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Posted: 17 years ago
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Just loved it.........this is so different.....Su has fallen 4 KK before even meeting her.......i think Su will only take kk to Wadhwa House as she will be alone na.......

Can't wait 4 the Sukk meeting.........continue soon with the next long part please.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Excellent!! 👏 👏 👏 sirf naam sunte yeh haalat hai tho what will happen when he actually meets her?? 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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When r u updating next.........kk ko America sa vapas aana do.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
thanks alot

Originally posted by: norzar

hi

amzing ambreen

keep it going dear

your are a thorough genuis

norzar




thanks alot i will continue soon

Originally posted by: kashishk

amazing part ambreen,
i love it, when he repeats kk's name in his mind
fabulous, and kk ko jaldi india le aao, warna kk ka su kisi aur ka ho jaye gha lolz

Kashish



thanks

Originally posted by: Irika

amazing part cont soon



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Originally posted by: preethi

hii ambr superb part
naam sa hii pyaar shur hogya



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Originally posted by: Shafoo

sumit is in love with kumkum name when ever he heard her name he smiles



thnaks jaldi mil jayenge

Originally posted by: janu_kumkumjuhi

Great, yaar ab to Kumkum aayegi aur uska naam sunte hi Sumit bhi, yaar, mindblowing, excellent. Ab jaldi milva bhi do, der mat karo.



thanks

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi

too gud dear ...finaly sukk milne wale hain..im so excited fr dis...



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Originally posted by: SuKk_forever

Ammu...very sweettt part!!! ...so cute how Su smiles hearing Kk's name....wow..i can't wait to read how Su reacts once he sees Kk, he is already in love with her name ...it is funny how tanvi is so proud of her room and Su didn't even like it
cont soon



thanks

Originally posted by: Pearl29

Just loved it.........this is so different.....Su has fallen 4 KK before even meeting her.......i think Su will only take kk to Wadhwa House as she will be alone na.......

Can't wait 4 the Sukk meeting.........continue soon with the next long part please.......



thanks rahila

Originally posted by: Rah_HuJu

Excellent!! sirf naam sunte yeh haalat hai tho what will happen when he actually meets her??



thanks and here is the next update

Originally posted by: Pearl29

When r u updating next.........kk ko America sa vapas aana do.....


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Posted: 17 years ago
#85

sorry for the delay was abit busy these days here is the next part i will update soon now

the dress worn by kumkum

only think the colour is red design and all same as in the pic

http://i32.tinypic.com/110apf6.jpg

Part 7

** face to face**


those 2 days pass by quickly

all were so busy in preparations tht no one came to know how these days had passed away

today was the engagement of su and tanvi

here kk had left and was going to arrive soon

at sharmas house everyone were ready to leave

the engagemnt was held at wadhwas residence and everyone were invited there

tanvi was wearing a yellow salwar kameez
she had wore a expensiuve set with diamond earings since she knew they will be very important and rich people attending the engagement

su was wearing a black suit

priya had kept a red salwar kameez ready for kk it was simple and elegant with it a simple set

kk had insisted tht she doesnt want to heavy set she is happy with a small one her dress
also has to be simple and not too much heavy

tanvis salwar kameez had heavy work on it and was very expensive than kks

priya had kept wadhwa house address in kks room so tht she can easily reach there
at wadhwas house everything was ready

sharmas leave their house so tht they reach wadhwa house at the right time

at 9.00 at the airport kk comes out carrying her bags she is really excited

firstly she is coming back after such a long time and secondly today her di is getting engaged

kk wants to reach home as soon as possible so tht she can reach the engagement function on time
she takes a taxi and reaches home in sometime

at the wadhwas house raj priya and tanvi arive

veena kul and all welcome them

su comes out and tanvi sees him
she is bowled over by his looks

soon guests start ariving and su and tanvi are made to sit on 2 chairs so tht all can congratulate them

kk reaches home she opens the main door by the extra key she has

when she saw her house she felt so relaxed and happy

she quickly closed the door and ran upstairs to get ready

she saw her mom had kept a beautiful red salwar kameez on the bed with some jewellery
kk went to the washroom to get fresh

it was 9.30 the engagemtn was going to take place
kul went to the stage and took the mike

kul- ladies and gentlemen aaj mere bete sumeet wadhwa ki magni mein apni biwi ke ek achi dost k beti se karne ke liye aaj hum sab yahaa aaye hai aur woh ladki ka naam tanvi sharma hai
su aur tanvi yahaa aao

su was standing with kul and veena on one side and

tanvi stood on another side with priya and raj

priya kept seeing the door she was getting worried as kk should have reached there at tht time she knew kk wouldnt miss tanvis engagement
and kk didnt take long to get ready then wht has happened

kul- ab main chahonga ke tanvi aur su ek doosre ko ring pehnave

su and tanvi exchange rings and all clap

after the guests congratulating the couple priya pulls tanvi to one side

su sees this and thinks tht there is some problem
he follows them

t-maa kya hai

p-kk abhi tak nahi aaye

t-toh main kya karo

p-tanvi teri behen hai woh

t-toh maine kab mana kiya lekin ab mein kya karo

su listens to all this he cant believe tht she isnt cared abt her sister

though su doesnt have any brother or sister but he cant ever think anyone can behave this way

he comes to priya

su-aunty maine sab sun liya hai aap pareshaan mat hoye main apke ghar jaake dekhta ho

p-beta sach thank u beta

su-thank u kehne ki zarorat nahi hai aap meri ma ki tarah ho mere liye

su goes away and sits in his car and drivers off

priya looks at tanvi

p-yeh sab kya tha haa is tarah apni behen ke liye

t-maa maine yeh kaha ke main kya karo meri engagement hai aaj toh main kya kar sakti ho


here kk is ready to go
but the problem is the page which she had seen with wadhwa house address is missing now

when she had entered the room she had seen it below the jewellery box but now she cant find it

she is tensed as she cant miss her sisters engagement

she also tried calling her mom and dad but it is not reachable

she is finding the page when the door bell rings
at first she ignores it

but when the person keeps ringing it she runs down
she quickly opens the door

su is waiting for the door to be opened and then eh sees a beautiful girl opens the door
s
he is looking so beautiful in tht red slawar kameez tht he cant describe

at once he knows it is kk since her name is as beautiful as her own self

kk looks at su she doesnt know who he is

kk-hello

su-woh actually

kk-dekho raj sharma gahr par nahi hai mujhe bhi late ho raha hai isliye pls kaal aa jana

she is abt to close the door when su stop sher

su-actually main

k-samaj mein nahi aata kaha naa maine ke jao mera waqt mat kharab karo

su-woh main apko

kk-dekho ..just go naa

at this time the residence phoen rings

kk closes the door at sumeets face and picks up the phone

su is taken aback at this point

kk picks up the phone

p-hello kk

kk-maa who main woh paper nahi mil raha hai

p-thik hai chinta mat kar dekh su aa raha hai tujhe lene

kk-su

p-haa su

kk-oh god

p-kya huwa

kk runs to the door and opens it to see su standing there and he was abt to knock at the door only


Edited by panjwani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I simply loved this partt 👏 It's gudddddddddd 😳 😳 😊 toooo gudddddddd 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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too good ambreena 👏 👏
now waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
wow it's a damn good part, pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
ambreen i read each part then read all the parts together

all the parts are so free-flowing and the emotions are so well written that i almost visualised it

great work. sukk ki bolti bandh idhar bhi.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowowowowwowo what a cute part is it sumit feell somethingg when he see kumkum

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