FF-Luv U Hamesha pt 18 page 33 7/11/08 EKT

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

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Posted: 17 years ago

#171

OMG THAT WAS AWESOME

PLZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE SOON

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Firyaal Bolaky

@Firyaal

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

#172

Originally posted by Firyaal

really the writer on this forum is 100 times better than ekta writer

Thanx for the compliment. Most FF writers on this forum are really good and in the akIT FORUM. sUCH A SHAME eKTA DOESN'T USE common sense i guess. She has so far spoilt every show that had a good start.

Thank u dear

Hope u update soon

Its really relaxing to read yr ff

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salma

@Sallu-

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#173

meri pyaari pyaari dee thank you!!
i loved the part the sweetness hai!
kt and eku excellnt!--sweet love!
and ranbir is soo cute he is changing..
Kanya open your eyes..!
dee you made me happy! :D
briillll part absolutely brilliant
continue soooon!

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Saba

@stars_shine*

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#174

hey di

love the part

continue soon

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: princez-preciou
meri pyaari pyaari dee thank you!!
i loved the part the sweetness hai!
kt and eku excellnt!--sweet love!
and ranbir is soo cute he is changing..
Kanya open your eyes..!
dee you made me happy! :D
briillll part absolutely brilliant
continue soooon!

Its about time Eklavya became good again but I'm struggling with Kanya a little bir. Ranbir is a great character its what direction i want this to go now thats bothering me.😕

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Sej

@SejN

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#176

awwwww so sweet loved the part plz write more soon =)

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#177

Thank You's

Kanyaa91 Its good to know KIT readers on KSBKBT forum reading

12Kaler I know U read a lot of FF's on LKT but thanks for reading my FF as its not just about 1 couple but three. Laksh will come into play after 2 more updates.He'll get more action than he gets in KSBKBT.

sweet cherry U R a regular FF reader in all the KIT forum. Very eager for the next part. Things will start to take off for RanKan in the next 2 updates. Hopefully i'll get the update ready by tomorroe. Its been a hectic week and haven't had time. I said initially i won't update 3 weeks but updated after a week couldn't stay away.😆

unpredictables91 U R awesome as U have been reading all my FF's since my days at KIT. It means alot that my regular readers R carrying on with me.

starshine_* Saba U R a great person for all your encouraging comments. Both of us haven't had much time with our fast but when we do we have a good convo. Hope U read the next installment. I will PM it to everyone as soon as its don

yogitz U R too good. A true Rankan fan from the KIT forum. U post comments both here and on the KIT forums. Plus thanks for understanding like all the people i am thanking here for my not being able to update regularly. After Ramadan is over i should be able to do it every 2 days or 3..

Kiran_1 U read a lot of FF's from the KIT forum. Plus U read all of mine. Its good that U leave your own comments on how U felt about the characters.

princez-preciou Salma Thanks so much for reading and always putting in your thoughts. U encourage me a lot with everything U say and make me want to write more. I am still waiting for U to update your FF which by the way is going in a brilliant direction.

KC294 Fathema U R awesome. As one of the Fantastic FF writers its good hearing from U.

janu_2006 I will keep this short and sweet. U R GREAT

nidheiya All YOUR ff'S R going great and your writing has improved. Glad U like my FF.

Firyaal I like what U say. Thanks again for thinking i'm a great writer. I know i'm not that good but words of encouragement and praise is what keeps us writing.

sejal719 I am greatful that U have carried on reading this man. I like seeing all these comments left behind. It makes me feel i am doing my job

adventure_gurl Again the same for U.Don't wanna bore anyone with me repeating over and over. Its important to thank readers.

queenyuks U i thank for many reasons but i am a little mad. When will U update your FF? Anyways U probably R busy like me. I too like the fact U write your own thoughts about what U liked and hope to happen. Also by predicting how the story will unfold. That way i don't go through that route.😉

I hope i haven't missed anyone. Normally i don't write comments for all but its my way of saying that i will update more and a personal thanks to all and to the silent readers as well. I just hope all this doesn't sound like an OSCAR speech. Next update will be tomorrow.

