Members’ FF -***Epilogue/The End***- Pg 83 - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
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Su : So , Kumkum, yeh bhi try kar liya naa.... 😉 aur kuch bacha hai... mujhse door jaane ka aur koi tareeka... 😉

He starts moving towards her....and reaches her...

Su : Par ek baat batao.... tum khud se kaise bhaagogi?kab tak????? 😕

Kk : Sumit... dekhooo

Su : No.... tum dekho.... tumne jo dikhaya maine dekha.... 😉 Now u listen to me.... ab tumhare pass... sirf 4 din hain... only 4 days.... 😉

Saying this he leaves..... 😳 😳

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Next day,

Kumkum reaches office and goes to her cabin and starts working.... After sometime, a man comes ,

Man : Ma'am, aapko Sumit Sir, bula rahe hain... Keh rahe hain, Is naye project ki files lete aayen... 😳

Kk : Okk... main aati hun.

Kk : Ab yeh kya karne waala hai.... 😕

she goes and opens the door...she is shocked to see.... Simi inside.. and Sumit is hugging her... 😉 😉

Sumit and Simi luk at her,

Su : Kumkum... Dont u have basic manners....?? Andar aane se pehle u should knock at least.... 😡

Kumkum quiet hurt...

Kk : I am sorry sir.

Su : gud... okk is naye project ka kya hua? Jo bhi ho mujhe aaj hi yeh complete chahiye... 😉

Kk : aaj... aaj to.... saari raat kaam karna pad sakta hai..

Su : To karo.... U are paid for it... 😉 U do the work here itself, and main aur Simi ek important kaam karke aate hain.... Okk Sweetyyy

Simi : Sure...

Kumkum is burning like fire..... 😡 😡 😡

Sumit and Simi pass across her, Simi moves out, but Sumit waits... and says in her ears... 😳

Su : 3 days now... All the best.... 😉 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
Kumkum is sitting and working, she sees the time, it's nine at night..she is tense...... not bcoz she is getting latee 😉 but.... bcoz Sumit wasn't backkk 😉 😉

Kk : Kahan gaya hoga.... us ... us..... nlayak ke saathhhhh 😡 😡 😡 Hunh.... phone karun.... kaam ke liye... 😉 😛

she calls in his mobilee 😉

Simi picks up.... and Kumkum is shockedddd 😕 😕

Simi : Hello...

Kk (controlling her anger and shock) : Hello.... mr. Sumit hain.... kuch kaam hai....

Simi : Nahi... wo to room ke baahr hain.... 😉

Kk : Room???? 😕 😕

Simi : Yeahh... hotels mein room hi hote hainnn 😉 😉

Kumkum is shocked.... ahe disconnectss

Kk : wo.... wo samjhta kya hai khud koooo 😡 😡 😡 kya lagta haiiii main.... I hate himmmm 😭

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Sumit comes and sees Kumkum sitting with her head on her hands....

He goes nearer and softly speaks...

Su : Hey.... missing me? 😉

Kumkum moves away and luks at him, Sumit sees tear strained eyes.... then she starts working againn 😭

Su : Kumkum..... kya hua?..... is everything okk... 😕

Kk : Sir, bohut kaam hai... lets do the workkkk 😡

Sumit holds her hand....

Su : What happened? 😕

kk (angrily getting up) : Kyun mujhse kyun pooch rahe hain..... tum samjhte kya ho khud ko.... khud... kabhi bhi kisi bhi ladki ke saath.... aur mujhe... mujhe kehte ho ki pyaar karta hun.... jhootttt 😡 😡 😡

Su : Hold on....... hua kya???? 😕 😕

Kk : Kyun ..... tum us Simi.... ke saath Hotel ke room mein nahi the.... hunhhhhh 😡 😡 maine phone kiye tooo.....

Su : ahh.... so here's the reason... 😉 Yup main uske saath room mein tha... par wo room hamara nahi tha.. unka tha jinse hum milne gaye the..... Rahul and Anjali... hamare dost... 😳 chaho to baat kara dun....

He calls someone... then puts on the reciever....

Su : Hey Rahullll

Ra : Hii.... kya baat hai abhi nil ke gaya saraa din saath mein the phir yaad aa gayiiii 😳 😛

Su : Nahi bas... pochna tha ki mere goggles wahin kain kya?? 😳

Ra : Nahi to.....

Su : haan bas yehi poochna tha.... 😳

Sorry bachcha.... will write tom now..... it;s very interseting noww 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
ha intresting hii cont phir sa wrong time 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
Verni yaar kyun nahin milenge....akhir great minds think alike!! 😉 ....ur right it's getting better now...chal main try karti hoon if we're still thinking on the same story! 😉

Sumit disconnects the call & looks at KK with a twinkle in his eyes & a playful smile....

Su: dekha main tumhe phir se jalaane main kamyab hogaya!! 😉

KK looks down,feeling her cheeks flush with embarassment & annoyed at herself for feeling this way!! 😳

KK: jalaana....mujhe...nahin tho...ummmm...main tho bas....ummmm...woh....

