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Posted: 18 years ago
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here's the next one...


Part 9:
Karan came over to Manthan and hugged him tightly, "Thank you beta. Tumne aaj jo apni behan ke liye kiya hai, mujhe uspar naaz hai. Aur main bade fakar se keh sakta hoon ke tum mere bete ho." Manthan didn't react at first and then slowly brought his hands up to hug his father back. Manthan couldn't remember the last time that his father had shown affection to him like this. Usually, the only reaction he got from him was a reprimand, even if it was out of concern or care. Since childhood, Manthan had always felt sidelined and to get his father's attention he did things that he normally would never do and then it eventually became a habit & he grew up the way he was now. He was always angry & didn't care for emotion. He wasn't comfortable when people showed care & concern for him, even his own mother to some extent. But he was fine with Bhoomi. Yes, he had been jealous of her always because of the way Karan treated her & paid attention to her but he loved her more. And the jealousy of Bhoomi turned to dislike for his father. He had never blamed Bhoomi for Karan's indifference towards him; it wasn't her fault that Karan loved her.

But now that Karan was embracing him lovingly, he forgot all the dislike & contempt he had been holding inside him all these years. Instead, it was replaced with sorrow. He felt sorrow for the love of his father that he had been robbed of, of all the childhood memories that he had lost out on with his father, and his guidance & support. He closed his eyes tightly trying to etch the moment in his heart forever. Manthan didn't cry though. He wasn't one to break down in front of others. He held his tears & finally when Karan let go he stepped back & smiled back at his father saying, "Thanks dad." Tulsi was observing all this while the rest of the family was huddled around Joydeep. Bhoomi & Tanya had been looking at the father & son fondly & smiling. Bhoomi understood what this gesture from their father meant to Manthan and was happy for him. She knew that it was hard for Manthan to let go of grudges so easily & that this small act of affection from Karan would probably not erase all the other times he had neglected Manthan; but it was a start. Little did she know that Manthan was no more the same Manthan she knew a few months back. And standing by the door, away from the rest, stood KT; taking in all that had happened that day. She had been noticing a change for a while now but could not figure out what that change was. The atmosphere had been changing in Shantiniketan as well. Deep in thought, KT lazily looked around the room. The whole family was gathered in Bhoomi's room. She looked back at Karan Virani's family standing by the window. She smiled slowly as she realized something and walked out the room & almost ran into Lakshya's room as if in a rush. When she found what she was looking for she ran back & to her relief everything was the same as when she had left. Karan Virani & his family were still standing to the side & seemed very relaxed & happy to be together. KT stood patiently watching them and waited for the right moment for her to do what she was intending to do for a while now. No one noticed her & she slipped out quietly and headed to her room. Then she went downstairs and saw to it that the Lohri party was postponed (she knew they couldn't hold the party that night & also knew how upset Joydeep would be if it was cancelled so she decided that no one would object to holding the party at a later date). Then she went into the kitchen and had Ramu kaka, along with the other servants, help her set the dinner table as the dinner had already been prepared. When everything was ready she headed upstairs to call everyone down for dinner.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome!! 👏 👏 👏
_-Sana
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
will post the next one sometime tomorrow...do comment in the meantime...
Edited by ladoos - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey that a nice story, continue soon, 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
gr88 plz postt..more!!! i hope the next one starts wid kt/manthan love story!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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fab..... 👏
c**tinue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for the positive response! here's the next one...



KT entered and saw that the family was sitting/standing together & discussing what actions to take next regarding Abhir. Bhoomi sat beside Joydeep & seemed to be in her own world. KT finally said, "Baa, khaana nahi khana? (Baa, don't we have to eat?)" Everyone turned around to look at her & Lakshya just rolled his eyes. He couldn't believe that KT was worried about eating when the family was going through such a time. Then Tulsi looked around & said, "KT theek keh rahi hai. Chalo Tanya, Damini, chalkar khaana tayaar karen aur bachcho, thodi der main aa jaana neeche (KT's right. Let's go Tanya, Damini; let's prepare the food & the rest of you…come downstairs in a few minutes)." KT smiled, "Baa, uski koi zarurat nahi hai. Main sabko lene aayi hoon. Khaana tayaar hai aur thanda ho raha hai (Baa, that won't be necessary as I've come to get you all. The food's ready & is getting cold)." Tulsi looked at her with surprise & then smiled, "Yeh sab tune kiya? Meri achchi bachchi (You did all of it? My good girl)." There were a few protests that they weren't hungry but Tulsi forced everyone to come down for dinner. Bhoomi said she wasn't hungry; Karan tried to pressuade her but Tulsi asked him to leave Bhoomi alone for a while saying, "Bhoomi ko thoda waqt do. Phir woh apne aap theek ho jayegi (Give Bhoomi some time & she'll be fine)." Everyone went downstairs & headed to where KT waited by the sink holding a towel for them to wipe their hands with after they were done washing. Everyone smiled at her as she stood there holding out the towel for all as they walked by. Manthan was last to wash his hands & as he turned to wipe his hands he found KT looking at him closely but when she saw that he noticed she quickly looked the other way. Manthan quietly wiped his hands and headed to the dinner table.

