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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys hope ull read the note on pg 23 about madhu..ok so tasha union has little funny.senti and kind of ahem ahem moments..so all the end young ones please tread carefully lol'I hope you'll enjoy this part too😛

Part 8

Madhu and baji waited for half an hour before they decided to check on dutta and nakusha..on reaching her room they saw her door locked with dutta still outside the door'banging the door telling her to open up..madhu was quiet stunned..she looked at dutta and said for last half an hour you were just banging the door

Dutta: what am I suppose to do if she closes the door like this

Madhu : well since she is not opening the door don't you think it is wise to speak through the door..considering it is possible for her to hear you.

Dutta : um I didn't think about it.
Madhu (sarcastically) : how shocking.
Madhu turned towards the door and called out : naku you there inside
Naku : no I am not here
Madhu : well if you are not there how can I hear your voice
Naku :don't start with me
Madhu : I have not started anything with you
Naku getting irritated : for heaven sake madhu keep quiet and tell your brother I am not going to speak with him.
Dutta : but I want to speak with you and I am not going to talk to the door
Naku : so don't talk and go from here.
Dutta looked pleadingly at madhu do something..seeing him like that madhu felt herself getting soft..she looked at baji and said come with me..and took him behind the bunglow..baji who was as usual quiet amused..told madhu I have never seen this side of naku..madhu smiled at baji and said you haven't seen anything yet.
Madhu looked around the garden searching for something..baji looked at her and asked what are you looking for ..madhu till searching answered..a ladder..you see that window there that is naku's room and I am going to enter the room and open the door for bhao..where is a ladder when you need one..and then suddenly turned towards baji and smirked.
Baji began to feel real uncomfortable with the way she was looking at him.
Baji :why are you looking at me like that.
Madhu : you are going to help me get to the window..it simple you see that pipe..if I able to reach till there it will be easier from me to climb it and enter the room..but to reach there I need your help..all you have to do is..fold your hand forward..i will place one leg on the hand.lift myself up climb on your shoulder and I will reach the pipe'simple.
Baji :but why should you climb on me
Madhu : so what are you saying..you want me to hold your weight so you can climb my shoulder.
Baji : I didn't say that..oh never mind..but isn't it dangerous.
Madhu : oh don't worry this is not the first time I am doing it..dont know why but whenever naku gets angry she locks herself up and trust me speaking with her through the door is not feasible.
Baji agreed to madhu's plan and leant against the wall..and folded his hand and giving her the support to climb..madhu quicklu climbed over baji's shoulder and stretched to reach the pipe..baji supporting her weight thought to himself.. one sibling dances on my head and now another one is literally standing on my shoulder.
Madhu managed to grab the pipe and climbed upwards ..baji moved from the wall and saw madhu climbing up and reaching the window..madhu entered the window and saw naku sitting on the ground with her back facing the door..naku looked up and saw madhu standing there and sighed..i should have known you would have entered like this..i forgot to lock the window.

Madhu went towards naku and sat next to her

Madhu : if dutta is anything like me he is not going to move from there unless you open the door.
Naku :I don't want to talk to him..i know the minute I open the door n look in his eyes I will forget everything and run happily in his arms'but have I really forgiven him
Madhu : unless you speak with him how will you know whether you can forgive him or not'3months changes a person a lot..now look at you..can you honestly tell me the naku 3 months back would have made dutta stand out like this.

Naku looked at madhu and knew what she was saying was right..so she got up and opened the door..dutta who was going to bang again had raised his hand and stopped seeing the door opened..he began to smile but immediately he became confused to see madhu in the room with naku.

