New FF..Yeh Mohabbat..updated..LAST part-pg 57!! - Page 45

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello everyone...😕...I know most of you have forgotten me...that is expected...as i have been AWOL...I got reminded about this FF by a friend..*looks at Kiki*...and thought of completing it...it didn't turn out the way i was expecting...but oh well...i completed it...so three cheers for me...*looks around*...What? No one wants to cheer me?? Zaalim Duniya...*dramatic pose*.....Alrite i know i should grow up..😆 Anyways...padhlo yaar..jo bhi hai..jaisa bhi hai...dua doogni tumlogon ko...God i sound so cheap..😆

~Yeh Mohabbat~

Last Part:

She went back to her room and started remembering all those words Viraj said'.the way he described the girl he is in love with'.she didn't knew there was someone who silently loved her so much'she could not help but smile at this thought although her eyes were moist'

Nakku came to her room to find Dutta waiting for her'he jumped in front of her like a baby'she pushed her tears back and smiled at him' He hugged her from back'they both facing the beautiful view of Simla'"Nakku, will you marry me?" he asked her'all of a sudden'in a calm voice'.she was puzzled'they were engaged'then why was he asking this question again'she looked at him confused'He smiled and said with a twinkle in his eyes'"I want to get married'here'in Simla'"
Nakku smiled and nodded'He said in an excited tone'"I should tell everyone then'to make arrangements for our wedding'" He hugged her and ran to Baji's room...After a few moments'they all were sitting in Nakku's room'.excitedly planning for the wedding'.Viraj was engrossed in the wedding talks while Madhu was engrossed in him'it didn't hid from Nakku's eyes'.she still chose to ignore it at the moment'Madhu excused herself and went out'Viraj could sense something was wrong'.he went to see what the problem was'She was on the terrace'the wind touching her face roughly'she was facing the cold valley'Viraj came from behind and coughed to make his presence felt' He came forward'"Is everything okay?"'he said it in a casual tone'"Do you love me?" she asked this without looking at him'he was taken aback'"Wh-what?" he was shocked'he thought Nakusha might have told her'he looked down'trying to come to terms with her question'she faced him'"Do you love me?"..she looked straight into his eyes'.she knew the answer'but still..wanted to hear it from him'"What are you asking?" he asked'pretending to be oblivious'"Do you love me? Yes or No Viraj?" her voice was stern.."No" he looked down'She sighed'"You know something'.you should not try to lie'.'coz you are bad at it"..he looked away'trying to walk away from her'she held his hand'"I know you love me'I want to hear it from you'please tell me that you love'please.." she was begging'he took away his hand from her'"I don't love you'" he said looking straight into her eyes'and walked away'she yelled.."But, I LOVE YOU Viraj'I do.." she fell on her knees'crying hysterically'Viraj stopped in his steps'he couldn't move'he didn't believe his ears'he looked at her'stood there staring at her'.he didn't knew what to do'he walked away'leaving her behind'

After sometime'all the preparations were done for the wedding'.Dutta and Nakusha decided to get married in Simla..they told their families'they wanted the wedding to be a low affair'The girls went for shopping'while the guys were busy with the preparations'.their families arrived'all were happy for the duo...the shopping was done'preparations were done'.all was set'.it was time for the wedding'the groom was waiting for his bride'a little nervous'a little tensed'and a little excited' He was losing his breathe when he saw his wife-to-be walking down the aisle'in a maroon indian attire'it was not that heavily worked'it was simple yet elegant'she looked classy'as always'she looked up at him and quickly looked down'he was sitting there waiting for her'.his heart was beating faster when she sat beside him'.he couldn't believe they were getting married'the rituals started'.everyone were showering their blessings on them'.the wedding was done'perfectly'they took everyone's blessings'Baji didn't wanted to waste this opportunity'he quickly asked Riya to marry him now and here itself..in the same mandap..she was surprised'but could say a yes'.they got married then and there'everyone couldn't come to terms that both the patil sons got married all of a sudden'.but oh well'they were married now' Nakusha was waiting for him with a bated breath..and here Riya was getting goose bumps'and Baji was nervous'He came forward and sat beside her'scratching his head'Riya was waiting for her husband to do something'.but he was clueless'Here Dutta came in all set'unlike his brother'he came forward and at beside her'he started remembering all those moments they spent together'their journey from being childhood friends to business partners'to lovers'and finally'they are a couple'a married couple'Dutta Shri ram Patil..the Casanova'fell in love with this classy yet elegant chic'and got married to her'it was an unexpected journey'he held her hand'and whispered'a sweet I Love You'which was enough to send chills down her spine'.they both made love under essence of the divine moonlight'

