was so emotionally awesome😆 Loved every single dialogue he said. hats off bushy😳...
Ouuu Viraj aur Madhu ki takkar😉.. Can't wait for the next part... meri surprise kahan hain.. u sed u have a surprised update for moi😆... Im still waiting.. n i swer if u dedicate the separation track to me i will kill you😡😆 ...
I already edited my comment on ur short FF Destiny😳... Continue soon😳

Finally.....Sophia ji ne comment kiya....finally....😆
This is only ur surprise....sorry i didn't write it in the FF.....really sorry...but i wanted to give a bajilicious update so here it is.......😃...hope u liked it..😳..*looks like u liked it* 😆
Ok now i edited my update and i wrote there that it is dedicated to u....🤗
Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww dedicated to meeeeeee *blushes* Thankooooo 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 I loved it... Baaji baaji baajii 🤗 < that was for him lol
🤗 < for you ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sophia21

Awww dedicated to meeeeeee *blushes* Thankooooo 🤗 I loved it... Baaji baaji baajii 🤗 < that was for him lol

🤗 < for you ;)

Aww cutie cutie pie....i dont call this to anyone but me...😆..but i feel like pulling ur cheeks and saying meri cutie pie....🤗🤗..these are only for u.........😆
Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Eeeekkksssss... *Sophie blushes profusely* lool
I call myself cutie pie after gettin ready as well sometimes lmaoooooo... meri bacchiii 🤗🤗🤗🤗 lol
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😳Hello everyone.......back after the exams and took time form my short FF's.....and had finally time to update my baby FF...😳 Sorry for making you wait for ages.... *holds ears* I will TRY to update this one also more often....😳

~Yeh Mohabbat~

Recap:

Baji and Riya went out on a date and Baji proposed Riya'.Tasha enjoyed their day off'and they made the most of it by spending time with each other'
At the airport Viraj accidentally spill some coffee on a girl and got into an argument'with her..

Chapter 18

AT the airport someone was busy talking on phone when she gets hit by a guy..and the coffee in his hand spills on that girl...she looks at herself...drenched in coffee....her jacket was spoiled....she hung the phone and turned to the guy...he was Viraj...without feeling guilty he just looks at her..

Viraj: Oops....saari coffee waste hogayi....phirse laani padegi (he turns to get some coffee when he gets pulled by his collar..)

The girl: Ajeeb aadmi ho....mujh par saari coffee gira di aur mujhe sorry bolne ke bajaye tum wapas coffee laane jaa rahe ho?

Viraj: Toh.?..tumhe kya problem hai....?

The girl: You are such a shameless fellow...ek ladki par coffee giradi aur sorry bhi nahi bol rahe ho

Viraj: Oh hello madam....meri koi galti nahi hai...tum uss taraf dekh rahi thi....aur dhakka lag gaya...toh sorry tumhe bolna chahiye lekin meri sharafat hai ki main chup hoon...samjhi..?

I have never seen someone so ill-mannered like you'..' she squealed'.

"You should have looked into the mirror'." He raised his eyebrow'."You know what? First I thought you spilled the coffee mistakenly'.but now am sure u did on purpose...' she pointed at him'

"What?' he shrugged'"why would I do that? I mean how would I do that on purpose?' he creased his eyebrows'..'You don't know how to spill coffee on someone on purpose?' she widened her eyes'"No, because I never did that" he nodded'..she shook her head'..removed her jacket and kept it on her luggage'she went up to the coffee machine'..took a cup of hot coffee and splashed it on his jacket'..he was shocked'."What the hell is this?" he screamed'."I showed you how to spill coffee on purpose'' she smiled'took the jacket and her luggage and went away'..leaving him all shocked'..before exiting she showed and L at him and whispered a LOSER and disappeared..he wanted to take a revenge but she was gone'..

AT Patil Niwas:

She came rushing in'..she saw Ayi Saheb praying at the mandir'she tiptoed from back and hugged her'..AS turned'."Madhu," she hugged her'.."Kaisi hai tu? Aur tuney bataya kyun nahi ki t aaj aarahai hai?' "Surprise!" she beamed'.."Kitni patli hogayi hai'apna khayal bilkul bhi nahi takhti'..aur theek se khana nahi khaati hogi'" she started complaining'.."Mom, ssshhh'abb main aagayi hoon na'abhi aap mujhe aapke haath ka khana khilana aur main moti hojaungi'theek hai" she nodded'.earning herself a pat on her cheek'.She looked around and asked for everyone'she stood in the middle of the hall and called everyone'Roops, Leela and Kala came out from their rooms'.Roops plunged on to her.."Mads'.." she hugged her tightly'"Roops'.How are you nuts'?" she chuckled'."Shut up'..am fine'how are you'.and is this a new fashion statement'.coffee stained jacket" she giggled'"Ya right' she glared at her'she then went and hugged Leela and Kala'.As Dutta and Baji went to Nakku's house'they didn't reach home yet'they were on their way'..

