Ehsaas - a fanfic - Page 12

a kiss!!!so soon??anyway gr88 aahana as usual ,u can b a gud script/dialogue writer.

da scenes are vry cute bt it seems 2 me as if da scenes are inspired frm a real-life situation.is it so??anyway this is 4 u


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Originally posted by: cool_time

a kiss!!!so soon??anyway gr88 aahana as usual ,u can b a gud script/dialogue writer.

da scenes are vry cute bt it seems 2 me as if da scenes are inspired frm a real-life situation.is it so??anyway this is 4 u


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hey akansha thx budd for replyin

well i said cant reveal my next episode soon but u'll get the pic clearly

i know it' only the 16th part but hey if u look at my story carefully ks are already in love but they havent realized it

after all they do say tht they are the closest to each other

it's like sometimes u find a thing all over the place after it's lost but it's right before u only catch u didnt notice 😉

it's something similar here u see

as for the compliments abt bein a script/dialogue writer thx 😳 tht's really a huge compliment😊

n as for the cuteness of the scenes n real life inspirations go alas nothing over there hon😳

i havent found my karan yet😉😆

it's just imagination working (overtime) i guess 😆😆😆

nice work.....though mujhe laga ki they were getting a lil over senti...but then they r everything fro each other...so i understand.....post the nxt part soon yaar...highlights were soo good :D

Originally posted by: hiten_fan

nice work.....though mujhe laga ki they were getting a lil over senti...but then they r everything fro each other...so i understand.....post the nxt part soon yaar...highlights were soo good :D

thx ragz 4 ur opinion

ya well they r senti abt each other also if u see karan is not the kind of guy with 2 many ppl so he is really possessive & caring abt the ones close to him

n in the absence a family & only a friend in shweta as his support system he is really close to her

also the reactions were out of anger tht made him say all tht n u tend to be a little careless & oh- so - not - politically correct when u r angry

not tht i dont value ur opinion but just a justifiaction 😊

hope u dont mind or feel bad but m sorry of u do

Part 16:
It was well midnight when KS reached home as they had been walking n giggling all the way on their way shweta felt like having n ice cream so they had made a stop over at an ice –cream parlor 2 before getting home that made them so late they walked up while having yummy chocolate ice cream on their way.

K then accompanied s over to her home (they r neighbors but still being a gentleman he is karan made sure s was safe in her home when they reached.)

S walked up the stairs of her home after bidding good night to karan that she realized that she was wearing K' s coat that he had given her as she felt cold while
walking home n called out to karan who had barely walked a few steps away.

K: what happened?

S: ur coat u forgot it n so did I

K: oh (he smiled n walked towards her home again)

Shweta to began walking down on the steps when suddenly she slipped on the 2nd step owing to the darkness n karan just rushed up to her looking that she is gonna fall.

Shweta thought she had surely fallen n closed her eyes not realizing that karan had reached there just in time to save her n she was actually in his arms.

She looked so gorgeous in that second with her eyes closed n her hair slightly on her face owing to the wind blowing n so close in his arms that karan just dint wanna let go of her n kept looking at her mesmerized by her, he just wanted time to freeze n his heart n pulses raced up against it.

Suddenly karan was about to take his face towards her when shweta opened her eyes n he stopped

S (somehow not realizing anything): thank god u saved me again today or else I was scared that I was gonna fall surely flat on my face

K: common shwet with me around would I let anything happen 2 u

S: (smiled sweetly) n said yes I know I will always be safe when u r with me

Saying this she handed him over his coat n later went inside once again bidding him sweet dreams n good night, karan 2 wished her the same.

But as shweta went inside n karan was still walking in the garden outside her home n heading towards his place he was all confused scratching the back of his head thinking man what was all that what is happening.

something is def wrong today, what has got into me first after that dance in the hall with shwet n now this what was I thinking? I was about to ki…………… Oh god I think I had a drink 2 many 2day, I' just take a shower n everything will be fine.

What was confusing karan was also going thru shweta' mind

when she was preparing her bed to go to sleep.
What was it that happened to me today k n I have been best friends forever now but today I was feeling something odd 4 him , something new something I don't quite understand myself, why was I missing him when I was working n remembered him when kabir n kamya harassed me, I was so cool about the whole mayor issue 2 as k was there with me n later I just wanted 2 be lost in that song with him it was so nice the way I felt (suddenly realizing her words) what in the world is happening to me k what r u doing 2 me why cant I stop thinking about u

Oh god it's getting late I better sleep n stop thinking all this. She switched off the lights n tucked herself nicely in her bed.

Meanwhile k too had changed n in his sleep with a pillow besides him k looked every bit like a baby when he pulled his pillow over to him n hugged it while sleeping just like we hug our fav teddy.

He was looking just too cute n sweet for words, n later he began smiling in his sleep dreaming about his day n suddenly out of the blue the moment when shweta fell in his arms appeared in his dream.

he saw it again n this time he carried on from where h had left, yes he saw himself gently moving away the hair on her face that the wind blew n her slowly opening her eyes.

They stared into each other's eyes n then he slowly touched her face with his fingers n shweta closed her eyes again.

He gently put his hand behind her neck n brought his face close to her with their warm breaths they could even feel each other's heart beats.

Yes then the magical moment happened.

Karan gently touched her lips with the thumb of his hand n then moving in more closer gently placing his lips over her trembling lips he kissed her slowly.

With the passing moments wind blowing by becoming colder he held her more intimately providing her protection against the cold winds by shielding her, taking her in his arms to make her warm with the warmth of his body.

the closer he held her more passionately more sensuously their kiss continued.

wow aahana. im truly speechless. this is definitely one of ur best and one of my fav parts of the ff.. i love they way u described karan sleeping. it sounds sooooo cute..
and the last part where they are making out is really cute and very well written.. keep it up 👏

so da kiss waz a dream!!!!gr88 aahana ,da way u xplained k's xpressions & hugging da pillow tightly!!wow!!u hv surpassed all ur previous works in this 1.i'm at a loss of words.aahana,i'm 1 of da biggest fans of ur ff,lol!!

a dream i thot it wud b 4 real

oh well......next tym plz make it 4 real gal......a hot passionate kiss iz wat um tokin abt in here 😳 😳

anoda gr8 part gal..... 👏 👏 👏

update soon 😃

Originally posted by: stylishgal

wow aahana. im truly speechless. this is definitely one of ur best and one of my fav parts of the ff.. i love they way u described karan sleeping. it sounds sooooo cute..
and the last part where they are making out is really cute and very well written.. keep it up 👏

thx simi 😳 m so glad tht u r always thr to say such sweet words

well hiten is karan n i saw him in a show KDMH where he had such a scene n believeme i just wanted 2 cuddle him😉 😆😆😳

n thx for sayin the makin out part is cute i was a bit apprehensive

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Originally posted by: cool_time

so da kiss waz a dream!!!!gr88 aahana ,da way u xplained k's xpressions & hugging da pillow tightly!!wow!!u hv surpassed all ur previous works in this 1.i'm at a loss of words.aahana,i'm 1 of da biggest fans of ur ff,lol!!

ya akansha it's a dream u see it shd have a start somewhere

n who says naughty dreams aint allowed 😉 😆

n thx for ur kind words of praise i m humbled 😳

m glad to have a fan in a friend 😆

i hope i can live up again 2 ur expectations