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Posted: 18 years ago
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next one coming up soon...😉
Edited by ladoos - 18 years ago
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Tulsi found herself smiling at KT & said, "Mujhe nahi pata tha ki meri bachchi itni sayani ho gayi hai. Lekin baaki ki cancellations to karni hain na (I didn't know that my girl has become so wise. But we still have to do the rest of the cancellations)." KT said mischievously, "Ji, who sab to karna hai. Aakhir main kitna kaam karun akeli? (Yes, all that has to be done. After all, I can't do ALL the work by myself." As Tulsi raised her hand gesturing playfully to hit her, KT ran & hid behind Baa. Tulsi was in the middle of asking Lakshya & Nakul to do all the cancellations when KT said from behind Baa, "Waise main mazaak kar rahi thi (By the way, I was kidding)." Then she came over to Tulsi & said, "I already took care of all that."

***
Everyone had gone to sleep but Manthan lay awake in his room. He couldn't sleep as he thought of all that had taken place earlier. He got very irritated at sleep not coming so finally decided to take a stroll in the garden. He made his way down quietly & once again all came back to him that he was avoiding. He was extremely cross at himself. "Why?" he asked himself. Manthan did not know what had overcome him. He was outraged at the thought of him showing emotion in public. Why did he do that? Was it because he had felt Bhoomi's pain? But he had cried a 2nd time in Karan's arms, the one thing he never imagined he would do. Did he still care that deeply for his father? Manthan knew that he had never felt so happy in his entire life as he felt after Karan hugged him & told him he was proud of him. It was as if Manthan had waited all his life to hear those words from his father & had been craving for his attention.

He had not seen his Tulsi Dadi notice his tears and it was a good thing. As he still didn't like her much but then again he had been nicer to her lately. And according to Manthan, nice meant refraining from talking back or saying anything hurtful while still giving the nasty & full of dislike glances & making it obvious at the same time. Tulsi, however, had noticed this change. And she was all the more delighted. She knew something was bringing about a change in Manthan but she didn't know what. She prayed to her Thakurji that whatever it was, may it continue to bring about a positive change in him. As he was lost in his thoughts he didn't realize when he ended up walking to the patio & sitting on the swing. He sat there for quite a while & was so lost in thoughts of his changed behavior that he didn't hear someone approaching. As soon as that person came to stand behind him, a sweet smell engulfed his senses & he closed his eyes; only to see the same set of captivating eyes he had been seeing so often these days in his dreams. He smiled unconsciously with his eyes still closed, not wanting those eyes to vanish. He seemed to loose himself in them every time he saw them & they made him forget all his woes & took him into a dreamland.

there's more to the ending of this part below! don't forget to read it as u won't want to miss it! hope u enjoyed it 😉
Edited by ladoos - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooops! i didn't mean to end it there 😛 there's more to it at the end!😉



Tulsi found herself smiling at KT & said, "Mujhe nahi pata tha ki meri bachchi itni sayani ho gayi hai. Lekin baaki ki cancellations to karni hain na (I didn't know that my girl has become so wise. But we still have to do the rest of the cancellations)." KT said mischievously, "Ji, who sab to karna hai. Aakhir main kitna kaam karun akeli? (Yes, all that has to be done. After all, I can't do ALL the work by myself." As Tulsi raised her hand gesturing playfully to hit her, KT ran & hid behind Baa. Tulsi was in the middle of asking Lakshya & Nakul to do all the cancellations when KT said from behind Baa, "Waise main mazaak kar rahi thi (By the way, I was kidding)." Then she came over to Tulsi & said, "I already took care of all that."

***
Everyone had gone to sleep but Manthan lay awake in his room. He couldn't sleep as he thought of all that had taken place earlier. He got very irritated at sleep not coming so finally decided to take a stroll in the garden. He made his way down quietly & once again all came back to him that he was avoiding. He was extremely cross at himself. "Why?" he asked himself. Manthan did not know what had overcome him. He was outraged at the thought of him showing emotion in public. Why did he do that? Was it because he had felt Bhoomi's pain? But he had cried a 2nd time in Karan's arms, the one thing he never imagined he would do. Did he still care that deeply for his father? Manthan knew that he had never felt so happy in his entire life as he felt after Karan hugged him & told him he was proud of him. It was as if Manthan had waited all his life to hear those words from his father & had been craving for his attention.

