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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

amazing update

madhu is funi man...climbing thru the window..n naku has defo changed a bit..loved the romantic scene between tasha, n its gd dutta realised it wasnt the ryt time n place 2 u knw ahem ahem...afterall they r in atharva's house n baji n madhu r w8in..lol

glad you liked this partt
yup madhu is funi😆..even i know naku is changed believe me dutta will not know how his sherni will hit him😉😆..am sure in pn dutta will find all the right time
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vika1981

Jess thank you for the PM. I hope you had fun-filled wknd! I must I loved how dutta kept on knocking on the door for naku to answer.. that part was so hilarious.. and madhu truly a cat-woman climbing the pipe to get to her room. Baaji's comment one sibling dances around my head nd the other on my shoulder ha ha..

Nw the teaser u gave us.. was mind-blowing.. nw i want to see what happens once they get to PN..

😉

thanks vika my weekend was great..glad you liked how naku made dutta wait😆..baji comment also i know is funny and even he knows how true its going to get
pn mein time is there first they have to get there
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys am glad you'll liked tasha reunion and also baji madhu interaction..i really hope ull like this part too as there is going to be dialogue's and i really hope ull enjoy it

Part 9

Naku and dutta came out of their room to meet madhu and baji'madhu was waiting for them near the fire place..on hearing them come she turned to face them.

Madhu : so made up

Naku left dutta's hand and walked toward madhu..yes I have decided to give your bhao a chance'but where is baji he was suppose to be out with you.

Madhu :he went out in the garden saying he wanted some fresh air.

Naku :*turning towards dutta*..i am just going to meet him

Dutta nodded yes and naku left leaving madhu and dutta alone

Baji was lost in his thoughts when naku came and stood near him..naku placed her hand on baji's shoulder and brought him out of his trance..baji turned and looked at her..and without saying anything came close and gathered her in his arms..hugging her tight..naku too hugged him back as she still could remember the fear she felt when she saw him collapsing wondering whether he would make it alive.

Baji :* Whispering softly* I am so sorry

Naku :*getting confused on hearing this *why

Baji : *releasing her from his arms * that night I could not save you from those men..could not protect you'I don't know how I could ever forgive myself if atharva had not come and saved you

Naku : you should not be sorry for things you have no control over..maybe it was destiny as that night atharva and madhu came in our lives'I know I would never wish that night to happen to any girl..but I would not erase that night because that was the night I met madhu..who I now trust more than myself

I should infact apologize for never coming to meet you in the hospital..knowing you were recovering..i was scared that I would come across dutta and I have no idea of how he would have reacted but atharva had always kept me informed about your recovery so I knew you were alright.

Baji : so everything is alright with you and dutta

Naku : *a beautiful smile blooming on her face* yes

Baji : you have changed a lot ..but don't worry it is a very good change

Naku : *smiling*so have you..the baji I know was always smiling..flashing those dimples of his *both naku and baji laughed at that,then gathering her wits she continued* but now you have become serious

Baji : A lot changes in 3months naku..people change relations change.

Naku :*finally understanding * you have not forgiven saab yet have you..baji I have never wanted to come between your's and saab friendship..if I knew hiding my truth would have these consequences

Baji : you have not come between us naku..and there is nothing to forgive..i have forgiven him but it is hard to forget..naku don't mind but you knew him for what 7 months'but dutta had known me from a child..he knew that he is my only family..it is only through him have I gotten AS love..he was my everything..but that night it really hurt when he believed that I would purposely betray him for someone else..it took a single moment for him to just break his relation with me.

Naku : a relation once broken does not mean it cant be joined back again..you'll both have faced so much and a argument cannot break a friendship

Baji : you are right ..i never said mine and dutta's relation cant be glued back..but even once you glue it the cracks will still be visible..i will be his friend again..will protect him from danger and never allow anything to harm him but to be the same baji I was before all this happened will be hard..*he turned to face naku and continued * but I am glad you are back with us'dutta had really missed you..now go back in am sure he is waiting for you..rest tonight tomorrow we are going back to PN.

Naku : *knowing right now she will not be able to get through him*goodnight baji

Baji : goodnight

Naku left baji out there and went in to join dutta and madhu,,,baji stood out for sometime..and thought to himself..tomorrow is a new day..and a new start for dutta,naku,madhu and me..he looked up at the full moon..and then turned and went back in

Next day

Naku was packing her things while dutta stood side of the room..she was wearing jeans and a red and gold kurta..with a stole round her neck..she looked so lovely..dutta wondered when he could just take her in his arms..love her as she deserved..naku snapped him out of the trance

Naku : if you are going to stand here you better help me with the packing'AS might be waiting for us

Dutta : well I cant say that considering I didn't tell her anything about you or madhu..but I am sure she will love the surprise..i got for her

And saying so..Dutta joined her..and together they completed the packing fast..and as they were leaving naku just stood back to look at the room..looking at dutta and said..i am really going to miss it here..dutta hugged her and said I know..if you want you can visit here..m sure atharva wont mind..dutta took her hand and led her out of the room

Madhu was arranging her luggage'it was time to go to her brother's home'feeling a little sad she phoned atharva..minute she heard him answer the phone..she could not help but smile..god she missed him

Madhu : hey

Atharva :well who do we have here..i thought my little spitfire has forgotten all about me now that she is going to her brother's house.

