ff-pyara rishta**coming soon**note pg28 - Page 8

Ambreen!!!tu phir se bhool gayee!! 😛 😛 if not PM tho phir just IM me on MSN tho main tera FF par sakoon...btw interesting part as usual..now I'm getting curious 😉

thanks u soo much

Originally posted by: janu_kumkumjuhi

Great, Ambreen aur muje woh Tanvi ki baato se kuch gadbad lag rahi hai ho naa ho daal me kuch kaala hai. Shayad itni story se aage ka part mere dimag e aa gaya hai. Magar tumhara likhne ka tarika bahot accha hai to padne me bahot mazaa aa raha hai. Get going.

thanks will continue

Originally posted by: Irika

hey Ambreen good part cont soon plzz

thanks

Originally posted by: verni

Sweet one ambreen.... continue soon bachcha.... lets see aage kya hoga???

thanks and will take care

Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa

Awesome Ambreen di... Galat toh lagega hi buddhu sumit...tu kumkum ki jagah uski behen se takra raha hai..

But i have a suggestion di... ..pls pls pls either give space for words or write in bold...yeh isiliye...coz my eyes r weak..i feel uncomfortable in staring at the screen for so long..(maybe thats coz my specs r not with me..) if u pls pls pls take care of that..it will help me..

thanks

Originally posted by: Shafoo

cooolllllllll part plzzzzzzz contuied

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Originally posted by: kashishk

superb dear continue soon and pls kk aur su ko amne samne to ano

thanks

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi

hiii ambreen...nice part dear...hmmm lagta hai tanvi kuch gadbad karne wali hai...

thanks

Originally posted by: Pearl29

i just love the way Su has some sort of unhappy feelings.........which is good.......

thnaks they will meet

Originally posted by: SuKk_forever

Very nice part Ambreen ...i wonder what Tanvi is upto..but whatever it is...hopefully it stops the marriage ..can't wait till SuKk meet again ...this is going really awesome

thnaks

Originally posted by: preethi

ambreena such sweet part abb kk ko zaldi ana hoga

thanks wont forget to pm u

Originally posted by: Rah_HuJu

Ambreen!!!tu phir se bhool gayee!! if not PM tho phir just IM me on MSN tho main tera FF par sakoon...btw interesting part as usual..now I'm getting curious

Part 6

**2 days to meet**

The wadhwas come inside they r welcomed by the sharmas
all sit in the hall and chat

su is not intrested in all this
he wants to go home he isnt happy with all this

his heart is not happy doing wht his mom wanted but su always told his mom this then why now

priya tells everyone tht she will go and call tanvi
tanvi is in her room putting her lipstick

p-tanvi tayaar ho gaye ya nahi chal sab tera intezaar kar rahe hai

t-jee maa

tanvi is extremely happy she is getting wht she wants a rich family and wht else

priya and tanvi come down and veena sees tanvi

veena is veyr happy as she wants a bahu with good values

p-yeh hai meri badi beti tanvi and
nudges tanvi to go and touch feet of all

tanvi doesnt liek this thought but since her mom nudges her she goes

veena sees this but then thinks maybe tanvi is nervous
they make tanvi sit next to su

tanvi sees su and is on cloud nine as she is getting rich family and also a handsome husband

v-arey hum sab inke samne rahenge toh yeh dono baat hi nahi karenge

p-sahi kaha tanvi beta jakar isse tumhara kamra dikha

t-jee maa

tanvi and su go to tanvis room
while passing all rooms su stops infront of some room
this room is decoratred in a very simple way

the colours used are pink and purple
it has a good glow to it and looks very pretty

tanvi sees su looking at the room
she goes to him

t-su kya huwa

s-yeh room kiska hai

t-oh yeh yeh toh kk ka hai

the name kumkum makes su smile he repeats this name in his mind

t-kk meri behen hai abhi america gaye hai warna har roz
apne room mein vases rakti thi aur usmein roses lagati thi

su smiles on this

t-chalo naa main tumhe mera room dikhati ho
tanvi takes him to her room

su isnt impressed
the room is of dark green colour and has varoius posters on the walls video games are kept one side and some magazines are kept on another side

t-yeh hai mera room kk se better kk ki terah roses main nahi rakhti it is so downmarket

su doesnt sya anything but inside he loves the thought of roses he isnt happy with tanvis thoughts but doesnt say anything

t-arey su tumne bataya nahi tumhe mera room kaise laga

su goes to say something but tanvi continues

t-arey main bhi naa ismein poochne ki kya baat hai fcourse acha nahi bahot acha laga hai hai naa kk ka room is so simple and all lekin i know my room is best
su just smiles towards tanvi but thinks to himself

