Members’ FF -***Epilogue/The End***- Pg 83 - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
Okk now my turn.... Rahi I luvedddddddd itttt 👏

And Shafoo gud job 😳

Kk : Tummmm yahan.... Erm.. mere room..... mere room mein kya kar rahe ho?

Su : Mini ne kaha ki U r not well...so...

Kk : Ohh wo... haan bas...

Sumit touches her forehead and finds that she is fine... 😉

Su : Par tum to theek ho... 😕

Kk : haan .. nahi..... I mean.... wo...

Mini comes,

Mi : Kumkum main zaraa apni ek friend ke yahan jaa rahi hun... 😳

Kk : Mini.... rukkk 😆 😆

But she had gone... 😉

Kk (hesitatingly luks at Sumit) : Main.... main abhi aayi... 😳

Sumit holds her hand... and lets her stay in, then he goes out and closes the main door. he comes back,

Su : Hmm.. maine darwaza band kar diya... ab bolo.... tum office kyun nahi aayi... 😉

Kumkum simply moves back....

Kk : Sumit.. aaj mera mann nahi tha... to... maine Mini se kaha tha... ki kuch bhi keh de.. tabhi usne shaayad tabiyat ke liye.. 😳 😳

Sumit keeps coming closer to her.....

Su : Okk... waise tum office kyun nahi aana chahti thi?... may I know...

Kk : Kyun..? Tumhare office mein chutti lena allowed nahi hai? 😆 😆

She starts going out..... but Sumit pulls her and makes her stand near him, against the wall.....

Su : Main batata hun.... ki tum office kyun nahi aayi... Kyunki tum mujhe face nahi karna chahti.... right?

Kk (luks down, her heart pounding) : Sumit, plz... aisa... aisa nahi...

Sumit comes very close... so much that his nose touches hers... 😉 😳

Su : Kyun Kumkum?.... Kyun tum apni dil ki baat... nahi kehna chahti.... 😉 😳

Kumkum moves her face away, so that the touch stopped, but still they were close.... 😳 😳

Kk : Sumit, jaane do mujhe....

Su : Luk at me and say whatever u want to.... idhar udhar kyun dekh rahi ho? 😉 😉

Kk (somehow luks at him) : Su.... Sumit...

Her voice choked.... she closes her eyes...

Su : bolo....

Kumkum hugs him..... 😉 😉 and starts crying....

Sumit is very happy..... he too hugs him tightly.....

Kumkum moves away a little,

Kk : Sumit.... Sumit.... main..... main.... Mini ke liye yahan..... hum nahi mil sakte Sumit.... Main ayahn Mini ke liye... aayi thi.... aur Ghar pe maa aur babuji ko pata chala..... wo mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karenge... 😭 😭

Su : Kumkum..... par tumhara kya....

Kk : Sumit... pehle mujhe bhi lagta tha.... ki koi khud ke baare mein kaise nahi sochta.... par jab main khud yeh mehsoos kar rahi hun to..... nahi Sumit... Tumhe bohut achchi ladkiyan mil jaayengi... 😕

Sumit pulls her closer,

Su : Kumkum, tum aisi baatein karke mujhe gussa dila rahi ho..... 😡 😡 I know u luv me.... Why can't u speak it dammitttt 😡 😡 😡

Kk (luks at her) : Sumit... plz...

Sumit wipes her tears.. and comes closer.... they were coming closer.... when there's knock at the door..... It's Mini....

Kk : Okk Sir, main.. kal office aa jaongi.... 😳

Su : Okk.... Plzz.... jo jawaab chahiye leti aayeiga .... 😳

He leaves..... Kumkum goes to leave him till car,

He turns near the car,

Su : U better give me an answer tomorrow..... 😉 bcoz... main tumhe itni aasani se nahi chodunga.... bohut ziddi hun main.... 😉 😉

Kk : Sumit.... tum samjhate nahi...

Su : Plz.... An answer tomorrow.... aur haan kal office zarur aana... 😉

He goes,

Kk : Ohh God.... main .. main kya karun.... kal Sumit kya karega... aur kab tak main khud ko rok paongiii 😉 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
Kya baat hai verni........Su ka gussa & kk is so quiet........Ab kya hoga kal......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
grt going verni,sheffoo and rahilla cont it 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
good going verni,shafoo and rahilla!!!welll i have not read story from may pages so i have no idea. once i catch story do write and uptil that u all keep it up. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
awwww thx Verni 😳

Kumkum has a very restless night with dreams of Sumit haunting her....she comes to a conclusion & first thing in the morning, she grabs Mini & goes outside...

Mini: KK hum kahan jaa rahe hai? 😕

KK: tum chup chaap chalo...main baad main bathaungi..

Mini: lekin KK tujhe kaam pe jaane hai aur abhi saare saath tho baj chuke hai...