Everyone started eating in silence. After making sure that all were served & that no one needed anything, she headed to Bhoomi's room but not before Tulsi noticed & said, "KT, Kahan jaa rahi ho? Tum nahi khaogi? (KT, where are you going? Won't you eat?)" KT turned with a smile & said, "Baa, aap fikar mat kijiye. Aapko pata hai ki main apne khaane ka kitna khayal rakhti hoon. Main thodi der mein aayi aur phir khaloongi (Baa, don't you worry. You know how much I care about eating. I'll be back in a while & I'll eat then)." KT went upstairs & knocked on Bhoomi's door. At first she didn't get a response but when she knocked again she heard a faint, "Come in." KT saw Bhoomi had showered & changed & was now sitting by Joydeep's side again. KT smiled at her as Bhoomi looked up. "Bhoomi di, aap chal kar kuch kha lijiye (Bhoomi di, you should go eat)." Bhoomi shook her head no & said, "I'm not hungry." KT said, "apne liye na sahi to kam se kam apne dad ke liye to khaa lijiye. Woh aapke liye bohot pareshaan hain. Aur agar aap jakar khaana kha lengi to unhe achcha lage ga aur unki pareshani bhi kuch kam ho jayegi. Aap unhe dukhi nahi dekhna chahti na? To chaliye uthiye (If not for yourself then atleast eat for your dad. He's really worried about you. And if you go eat then he'll feel better. You don't want to see him sad, right? Come on then, get up)." Bhoomi said, "But Joydeep. He'll be alone." KT smiled & said, "mujhe bhi iski fikar hai. Dost jo hai mera. Main iske paas hoon. Aap jaa kar kha lijiye. Ok? (Even I'm worried about him. After all, he's my friend. I'll stay with him & you go eat)" Bhoomi smiles at her & quietly went down to eat.

Tulsi came to fetch KT to eat something & said that Joydeep would be fine as he was asleep. So KT unwillingly left Joydeep's side & went downstairs where everyone was sitting in the lobby. KT made her way to the dinning table & quietly ate her dinner. All of a sudden Mihir exclaimed, "What about the Lorhi party? We forgot about that." Everyone looked around at each other not knowing what to do or say. Tulsi said, "How can we have a party Mihir? So much has happened that the question of a party doesn't arise." Mihir looked at her saying, "That's not what I meant. But all the work that needs to be done…who'll do that? After all, we have to do all the Cancellations." All the kids said together, "No! We can't cancel the party." After a bit of bickering back & forth between the elders & the youngsters, Manthan, who had been quiet till now finally said, "Dadu, Joydeep had done most of the preparations for this party & I don't think he'll be happy to hear that all his efforts went to waste & that it was called off because of him. Why don't we postpone it? Joydeep will be pleased & we can have a double celebration of him recovering as well as Lohri." Bhoomi chirped in, "Yes Dadu. Joydeep will be very upset if we cancel it. Postponing it will be the best." As all agreed to hold the party after a week a man in white walked into the house followed by a few others. "Yes?" asked Mihir. The man said, "Sir, we have wrapped up & done all the cleaning outside. Just wanted to ask when the party will be held so I know when to bring my team in to do all the work. All were surprised to hear this and Tulsi asked him, "How do you know that we didn't cancel it but postponed it?" The man smiled & looked for the girl who had informed him. KT answered, "Maine bataya inko (I told them)." As all turned to look at her she smiled back nervously & said, "Well…I figured that we couldn't possibly have a party today & knew how hurt Joydeep would be if he found out that it was canceled. And I figured that we would most likely postpone it so I went ahead and informed them of the same."



this one was a bit slow...but i'll be picking up the pace with the KT-Manthan track soon 😉 have a nice weekend!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
awesome!!! WOW PLZZZ UPDATE 😉 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
awesome part 👏 👏
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
awesome.. please continue.. i like where this is going.. even though i am lakshya-kt fan.. i know you r going to make this interesting enough with manthan and kt

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