He had not seen his Tulsi Dadi notice his tears and it was a good thing. As he still didn't like her much but then again he had been nicer to her lately. And according to Manthan, nice meant refraining from talking back or saying anything hurtful while still giving the nasty & full of dislike glances & making it obvious at the same time. Tulsi, however, had noticed this change. And she was all the more delighted. She knew something was bringing about a change in Manthan but she didn't know what. She prayed to her Thakurji that whatever it was, may it continue to bring about a positive change in him. As he was lost in his thoughts he didn't realize when he ended up walking to the patio & sitting on the swing. He sat there for quite a while & was so lost in thoughts of his changed behavior that he didn't hear someone approaching. As soon as that person came to stand behind him, a sweet smell engulfed his senses & he closed his eyes; only to see the same set of captivating eyes he had been seeing so often these days in his dreams. He smiled unconsciously with his eyes still closed, not wanting those eyes to vanish. He seemed to loose himself in them every time he saw them & they made him forget all his woes & took him into a dreamland.

Someone cleared their throat & brought Manthan back to earth. He certainly wasn't pleased & when he turned around with annoyance, his face instantly acquired the angry & annoyed look. This was the last person he wanted to see this moment & was about to put it into words when he heard, "Woh…woh main…tumhare liye…tumhare liye yeh lekar aayi thi." He looked down at her hands that were holding a small bowl with a yellowish paste in it. He was about to address her with the precious "Ms. Gawar" but all that came out was, "Yeh kya hai?" She hesitated and kept her gaze on the earth, "Ddddd…dava," she gulped as she stuttered.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
Dat woz gr8, cant wait 2 hear da rest!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome 👏 👏
continue soon can't wait to read the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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enjoy! 😉


Manthan was surprised. He didn't know what to think of what she had just said. And on top of that she looked scared out of her life. Was it him that she was afraid of, he thought? And if it was him then why had she still come to him? Great, just what I need right now, more confusion! Finally he managed to say, "Yeh kis liye? Aur mere liye kyun? Shayad tumhe abhi tak samajh nahi aaya ke chot mujhe nahi Joydeep ko lagi hai (What's this for? And why for me? Maybe you still haven't understood that it's not me that's hurt but Joydeep)," he said harshly. He caught a fleeting glance of anger cross her face with eyes still downcast but it was gone just as fast as it had come. He stood there amused. He could never understand this girl. She had always gotten on his nerves from the beginning but now he was more amused than angry. He didn't know how this girl was able to take all that he sent her way, which, no doubt, had always been very negative. He sighed & said, "Ab kuch to bolo (Say something atleast)." She pointed at him but he failed to understand what she was trying to say. Defeated, she came around the swing, closing the distance between them and motioned for him to sit down on the swing. He was about to refuse but changed his mind & quietly sat down. She sat down beside him & placed a bowl of warm water in her lap that he had not noticed before. Then she took a small hand towel from a bag she seemed to have carried from inside and dipped the towel into the warm water. She squeezed the water out & then before proceeding she paused a second as she looked at something in his direction. He was so confused by now that he decided to stay mum.

As she swiped the wet towel across his upper arm, he looked at her in surprise. What was she doing? Then he looked down and saw dried blood around a pretty nasty bruise…no it wasn't a bruise…it was a deep wound. He was surprised that he hadn't noticed it & the surprise was evident on his face. She noticed. Manthan looked up to see her cleaning his wound intently. He kept looking at her as he thought how he had not even realized that he was hurt, neither did any of the family members that had surrounded him, so how did KT know he was hurt? Was she the only one who had noticed? Apparently so, otherwise she wouldn't be the only one or the one to be cleaning him up. The thought sent a warm feeling somewhere in him but he ignored it.


i'm hoping u all liked this one 😉
Edited by ladoos - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Dat was rely sweet, hpe dey get 2getha soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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once again...thank u all! i was supposed to post the next part this past friday but...oh well...u can expect the next one on monday...hopefully i won't forget about it!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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the next one coming right up!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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next part is finally here! extremely sorry for the delay...