Sumit kneels down beside her & lifts her chin so that she's looking at him & staring into his eyes.....he pushes her hair,which had fallen as she looked down, back & holds her hand in his....KK feels her heart beating faster at this slight touch 😳

Su: KK tum kab tak apne aap ko aur mujhko is tarah tarpaathi rahogi....tumhe ek na ek din haan kehna hi hai tho ab kyun nahin....jitna tum mujhse door baaghogi utna hi main tumhare kareeb aunga 😳

KK listens to his soft voice & feels overwhelmed with love....she tries to control herself,but is torn between her heart & brain which are having a fight of their own....in the end,her heart wins & she falls into Sumit's arms,hugging him tightly,as if never to let go 😉 😳

Su: baap re!!aga rmujhe pata tha ke tumhe dialogue-baazi pasand hai tho kab ka tumse ha kehal waadetha!! 😆 😆

KK is laughing & crying at the same time & is feeling more confused than ever....Su understands what she's going through & lets her cry,hugging her & stroking her hair,murmuring consoling words into her ear 😳.....after a few minutes,KK becomes quiet & loosens her hold on him...he stands back & makes her sit down on the sofa & gives her a glass of water.....

Su: dekho KK main apni wajah se tumhe koi taklif nahin dena chahta....main tho sirf tumhaari khushi chahta hoon...maine tho tumhe keh bhi diya hai ke main tumse bahut bahut pyar karta hoon aur tumhe apni jaan se bhi zyada chahunga 😳

KK looks at him with tearstained eyes & decides on the spur of the moment to just follow her heart 👏 ....just then Simi walks in with tears running all over her face & sobbing uncontrollably....she runs to Sumit & hugs him,almost making him lose his balance....she continues crying & Sumit looks at KK and KK looks at Sumit 😕 ..........

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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
phir sa gadbad kara diya na rahilla 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
kya karun Nitz 😛 ....jitne zyada problems honge utna hi zyada achha milan hoga!! 😉.....waise someone plz continue, main bhi dekhoon logon ke dimaak main kya chal raha hai yahan!! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
hey very good going nitz!!!keep continuing 😉 kya emotinal scsene chal raha hai!!!hai mein sharma gayi 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
Superb rahiiiii 👏 👏 👏

Kumkum is again full of anger..... 😡 😡

Simi : Hey u.... Can't u see that we aretalking something personal... Please leave. 😡

Kk : Jee. 😡

She goes away from there, even before Sumit could say anythingg.

She goes to her cabin,

Kk : Main kyun baar baar us pe bharosa karne lagti hun.... Nahi main usse door hi theek hun.... 😡 😡 😭

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Next day,

Kumkum is sitting in her cabin, when phone rings,

Kk : Hello.

Other side : Kumkum.... Main Sumit....

Kk (she is angry and upset) : Jee Sir.

Su (understands that she is angry) : Please come into my cabin.... 😳

Kk : Okk.

she goes , Sumit goes near her...

Su : Kumkum, tumne kal jo dekha ... tum galat samajh rahi ho... kal wo Simi.. 😕

Kk : Aapko agar apni personal problems discuss karni hain to main jaati hun... 😡 😉

Sumit holds her hands, and makes her face him,

Su : Kumkum What's wrong with u?..... Arey wo apne ghar ki problems ko lekar thodi upset thi... isiliye... 😳

Kk : Main jaon?.....

Su : Tumhari problem kya hai?.... Ek taraf tum yeh bhi nahi manna chahti ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho... doosri taraf mujhe kisi aur ladki ke saath dekhkar... 😡 😡 Kumkum... tumhe kyun fark padta hai??? Agar kal tum jo soch rahi thi.... wahi hota to.... agar main sach mein Simi ke saath..... to..... to tumhe kya???? 😡 😡 😡

Kumkum , on hearing this, calms down a little,

Kk : Sumit.... main sirf itna chahti hun ki tumhe ek achchi ladki mile... 😳

Su : Oh really..... and may I know ki tumhari language mein "EK ACHCHI LADKI" define kaise karte hain????? 😡 😡

Kk : Sumit.... tum yehhh

Su : Nahi nahi... main batata hun.... tumhare hisaab se ek achchi ladki ka matlab.... jo apne parivaar ke liye.. apne pyaar ka balidaan karde.... tumhari tarah... (he tightens his grip on her) ... hunh... 😡 😡 .. Ek achchi ladki woh.... jo... khulkar apne dil ki baat bhi mujhse na keh sake.... wo mujhse kitna pyaar karti hai... wo mujhe hi na bataye..... 😡 😡 .. aur agar shaadi ke pehle hi wo mujhse apne dil ki baatein share nahi kar sakti ..... mujh par vishwaas nahi kar sakti.... to ....to ....wo....mujhse shaadi ke baad... kya nibha paayegiii 😡 😡

Kumkum is shocked to haer this,

Su : No Kumkum.... Mujhe aisi achchi ladki nahi chahiye.... I m happy with a bad girllll... at least wo mujhe khulke apne dil ki baat to keh sakti haiiii

Tears roll down Kumkum's cheeks,

Sumit leaves her hands,

Su : Just go....

Kk : Sumitttt...

Su : GOOOOOO 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
whoa!!!!yaar Verni mujhe tho darr lag raha hai...are u a psychic or what???tum mera dimaak tho nahin par rahi ho na??? 😛 😆 I was envisioning the same scene in my mind aur tune likh diya! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
Now aage likhun????

Haan haan gr8 minds matchedddddd 😆

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