Madhu : oh keep quiet atharva'i'how is your work

Atharva : what happened..you not happy going there

Madhu : how did you..*she trailed off*

Atharva : I know you madhu..i don't have to be there to see the anxiousness on your face'don't worry sweetie..you do know our home is always opened..if anything happens there and you are not happy you can always fall back on me..you know that na

Madhu : *sighs* I know..i am just nervous..so when are you coming back

Atharva : As soon I finish my work here ..i will come back'don't forget to take your friend..m not speaking about naku..the other one

Madhu : *holding her beautifully crafted itallian make gun..which atharva had gifted her on her 21st birthday* I have packed it in..just hope that I never get the chance to use it..i think someone is coming to check on me ..am hanging up..come back soon..miss you

Atharva *laughing*..me too..take care

Madhu quickly stashing the gun in the deep recess of her bag.and began closing it..when dutta entered her room..

Dutta : so ready to come home

Madhu : offcourse bhao..always ready

Before she could carry her bag..dutta intercepted allow me..taking one of her bag both brother and sister walked out..once the luggage was placed ..naku dutta and baji entered the vehicle with tasha in the front..before she entered the vehicle madhu instructed her servants..to take care of the house and keep her informed if anything out of turn happens..she then sat at the back near baji..and they drove too PN.

ok i know nothing much happened here..but finally they are going to PN..how is AS going to react..and what about others who dont even know dutta has a sister ..to know keep reading BLOODTIES😆😆

looking forward to your comments..hope ull liked it😳

Edited by jessica10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Can i just say I LOVE BAAJI!!!
Damn this boy is so damn sweeet.. Love his convo with nakku and the way his guilt was eating him inside and finally hugged her... 😳
Awww Madhu missed atharva.. i hope in the future Baaji doesnt misunderstand her lol ..
Anyway i cant wait till they get to PN..
The ET wil have the shock of their lives.... Pher tale zameen kisak jayegi lool😆😆
Thanks for the PM...
Update soon 😳
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow lovely and cute update loved it a lot ....................what a emotional conversation between bajji and nakku ........loved it .........pls update next part soon as i m eagerly waiting to know AS and others reaction .....and thanx for PM
Edited by akkybaby - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow!!!!!!!!!! so they are all off back to PN...............Would luv to see the faces of ETs..............Reaction of AS................And last but not the least-- First nite of Tasha back in PN..........Dutta was himself very eager to...................
Waiting for all these in the nxt update...............
Hope the nxt update is really a long one.................
I m waiting.............
Thanx for PM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update...........waiting for the PN drzma now
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Posted: 14 years ago

Jess.. such a sweet conversation between baaji.. seriously dear.. I was touched reading the convo between nakku and baaji.. they are such good friends and wish the best for Dutta.. and baaji hugging nakku was awesome.. dutta is so lucky to have a friend like baaji in his life.. sometimes I feel he does not realise the worth of baaji in the show..hope he realises what all baaji does for him and always keeps him in mind!

Madhu is a very suljhi hui, sweet girl. Such a relief from his other sisters!

Cant wait for them to enter PN and Nakku in Dutta's room?! Will they have a proper wedding now?! And gosh I have so many questions.. and cant wait to read next part

Thanks for the Pm hun

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Jess.....how r u???
Hey i liked Baji and Nakku's convo..........how sweet.........
And the hug was also vry cute.....
OMG finally Tasha and madhu- baji are going to PN...........
Awww Madhu is missing Atharva........poor girl.......
love their frndship........
Ok i want to ET's face and Tasha in PN...........
Waiting for the nxt...
And thanx for the pm.......😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Jess.. such a sweet conversation between baaji-nakku.. seriously dear.. I was touched reading the convo between nakku and baaji.. they are such good friends and wish the best for Dutta.. and baaji hugging nakku was awesome.. dutta is so lucky to have a friend like baaji in his life.. sometimes I feel he does not realise the worth of baaji in the show..hope he realises what all baaji does for him and always keeps him in mind!

Madhu is a very suljhi hui, sweet girl. Such a relief from his other sisters!

Cant wait for them to enter PN and Nakku in Dutta's room?! Will they have a proper wedding now?! And gosh I have so many questions.. and cant wait to read next part

Thanks for the Pm hun

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