OS: Naku - 'I do!' Pt 3 - Pg 15 - Page 19

Aap na...bahut jald..Anil deshmukh ke sath patnership karlo...!!!! you both can ROCK LTL...!!!




Cant wait to actually see this part happening in the serial tooo...>!!!!


"Naku, Humari yeh kahaani sirf do pal ki toh nahi ho sakti na? Do pal ki khushi aur phir gham? Do pal ka saath aur phir bechadnaa? Do pal ka Aehsaas, aur phir se adhooraapan?"

Arey yaar,Aisa lagaa ki main waakhe main,LTL dekhrahi hoon.SUPERBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB......................... ..........

Hey DD, sorry for the delay in my feedback. Here it goes:

The euphoria he is feeling is quickly dampened as she says that ''mere se shaadi karnaa nahi karnaa, woh faislaa aapka hoga, meraa nahi". Yet these words "Naku apne Sahib ko kabhie mana nahi kar sakti" sum up Naku's devotion to him.

Hai, yaar the beauty of your words are so touching. "Naku toh aapki hameshaa se hai, Aap Naku ke ho jaaoge!" – that is so true. She is already his in heart, mind, body and soul but she cannot let him become hers until he knows all.

DD you've captured the essence of Naku so well. You are keeping my hope alive that the Naku we used to know will resurface soon enough.

The confession before Naku's Bappa. How perfect! She can draw strength from him to not falter in what she must do. Yet even while doing so her only concern is for him, "Saab ke saath rehnaa aaj Bappa" – her selflessness is limitless. (At least in your version DD).

The confusion is too much for him. The flashbacks of having seen this face before hit him hard and he copes using his natural defence mechanism, his anger. He is disillusioned from his feelings because of her unfamiliar face but once the hurt subsides he will understand that his Naku is still there, only her colour has changed.

"Bappa...Dikhaa mujhe rastaa aaj!! Nahi rahi mere mein taaqat ab kuch bhi sehen karne ki". Naku's love slowly began to restore his faith in Bappa and now he needs that very divine support to keep him from falling into despair.

"Saab, Aap ab mujhe dekhoge bhi nahi?" – this is proof that he had fallen for her innocence, her inner beauty, her aura that he does not even want to indulge in seeing her 'beauty'.

"Saab, Aap apni Naku se door jaa rahe? Naku kaise jeeyegi agar aap usse nahi dekhoge? Yeh meraa chehraa hai, lekin mein wahi hai sahib, jo hameshaa se thi...Nakusha, jo aapse bahut pyaar karti hai! Aapke naam se jiski subah hoti hai, aapki yaad se jiski raat!" - In plain words, he must face her and really look at her because this is the truth. Neither he nor she can run from it. If he wants his Naku, he'll accept her in any form, dark or fair, in sickness or health (that vow sprang to mind for some reason).

"Par jaise hi yeh roop dekhtaa hoon, mein pareshaan ho jaata hoon, kahaan hai woh meraa sapna? Woh Naku, jo Kaali mitti ki bani thi lekin sabse Gori thi!" – haila, kya line hai. This was so beautifully written.

"Mein uss Naku ko bahut miss kartaa hoon. Mujhe meri Naku chahiye...Meri Naku waapis de do." Your making me cry reading Dutta's plea to have his Naku back. He misses his Naku! I'm speechless!

Finally, Babi steps up to undo the wrong she did so many years ago!

Thank you DD. You portrayed Dutta's disgust at hearing the torment his Naku endured at the hands of Morey and Anna, exactly how I would want it to be. The new level of rage he has for those filthy, despicable men that had even intended to do such horrendous things to his Naku is apt. Despite saving her in time, just the thought that there could have been a much worse outcome is killing him.

"Naku yeh sehen nahi kar sakti ki uske saab uski wajah se rote hai" and Mere bus mein hota naa Sahib, Mein Bappa se bolti, Yeh roop le le, bus mere saab phir se mujhe dekhnaa shuru kar de! Naku ke sahib agar usse dekhte toh Naku Khoobsurat hai, nahi toh Naku kuch nahi!"– DD you really want me to cry don't you! This is the message the CVs will portray. That regardless of what society defines as 'beauty' for beauty is indeed in the eyes of the beholder. If the person we love, loves us with all our flaws then we'd never want to be anything but the way they see us.

"Mein aapse bahut pyaar karti hai, aur yeh haq mujhse koi nahi cheen saktaa! Yeh Pyaar sirf meraa hai." Exactly! No one can stop her loving him. No one.


I adored the part about him re-working his 'dream' and feeling the same yearning for her. The anxiety of the separating growing and his heart taking charge to go stop her, "Aaj mere se agar tu door chali gai Naku, toh teraa Saabjeenaa chod degaa."

OMG DD. You did it. You brought tears to my eyes with Dutta's confession. His very existence is dependent on hers and he cannot let her go. All of it was mindblowing.
I will not copy it all, but this says it all "Tere hone se bar bar pyaar karne ka man karta hai!" Dutta is defeated. He is lost in her love. He cannot fight his fate, Bappa wants him to have love and so he must embrace it.

Teraa chehraa badla, tera aks nahi.Teri shakal badli, Teraa aehsaas nahi.Teraa rang badla par mere liye teraa pyaar nahi!" – Perfect!

It was fresh to see that you avoided all the clich lines of only filling her life with happiness. Dutta speaks from the heart and he knows that their life will not be a bed of roses so he'll not make promises that are easily broken. He vows that with the bad shall come the good. E.g. Mein tere ko yeh waada toh nahi karta ki tere har pal khushi se bhar doonga, par yeh waada karta hoon, ki tere har pal mei mein hoongaa...

I loved the cuteness in Naku's reply. Me or the alchohol. Like there is any contest but his response is awesome, "Tu hi meri Daroo hai Naku, Teraa Nasha utaarnaa mushkil hai, aur daroo mein kya loonga?!

I was smiling a big goofy grin at the end. Baaji cues in at the best times to make the normacly return.

DD I love you for this. 🤗 🤗 🤗 This is my favourite face reveal FF. 👏
I really truly, madly, deeply, want the CVs to read this and be inspired!

Originally posted by: newbe

oye hoye wah yeh hwi na baat 😆😆😆
ley yeh tere liye aaj key lesson ka inaaam

DD supoerrrrbbbbbbbb

Originally posted by: Nali4180

Are, well i hope this is a beautiful beginning of your journey as a writer!!

HAi, you make me blush with your praise, im not sure you can call me a critic but i say what i feel and OS was beautiful!!

Even if todays ep is not up to standard, i'll replace it with your OS in my memory!! I'm glad that i am part of the LTL forum, i've never been a part of one and it was a good decision to meet so many nice ppl!!!

credit has to go to my dost PD, for helping get lovely forum dosts!!!

I will keep on reading and writing on your threads 😆

Originally posted by: ltl_fan

@DD: Read all the three parts. Sorry could not comment sooner. Loved all the parts especially the extra treat you gave with the photos. Just superb👏. I hope the CV' pick up some ideas and dialogues from this OS. Please do continue with the next part of the wedding. Loved how Dutta's dream sequence changed from Gori Ya Kali😆. Bravo.

Originally posted by: sut1

DD ..... I'm just speechless......

all the parts are wonderful .....but the last one is defn. the winner.......👏

specially the scene whr 'Dutta sees, the Kaali Naku and fair Naku merge into one' ..... u hit a sixer 👍🏼

very happy to see dutta accepting nakku wholeheartedly ..... surely this'll happen in the show too.

Brilliant !!!