Originally posted by: Made4eachother
Dancingdoll...sorry..i was late...
ok..my comments:
[DD] No problem....der aaye, durust aaye...as long as I entertained u
Naku notices it and immediately continues, "Nahi, Mein koi jhooth nahi boli aapko Saab. Mere se shaadi karnaa nahi karnaa, woh faislaa aapka hoga, meraa nahi".Dutta is extremely confused. Naku takes his hand and pulls him towards Bappa's Mandir. She notices his family following. She looks at him, "Yeh baat mein pehle aapko bataayegi"..
Hope Nakku says this in the serial tooo...!!
She finally lifted her gaze to look at Dutta and Dutta was in shock. His mouth wide open, confusion at its peak with a slight anger flicking, he recollects how he had saved this damsel once from goons and the moment when he had seen her in Anna's den. Unable to make sense out of anything, his mind had shut down and he feels a shooting pain in his head. He turns his face in frustration. Anger growing every second, Dutta hits the wall and roars loudly.
Loved the wat you expllained the flow of emotions in his face...!!!
[DD] yeah...i always feel tht shld be logical..thinking about the two instances when he saw her...😆
"Bappa...Dikhaa mujhe rastaa aaj!! Nahi rahi mere mein taaqat ab kuch bhi sehen karne ki".
Felt relly bad for Dutta...!!!!
[DD] Me too!! 😭😭😭...I am sorry, I made u cry Dutta! 😭😭
"Saab, Aap apni Naku se door jaa rahe? Naku kaise jeeyegi agar aap usse nahi dekhoge? Yeh meraa chehraa hai, lekin mein wahi hai sahib, jo hameshaa se thi...Nakusha, jo aapse bahut pyaar karti hai! Aapke naam se jiski subah hoti hai, aapki yaad se jiski raat! Jiski mohabaat aapko dekh kar sirf badhti jaati hai...sirf baadhti jaati hai! Saab..."
He keeps staring at her for a long time. He takes one step towards her, moves his gaze from top to bottom and says with tears in his eyes, "Tujhe dekhtaa hoon to apni Kaali Naku ko dhoondtaa hoon.Kya karoon mein? Tu bata, Kya karoon? Woh Naku meri pehchaan thi. Apni uss Naku mein, mein apne ko dekhtaa tha. Ab lagtaa hai, ki mein hi kahin kho chooka hoon! Jab door se, tere aane ka ehsaas hota hai, toh meri nazar darwaaze par beth jaati hai, Meri Naku ab aayegi, ek sapna boon leti hai yeh aankhen, ki meri Naku, chupke se aayegi, mere ko pyaar se dekhegi, haath aage karke, mujhe pukaaregi, "Saaaaaab", aur uski aawaz sun ke mein wahin khoo jaaongaa. Par jaise hi yeh roop dekhtaa hoon, mein pareshaan ho jaata hoon, kahaan hai woh meraa sapna? Woh Naku, jo Kaali mitti ki bani thi lekin sabse Gori thi!""Mein uss Naku ko bahut miss kartaa hoon. Mujhe meri Naku chahiye...Meri Naku waapis de do."Yeh khoobsoorti hi meraa shraap ban jaayegi, meine socha nahi tha...Mere bus mein hota naa Sahib, Mein Bappa se bolti, Yeh roop le le, bus mere saab phir se mujhe dekhnaa shuru kar de! Naku ke sahib agar usse dekhte toh Naku Khoobsurat hai, nahi toh Naku kuch nahi!".
Aap na...bahut jald..Anil deshmukh ke sath patnership karlo...!!!! you both can ROCK LTL...!!![DD] 😆😆😆😆....really? usko bolo na phir!! 😆😆😆 "Meri ek aur beti thi Sahib, Naku ki badi behen. Woh Naku se bhi zyaada sunder thi. Uski sundartaa uske sar par chadh gayi, aur galat sangat mein aake woh apna jism Dubai mein bech di. Aap batao Sahib, Mein kya Naku ko bhi Dubai ke bhediyoan ke hawaale hone deti?" Hearing about how Naku could have had such a prospect, a chill runs down Dutta's spine. He shivers.