Dutta :madhu how are you in here..
Madhu : by window..now you and naku talk and sort off your differences I will get baji back am sure that boy must be still waiting there thinking I will get out by climbing down the pipe.
Madhu went leaving dutta and naku alone..dutta and naku stood there looking at each other.
Naku :Now that you are here tell me what you want to say
Saying that naku went and sat on her bed waiting for dutta to speak..dutta closed the door and went and sat beside her.
Dutta : I know you are angry with me for not believing you..i have always told you I don't care of your looks and I love you for who you are..and yet when the time came I lost all control of my anger and not once did I bother to think of your side..all I thought was how beautiful faces have always betrayed me and without consideration I put you in that bracket.
Forgetting that despite your colour you are the same girl who has always loved me ..always stood by me when I was alone and yet when the time came for me to stand by you..i turned out to be weak..not only I had doubted your love for me but also doubted my friend baji who also always stood by me whenever I needed him.
The day that was the beginning of our married life I disgraced it by breaking my promise of always keeping you happy and never leaving your side.
Dutta turned to look at naku who had tears running down her eyes 'holding her hands he knelt in front of her..and said you have no idea the hell I went through when I could not find you that day'after you left I had come out in search of you and baji..but all I came across was the dead bodies of morey and his men.
Then I had got the news of baji being hospitalised and you went missing..dutta squeezed naku's hands gently and looked at her who finally was looking at him..that time I knew I cant live without you..without you I am just a person who is breathing but have no life..you are my everything..i will die. Mmph..
Naku covered dutta's mouth before he could complete his sentence and said ..please don't talk about death..if you die naku will never be able to live..and saying so naku too knelt and hugged dutta hiding her face in the crook of neck..and whispered I love you so much why didn't you come sooner.
Dutta :Hugging naku tightly back..i love you too.. I searched so much but never thought will find you at my sister's house.
Naku : still in dutta's arms'so you met your sister..finally'it is funny whenever I see her I used to think of you..but it is really funny how she turned to be ur sister.
Dutta (in a teasing tone) : though I am loving this small sister of mine right now with you in my arms I don't want to talk about her.
Naku (still in his arms but looked backwards to meet dutta's eyes):so..what do you want to talk about.
Dutta : well I want to show my beautiful wife how much I missed her.
Saying so dutta bend forward kissed her on her forehead ..naku remained silent as she smiled and looked at dutta with all the love she has for him..dutta smiled naughtily back at her and traced her lips gently with his finger'his smile was replaced by the desire his wife arose in him..as his other hand fisted her left hair and brought her face closer to his.
Her eyes fluttered close as his breath fanned across her face and she felt his lips touching hers in a slight kiss..she gasped as she felt his hands roving down her back drawing her close to him..using the opportunity dutta deepened his kiss..as if trying to convey all the love and desperation he felt in the 3 months that he missed her.
She could not help being swept away by his passion..as she eagerly responded to his kisses..she never knew when one kiss would end and the other began..slowly he moved back allowing her to catch her breath..but one look at her flushed face..her hair mused up and her lips swollen a s result to his kisses..he could no longer hold back.
As she was trying to catch her breath..he kissed her on the corner of her mouth .. he began placing butterfly kisses across her jaw line..he pushed her slightly backward allowing her head to lean on the bed while he held her with one hand and his other hand removing the dupatta from around her neck..revealing her neck to him..all that lovely skin tempting him .
He bent forward and traced her neck with his lips..naku placed her hands on his shoulder not knowing whether it was to push him away or pull him closer..his hard stubble scratching her soft flesh..she moaned as he soothed the burn..with long kisses'not missing any inch of her neck..
His fingers found the zipper of her dress and slowly pulled it down..his hands kept caressing her bare back while he continued kissing her leaving love bites on her flawless skin..naku who was breathing heavily moved her hand to his hair and moaned his name
Dutta who had lost control ..came to his senses when he heard his name..he knew this was not the time or place as baji and madhu were waiting for them ..he kissed her forehead and pulled her into a hug..naku hid her face into his chest and hugged tightly back..they were both breathing heavily and it took them a couple of minutes to get back to normal.
Finally dutta spoke..madhu and baji are waiting for us..naku said I know..and detached herself from him..both made themselves presentable and opened the door to meet them.

looking forward for your comments😳

Edited by jessica10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Jess............sorry for the late reply hun.....😳
OMG.....i too cant believe Dutta was just standing there and banging the door.....gadha kabhi nahi sudhrega.......😆
Madhu is one funny girl i tell u...........and i am loving her a lot.........she is vry much made for Baji coz he is also dhinchak dhinchak types😆 and madhu is also full of life.....😉
She climbed up and opened the door for Dutta.......and the line she said.........i am sure that boy must be waiting there thnkng i will come back frm the window.......🤣
OMG.............the reunion was so passionate and romantic..........he cud not resist..........lovely.........
Ab PN jaate hi shuru ho jayenge.........😉😆
But i just loved their reunion........it was vry romantic......
Thanx Jess for the PM.....
Waiting for the nxt part......😳
Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow!!!!!!!!!!wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! funtabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!splendid!!!!!!!!!!!out of this world!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!omg what an updte.......
Loss of words............Really excited with the TASHA reunion.............Loved it vry much...........Even Baaji-Madhu comic ideas.........Madhu proved she was Duttas sis............
Waiting for nxt update...........Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooon
One more suggestion -- Do send ur FF to the CVs of LTL so that they may take ur good ideas and mk th serial more interesting from now on..........Than shouting DHOKAAAAAAAA and only crying and crying.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was awesome..........so much passion..........just loved it.........update soon.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey jessica
brilliant effort dear....finally they met 😊
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OH GOD.. This was one hot update!!!
Mindblowing jess... this is awesomeeeeeee
Haiii it was romantically emotional , funny and then Ahem lool😳
Thanks for the PM.
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Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOOOOO so so hot ending lol loved it waiting 4 next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
excellent work. reading your update gives me immense happiness. I wish the CVs would read your update and incorporate some the character traits esp. Madhu.
With some highyl emotional, rona dhona episodes coming the next few weeks, your FF will be an nice escape place . Please keep it filled with some light moments especially between Madhu and Bajji.
please no rona dhona
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Posted: 14 years ago
great.. amazing scenes.. poor dutta knocking and knocking and did not rememebr to shout thru the door! Madhu is one hell of a girl.. baaji will have his hands full!!loved his thought where bhao . behen are dancing all over him!!
amaziing D-N reconcilitaion.. cant wait to read the next part as this time they had to pull apart due to otehrs!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mindblowing n awesomeeeeeee update jessica tanx 4 da pm

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