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poorvi

@sweetpoorvi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#91

fantastic part ambreen 👏 ...finally sukk amne samne aa gaye...first meeting hi itni interesting hai... 👏.cont soon dear cant wait. 😊

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Priya

@Pearl29

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Posted: 17 years ago

#92

Kya intro tha........Sukk do not recognise each other.......2 years is not a long time to change the face......

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Ruhi gandhi

@Ruhihutijufan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#93

hey ambreen i read after long time and all prts r very nice...it is very good keep it up... 😊

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Rahila

@Rah_HuJu

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#94

This part was absolutely fantastic Ammu!! 👏 now ur FF is getting like a novel u can't put down...can't wait to see what happens next!

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Tamana

@SuKk_forever

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#95

WOW!!!!!...Ammu greattttttt part 👏 ....this was a really good meeting...really looking forward to how this love story unfolds 😉 ...you are doing an awesome job...keep it up!!!!and cont soon 😊

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Janki Trivedi

@janu_kumkumjuhi

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#96

Finally dono mil hi gaye. Great update, continue soon.

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ambreen

@-Amby-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#97

thanks

Originally posted by: Irika
wow great part

thanks alot

Originally posted by: verni
I simply loved this partt It's gudddddddddd toooo gudddddddd

thanks

Originally posted by: preethi
too good ambreena
now waiting

thanks continuing

Originally posted by: kashishk
wow it's a damn good part, pls continue soon

thanks surakshita
i try my best

Originally posted by: surakshita
ambreen i read each part then read all the parts together

all the parts are so free-flowing and the emotions are so well written that i almost visualised it

great work. sukk ki bolti bandh idhar bhi.

thanks

Originally posted by: Shafoo
wowowowowwowo what a cute part is it sumit feell somethingg when he see kumkum

thanks

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi
fantastic part ambreen ...finally sukk amne samne aa gaye...first meeting hi itni interesting hai... .cont soon dear cant wait.

thanks they dont cause it is very small meeting they had and 2 yrs also passed naa

Originally posted by: Pearl29
Kya intro tha........Sukk do not recognise each other.......2 years is not a long time to change the face......

thanks seema

Originally posted by: seemahujufan
hey ambreen i read after long time and all prts r very nice...it is very good keep it up...

thanks alot rahila

Originally posted by: Rah_HuJu
This part was absolutely fantastic Ammu!! now ur FF is getting like a novel u can't put down...can't wait to see what happens next!

thanks alot will continue soon

Originally posted by: SuKk_forever
WOW!!!!!...Ammu greattttttt part ....this was a really good meeting...really looking forward to how this love story unfolds ...you are doing an awesome job...keep it up!!!!and cont soon

thanks continuing

Originally posted by: janu_kumkumjuhi
Finally dono mil hi gaye. Great update, continue soon.

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ambreen

@-Amby-

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#98

Part 8
is their decision right??

kk runs to the door and opens it to see su standing there and he was abt to knock at the door only

kk looks at su
kk-woh soryr mujhe nahi pata tha ke tum su ho tanvi ke hone wale pati woh mujhe tum sun rahe ho naa

su was looking at kk till now

su-hmm haa woh

kk-maine kaha sorry woh

su-its ok aap mujhe pehchaanti nahi ho naa isliye

kk-hmm thanks

su-chale

kk-main abhi aaye

kk runs to her room gets her pruse and comes down

su-abhi chale

kk nods her head she closes the door and takes her purse both walk out and su opens the car door for kk
k
k sits down su drivers the car towards wadhwa house

su and kk arive at wadhwa house
priya sees them and comes towards kk
priya and kk hug each other

priya kk and su go towards the other family members

kk hugs raj and tanvi

tanvi tells her to be careful or then her hair style will get spoilted

kk is introduced to wadhwa fmaily
kk goes and takes their asshirwad
they liked the thought tht instead of coming from america kk hasnt forgotten her sanskar

dada-arey beta jeeti raho tum toh america jaakar bhi apne sanskar nahi bhuli

kk-dadaji jab america ke log hamare hindustan mein aakar aapne aadat nahi badalte toh hum kyun badle

dadaji-sahi kaha beta jeeti raho

su smiles

tanvi makes a face as if to say wht big thing did kk say

kk likes wadhwa family alot she i shappy for her sis tht she will get such a good family who will love her alot

su comes to kk

su-hello

kk-hi sorry us baat ke liya

su-nahi its ok believe me it is

kk smiles

kk removes a gift from her purse anf gives it to su

kk-yeh aap ke liye yehi lene ke liye main room mein gaye thi

su-lekin yeh

kk-aapko lena hi hoga pls

su-thik hai

su takes the gift

su-thanks

he opens the gift and it is a ganpati

su-yeh actually thanks main isse hamare ghar ke temple mein rakh dunga maa in sab mein bahot believe karti hai