KK: Mini mera office nau baje khulta hai..

Mini: magar...

KK: agar magar kuhh nahin...jaldi chal na...

They arrive at Gaurav's house & Mini gets more confused...KK rings the bell...Gaurav opens the door, half ready to go out to work...he gives them a questioning look...

Gaurav: arrey tum dono yahan...itni subah subah...sab tikh tho hai na...

KK: tauba!!!tum dono tho aise gabra rahe ho jaise ke main tumko bank lutne ke liye le jaa rahi hoon!!! 😆

M: woh bhi kar sakti ho!!tumhara koi barosa nahin!! 😆

KK hits Mini lightly on the hand.....

KK: haha very funny!!aur tum Gaurav...tumhe tho khush hona chahiye ke tumhe apni premika ke saath kuchh waqt mil raha hai *she flutters her eyelashes* aur woh bhi subah subah *she starts giggling*

G: KK abhi tum kaam ki baat karo na....koi tho baat hai...aaj tumhari smile aankhon tak nahin pahunch rahi...koi pareshaani hai kya??

KK stops laughing & her eyes fill with tears...Mini & Gaurav look at each other in worry & Mini tries to go near KK..

KK: nahin Mini main tikh hoon...bas mujhe tum dono ki madat ki zaroorat hai....

G: KK!!yeh bhi koi sochne ki baat hai.....hum tho hamesha tumhare saath hai....

KK: soch lo Gaurav....is baar bahut baraa favour karne hai mere liye......lekin main tum dono ko vishwaas dilaati hoon ke isi main sab ki balai hai...

Gaurav & Mini stare at her....

Mini: KK tum mujhe daraa rahi ho...please batao na kya baat hai aur hamein kya karna hai....

KK looks at both of them in turn then whispers her plan to them....

Gaurav: NOOOOOOOO WAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYSSSSSSSSSS!!!

KK: please Gau..

Gaurav: KABHI NAHIN!!!

KK: mini tu hi isse samjha na...

Mini: mujhe nahin lagta ke tu jho kar rahi hai sahi hai....lekin agar isi main tum khush ho tho main Gaurav ko samjhaungi....

KK's face lights up with a smile & she hugs Mini tightly....

KK: thank u so much Mini...aaj ke baad main tujhse kuchh nahin maangungi...

Mini goes to convince Gaurav & after much argument & shouting, he agrees...He comes & stands infront of KK,his arms folded & still very angry...

Gaurav: KK sirf ek din ke liye....sirf ek din....

KK claps her hands: Chalega chalega...ek din bhi kaafi hai...

G: agar kuchh garbar hui tho....

KK: arrey yaar!!kitna darpok hai!!kuchh nahin hoga...mera plan fool-proof hai...

Gaurav & Mini look at her doubtfully....

G: achha main tayyar hoke tumhe pick karne aata hoon...tum bhi tayyar rehna...

M: all the best Gaurav....Uparwaala tumhari raksha kare!!! 😆

Gaurav walks off with a 'hmmmmph'!!!!

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KK & Gaurav enter her office,walking side by side & smiling nervously...KK spots Sumit at the receptionist's table & takes Gaurav's hand...Gaurav gets shocked & looks at her with fear 😆

Gaurav: KK kya kar rahi ho?? 😆

KK: arrey akal ke dushman!!!woh saamne dekho...Sumit....

She pulls him forward & they walk closely...Sumit looks up & when he sees them,he becomes rigid with shock...he just can't stop staring at them...they come face to face with him & he looks questioningly at KK....

KK: Good morning SIR!!

Sumit: morning...aur KK main tumse kitni baar kahoon mujhe Sir mat bulaaya karo...

KK: aap mere Boss hai aur Boss ko Sir nahin tho kya sar bulaun?? 😆

Sumit: KK....

KK: khair woh sab chhoro...main aapko inse milaana chahthi hoon....aaj hi Australia se aaye hai khaas mere liye...mere mangethar Gaurav....

Sumit's mouth drops open & he just stares at them both wordlessly.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
In the morning kumkum went to office she go to her cabin.

Kk main to aya gii hoo sumit kaha hai apana cabin main nazar nahi aya raha hai is everything ok khai marii waja sayy sumit naraz to nahii hoo gayy ka mainay apan dil ki baat sumit ko nahii batii hai.

kumkum went to ask respisions where is sumit sir hee didnt came in office todayy everything is alrite with sumit sir.

Res lady : No kumkum hee is not well tht yy sumit sir in his hotal room.

KK thankss i will go his hotel and tell him everything tht i love him soo much.

kk went to his hotal room how are you feelingg now sumit sir.

Su Feeling much better tht u came to see me tell me kumkum the u love me or nott.

