The Replacement - Page 2

interesting... i love literature and ur use of words and phrases is just mindblowing. its fantastic. and truely deep

thnx for sharing it with us.

lol after my english teachers great effort in making me hate writting, u have given me back my love for words.

Originally posted by: Saregama_fan

Well, I think it is pretty much confirmed Tanya will be dying... so here is something I jotted down to understand her ... (i.e I am guess she is not going to be murdered, but instead accept death herself)....

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All my life I have been a replacement. A replacement for a lover, a replacement for a mother, and a replacement for a wife. Every time we touched, I knew he thought of her. Every time we spoke I knew he yearned for her voice. Every time he smiled, I knew he remembered her. She was my best friend, and all I wanted to do was help. I didn't know helping someone would one day make me so helpless. Without knowing I fell in love, without knowing I started dreaming of him. Without knowing I started to live in a world which was not mine.

Time passed and dust settled on those old memories making me forget that all this was an illusion, nothing belonged to me. Not this house, nor my husband, nor my daughter and not even my own heart. Day by day the web of dreams, illusion, and fantasy spread wider and wider, taking me in deeper and deeper. Then she walked into our lives once again, bringing with her a new gush of wind, blowing away all the dust, all the webs. I started to see the love in his eyes again, the slight smile dancing on his lips and a new found joy in his life. I tired hard to believe it was all for me. I tried hard to fight back the wind and capture the tiny specks of dust that once helped me forget everything. But each time I opened my palm it was empty, just like my life and his eyes when he looked at me.

I was a replacement and that was the only truth of my life. Always came second. The second wife, the second lover, the second mother. It was time to change it all. It was time to not be a replacement any more … Embrace me death, embrace me as your first love and take me as your own. In death I will not be replaced, in death I will come before her.

extremly, extremly well written. keep it up.. brilliant. fantastic.. u made me speechless

well written all true, great job 👏

thats really good.
i feel so bad for tanya...

That was very touching! Beautifully written 👏.

I would always relate her life to a 'Mirage'.

Tanya might pass away, but her memories shall always remain.

Take care.

Originally posted by: ejaz_biggestfan

Saregama_fan that is really good n i feel wot u ahve said has summed up tanya really and the whole situation from really her point of view and it beautiful written i wish ma english was that good

Thank you 😃 ... and your english is good, you just have to try it out... 😃

Originally posted by: suuunshiine

awww , i feel sorta sympthatic towards tanya .. but how she acted towards nandini was rude .

hehe... ya ... even I feel sympathatic to her especially if Tanya will be killed off, I just hope they don't create a murder mystery out of it...😕

Originally posted by: minahil 786

That was a beautiful piece of writing!
Thumbs up!
👏 👏 👏

Thank you 😃😃😃

Originally posted by: angel85

nice written 😔

Thank you😃 ... and why the sad face? 😔

Originally posted by: STUD_99

Fantastic.... That was absolutely beautiful!!!!!!
Although I kinda not like tanya but ure work here is brilliant!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you 😃 ... ya her character is quiet controversial (on the forum) 😉...😆😳

Originally posted by: pinkberry

awwwww...I feel sad for Tanya....
Gr8 job by the way..... 👏 👏 👏

Thank you 😃😃😃

Originally posted by: shinhwafan1

That was a beautiful piece of writing
👏
i feel bad for tanya but i like karan with nandini

Thank you 😃 ... Ya the relationship between the three of them is very delicate and complicated ... you can't really sympathize with one without feeling bad for the other... 😕

Originally posted by: maragathm

Yeah very blatantly written. In death she will come before Nandini, her only victory. I hope she doesnt kill herself that will be sad. Well done as usual, you did an amazing job with eklavya, just as beautiful with Tanya as well. 😃

Thank you 😃 ... Ya it would be sad if she kills herself... but I just don't want another murder mystery out of her death... we already have enough going on in the story... like I would like to see more development b/w other characters....

Originally posted by: *PM*

Dat was greatly put 👏

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: Alishia

That was fantastic. Calls for a stand up applause👏 .

Thank you 😃 ... and here a round of smiles from my side...😃

Originally posted by: yamulya1

chands that is a nice thought 👏 . but i like tanya

amu~

Amu 🤗 ...Thanks for the encouragement.. 😃

Originally posted by: nishafromcanada

aww nice 👏

Glad you like it 😃

Originally posted by: nick_bon

interesting... i love literature and ur use of words and phrases is just mindblowing. its fantastic. and truely deep

thnx for sharing it with us.

lol after my english teachers great effort in making me hate writting, u have given me back my love for words.

omg... thank you 😃 ... u r given me more credit than I deserve... I am sure your love for words was always there, there was just a little dust on it 😆... now I hope to see some good fan-fics from you 😉...😳

Originally posted by: stylishgal

extremly, extremly well written. keep it up.. brilliant. fantastic.. u made me speechless

Thank you 😃 ... hmm... will try and keep it up ...😆😳😉

Originally posted by: Singh23

well written all true, great job 👏

Thank you 😃😃😃

Originally posted by: asma14

thats really good.
i feel so bad for tanya...

Thank you 😃 ... aww...don't feel bad ......😃

Originally posted by: Mikayla

That was very touching! Beautifully written 👏.

I would always relate her life to a 'Mirage'.

Tanya might pass away, but her memories shall always remain.

Take care.

wow...mirage...that is a nice thought...👏👏

you are right, her memories will always remain in the form of Bhoomi and Manthan 😃