Here Baji sat holding Riya's hand'"Riya, I know this was a sudden decision'I didn't even give you time to think'are you happy with this marriage?" he knew she was happy'but still he would feel better if she said it'She clasped his face in her palms'looked straight into his eyes.."I love you Baji, and I can do anything for you'how can I not be happy with our wedding? I am the most luckiest girl to have got a man like you'" she kissed his forehead softly'.They hugged'

Madhu was in her room'near the balcony'with her hands folded'he came in'she could sense his presence'she didn't turn to look at him'he came and stood beside her'with his hands in his pocket'"I am going back'to London" he didn't look at her while speaking'she didn't speak a word'"I thought I should tell you before going.." he was still not looking at her'she sighed'he now looked at her'longing for her'he wanted to take her in his arms and never leave her'"When are you leaving?" she asked in a low voice..he looked away'"Morning'"..she looked at him.."Good bye.." she turned away'he looked up for a moment'and started walking away'she could not stop her tears anymore'they started rolling down'he stopped in his steps'looked back.."Will you come with me'?" he smiled and put his hand forward'she was shocked'.she looked at him'not believing him'he nodded'She ran into a hug'she released a loud cry'he kissed her hair and said a soft.."I love you"'she clutched him harder.."Love you too'❤️!"

That is it...i know this is so bad ending...😳 But i could not think of anything else...🤔

Do read it...and leave your comments...i mean COMMENTS..not a RESERVED spot for heaven's sake...*glares* 😆
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Love you all...😳

Bushra!

Edited by Bushy_92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is a fab ending but kafi late kar diya awsem update
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Posted: 13 years ago
On finshing






Me second :D

OK Wooo So Babang Bushy finally updated Yeh Mohabbat

which ended totally on Ye shaddiyan :P

Just kidding

though i will admit lenght dekh kar i got zor ka jhakta that how will you manage to end the story

But u did and You did really well :D😃

I love IT ,

Simple , Pure , Modern and romantic

the one who loves each other dearly cant wait to be together and even dont care about world

They didnt care their wedding be lavish , and be there where they always live

they jsut dont care but they want to be with the ones who love them in good and bad

their families

wedding can be such a fiasco but here they want to have each other nothing more

and i love that ,

No eye locks , no high low breathing , no dil ka tez tez dharakna

in this update it was all the trust a man and women have when they take their relation to next level :D

and Wooo Baaji aKa Bushy in disguise

did what he do best

ik ki qeemat main do shadian and awww I love Riya <3

she is the girl who just say yes cuz nothing mattered to her more than with him

she just dont think whether its a rght time or not ,

its just he is the one for her

tu lo je Simla ate he

Patil saheb kay dono bachay ghore charh gaye :P

lucky parents :D

now come to Viraj and Madhu ,

i love that Madhu got her mind and heart clear

she knows what she wants , No drag fest

i like him or i dont like him

she goes straight to him , asks him and tells him !

way to go :D

and wooo if only Viraj during weddding keh dayta tu come with him

i am sure Madhu would have taken him to mandap :P

Hatrick ho gane thi shaddiao ki 😆

But Bushy i cant believe im saying

But i love the ending ,

No drama , no rona dhona

it felt really real !

ppl love and they marry its no other persons business :D

way to go Bushyyy !

and thanks For Updating
now i can have my sleep back :D
Edited by kiran255 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update, very well composed, nicely fitted in stories of all the characters. So no one was missed in the end part. I liked tasha's simple wedding, it would've been nice to see a little more development on their SR though😳. But I guess simplicity was key to tasha's love story, nicely rounded up, all necessary details were there. It was really nice that you finished the ff however, rather then leaving it incomplete. Great work👏.
Edited by tinkerbe11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi bushra ur ff was one of my fav you took a gap but finally you completed ...
i just don't like when ppl leave it incomplete ...
thanxs for giving it a nice end ...
plz start a new one soon bushra tc 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
congratz 4 finaly managing 3 finishing it
lekin no coment on d update...very naraz wit u!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
so you end it

great ff dear

thanks for this

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