FF: BLOODTIES (Updated Pg 44)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey everyone i am new to this forum

watched ltl from beginning but now only joined couldnt stay away😆..as tasha fan that i am i am going to try my hand on ff..so hope ull like my new ff..and in my ff if anything is not allowed or if against the rules pls let me know i will rectify it😃
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Nakusha was sitting there trembling with fear'her clothes half torn'scratches on her hands and necks..bleeding slightly from her forehead while she watched in horror as her only friend baji were being trashed completely by morey's goons..she could only scream in horror..as he collapsed on the ground bleeding profusely..she tried to go to him but was grabbed by morey..baji could only watched helplessly as the girl he called his vaheni was being manhandled..and he could not do anything..his eyes closed and the last thing he saw was the horror stricken naku's face..and the only thought of how at this moment he hated dutta so much for putting them in this situation

Nakusha saw baji closing his eyes and could only wonder if they could make it alive from there..morey turned her towards him and said how far do you think you could run from me..and he traced her face..and slowly he began to trace her body'nakusha closed her eyes in disgust of what would happen to her'when suddenly she heard the noise of screeching tires..morey and his goons looked up and saw two black Scorpio cars..and seven people came out of the car..completely dressed in black..

Morey looked at them ..and his arrogance told them to get out from there as he was in police and could put them in jail..one of them just smirked at him and looked at the person in the car for some signal..on getting the signal..he looked back at morey and said'soo u r going to put us in jail huh..but what if no one was alive to witness what happens..and on saying this each of them took out swords..morey and each of his goon could only register the glint of the sword..when they were attacked.

Naku could only watch the bloodshed that took place..and she fainted before a sword could pierce morey..she surrendered herself to the blackness that overtook her..

The seven men finished their work..and went to the car'then a single person came out of the car..and walked towards naku..this person had an aura of darkness..reached naku and just looked at her..and looked at one of the men and nodded..and walked back to the car..the man who had spoken to morey 'ordered one of his men to take baji to the nearby hospital..and after doing so he gently lifted naku..and kept her in the car..and drove off leaving the dead bodies to be found.

On the same road you see dutta driving his jeep searching for naku..he was angry with her for the truth she hid from him but for the sake of his AS he went searching for naku and baji and bring them back..his flashlight threw light on the bodies across the road..he stopped his car..took his gun out and got out from the car..there were 10 bodies lying on the road and one of them he recognised as morey'when he looked around..he saw the chain he selected for naku lying on the ground..he went to pick it and saw that it was completely broken as if snatched from her neck..dread filled him..at the thought of something wrong happening to naku and baji when his phone rang.

On taking the phone he came to know it was from the hospital..one of the doctors had recognized baji and phoned dutta to tell him that bajirao was in a very critical condition..hearing this dutta felt as if his chest constricted..his dread coming true. immediately he reversed his car and drove to the hospital..hoping nothing happens to baji and naku remains safe

On reaching the hospital he was immediately directed to the OT where baji's operation was being performed..when the doctor came out dutta went to the doctor asking how baji is..the doctor told him..bhao baji's condition is very critical..the way he has been injured it is a miracle that he is even breathing'it was as if silence surrounded dutta'he looked at the doctor..his eyes tearing up..what are u trying to say'doctor looked at dutta with sad eyes and said this 48 hours are crucial for bajirao..we can only pray that the medicines have effect on him..or else we wont be able to save him

On hearing this dutta collapsed in the nearby bench'it was as if he could not understand what is happening here his friend his fighting for his life ..in other place naku..naku dutta suddenly thought..dutta got up and asked the doctor was there any girl with baji..the doctor looked confused no bhao..from what I saw two men bought baji in the hospital'although now I don't know where they are

But wait a minute before we could sedate baji..he was mumbling something like vaheni vaheni..let my vaheni go..on hearing this all horrible thoughts began running around dutta's head..what had happened..how is baji in this state..where is naku..somebody has slaughtered morey and men and bought baji to the hospital so now where is nakusha

Somewhere else

Naku was sweating in her sleep'she could see morey coming towards her..the scene changed to baji being trashed..she saw him covered with his blood and closing his eyes..immediately nakusha screamed baji and got up from her nightmare

hope ull liked it..any suggestions criticisim to improve the ff is always welcomed

part1:pg1
part2:pg2
part3:pg6
part4:pg9
part5:pg12
part6:pg16
part7:pg 21
A/N:Pg 23
part8:pg26
part9:pg29
A/N:pg32
part10:pg33
part11:pg36
part12:pg40
part13:pg42
part14:pg44
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Posted: 14 years ago
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welcome to d forum🤗 jess dear
Welcome to the forum jessica! Intrroduce urself here:
Hey jess....nice ff ...superbbb beggenning....
vry well ..keep it up👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ff... what a beginning...so much suspense,..hmm is this man tht took naku DP...m sure it is...
u thought of a name for ur ff?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Welcome to the Forum!!!
Hey nice start and lots of suspense...
Please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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welcome to our LTL family here Jessica.. i am sure you will have a lot of masti here!
great start to the ff.. i so want Dutta to rescue Nakku from Morey.. tumne toh sab kuch palat diya.. wonder who this stranger is.. he is a good guy na,as he picked up naku so gently and also got baaji to hospital! pls keep writing..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ff jessica update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey welcome to forum😊 ,good start,you wrote very well ,👏 continue soon,😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gr8 work and nce ff. Waiting fo the next update plz do it sooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow very nice jessie keep writing and PM me ok so who are those ppl who save nakku i am eagerly waiting for it. update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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first of all welcome to u in this forum .........
gr88888888 starting...........
wow so much emotion and suspence in first part only loved it a lot outstanding ......................................
pls pls pls pls update the next part soon ..........
can't wait long for that ........

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