Babi continues, "Naku mere ek baar kehne par, apnaa roop, rang sab de di. Mein Kaali Naku ko dekhti aur sochti, ki ek din uskaa bhi Raj Kumar aayegaa, jo usko in bhediyoan se bach aayegaa! Tab mein khud uska rang nikaalegi, khud usko sajaayegi, lekin tab tak mein usko bachaayegi. Morey uskaa roop dekha, aur usse ek raat istamaal karke Dubai mein bechnaa chahtaa tha, tab aap usse bachaaye." Dutta remembers the first time when he had met Naku, how she had come running to him, "Saab, Mujhe bachaao".
Babi tells him, "Phir Anna dekha usse aur apni biwi ko chod, Naku ke saath suhaag raat manaane ko koshish ki, Phir aap aake usse phir bachaaye." Dutta is shocked to hear this. He remembers how Naku was in the same bridal dress when he saw her with Anna and when he saw the beautiful Naku. He remembers Naku roaring - "Mere saab aayenge toh iss dus sar waale rakshas ka ek sir bhi nahi rahegaa. Yeh ek patni ka vishwaas hai". He clenches his fist and hisses. The fact that Naku came close to being raped when he was close by, in both the instances, shakes him internally. Dutta shivers further! The thought of Naku in Dubai or as Anna's wife, was too tormenting for him, He bangs his fist on the table, "Nakuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu".
Cant wait to actually see this part happening in the serial tooo...>!!!!
[DD] me too...i badly want one scene of Babi and Dutta...badly...Babi has to take up the responsibility,....she has to own up this mess....
Dutta gazes at the mirror which had Naku's reflection. While Naku goes on, he catches the glimpses of Koel Naku beside her....
"Mein aapse bahut pyaar karti hai, aur yeh haq mujhse koi nahi cheen saktaa! Yeh Pyaar sirf meraa hai."
Suddenly, Dutta sees, the Kaali Naku and fair Naku merge into one. He recollects Naku's numerous confession.
He closes his eyes and sees fair Naku looking at him longingly, with same love in her eyes as the Kaali one! Confessing the same lines as Kaali Naku..."Mein aapse Bahut pyaar karti hai, Mein aapse Bahut pyaar karti hai..."
He remembers Naku saying - "Ab toh khud bhi bhool chuki hoon, kab se unse pyaar kiya. Bus itnaa hi keh sakti hoon, sirf unse hi pyaar kiya"...Dutta weeps silently.
Naku sees Dutta going into further distress. She gulps her emotions and tells him finally, "Mere liye mere Saab ko khush rakhnaa!"
Naku leaves with tear in her eyes...
Awww.....poor Dutta...!!!! Dancing doll...i dont think there could have been a better way for Dutta to realize Nakku's love..other than the reflection thing...!!!....it was awesome the way dutta realised it..it was very touchy...
[DD] wow...I was a little scared on this merging thing but then i thought of gng ahead as this is what I want....😊...i m so happy u liked it....😛😛
Suddenly, her smiling face, her dancing with the Teddy bear, her wiping his wounds, her joke on her being kaali mitti, her look of determination - "Maut mein mei aapke saath rahe naa rahe, yeh faislaa sirf Naku ka hogaa. Maut ki kagaar mein akelaa chodke aapko kahin nahi jaayegi", All flash in front of him in fast forward mode...
He runs shouting "Nakuuuuuuuuu". He reaches the gate but the car had left. His eyes become wet, "Aaj mere se agar tu door chali gai Naku, toh teraa Saab jeenaa chod degaa. Tere ko mein apne paas se jaane nahi doonga". He had a new look of determination, he runs to his SUV, Pulls the driver out, places himself in the driver seat and starts his car. He reverses it in one stroke and runs behind Naku's car! He overtakes her car and stops in front of it. Baaji applies the brakes and everyone looks at Dutta in shock.
i was rlly worried whether Dutta will be able to make it or not...!!!
[DD] arre, kaise nahi...This is my OS...I had to stop her....wuld have made him drive at 100m/hr if possible, but i wuld have! 😆😆😆😆
"Naku, Humari yeh kahaani sirf do pal ki toh nahi ho sakti na? Do pal ki khushi aur phir gham? Do pal ka saath aur phir bechadnaa? Do pal ka Aehsaas, aur phir se adhooraapan?" He bites his upper lip, "Apnaa sab kuch lootaane aaya hoon. Math jaa Naku!".