Edited by matwamango - 16 years ago

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salma

@Sallu-

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#178

hey rahima dee..!!

i avnt talked to u in a while and am missin u!!
please update soon!!

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#179

Part 14

Recap-Ranbir brings in chocolates for the girls. Ranbir decides he will look after Kanya whether she likes it or not. Eklvya tells Kanya to give Ranbir a chance.

After 2 days

Ranbir brings Kanya to hi hotel suite after her resisting so much she didn't have any choice but to accept his offer. Ranbir had changed his suite to a bigger room to accommodate Kanya at the same.

Kanya looked around and saw the place was huge. She couldn't believe she let herself into this. Eklavya was insisting that if she didn't go them Eklavya would have to be there for her leaving KT behind. Kanya knew he was serious despite him wanting there to be by KT's side. He would have left Ranbir to look after KT. Kanya would not allow this.

R-Kanya U go for a little nap or just rest. U must be tired.

Kanya just nodded. Not knowing what to say to Ranbir. There was an uncomfortable silence between the two. Ranbir didn't want to upset Kanya and Kanya just didn't know what to say Ranbir. She still thought Ranbir was just acting to make himself look good in front of her. Then again he was obnoxious at times. Thinking about him was giving her a headache. He always seemed to give her mixed signals. Well she wasn't going to make too much out of this as she was too tired. She went to her room and fell asleep. Ranbir had kept himself busy trying to get as much done as Eklavya was tied up at the hospital. Aditya bhaiya was in his own suite probably still sleeping as Ranbir wasn't there to give him orders.

At the hospital

Eklavya was pleased with KT's recovery. The doctors were just keeping her for overnight checkups. KT was a lot more talkative than before. Eklavya was informed by the police that they had caught 4 possible suspects and needed an ID on them. KT was to confirm who they were. Eklavya told them he'd deal with it after she was well and that he'd ID the guys later on. Eklavya needed to make sure Kanya was fitting in OK with Ranbir and both haven't killed each other. KT saw Eklavya in deep thought.

KT-What R U thinking about?

E-Nothing for U to worry about.

KT-Well it doesn't look like nothing to me.

E-U think too much.

KT-Well lying here all day and night is driving me mad.

E-Well too bad.

KT-Go see what Ranbir and Kanya is up to.

E-Maybe later. I'm sure those two will be just fine. They need this maybe then they can get over whatever problems they have with each other.

Back to RanKan

Kanya woke up still feeling aches and pains. Ranbir saw her discomfort and offered her relief but she wanted no medication. He thought she was being stubborn but Kanya wanted to feel the pain. Ranbir offered to give Kanya his famous massages he used to give his Mom on her forehead and on her leg which usually worked a treat he never told anyone it was embarrassing but he'd do anything for her. Kanya hesitated but gave in after he told her the sooner she got better the sooner they could get rid of each other. She thought what harm it could do.

R-Don't worry I won't take advantage I have my standards to maintain. Never forced anyone to do anything the don't want.

Within moments Ranbir started working straightaway. He gave her a head massage which was really calming then went on to her arms and legs. He asked politely if he could do her back. Kanya didn't think twice which was very unlike her but Ranbir had magic in his hands. All her aches were gone in no time. Kanya felt lost in a world where she envisioned just her there and Ranbir kind of like a day dream. She enjoyed every part of Ranbir's touch. U don't want to know how Ranbir was feeling he was so into Kanya. It was so intimate without there being anything too Hot happening. Ranbir stopped which forced Kanya out of her own dream.

R-How R U feeling now?

K-Perfect.

R-Mom is right then I really do have the nack.

K-U do this for your Mom.

R-I never did this ok. Don't tell anyone it will ruin my street rep. everyone thinks I'm a hard guy lets leave it at that. (winks at Kanya and leaves)

Kanya is left in more confusion. Ranbir cared and wasn't his cold self especially when he wasn't trying so hard to be mean. In fact he was there for her every step of the way. Kanya wanted Ranbir to be his old self so she could continue to hate the guy but it wasn't working. Her icy heart was melting towards Ranbir. He was the only person she was mean to that too with a passion. She had to be careful. She couldn't help but remember the feel of his hands on her body. She learnt something knew Ranbir was a mummy's boy so cute.