Everyone at PN settled down and started talking about Madhu and her tales of New York and her university'.she started blabbering'..just then the screeching sound of car was heard'.and everyone were quite'..Baji and Dutta entered in with a grin on their faces'."Hey Patil family" Baji waved'.everyone put straight faces'.Dutta looked at them'he looked at Aayi."What's wrong Aayi'.?" Madhu came from back'."Hello'guys" she glared at them'they both slowly turned around'.they were excited to see their little sis back'.Baji was about to go and hug her'."A-aan'..stop there'." She waved her finger'..Baji stopped there'..and looked at Dutta'.

"Hey gudiya, why did you not tell us that you were going to come today'I would have come to pick you from the airport" Dutta offered'.trying to calm her down'.she was still not going to let it go easily'.she was still miffed'."Arey yaar why are you so angry'..agar batadeti toh main aajata tujhe lene" Baji said..tiredly'."Shut up dimples'..i am not angry because of that reason'.' She glared'.Baji and Dutta looked at each other'..they knew why she was angry'."Oh that'.we are really very sorry'..actually I was busy with the preparations'so couldn't tell you" Dutta tried to excuse himself'"You were busy, bhai? You were so busy that you didn't even had time to inform your little sister about your engagement? You want me to take this excuse" she screamed'"Oh, actually...Bhao is lying'.he was not busy with the preparations, but, he was actually busy admiring Nakku" he chuckled..earning a pat on his head from Dutta'"And what were you doing Baji Shriram Patil" she raised her eyebrows'."Err'.he was lost into Riya's eyes'" Roops said from behind'."Shut up Roops" Baji squealed'."Roops is saying true'.you were actually lost into her eyes'.you even get lost into her eyes while playing the match'.your team mates had to remind you about the match and then you come back to reality'." She chuckled'"Oye tu kisi ek side par nahi reh sakti? Har baar palti kyun maarti hai? Decide karle'.ki tu bhao se naraaz hai ya mujhse?" Baji said irritatingly'."Main tum dono se naraaz hoon'.Now that you did mistake, you have to take the punishment also'" Baji and Dutta looked at each other'."Ok, what is it?" both asked together'."Hmm'the same punishment I used to give you when we were kids" she grinned'."No ways, we are not going to do sit ups" baji threw a tantrum'"Ok then kneel down holding your ears" she made a straight face'.They both obediently knelt down holding their ears'Until then Madhu went up to her room asking Roops to keep an eye on them . The servant came and informed them that the lunch was ready'everyone except DuJi took their seats on the dining table'.Madhu came down from her room and asked them both to look down and not at her'..they both obeyed'.she came forward and knelt before them'she slowly kept two gifts in front of them'.DuJI looked at the gifts and then at her'they gave her a questioning look'"These are for you two." She smiled'"You guys very well know that I cannot be angry with you guys for more than five minutes'DuJi had a flashback of them from their childhood when she used to punish them and then give them chocolates just like she did today with the gifts'.The trio hugged each other warmly'..

AS called them to have dinner'.they all sat together'..and started talking'.."Hmmm'so bhai, how did u realize your love for nakku? Oops Nakku vayheni" she winked at Baji and giggled'..Dutta just shied away'while Baji took the honor to speak'"Arey, I will tell you'actually the same old formula'Jealousy factor played a role in Bhao's realization" he chuckled'."Oh jealousy? But whom was bhai jealous of?" she raised her eyebrow'."Nakku's close friend, Viraj" he said'.not looking at Dutta.."Oh, close friend" she nodded'and what about Nakku...was she too jealous of someone'.she giggled'."No, Nakku kisse jalegi'..actually distance made her realize..Woh kya hai na buns, Bhao got a minor heartbreak and he went away from us for some time...and that is when Nakku realized her love for bhao" he said obviously moving his hands'."Oh, so old school na Dimples" she asked'winking at Baji.."Yeah" and they hi-fived'.Dutta glared at them'and they looked down and started eating'."By the way Baji, I thought of getting u a pair of shades'.but then I remembered that Riya broke your watch so bought you a watch" she said'"Thanx buns'.i love this watch'.and don't tell this in front of Riya'.she will feel bad" he said'.putting a straight face'" Actually'.Riya kuch feel nahi karegi, yeh dar raha hai ussey, Phattu kahin ka" Dutta said'.and Madhu agreed with him and they started laughing looking at Baji's face'."Tu hamesha dhokebaaz hi rahegi, hamesha palti maarti hai, sides change karti hai" he threw tantrum'..and Dutta agreed with him.."Yeh sahi kaha tuney Baji, hamari yeh gudiya'.kisi ek side par nahi rehti'sabko pareshaan karti rehti hai'." He pulled her ear'"Ouch! Bhai, it hurts'." She shouted'and he patted her cheek' they finished their dinner with their gossips and constant chatting'and amidst all this fun someone didn't notice that Kala had a smirk and she had something running in her mind''