It had been over a month now since the incident with Abhir and Joydeep had recovered fast. He had been in extreme pain & the doctor had to prescribe him stronger pain killers. Bhoomi had looked after Joydeep and taken care of every little thing. She had stayed by him most of the time and made sure he ate & took medication on time. Joydeep had been extremely shocked at Bhoomi's sudden change towards him but happy nonetheless. And to top it off…the whole family had celebrated Lohri with full non-stop masti once Joydeep had recovered enough. It had been the best day of Joydeep's life. Not only did the entire family take care of him, especially Bhoomi, but he also got to dance with Bhoomi the whole night. Bhoomi had been concerned about Joydeep over exhausting himself but had given in once she'd seen how happy he was & how much he was enjoying himself. Even Bhoomi had a great time. She was starting to admit that she liked spending time with Joydeep. Although, she still refused to admit that she was attracted towards him. She liked to term their relationship as only friendship at the moment. The family had noticed the growing fondness between the two & was nothing less than elated, especially Karan & Tulsi. And on top of that Lakshya & Nakul had left no chance in pulling Joydeep's leg about how attentive Bhoomi had become towards him & this teasing could take place only when Bhoomi was not around. And speaking of Bhoomi…she had changed. She had realized how wrong she was about many things and especially her Tulsi Dadi. Now she went to Tulsi whenever she needed someone to talk to or for advice. Tulsi was elated at this. Not only had she managed to make Bhoomi & Eklavya understand the circumstances under which Ansh had died but she had also managed to bring Bhoomi closer to Eklavya & Nandini, with help from the rest of the family. It had taken some time for Bhoomi & Eklavya to discover the whole truth but Tulsi refused to give up till she made sure that the two children found out the entire story. Mandira, once again, failed to create a rift in Shantiniketan & its occupants. Karan finally was giving time to Tanya & Nandini had decided to move on with Aseem. Neither Aseem, nor Tanya felt insecure of the strong friendship that remained between Karan & Nandini. In fact, all four became the best of friends.

Tulsi could tell that the grey clouds that had been hovering over her abode were starting to clear and the relationships were blossoming again. The distances in the varied relationships were getting shorter. Bhoomi seemed to be starting to accept Joydeep slowly, Karan & Tanya were coming closer, Eklavya's eyes didn't hold the questions that used to make Tulsi guilty, and Tanya had finally accepted Eklavya & showered as much love on him as possible. Nandini, however, was still distant from him. A fear gripped her every time Eklavya was around her. Eklavya didn't know how to face her as he had realized the injustice his father had done to her & Karan. He felt guilty every time Nandini looked at him & he couldn't tolerate the fear he saw in her eyes. He turned to Tulsi for help & she advised him that he should give Nandini some time for her to realize that he was nothing like Ansh & that Ansh was not back in his avatar. Tulsi advised him against avoiding Nandini just because she didn't feel comfortable around him. Eklavya had put this plan into action almost immediately and as of now, Nandini didn't tremble at his sight anymore. So, things looked good for Eklavya at the moment. Tulsi had made Eklavya realize that Nandini needed to get to know the real Eklavya & once she knew him & understood him then Nandini will have no problem with him.

Nakul had been told who his real parents were. And he had accepted them with open arms & had been sorry for his rude behavior towards Gautam and had finally realized Tripti's reality. Now, some of the concerns that remained for Tulsi were Ganga & Sahil, Tripti and most of all Manthan. Everyone had started to notice the change in him & were pleasantly surprised at his sudden kind gestures to various family members whom he usually would have misbehaved with. To name a few…Tulsi, Sahil, Nakul, Lakshya, Joydeep, and last but not least, KT.


how was it? i know it wasn't as exciting as the last one but it was necessary for my story to move its focus to Manthan-KT...i know that so far it seems like the story's about Joydeep & Bhoomi but have patience! 😊 later...
Edited by ladoos - 18 years ago

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