Su yes or no

kk Sooryy sumit mari waja say app ki tabihty kharab howi hai yaa such ka i cant stand simi with you i want you in my lifee i loveeeeeeee youu sumitt.

Su Gocha it myy plann with simi to find out that u love me or not i am parfectly fine simi is justt myy good friend dont worry.

kk What the hell but ture i love you sumit soo much i cant stand any other women in your life tht yy u didnt came this morning in the office.

Su yes tht y i didnt came i told you i am ziddi i got finilyy kumkum i am alsoo love you kumkum .
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
i hope you liked my other line of story of kumkum and sumit
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
good going rahilla and shafoo bt kk plan abb kya hoga it has failed kya 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
Hey gr8 thing rahi.... waise hamare khayalat kam nahi miltee 👏

Ur track was also sweet and gud shafoo 👏 👏 😃

Now I am continuing from Rahi's track... kyunki main kuch aisa hi soch rahi hun 😉 😆 😆

Su : k... kyaaa... mangether... 😕 .. U mean fiancee

Kk : Ya... if that's the word in english 😆 😆

Gaurav is luking very scared as though Kumkum had kidnapped him, Kumkum showed him eyes to be normal... 😆 😆 😆

Sumit finds something fishy, he luks at their expressions, then thinks of something and says,

Su : Ohh wow.... that's so sweet... aaiye Mr.. ermm kya naam bataya.... haan Mr. Gaurav 😃 aaiye.. plzz come in...

Kumkum is surprised and Gaurav too.... 😕 😕

Su : Arey Kumkum, tum meri itni achchi dost ho.... itna to kar hi sakta hun.... aaiye. aap meri cabin mein aaiye.. 😉

Ga : Akele.... 😆 😆

Su : Akele?? 😕 To aap aur kis kis ko le aana chahte hainn 😆 😆

Kk : Erm... inka matlab hai... ki yeh mere bina kahin nahi jaateee... u know we love each other soooo muchhhhh 😆 😆 😆

Su : Okk.. to aap dono aaiye.... Kumkum aaj tum poora din mere cabin mein hi kaam karogiii 😉 😉

Kk : jee??? 😕

Su : Jee. 😉 😆

They go to his cabin.

Su : To Gaurav, I hope I can call u that? 😳

Ga : Ya sure... 😛

Su : To Australia mein aapka kya business hai? 😳 😛

Ga : Ermm... business.... ummmm 😆 😆

Kk : Coffee...... Umm Coffee.... ka... hain naa.... 😆 😆

Ga : Haan..... Coffee kaa.... 😉 😆

Su : Ohh that's gud.... 😃 Kis brand mein deal karte hain aap... 😉

Gaurav luks around and sees a poster of Cappuchino.... 😉

Ga : Capp.... Cappuchino.... 😛

Kumkum holds her head and sits...Gaurav didn't understand....

Su : Ohh gr88.. even My uncle... is in the same brand... 😆 😆

Ga : Jee..... 😆

He luks at Kumkum and Kumkum luks at him as though she'll murder him.... 😆 😆

Sumit's mobile rings...

Su : Xcuse me... 😆 😆

He goes and out and Kumkum goes to Gaurav.... 😉

Kk : Tumhe yehi ek brand mila tha..... arey meri taraf dekha to hota.. main jaanti thi Sumit ke uncle.... 😆 😆 Hunhhhh.... ab ... kahin use pata chal gaya ki hum naatak kar rahe hain to.... tooo 😡 😡 😡 Ohh God... pata nahin Mini tumse jaise Stupid se itna pyaar kaise karti hai.... 😆

Sumit comes in,

Su : Kya hua? Is everything okk.... 😳

Kk : Haan bilkul... fine... 😛

Su : To Gaurav.... aap bhi usi brand mein hain to... sure aap mere uncle ko jaante honge... aap ek kaam kariye... aap apne office phone lagaiye... aur zara Mr. A.C. Raichand ke baare mein pata kariye... 😉 😉

Ga : Phone.... Erm....

Sumit picks up the reciever and gives him,

Su : Lijiye kariye baat...

gaurav starts dialling some number.... Dunno what.... 😕 😕 😆

Su : Pehle Australia ka code to lagaiye.... 😉

Ga : Code.....

Su : Haan...

Gaurav is frustrated now... He gets up...

Ga : Dekhiye Sumit jee.... main asliyat mein kya sapne mein bhi Australia nahi gaya... Main koi business man nahi hun... Kumkum jee ki behen se pyaar karta hun.... aur yahin par job karta hun....(turning towards Kumkum) I am sorry Kumkum jee..... I am sorry....

Kumkum is shocked, Bur Sumit simply says,

Su : It's okk... main jaanta tha yeh sab jhoot hain.... 😳 It's okk....

Gaurav leaves.... Kumkum and Sumit are in the cabin... 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
too clever su good see mera thodha is agya 😆 😳

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