Madhu was unpacking her luggage in her room dressed in her tee and pajamas'.when Baji barged in'."Dimples, I told you knock before you enter" she shouted'"Yeah I know, but only then when the door is locked, why should I simply stand out and knock the door when it is already open" he said'taking a place on the cozy bed' "Tu kabhi nahi sudhrega" she complained'."Accha meri maa, maaf karde'abb baith aur sun meri baat" he pulled her and made her sit'." You pack some of your clothes and belongings'.we are going out tomorrow" he said'"Where to?" she asked..curiously "To Simla!" he exclaimed'.excitedly'"SIMLA" she screamed'."Wow, am coming'but who all are going?" she asked'.excitingly'"Err, me, bhao, Nakku, Riya and now you too" he smiled'"yayy we are going to have fun" she started dancing'.."Ya we will have fun'.now you go to sleep as we are leaving early tomorrow"'he kissed her forehead and locked the door behind him saying a good night "Good night dimps" she said'and started dreaming about Simla

Mehra Mansion:

Nakku was lying on her bed when a servant came to inform her about Viraj's visit'.she rushed to meet him'

OMG! Viraj, where the hell did you disappear during my engagement?" she started complaining'."Hey, you won't hug me before i answer to your question?" he stretched his arms asking her for a hug'she hugged him and they both sat'."I was busy with work and you know my last visit was only for business purpose and I had no time to tell you about my return'am sorry, but I promise I will attend your marriage" he grinned'"Yeah you better keep your promise'..tell me did you come for business purpose now as well?" she asked'.playing with a tress of her hair' "err no, only for vacation purpose, a small vacation" he said'."Great, then you can accompany us to Simla tomorrow'" she jumped from her couch'"Simla?" he questioned.."Yeah, we have planned to go to Simla'.me, Dutta, Baji and Riya, and now you too" she said'"Hold on, first ask Dutta" he said'.smilingly'"I would like if I get Dutta's permission for this" he grinned.."Ok, I will ask him now itself'" she took the phone and called Dutta'"Hello?" answered Dutta.."Hey, what are you doing?" she questioned'"Err, was going to bed'" he said honestly'."I called you to ask you for permission" she bit her lower lip'"Permission? What is it?" he asked getting a bit worried'"Can we allow Viraj to come with us to Simla?" she asked scared'"Oh, u scared me, yeah of course'.we can allow him'.and he can give company to Gudiya" he said'"Madhu, has come too?" she squealed'"Yeah, she has come today'I didn't knew about her arrival'.she is sleeping now, she is coming with us too" he said beaming'"Yeah, am dying to meet her, it's been long'..and she must be angry'" she said'.giggling'"Yeah she is'" he giggled too'"Ok, you go to sleep'good night'" she said.."Good night shona" she hung up'

"Viraj you are coming to Simla" she said excitingly'."Oh I knew it'Dutta wouldn't say no" he said'..winking at Nakku'."Really?" she said'widening her eyes.."Yeah" he said'shrugging his shoulders..."Then why did you ask me to ask him?" she raised her eyebrows.."Just for formality" he said'.showing his teeth'."SO how did you decide to come to India suddenly?" she started talking'"I wanted a break and what better way to take a break with you guys" he beamed'..Nakku nodded with a hmmm and her eyes fell on his jacket which was dirty with coffee stains'"What's wrong with your jacket" she asked taking the jacket in her hands "Oh don't remind me'a silly senseless girl there it on me just to show me how to throw coffee on someone purposely" he said'getting irritated at them mention of that girl'"Oh, you had a fight with a girl at the airport?" she asked shocked'"Yeah, she started arguing" and he narrated the whole incident'.she listened to it carefully "Viraj, sorry to say but it was your fault'.you were walking aimlessly'." She tried to explain'"Yeah I know, I realized it later when I calmed down'." H looked down embarrassed'."But still, how could she do this to me?" he complained pointing towards his jacket'"Yeah" she giggled'"She did a mistake, if I would been in her place, I would have splashed the coffee right on your face" she laughed'.."Nakku" he pouted'"Ok am sorry" she stopped laughing'..he stood up to go'."Ok Nakku, I am tired'I will go take some rest and meet you guys tomorrow, Ok Good night" he hugged her.."Good night'" she waved him'and went back to her room'and fell fast asleep'.