Tears rolls down from Naku's eyes. She tells him, "Aap bhi toh nahi roke mujhe"
Dutta moves his head in frustration, "Arre, aisa hee hoon mein, par Mujh se achcha, mujhe tu jaanti hai...Toh tu hi bata -
Tere "Saab" bolne se jab meri subah hoti hai, toh tu mujhe chod ke jaa rahi thi?
Tere aankhon se jab mein apne ko dekhta hoon, toh tu mujhe chod ke jaa rahi thi?
Tere aahoan se jab mein apne wajood ko mehsoos kartaa hoon, toh tu mujhe chod ke jaa rahi thi?"
"Tu apne saab ko kaise chod sakti hai Naku? Mein to teri aakhon mein, saansoan mein, sapnoan mein, tere har astitva mein dikhtaa hoon!"❤️
"Log kehte hain ki tune mujhe dhoka diya, toh kyun tu mujhe maut ke muh pe chodi nahi?
Log kehte hain tune mujhe dookh diya, toh kyun mere muskaraane pe tu muskaraati hai
Log kehte hain tu chalaawaa hai, toh kyun jab mein rota hoon, tu mere paas hoti hai
Log kehte hain tu fareb hai, toh kyun tu mere liye jeeti hai
" ❤️
Dutta holds her hand with both his hands.
"Tere hone se phir jeene ka man kartaa hai
Tere hone se hasne ka man karta hai
Tere hone se bar bar pyaar karne ka man karta hai!" ❤️❤️
He pauses and looks at her intently
"Lekin tere naa hone se toh, marne ka bhi man nahi karta, Naku!" ❤️
"Aur tu mujhe chod ke jaa rahi thi? Math Jaa Naku!" Dutta pleads with his wet eyes.
"Maanta hoon thodi der ke liye bhatak gaya tha.Par ab mein jaan gaya hoon - Teraa chehraa badla, tera aks nahi.Teri shakal badli, Teraa aehsaas nahi.Teraa rang badla par mere liye teraa pyaar nahi!"
"Mein tere ko yeh waada toh nahi karta ki tere har pal khushi se bhar doonga, par yeh waada karta hoon, ki tere har pal mei mein hoongaa...
Mein tere se yeh waada toh nahi karta ki tere aankhon mein kabhie aansoon nahi aane doonga, par yeh waada karta hoon ki tere har aansoon ko pochne ke liye mein hoongaa...
Mein tere se yeh waada toh nahi karta ki mein tere se jhagdoongaa nahi, par yeh waada karta hoon ki jab tu apni nazar uthaayegi to tere ko manaane ke liye mein hoonga..."
Dancingdoll....TRUST me....you seriously deserve a standing ovation....!!!!!!
[DD] OMG!! Thanku....If u saw me here, u wuld know, I am blushing here....😳😳😳...thanks a million for the compli....
He extends his hand...Naku holds his hand and whispers, "aap dayedc ns pe"...The words come out unintelligible, Dutta comes closer and asks her, "Kya boli tu?"...Naku again whispers, "hb nfiew hfewi ds"...
Dutta gets a little impatient, "Ae Ladki, Ek toh sabar ho nahi raha hai, aur tu mantra jaap kar rahi hai. Pyaar mein zubaan bhi jaati hai kya?...Zor se bol".
Naku gets a little annoyed and literally shouts in his ears, "Us kamre mein mein rahegi yaa daaroo. Toh Kya soche aap?". 😆
Gosh..it was sooo funny....no wonder Dutta laughed for it..>!!!!!!!
[DD] I loved this too....I am telling u, she is pretty capable of tucking her saree on her waist and take out a belan and go to bar and smash all his daroo bottles, right in front of him....😆😆😆
"Tu hi meri Daroo hai Naku, Teraa Nasha utaarnaa mushkil hai, aur daroo mein kya loonga?". He gives her a tight jhappi. Naku gets embarrased and disengages herself.
"Saab, Aap bade wooh ho!!"
"Ae, ab teri Vehni hai".
Dutta pulls Naku in his car! He turns to Baaji and tells him, "follow us! We have lot of arrangements to do back home!" Naku blushes.❤️❤️❤️
Ab yeh Shaadi kab hogi..???Thankyoou soooooooooo much Dancingdoll...for this awesome OS..i'm sure it was not that easy to make it...!!!....it was just awesome...you almost made me cry...!Girl...you are just great..i have nothing to say...!! *SPEECHLESS*
[DD] Thanks u so much for ur comment...I didnt know u wuld like it so much....its means a lot to me! 😆
