OS: Naku - 'I do!' Pt 3 - Pg 15 - Page 21

Originally posted by: suhana19

Hey DD yaar ...OMG iam just speechless ...u are just out of this world ....i mean u just took my breath away ...i had tears in my eyes ..each and every dialogue touched my heart..i felt like i was watchin LTL....kahi tum CVS ki team mein toh nahi hoo...nahi hoo toh u should be there 👍🏼 ....from starting to end i was like on the edge of my seat ....as i was reading it ...i really loved the ending . now iam looking forward for some romance..the new begining...thanx alot DD for writing such a excellent OS ....why didn"t start earlier ?....where were u hiding ur talent ?....pls jaldi update karna...now iam looking forward towards ur OS everday just like an LTL ....love u yaar ..thanx alot for the PM . 👏 👍🏼 🤗

Originally posted by: bfunofbb123

me kya bolu DD fantastic v.well writen u know cp & naku meeting would have been just like u wrote perfect prediction but bcoz of the weather 3hr shoot they have done it like 1hr otherwise would have been longer, but still the way he talks u got it spot on and the chai wala amazing how did u guess. as u said happened he advised & gave her strength. part 2 totaly c it happening naku so determined & saying this:

Mere saahib bahut achche hain, sabse achche hain... i so wants her to say this what she says is mind blowing u r too talented. CV's 'll still u from us & the best part is u accompanied it with a pic so we r able 2 c dutta's emotion & reaction. well done girl just mind blowing will comment more after i read part 3.

Originally posted by: bfunofbb123

eeeeeeexxxxxxxxcellent DD let me start meri Ai bolti he tum sach much bohot acha liktihe(excuse my hindi nehi ata) mind blowindg as part1 & 2 part 3 voh b naku reveal u executed it v.well yiiiiiipi happy endings. very intense and when he found out He turns his face in frustration. Anger growing every second, Dutta hits the wall and roars loudly. with the pic dutta roaring that was funny. DD all the dialogs u wrote and the length of it anil'll b out of job soon and tanx 4 been generous. hats off to u DD and it is ur first and the best i can totally c it happenig.well done keep writing and do pm me when u do tanx 4 pm this well done.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏(sorry 4 long post)

Originally posted by: 2010huma

Hello DD... *looks around nervously*...I just read the first part...I know I said that I would read it yesterday but I did not want to get my hopes up for the episode by reading ur OS beforehand...so maafi please...😃...and now I am glad I didn't read it beforehand...Sallu's scene in the episode was so hard to digest...🤢...and his dialogues...🤢🤢🤢...l absolutely loved the scene you wrote and I cant say enough about how good CP's dialogues were...If only the CVs had hired you to write that scene for the episode...I am googling LTL CVs contact info right now...😆...again, great job..

Hi DD,

What an awesome last part. 👏 Seriously, Cvs should really read this. I'm so disappointed with Monday's episode with SK. 🤢 I just could not digest it. Thanks for taking all your time to write this. I'm going to consider this as my Monday epi of LTL and forget about what the Cvs aired on Monday. Jumps in excitement. Fabulously written DD.

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

🤣🤣🤣🤣

Aai bolti??

🤣.......u r sweet!! 😛...

on the pic, I wanted him to roar and hit the wall, lekin gallery mein I culdnt find what i wanted.....with so many complaints on tht pic, I just replaced it...😆😆😆....this has to be the most funniest complaint I have ever seen!!

🤣🤣🤣🤣

This was just one shot Jorda.....Got up from afternoon nap, saw a dream, extended it to an OS....I dnt know whether I wuld write again....probably, when LTL leaves us stranded next time, I can! 😛😉

dnt be sorry at all Jorda...This is what I wanted...I want ppl to give me detailed feedback...what they wanted to see, what they loved.....thats how we get an idea, whats liked,...what gets felt....I want tht!! and u gave me just tht!!

Love u for this! 😛

hey DD how cud u??????

Originally posted by: princessmithai

hey DD how cud u??????

i mean im just in a shock way bigger shock than Dutta myt be seeing naku's fair avatar

replace that pic quickly

i want that pic

it was one pic of Dutta aka MR which wasnt worth drooling ovr

that was the coolest pic in the whole forum

replace it PRONTO

Originally posted by: chandanafan

Hi DD,

What an awesome last part. 👏 Seriously, Cvs should really read this. I'm so disappointed with Monday's episode with SK. 🤢 I just could not digest it. Thanks for taking all your time to write this. I'm going to consider this as my Monday epi of LTL and forget about what the Cvs aired on Monday. Jumps in excitement. Fabulously written DD.

You r the best DD.

Originally posted by: vika1981

DD,

Justice was served! I imagined that is how dutta would react when he found out her real colour. Naku was brilliant, but more over babi and her confession very well done.. Dutta finally accepting her was the highlight moment.. wow!!! now how i wish that is the way it happens in the show, but i know that they will def drag a bit, but looking forward to it.. brilliant.. I am so happy.. LOL loved the fact she said "Am I going to stay in the room or the alcohol?" ha ha..