ff-pyara rishta**coming soon**note pg28 - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
Very nice update.. 👏 👏 to Kumkum ko dhoka mil gaya.... no problem apna Sumit hai naa 😃 😃

Cont soon bachchaaa 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Kya part tha......brillant.......10 din hai abhi 4 Sukk 2come 2gether.......continue soon.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowowowwowowo nice and amazing part plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
vry nice ambreen...vry well written 👏 .hope su apne dil ki baat jaldi samagh le..
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Posted: 17 years ago
lovely part ambreena 👏 👏
abb kya hoga will su listen to his heart
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Posted: 17 years ago
WOW!!!this part was totally fab 👏 ...so Kk stopped believing in love.....and Su is ignoring his feelings for Kk...lets see how long this lasts...awesome part, you are doing great Ammu....keep it up 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks ya tell su he is not listening only 😉

Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa

Aweeeeeeeeeeeeeesome update didi..!!1

But ab kya hoga..??? Sumit...??..Suno...do wat ur heart says...forget ur mind..




thanks dont worry main ho naa

Originally posted by: kashishk

awesome part, i agree with sumitwadhwa sumit apne dil ki suno dimagh ki nahi and kk ko kiya ho gaya hai
continue soon



thanks

Originally posted by: verni

Very nice update.. to Kumkum ko dhoka mil gaya.... no problem apna Sumit hai naa

Cont soon bachchaaa



thanks



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Originally posted by: Pearl29

Kya part tha......brillant.......10 din hai abhi 4 Sukk 2come 2gether.......continue soon.....



thanks

Originally posted by: Irika

cute update cont soon



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Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowowwowowo nice and amazing part plzz contuied soon



thanks

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi

vry nice ambreen...vry well written .hope su apne dil ki baat jaldi samagh le..



thanks lets see if he does

Originally posted by: preethi

lovely part ambreena
abb kya hoga will su listen to his heart



thanks tamana

Originally posted by: SuKk_forever

WOW!!!this part was totally fab ...so Kk stopped believing in love.....and Su is ignoring his feelings for Kk...lets see how long this lasts...awesome part, you are doing great Ammu....keep it up


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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 9

**kk comes to know abt tanvi**

next morning
the sun rises

kk gets up and comes to do pooja
kk and priya do the pooja and then kk is going to her room

when kk pases tanvis room she hears some noices
kk opens tanvis room and sees tht tanvi isnt in her room
normally this time tanvi is always sleeping

then she hears some noice from the bathroom
kk goes to the batroom and opens the door

she sees tanvi vomitting
kk goes to tanvi

kk-di kya huwa tanvi

tanvi washes ehr face and comes in her room and sits on the bed

kk-tanvi kya huwa tum vomit kyun kar rhai thi tum thik ho naa chalo doctor ke pass jate hai

t-doctor nahi kk main thik hu

kk-kyua thik chal naa abhi chal kuch din mein teri shaadi bhi hai

t-nahi sach mein shayad kal kuch kha liya hoga

kk-hmm thik hai tu aaram kar thik hai

t-ha

kk comes out of tanvis room
kk-(herself)di ne doctor ke pass jane se inkar kyun kar diya woh toh hamnesha ek choti chot lagne se bhi doctor keh kar chilaya karti thi ab kya ho gaya hai isse


su gets up and gets ready and goes to office
he is busy since 2 days he didnt go to his office
and now with marriage coming near he has to complete his work soon

3 days pass away
kk doesnt remember abt tanvi anything

she is very busy in her work
as tomorrow is the haldi

she is working when she sees tanvi going out soemwhere

kk is confused as tomorrow is haldi and tanvi should be keeping all things together
and her mom had told tanvi not to go out

kk goes behind tanvi and follows her

tanvi comes to a hospital and goes to the reception

t-excuse me

r-yes

t-actually aaj meri reports aane wali thi

kk comes there and hides to listen to wht i shappening

r-maam aap ki reports kal aayegi

t-kal nahi actually kal meri shaadi ki ek ceremony hai pls aaj nahi mil sakti main rukne ko tayaar ho

r-sorry maam aap ko kal mil jayengi

t-thik hai lekin kitne baje

r-subha 11 baje

t-thik hai main aajaongi

tanvi turns and goes away

kk -ddi kis reports ki baat kar rhai thi aisa kya huwa hai aur woh apni reports lene kyun aayengi woh toh doctor ke pass gaye hi nahi mujhe pata kar na hoga

kk goes to the reception

kk-excuse me woh abhi jo aayethi naa tanvi sharma unki kyonsi reports ke bare mein baat kar rahe the aap dono

r-sorry maam main aapko nahi bata sakti ho

kk-dekhiya main uski behen ho

r-sorry aap jo bhi ho i cant tell u

kk-thik hai

kk(herself)-kya baat ho sakti hai meri toh kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha hai
kal jab sab function mein busy ho jayenge main woh reports dekh longi hai yeh hi thik rahega is tarah di ko bhi mujhpar shak nahi hoga

kk comes home she sees tanvi sitting with all her friends chossing jewellery

kk(herself)-kya baat ho sakti hai di ne doctor ke pass aane se mana kar diya phir abhi ye reports pata nahi kya ho raha hai

p-kk chal beta bahot kaam hai

k-jee maa

next day
the haldi ceremony is held at sharmas and wadhwas house also
veena and dadima are going to come to sharmas house to put haldi to tanvi also

in the morning kk sees tanvi going out quietly without letting nayone know abt it

kk -abhi main ghar par rehti ho jab sab neeche hoge tab main woh reports dekh lungi

tanvi comes back and goes to her room kk sees this

the function starts

and here su is ready he is coming out when he sees the mandir room
he sees it from the door and sees tht ganpati which kk gave him
seeing tht ganpati he remembers kk
he shakes his head and goes in the hall


here tanvi is in the hall when veena and dadima arive
tanvi is laughing and tlaking with all
kk sees this as a good ooportunity
she is abt to go when priya comes to her

p-kk

kk stops

kk-je je maa

p-yeh tanvi ke room mein rakh degi

kk is happy now she has a reason also

kk-jee maa

she takes all gift packs and goes to tanvis room
she quickly goes to tanvis room and closes the door

kk-(herself)-mujhe woh report abhi dekhni hogi yehi waqt sahi hai

she quickly searches for the report in all drawers but cant find it

then she sees tanvis purse in one corner of her cupboard she opens the purse and finds tht report

kk-city hospital ha yeh hi hai woh report mujhe jaldi se isse dekhna hoga di ya koi bhi yaha aa jaye uske pehle

kk opnes the report and reads it and it shocked she cant believe wht she just read

kk keeps reading it for 2-3 times to see if she made any mistake in reading it

kk-yeh kaise ho sakta hai nahi yeh sahi nahi hai di di maa banne wali hai woh pregnant hai

kk is shocked

Edited by panjwani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hmm..... am sure Kumkum , tanvi ko Sumit ko dhoka nahi dene degi... 😳 😳 Hope everything goes fine.... 😳

Nice part bachchaaaa 😛 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
kya twist hai yarr...too gud 👏 .

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