su(himself)-isse kya pata woh room mein kya baat thi


downstairs all are making plans for the wedding

p-abhi su aur tanvi ha keh de toh hum pandit ko bulakar sagai aur shaadi ke liye acha sa ek din nikal le

v-sahi kaha tum mujhe tanvi ki tundali de dena aur main pandit se pooch kar tumhe bata dongi

p-theek hai


Here kk is doing shopping along with her friends she is in a happy mood

suddenly someone puts a hand on her shoulder kk turns and sees aryan

by seeing aryan her smile goes away and she removes his hand from her shoulder


tanvi and su come downstairs all are waiting for their answer tanvi smiles and nods

su doesnt know wht to say he knows his mom is happy with tanvi so he also says yes

veena and priya are very happy priya gives veena tanvis kundali and tells her to inform them wht the pandit says
after having dinner the wadhwas are ready to go

p-veena aate rahena abhi toh hum samdhan hai

v-sahi kaha zaroor aaongi aur ab toh shaadi ki bhi tayaari karni hai

p-hai abhi panditji kya kehte hai mujhe bata dena

v-zaroor toh ab hum chalte ha

both hug each other and all go away

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next day the pandit comes over to wadhwa house

veena tells him to remove a good mohrat for the engagement and shaadi
after seeing both the kundalis
the pandit says tht for engagemtnt after 2 days a muharat is there

and for shaadi there is a muhrat in 1 week

after tht there isnt any good muhrat
all agree to the date

su comes out of his room to go to office
veena calls him

v-su beta

su-jee maa

v-pandit jee ne 2 din mein sagai ke liye muhrat nikala
hai aur 1 hafte mein shaadi

su-maa itni jaldi kya hai

v-beta ky akare iske baad koi acha muhrat nahi hai do
saal tak

su-theek aap sab jo theek samjo

v-to theek hai mein priya se keh deti ho usse bhi tayaari karne ka samay nahi hoga aur iski choti beti kya naam tha hai kk ko bhi america se bulana hai

hearing tht name kk again su smiles he doesnt know why but he just loves this name

he smiles and goes away

veena thinks tht su is happy after seeing him smilling she goes to call priya

kk-kya di 2 din mein engagement yeh kya hai main kaise aaongi

t-oh main kya karo mummy aur daddy ne haa keh di

kk-di aap janti hai ki main us din late se aaongi mujhe
raat ke 9 baj jayenge aur us waqt tak sab ho chuka ho ga

priya takes the phone from tanvi

p-kk beta muharat 9.30 baje ka hai hum sab wadhwa house jayenge main janti hu ke tujhe 9 baege hum sab chale jayenge aur teri sab cheez mein tere kamre mein rak dungi tu tayaar ho jana jaldi aur wadhwa house ka ddress bhi rak dungi waha aa jana

kk-maa thik hai chalo ab koi raasta bhi nahi hai aa jaongi waise di kaunse kapde pehen rahi hai

p-wo keh rahi hai ke wo salwar kameez pehnegi usse choli gahra nahi pehenna hai

kk-arey yeh kya ab main bhi nahi pehensakti

p-tu kyu nahi

kk-maa main kaise jab dulhan hi salwar kamez pehen rahi hai

p-toh kya huwa

kk- nahi maa meri liye ek salwar kameez hi theek hai aur red colour ka

p-thik hai

kk-bye maa take care

p- chal bye

priya comes to tanvi

p-dekh main keh rahi hu choli gaghra pehenle

t-maa mujhe yeh sab nahi pasand hai

p-thik hai

t-mere liye kaunsa colour aap layengi

p-laal

t-nahi maa pls i hate tht colour

t-beta wo suhaag ka rang hai acha lagega

t-nahi maa pls i want yellow colour

p-thik hai le aayongi

t-main chalongi main apni choice ka pehenugi

p-thik hai

with tht both go to the nearest mall to do shopping

hi

amzing ambreen

keep it going dear

your are a thorough genuis

norzar

amazing part ambreen,
i love it, when he repeats kk's name in his mind
fabulous, and kk ko jaldi india le aao, warna kk ka su kisi aur ka ho jaye gha lolz

Kashish

hii ambr superb part
naam sa hii pyaar shur hogya 😛

sumit is in love with kumkum name when ever he heard her name he smiles

Great, yaar ab to Kumkum aayegi aur uska naam sunte hi Sumit bhi, yaar, mindblowing, excellent. Ab jaldi milva bhi do, der mat karo.

too gud dear 👏 ...finaly sukk milne wale hain..im so excited fr dis... 😊

Ammu...very sweettt part!!! 😃 ...so cute how Su smiles hearing Kk's name....wow..i can't wait to read how Su reacts once he sees Kk, he is already in love with her name 😉 ...it is funny how tanvi is so proud of her room 😛 and Su didn't even like it 😆
cont soon 😊 😃