The next day'..everyone getting ready to leave for Simla''the Patil clan was having their breakfast'

Madhu was eating her toast''when Baji came from back and patted her head'"You did your packing?" he asked taking a toast'..Yes, Roops did it for me.." she said'"Oh great" he sat beside her.."We are ready to leave then'" he said leaving a sigh'"not really, I am still having my breakfast and Bhai is still not ready" she said'.taking a bite of the toast' "Oh man, we are getting late'.." he squealed' "Yes, we are ready, shall we leave now?" asked Dutta coming down'..he asked the servant to put the luggage in the car'..they hugged AS together and waved at everyone'and went out Madhu picked up and apple on her way'.and Baji took a toast with him'.while a servant gave Dutta a mug of coffee'."Bhao, you'll drive while sipping this coffee?" he asked'.pointing towards the coffee'."Not really, it is you who is driving till Nakku's house'.and from then I will drive'ok Baji" he asked smiling'."Ok" he took to the driver's seat'.while Madhu sat at the back'."Chalo chalo'.abb jadli chalo" exclaimed Madhu'.and they reached Nakku house amidst Madhu's chattering'.Nakku and Riya were already standing at the door step'with their luggage'..Baji stopped the car'and came out to hug Riya and Dutta hugged Nakku'..Madhu cleared her throat and the foursome broke their hug'.Nakku rushed to Madhu and hugged her'and Riya hugged them both'.."How are you?" Riya and Nakku asked together'"Am fine, and what about you guys?" she beamed'"We are fine too'"

Baji interrupted'.."Now if the mel-milaap has over so shall we leave now"'..he asked'"Yeah sure" said Madhu but Nakku said from behind'"err Baji, Viraj is coming with us'" she said looking at Dutta who was smiling'."Viraj? Wow" and just then Viraj arrived'..and Madhu looked at Viraj and he looked at Madhu'..


I think this is a bit long....😆 if not then ok 😆

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Precap: Madhu-Viraj have an argument...and the Simla trip!! 😳

Love

~Bushra~

Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
NO wayssssssss!
its me on First 😃

Yahooooooooooooo😛

Ok hmm
love how u start Viraj meetomg with madhu

highly entertaining :D
Love how Madhu give him her piece of mind :d

At Patils
Love how Madu come and all sibbling interactions :D
Love how baaji give Madhu all details :D
lovely scene 😃
aww Baji is a jaani
he want to take his sis on trip with !
kahan hotay aise brothers :P
warna all are like
ghar main betho :P

Hmm and at MEhras
Viraj is there and Naku has invited him too
oh i love that VIOraj ask Naku to take permission from Dutta
and loved how he readily agrees !
LOve mY Dutta

and wohoooooooooo
cant wiat
fro Madhu VIraj meeting their arguments :D
Its gonna be so good :D

LOve it BUshy and xpecting fast updates too :)
Edited by kiran255 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reserved :) .....You updated :D


* EDITED :D


Bushy !!!! 🤗 You updated this one

you know I am almost certain that I've never commented on this one

but I can't remember......but anyway let me pretend I didn't and say :

WONDERFUL ff Bushy ! .... I love the story......how it all developed....all of

it....Baaji and Riya have a cute story ...i love them....obviously TaSha too

As far as i remember...there is a girl for viraj already no? LOL from this update

I have this feeling that Madhu & Viraj going to be something ....u noe

I simala ....two people ...end up having to spend time together cuz

brothers are busy with their own lovers hahaha ...

then .kuch kuch hot hai 😆 yup.......

I love the whole coffee jacket thing but very filmy

I'm curious to know wat happens with Viraj & Madhu

I wanna see reactions ....

Oh yeah and the bro -sis scene ...sooooo cute

how she makes them kneel and then gives them gifts :D

update soon Bushy!! I'm very curious to see what happens next



Edited by dg0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amzing update bushy hun...just loved it...viraj hmmm and madhu...kuch toh baat hai...lol....pls upload asapp cant wait anymore.....*hugs*
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Posted: 14 years ago

My Sweet Little Spot! (:

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