kk-aur aap

su-main bhagwan mein nahi manta

kk-kyun

su-aagr bhagwan sach mein hote toh kya duniya mein sab khush na rahte sab log koi naa koi mushkil mein hai aaj

kk-toh aap ka manna hai ki agar mushkile nahi hoti toh aap bhagwan mein mante

su-shayad

kk-yehi toh aap galat hai agar duniya mein sirf khushi hoti toh kya hum us khushi ko samaj pate aaj hume mushkil ke bad khushi milti hai toh hum us khushi ke pehchante hai aur iski importance bhi pata hai

su smiles kk just tlaks as his mom

the celebrations coems to a end
almost all guests have left

sharmas are also leaving now

raj-acha ab hum chalte hai

kul-aaj ka din abhot acha gaya ab dus din mein shaadi hain tayaariyaa bhi karni hai

raj-haa bilkul

priya-ab toh saari rasme bhi nibhani hai

veena-sab ho jayenga aur kab tanvi iss ghar mein aa jayengi pata bhi nahi chalenga

priya-sahi kaha acha chalte hai 6 din bad haldo hai aur phir agle din mehendi aur uske 2 din bad shaadi

veena-bilkul

all hug each other kk takes aashirwad of all and so does tanvi

they all leave

su sees kk leaving after she has left he goes to his room

he closes the door and goes to the washroom to freshen up

kk tanvi priya and raj reach home
all go to their respective room to chnage

after changing kk goes to tanvis room and sees tanvi lying on the bed

she goes to tanvi

kk-do do mujhe aap se baat karni hai

t-kya

kk-aapko jiju kaise kage

t-ache isliye toh shaadi kar rahi ho naa

t-yeh sab bad mein pehle bata mere liye kya laye america se

kk gives her a bag which she was hiding behind her back
tanvi is very happpy

tanvi starts seeing all things in the bag

there are clothes lipsticks and all types of makeup
and whtever tanvi had ordered

kk-di aap yeh arrange marriage se khush hai naa

t-haa lekin main jaanti ho tum toh love mein believe karti ho hai naa aapne pyaar ke intezaar mein ho etc etc boring baate

when kk hears this the smile on her face disappers
she does say anything only gets uo from the bed and walsk to her room

tanvi doesnt see tht pale face o fkk as she was busy
seeing her things which kk got for her when kk left tanvi saw tht but she didnt bother she wanted to check her things and didnt stop kk

kk meets priya outside her room

p-kya huwa kk

kk-kuch nahi maa thak gaye ho sona hai

p-thik hai jaa so jaa

kk-goodnight maa

p-goodnight

su comes out and goes and stands in the balcony
he closes his eyes and kks face flashes in front of him
he suddenly opens his eyes

su-kuch din mein tanvi se meri shaadi ho jayeni auryeh hi sach hai aur waise bhi yeh
pyaar vyuaar kuch nahi hota ya .....ya hota hai ??

kk is standing in her balcony the smile which was on her face from long suddenly has left her
she tells herself

kk-tanvi ki shaadi hai kuch din mein yeh sab bhulkar main uski shaadi mein hissa longi hamesha se maine pyaar vyaar mein ishwas rakha hai lekin ab..ab pata hai ke pyaar vyaar kuch nahi hota hai

su-kya pyaar sach mein hota hai??

kk-kya pyaar sach mein dhokha hai??

su-kya pyaar sab ko hota hia??

kk-kya pyaar sab ke liye hota hia??

su-nahi mujhe pyaar nahi hai main bhi naa meri shadi hai aur main

kk-haa pyaar kuch nahi hota hai ab main kisipar bhi vishwas nahi kar sakti

su-pyaar sirf dhokha hai

kk-haa dhokha

su and kk both go to sleep keeping this last thought in mind

su keeps in his mind tht now heis getting married

he keeps in his mind tht it cant be love i tmight be a attraction and he is getting married

he wont think abt all this now

well as kk thinks tht now she wont ever beluieve someone
but wht happeend tht made her take this decision

no one knows from her family and she wont tell this to anyone

she wont tell anyone abt wht happeend right now she knows this much tht love is nothing
amd she will leave her life on god now

next day
su gets up
his mom tells him tht he has to go shopping and tanvi will alos be coming with kk
he now has kept in his mind tht he is getting married to tanvi and he has to fulfill all his responsibilities towards tanvi

here kk has left her life on god
whtever he does for her will be good she knows tht
she gets ready and with a smile is ready to get on with her life

kk tanvi and su go for shopping
kk tells su and tanvi to shop and she will go and meet her friend neeta and tell her abt the marriage also su and tanvi agree ot it

su and tanvi have a good time
su has decided tht now he has to live his life with tanvi and he will forget abt tht feelings he had for kk and move on

Edited by panjwani - 17 years ago